(okay thx!)

Frayan:

Frayan edged nervously closer to Tulli; flicking his ears to make it look casual. The young stallion glanced at the filly at the corner of his eye, flaring his nostrils. Nervous sweat began trickling down his brow as he halted a quarter wing-length away from her.

Vida:

She buried her head into Seaglade's feathers and spoke softly to him. "Seaglade..... You know what I see when I look at you? I see a colt who is hurting and wants to be healed. Not by Thea....... But by something deeper." She looked into his eyes and said with tears. "I see me! My broken heart my tears my pain my hopelessness. I had to grow.... I fell in love with an amazing colt named Bakari..... I liked him but Thea and him just fit. He showed me what a real pegasus is. I judged you by him and you passed. You are perfect for me.... He was not you are. I love you Seaglade with all my heart!" She hugged him closer. "You are perfect Seaglade perfect for me!"

Thea:

She smiled gratefully at Tulli, thankful for her help. "Please Frayan. You want to repay me? Well, this is it. Repay me by allowing me to heal you."

Tulli:

She watched they lovely birth. The two foals were beautiful. Thea offered to heal the colt called Frayan, and when he refused, he trotted over. "Frayan please. You deserve everything. That includes being healed. Plus, you'll make her mad if she doesn't heal you. You want to repay her right? Make her happy." she said softly, lowering her head shyly.

Thea:

She snorted angrily, "I'd rather heal you than waste my powers on her." She spat, wrinkling her nose as if she tasted something horrid on her tongue. She looked back up to Frayan, "You really want to go through life with one eye? Let me help you." She said, flaring her wings stubbornly.

(Bye!)

Thea:

She rolled her eyes, "Why don't you deserve a healing? You have literally nothing wrong! And you don't have to repay me. It was my pleasure and my purpose." She said, staring up at the large colt. "Please, let me try Frayan."

(haha! Yeah, you could also say, the pale feathered mare)

Frayan:

Frayan pricked his ears, "I'm Frayan," he introduced himself, and gestured toward the pinto, "And this is... I don't know your name."

Rainshiver:

He immetiently stood to his full hight once he was called normal. He shook the feeling out of his head as he saw the silver mare next to the other one. “Wait...is that..” Rainshiver almost choa jed as he realized who she was. “Semper.” He whispered to himself in complete awe.

(yeah true)

( I’d wait for Dragon )

(i think we need to make a part 8 now, theres literally 17 pages on dis, should i make a new one?)

Windblizzard:

Windblizzard held back a gasp; another colt stood beside the pegasus, "Who are you?" She asked, losing her confidence, her fractured wing sagged at her side. Her copper hide was wet with sweat as she trembled at the sight of the two pegasi gazing at her. She raised her good pale yellow wing and flapped it as if to try to fly away. She hoped that her outstanding beauty would distract the two so that she could get away. Sudden pain shot through her injured wing that triggered a cry out of her. The mare crumpled to the ground; her shiny copper mane glistened when a ray of sun caught it.

Rainshiver:

He had stopped in his tracks obediently. The pinto squinted his eyes trying to figure out what the colt was looking at.

Windblizzard:

Windblizzard's heart thrummed uncontrollably as she realized she was no longer alone; in the darkness she could slightly see a tall figure of a pegasus facing her, "Well?" She asked, trying to sound gruff, "What do you want?"

( Bai, I probably won’t be able to comment until late late this evening, since indoor soccer takes up most of my time, but I’ll try xD)

Seaglade:

He laughed. “Of course! I love this star foal, to be precise. I love the most beautiful, the most broken, and yet the most healed filly in this small, corrupt world,” he whispered. “I love a filly who could burn me to ashes, and yet she loves me to ashes. I love this filly, and nothing will change that.”

Rainshiver:

The older yearling took over at Frayan. He sighed, slightly forgiving himself for the incident. “Can I ask you something?”

Seaglade:

This time, he was confused. Was she playing with him? He didn’t know why his tone had offended her, he had been teasing. He wrapped his wings back around her, and smiled as he whispered, “Too bad you’re stuck with me until my death.”

Frayan:

Frayan gaped at the colt, "Why, you didn't do anything; it wasn't your fault that I can't see through this eye," he said, trying to comfort the pinto, "I just wasn't looking where I was going, I should have."

Rainshiver:

Rainshiver winced. “That..is what I want to talk about.” He was motioning to Frayan’s blind eye. “I-I’m so sorry. I never meant to come here and hurt anyone. By the ancestors I haven’t been here for a day and I’ve already blinded someone!”

( How did he become blind in his left eye? )

( Poor Frayan ;( )

Seaglade:

His ears pinned back at Frayan and his snide criticism. He looked down at Vida and felt his ears fold back forward. He smirked. “You’ll have to catch me first, fire-wielding filly,” he snorted, tossing his head in a playful, teasing way.

Vida:

She looked at him and stepped closer. "Come back here Seaglade!" She giggled. She looked at frayan. "I am not mad he just ruined the moment!"

Frayan:

A sharp voice erupted from twenty wing-lengths away from were Frayan stood. He ducked his head and slowly walked toward the sound. He halted with a stifled gasp, it was the colt; the one he had collided with in the Trap. Suddenly he noticed that the colt was not alone, he was being confronted by Vida, and Seaglade stood not far from her.

"What's going on here?" Frayan managed to say, "Vida? Who are you to snap at this colt? You have no right to be angry at anyone when you shouldn't."

Windbizzard:

Guilt clutched at Windblizzard's heart as she cantered silently away from the petrifying group of star foals; they were going through so much, she couldn't bare to watch. Tears sprang to her eyes as a sharp pain struck her wing and rumbled throughout her body. The mare stumbled, and thrust out her good wing in time before she hit the ground. She grunted loudly, but shut it off before one might hear her.

Vida:

Vida she looked at him. "Do you trust me?" She asked him. "Do you trust me? I love you Seaglade. You know why?! Because I see me as a monster and you didnt! You risked your life for me even with how messed up I am! My dad wants to kill me so did ny step mother and now she doesnot. I am messed up but you love me and I love you!" She said

Seaglade:

This time, he did pull away. He pulled back to look at her. “There is no need to apologize, Vida. You have done nothing wrong,” he snorted. “There is nothing you could ever do to make me more angry with you than apologize for your rudeness. I love you, too, ever since I laid eyes on you, and there is nothing you can do to change that.” He said it defiantly, as if she had said that she hated him, even though she’d deliberately said twice she loved him. He wasn’t buying it. How could such a graceful and perfect filly love a messed-up colt like him?

Vida:

She sobbed. "I I was so so mean to you! I I di didnt mean to. I i didnt want t to get h hurt again!" Her tears sprouted flowers in his mane and she sobbed on. "I I love you S Seaglade!"

Vida:

She looked up and saw Seaglade. She gave a short sob and rushed at him. She reached him and threw her wings around him sobbing into his mane. "You came..... Back.... Seaglade!" She sobbed. "I I love you Seaglade dont go!" She sobbed harder

( Ya think I’m being a little too harsh with Thunderfire...? )

Marlcloud:

She was slightly taken back by Stormcloud’s exclamation. “Of course, Stormfrost of Shadow Herd,” Marlcloud responded, her tail swishing gently. “Thank you for supporting the foals, and me.” Marlcloud smiled, and, too, felt a burning sensation in her eyes and nostrils.

Thunderfire:

The silver blanketed overo stallion was sucked gently from his thoughts when he finally spotted Adakitewing while he had been scouting around the borders for any intruders of any kind Already he’d killed three bob cats and 2 mountain lions. Blood was smeared down his flank and hooves, but he didn’t care. His patrol of under-stallion, on the other hoof, were quite frightened.

“Stay here and continue scouting,” Thunderfire grunted in a commanding and low voice. The group of 5 under-stallions nodded to him and continued flying above the border as Thunderfire dived down to greet Adakitewing.

Thunderfire landed in an explosion of feathers, catching the over-stallion attention. He bowed his head and folded his wings solemnly over his back. “Welcome back, Sir,” Thunderfire said, keeping his voice lower as a sign of false respect. If it hadn’t been for the fact that Adakitewing had given Thunderfire his position of captain, Thunderfire would’ve already ripped out his throat and taken lead as over-stallion of Willow Herd.

Adakitewing nodded to Thunderfire, and then looked around for his mate, Jadecloud.

“Ahem,” Thunderfire snorted, clearing his throat to regain Adakitewing’s attention.

“Go ahead,” Adakitewing informed, giving Thunderfire permission to speak.

“Sir, do you remember our conversation about Shadow Herd? I’d like to lead out the battalions today,” Thunderfire said gruffly, raising her head to meet eye to eye with Adakitewing. Standing at full height, Thunderfire was slightly taller than Adakitewing, which always seemed to annoy the over-stallion.

“I told you, Thunderfire, there will be no attack aga-“

”But Adakitewing, if we do not conquer them before they have all received their Gifts, than we will all surely perish,” Thunderfire interrupted, receiving many glares from the sweaty, tired battalion behind Adakitewing. They had just finished taking care of a pack of wolves near their territory, but still had enough energy to get rid of Thunderfire if that be Adakitewing’s wish.

Adakitewing was silent. Thunderfire had no idea what the over-stallion was thinking, but he began to feel annoyed in waiting.

“Well, sir?”

Adakitewing shifted his gaze to Thunderfire’s eyes. “Very well, but be quick and swift in the killing.”

Thunderfire nodded, saluting to Adakitewing. The over-stallion’s black eyes betrayed no emotion as he cantered away to converse with his other captains.

Finally, though Thunderfire, I can kill this wretched beings.

Marlcloud:

She placed a gentle, soothing wing on Stormcloud’s shoulder. “She’ll be fine, Stormcloud. Even she does pass, Thea has the power to heal her enough before she dies. Well, let’s not think about that, and instead enjoy our time with her,” Marlcloud said in a whisper.

Thunderfire:

Every waking moment was painful.

Why had she left? Why had she betrayed him to another stallion?

The questions were endless, and they were always left unanswered. He hated her, that beauitful mare that took his heart and broke it. He hated her, and her stupid herd of Shadow Foals. He hated her, and yet he hungered to see her, to know her once more.

But why want to see someone, to love someone, you’ve dedicated your life to killing?

Most of the other captains thought he was insane, and they couldn’t fathom why Adakitewing had chosen him as a captain, let alone let him lead the herd in meetings. Maybe he was insane, but he knew what he wanted, and he was going to get it.

Either killing Marlcloud, or using the Shadow Foals, he didn’t know which would satisfy him more. Killing that wretched mare would stop these terrible thoughts of her, and using the Shadow Foals would give him all the power he needed to control the three herds.

But why did he still love her?

Marlcloud:

She smiled down at the two beautiful foals. “Yes, Stormcloud, they are very beautiful and quick learners. It took my filly nearly three hours to stand, and three days to talk!” Marlcloud laughed, enjoying the peaceful moment.

Thunderstar:

He was a quick learner and his instincts helped him determine the gist of what his mother was saying; protect sister. Thunderstar was to you g to be able to reply back, but he understood well enough so he nodded.

Thunderstar:

He looked up at his mother. Getting a good look at her, memorizing her scent, her voice, what she looked like. “Mama!” He squeaked, happily as he nodded.

Thunderstar:

The colt drank his mothers milk rapidly. Already his sister had proven to be annoying, head butting him and all that. Thunderstar was soon full and for the first time he got a good look around him. Scents from everywhere flooded into his muzzle. His sister was bleating about like a goat. Thunderstar looked at himself. He noticed his pale green feathers and he flapped his wings wondering what exactly they were.

Nightheart:

"Mama!!" She squealed She butted her brother with her head so she could eat. "MAMA!" She ran into some big thing (Merlcloud) And nipped it. "MAMA!" She shrieked again. Someone picked her up and cuddled her. She nipped that thing and she heard. "I am your mama!" Then she fell asleep

Thundestar:

His eyes popped open when he heard his mother. In a rage of excitement her attempted to gallop over to her put fell on his face and slid next to her side instead. He didn’t care that much. Only that he was close to him mother. The young colt nuzzle his mother in a soft purr.

( Can I make another permanently evil villain since Stormcloud has turned good?

Thunderfeather:

the stubborn colt was still bumping whatever he was bumping, completely oblivious to the dramatic situatio. Suddenly instinct popped in and he turned his head back and forth, searching for his mother.

Stormcloud:

"Merlcloud come here. You did nothing wrong. She was born to early. Look she moved!" She gave a happy smile

Marlcloud:

She took a step back in shock. Had she handled the filly too roughly? Was it Marlcloud’s fault the filly was still-born?

Marlcloud’s ears went back instinctively, no longer comfortable with this situation. She turned away from Stormcloud, trying to hide her emotion.

Stormcloud’s colt:

O.O He was out! Out of what! Where was he? Where is he now? Why is it so cold? He wanted to call out all his questions. “MEEEERRP” was all the he could blurt out. He moved around, for the first time he was able to stretch out his long legs. bumb

He hit something. What was the something? It felt like his head..only it wasn’t his. It was someone else’s head. The colt lifted his hoof and it plummeted back down.

bumb

(What!? She’s not selfish anymor?)

Stormcloud:

"No I am hurting really bad!" She yelped and kicked the ground in pain. The next contraction made her give a soft sob

Marlcloud:

She turned her head at Stormcloud as she saw the mare stumble to the ground, wincing in pain. She calmly rushed over to look at Stormcloud. “Are you alright?” Obviously not, since Stormcloud was supposedly in labor.

Raphael

”Frayan, you need to rest. please?” Raphael kneels down next to Frayan. “Vida will be okay”