We need to make another one
Last comment from part 4:
Bakari:
He shielded his eyes from the bright light, but couldn’t help but keep them both open at the same time, witnessing Thea’s graceful decent, her lovely voice, and her extraordinary power. Then it was gone, and there she stood in all of her magnificence. He’d never shown so much outward emotion before, especially not when she whispered to the new colt.







Vida:
"What do you need Seaglad?" She sighed. She could not be alone for 10 minutes. It was probably because of that pesky mare Shimmerstream. She wished she could just fall and be alone. She had seen her family. Thunderbrook and her Mother Mistburr. She had wanted to be with them for ever
( YES please, It’s gonna start glitching for my device if we don’t get a new part soon xd )
(Do you guys want a part 6?)
Seaglade:
The Rocky Mountain foal turned his head to Shimmerstream, and nodded once. He rolled his eyes when she wasn’t looking, for she had made him do the exact thing he didn’t want to do. He spread his wings, his right one still being slightly injured, and jumped into the sky as ungracefully as a cow would.
Seaglade quickly spotted Vida, and dived to gain speed, but pulled back up slowly and came level with her. “Vida! Are you okay?!” He shouted over the winds.
( EEEEEIIII I LOVE ASTRO AND AMAROOOOO EIIIIIII That’s how you spell it, right? Amaro? )
Lilith-
When the blue and gray yearling opened her eyes, the first thing she saw was Bakari, the latest foal to receive his powers. Lilith slammed her hoof down in frustration. She was one of the oldest of the star foals -- now mostly star yearlings, but when it had come time for her to receive her powers, nothing had happened. It had been more then a moon since she had become a yearling, and she still felt nothing. She tired to be as glad as everyone else whenever a new foal showed up wielding some strange new gift, but the plain fact that Lilith still didn't have hers felt like a wing to the face.
Astro-
Astro sighed and collapsed into a pile of leaves in a wave of exostion. About one month before, he had become a yearling, but unlike the others, he had not returned to the clearing. As he lay on the forest floor, he recalled what had happened the night of his birthday:
Astro had been sitting in his normal perch one night, far above the others as they slept. His emotions had been acting up far worse then usual, so he hadn't been able to interact with anyone in a while. Then suddenly, he heard a weird sound -- one that he had never heard before. At first, he had been alarmed thinking that it could be another ice tiger, or possibly a spy from another herd.
Astro waited for a few tense seconds as the sound repeated it's self, but then he noticed that Merlcloud, the only other member of Shadow Herd that was stirring at this time, didn't even flick her ears in the direction of the sound. I must be imagining this, he said to himself as he tired to get some sleep. But the sound didn't go away, it continued echoing through the trees, until finally, Astro couldn't take it any longer, and left his perch so he could try to locate it.
He didn't have to fly far, when he reached the area where he thought the sound would be coming from, but there was nothing there. Astro had then stood there, unable to shake the weird sound, but not able to find it. Once a moment of this uncertainty had passed, he looked up at the stars, and watched in awe as one of them began to droop low in the sky.
As this star began to get closer to him, Astro panicked, and tired to run away, but it was if his hooves had been rooted to the ground. He tired to call out for help, but no sound could escapee from his throat. Astro stood there, utterly terrified, and not knowing what to do. But then the star stopped and hovered above him, creating this odd whitish glow around him. It was in this moment that he noticed that the star had something different about it, different then the other strange looking stars that were hovering over Anok, this one had swirling rays of black and white. It almost looked as if the rays were fighting each other, but that was only perceived in the second before the star had bathed him with it's power.
Almost instantaneously, Astro felt different, the pent up anger that he usually felt didn't seem as intense. He looked down at his coat, and noticed that it turned from a strange combination of grays, to white with a few black streaks. What is this? he thought, as he tried to turn around and look at himself from varying angles. There had been a few other foals to reach their first birthdays so far, but as far as Astro could tell, none of them had appeared to have changed this drastically yet.
After a long moment, an idea came to Astro, and he rushed to the nearest lake he knew of. He wanted to see exactly how the star had changed his appearance. But as he reached the shore, he was in for a not so pleasant surprise; instead of seeing the white furred yearling he expected, there was a black furred yearling staring back at him! Startled, Astro had tied to run, but as had happened with the star, he seemed rooted in place, staring down at the black face that was shimmering off the water.
Nothing happened after this for a long time. Astro didn't know what to do or what to make of the reflection that stared back at him. He had come to realize that it had to be him, but whenever he looked back at his own coat, it appeared to be shimmering white. He had tired to figure out this strange phenomenon by moving around and trying to look at him self from all angles, but no matter where he looked, his reflection appeared as black as ever.
What has happened to me? he thought, as he gazed at himself, but then to his utter bafflement, a voice answered him.
You're making us look like fools rasped the voice, though it wasn't really a voice at all, more like an echo in Astro's head.
What? though Astro, thinking that it was weird to be thinking questions to himself that he didn't already know the answer to.
You heard me, came the voice again, you're making us look like fools.
I heard that, thought Astro back, but what do you mean by us?
Wait, am I talking to myself? came the voice again, this time sounding just as confused as Astro himself.
Yes..., thought Astro.
These exchanges had gone back an forth for hours as Astro tried to make sense of what was going on. At one point, the conversation had escalated into more of an shouting match, and to both pegasi's astonishment, something happened. A sharp pain struck Astro in the stomach area, and he collapsed in a spasm of pain. Then before anyone knew what was happening, the pain stopped, but something was different. He tried to move his leg in an attempt to stand up, but he couldn't. Panic surged through him, but that was pushed aside as he watched himself stand up. How was this possible? He tired to lift his wing, but again nothing happened.
It was at this moment that Astro spotted his reflection in the lake, and he saw his white face glistening in the small ripples. What is happening? he wanted to scream, but again, he didn't seem to be able to.
"That's better." said the raspy voice, only this time it really was a voice. Whoever or what ever that Astro had been talking to for the last while now seemed to be controlling his body!
Who are you, thought Astro, despitly searching for answers.
Astro's body let loose a horrible deep laugh, then said, "Oh haven't you figured it out yet? I am you." with that Astro's body had taken flight.
Shimmerstream:
"Seaglade will you follow her and not let her get into trouble?!"
Seaglade:
The Rocky Mountain colt managed to tear his eyes away from the filly when she looked his way, but then looked back at her as she flew away.
Was it something he’d done?
Shimmerstream:
"Sorry Bakari. I thought eating would help you get your powers." She looked nervous. "I dont get everything right."
Vida:
She stared at Seaglade with a fiery stare. Her eyes burned. She looked at him and thought. "If he was kinder or I was meaner maybe..... Some day..... NO dont think that. Remember Bakari!" She inwardly shouted she looked down and tried to graze but stress made her unable to sleep. She took off and flew into the clouds
Bakari:
He turned his head towards Iden and smiled. “Thanks, Iden!“ He stumbled back at his voice. It, too, had changed, deeper now than it was before. He shook his head to get his forelock out of his eyes and continued to smile.
Iden:
When she finally awoke she noticed a star was missing. She had no idea who's star it was but she could tell it was the green one. She looked around. Yep. She definitely could tell who it was. Bakari. Of course. She looked at herself and then at Bakari. It was almost as if they had switched. His ribs were no where to be seen. His coat was glossy and so were his wings. He was even more hansom than before OWO. But he was Thea's and she had to respect that. And she did. Iden on the other hand, became skinny and her mane had matted. She was sure that in no time she would heal though. She took in a shaky breath and muttered what she could. "Congrats Bakari. Im sure you powers will be great." She said looking for Marlcloud. She noticed she had bandages on and furrowed her brows in embarrassment. She wobbled to her feet and looked as if she was a new born foal. But she quickly straightened herself so that no one would notice. "Who did this." She asked nodding to her bandages.
Seaglade:
Seaglade felt like dying.
The feelings and emotions and conscience he felt betrayed everything he believed in. He believed that he was nothing more than a body that would soon die, but his newfound conscience told him much otherwise. His feelings said he was worth something, and everyone around him was worth something, too.
He wished he hadn’t been so rude and careless to the fire-wielding filly named Vida, even though his old self would have highly disagreed. Even now as he gaze at her, he longed for her approval, but he knew he would never have it.
( Aww Bai!!!! )
Bakari:
The chestnut colt came sulking back into the clearing to the powerful bray of his aunt, Marlcloud. “Bakari! How does it feel?” She asked excitedly, her grin shining like the sun. He looked up at her slowly and bit his lower lip.
“It doesn’t feel any different, Marlcloud. I don’t think I have my Gift. I don’t think I ever was supposed to receive it...” he mumbled. She narrowed her eyes.
“You don’t feel different?”
“No, ma’am,” Bakari said, finally meeting her eyes.
“Look here, Bakari, now, I want you to look at the grass,” she whispered, gesturing to the grass at her hooves. “Tell me what you see.”
He cocked his head as he examined it. “I see.... just a few blades of grass. What’s so special about them?”
Not answering his question, she said, “Do you feel the need to eat it?”
“No...” he answered, looking back up at her.
“Now, looked at yourself. What do you see?” She said in a small whisper, gesturing with her wings at himself. He lowered his gaze to star at his legs.
They were completely muscular and healthy. His eyes fluttered for a moment. He looked at his stomach. He couldn’t see his ribs! He brought out his wings, and they shone as if bright and new. He jumped into the air and flapped his wings, a bleat wracking his voice box. Marlcloud smiled and stamped her feet in applause.
“See! You have changed, Bakari, you just don’t realize it yet,” she whispered when he landed.
He grinned and looked back at the grass. He hadn’t eaten anything, and somehow he was good as new.
(I gtg baiii)
Thea:
She awoke suddenly with a start. She didn't know why she was so scared, but something scared her and she reached out to Bakari for comfort.
But, she gasped gently when he wasn't there. He was missing from the spot where she'd last seen him. Her eyes darted up towards the sky, his green star...it was missing as well!
Her heart skipped a beat, "He gained his powers..."
She wanted to stand up and go find him, but she knew she was much to weak to do that, so she laid there, her eyes scanning the forrest and her thoughts shrouded with worry and excitement.
Vida:
She sighed. She lied to Bakari. It hurt but she sent her power raging through herself and it told herself to harden her heart and she did. She would never love again
( ooooooooffff that was too long sorry )
Bakari:
The headache hurt like nothing he’d ever felt before.
Not to mention, it was his first birthday in thirty minutes, and his star wouldn’t stop pestering him. His stomach ached, his eyes were puffy, and it was all because of that tiny bite of leaf. He didn’t necessarily regret eating it, because then Thea wouldn’t have told him, but he definitely didn’t like the consequences of it.
“Happy birthday, Bakari!” He heard Marlcloud whisper from behind him. He jumped and winced as his headache shot up to a higher degree.
“Thanks...” he mumbled.
“Why the long face, my dear nephew? You receive your Gift today!” Marlcloud stressed, looking into his eyes. She noticed they were puffy and then asked, “Is something wrong, my sweet?”
He pursed his lips and snorted, “I ate a leaf today, earlier this morning, actually, and I’ve had not only a headache, but a stomach ache ever since. It’s not the first time it’s happened, actually, but it’s never been this bad,” he mumbled.
Marlcloud narrowed her eyes. “You ate... a leaf?” She asked in a serious tone. When he nodded in reluctance, she took her wings and gently encompassed his face so he would be forced to look at her.
“Never, ever eat another plant again, Bakari. Your body is not meant to get nutrients from that of a plant, but from the sun. Do you understand?” Marlcloud asked. When he didn’t answer, shocked, she pressed harder; “Do, you, under, stand?”
“Yes, Marlcloud. I understand.”
“Good. Now, in thirty minutes time you are to receive your Gift, and I want you to be alone when it comes. No one else shall be with you. It is you and you alone who will be there, understand?“ She demanded.
‘Yes, Marlcloud,” he whispered. He didn’t understand why she was asking this of him. She had asked it of no one else, for she hadn’t known their birthdays, but apparently she wanted each foal to receive their power in peace.
Marlcloud retracted her wings and smiled. “Now, go and get your power! There is a small week up wind of here that I think would be perfect. Good luck,” she nickered. He was surprised when she trotted away to inspect the other foals and left him to go find the creek. Still not being able to fully fly, only to hover, he galloped north, which was currently where the wind was coming from.
Bakari soon found the creek, and sat beside it. He looked at his reflection and grimaced. He hadn’t noticed he‘d looked so thin. Bakari had always felt fine on the inside, but his outwards body shouted otherwise.
He took a sip of the water, stood up, and braced as his stat grew brighter. The emerald green star appeared to detach itself from the sky, and came down to him. It was so tiny, but yet it had been huge only moments before. It dangled there in front of him, taunting him, daring him to open his mouth.
He gently exhaled and then took in a breath, welcoming the fuzzy feeling as it flowed through his veins and made his eyes glimmer. He had a faint sense of belonging, but then it was over, his star was gone, and he didn’t feel any different. He frowned in disappointment, and then trudged back to the clearing in low spirits.
( But I don’t wanna be dramatic.... )
( Should I make Bakari get his powers now so Silren can get hers? )
( There we go)
Silren:
Silren, too, looked up at the burning ring of stars. Her eyes caught a golden, white one, and immediately though of Anblick. She wondered if his powers would have to do with something of good, or of light. Her star, on the other hand, was an ugly mass of oranges and greens and yellows and purples.
( Wait, hold on, I messed that up lemme correct that... Bakari has to get his powers before Silren lol )
Anblick:
He lowered his head so he could meet her eyes, "Hey, don't worry. I'm sure your powers will be amazing. Don't doubt yourself." When he finished speaking, he looked up at Silren's star.
"How could your's not be amazing?" He complimented, staring at Silren's twinkling star with a warm smile.
Silren:
She squinted her eyes, thinking. “I-I don’t know....” she admitted. “I guess I’m just waiting for my first birthday in seven days.....” she murmured. She wasn’t excited for it, but yet, how couldn’t she be? Everyone had gotten such amazing powers, that she was starting to doubt her own.
Anblick:
He stood close to Iden and Silren, watching Shimmerstream bandage Iden's wound, and when it was finished, he glanced to Silren and shuffled his hooves, "What do we do now? Can I help with anything?" He asked, not knowing what to do.
( XD )
(wow)
( Yes, lol.
Alright, I’ll try to do my Brest, Dragon, but if I don’t get everything my apologies xd.
So, a lot of the foals have received their powers including; Thea, Vida, Raphael, Kifo, and two new characters who have been Added with their powers; Frayan and Jeray. Some still haven’t received their powers yet.
Foxspark is still there, along with his teacher, Shimmerstream and friend, Mistburr. The reason Shimmerstream arrived so quickly was because Jeray, Coraleaf’s O.C., got attacked by an ice tiger/panther/? And was bleeding to death. So, Thea, Silren, and Iden were sent on a mission to travel to Willow Herd, find Shimmerstream, and bring her back. They voted Iden for the job of retrieving Shimmerstream because of her shape-shifting powers.
Their plans were interrupted, though, by Stormcloud and Redleaf who had teamed up to Kill not only Raphael, but all of the star foals. They traveled to Willow Herd to find the ‘sage,’ Shimmerstream and force it out of her. Of course, Shimmerstream said nothing, and instead, my newest O.C., Seaglade, told them everything. Mistburr, who was win the back of Shimmerstream’s cave, heard everything, and rushed off to warn the Shadow Foald along with Vida, and, eventually, Seaglade, who had a change of heart
There was a battle right as Seaglade finished his description of Shadow Herd, because Raphael had decided to follow Seaglade. (The reason Seaglade knew where the Trap was because he likes to go to a creek, daily, outside of the Trap because he can study rocks there, and happened to be chased by an ice tiger.) So Redleaf tried to kill them both, severely injuring Seaglade with a cut to his main artery’s in his throat, and Raphael. Mistburr healed them after being found by Raphael as Stormcloud had decided to bring Seaglade with them to make him suffer through watching the destruction of Shadow Herd. Redleaf, on the other hand, took off after Raphael as he flew/galloped back to the Trap. (Doesn’t make much sense, I know, because of the distance and things, but that’s what happened.)
Now here’s where things get seriously confusing; for some reason, Seaglade is returned to the Trap in his condition after Mistburr wraps his neck and is healed along with Jeray by Thea. Just before this, Bumblewberry had decided to leave Shadow Herd for about a month because his mother thought it wasn’t safe.
Now, back with Iden, who had decided to stay and watch the battle with Stormcloud, bounded over to her, disguised as a messenger that Stormcloud would recognize. She informed Stormcloud that Shadow Herd had made a move towards the western side of the Trap, was it? I can’t quite remember, but I do know that Iden flew back in a jet stream, half of the time as an eagle, and the other half as her strong pegasus self.
That was the big, important stuff, but then Thea admits to Bakari that she likes him, they kind of ‘get together,’ and Vida bashes her head on a tree in despair, while Iden lies down and is currently supposed to be dying from an injury. (Don’t remember how she got the injury, though)
Then there was a lot of drama with Seaglade and Vida, because Vida ad been stubborn when she saw Seaglade in the Trap, and had decided to follow him. His right wing, being slightly shredded from the ice tiger, could fly by this point, and he knew someone was following him. So, to make her come out of her hiding spot, he flew all the way up, just below the first jet stream, and let himself fall. Vida caught him, saved his life, and he scowled at her making a remark about the only problem in his hypothesis, was that Vida didn’t die. (That was what provoked Vida to inform Marlcloud of potential war from Stormcloud and Sky Herd.) After his healing from Thea, he was wracked with emotions and immediately went to Vida when she went down, looking for signs of concussion,which proved positive.
Thea came over (this is right after the confession between Thea and Bakari) and tries to heal her, but the sun was blocked by the clouds. Raphael receives his power, and moves away some of the clouds, but she still can’t heal. Then Iden flys up, cloud busting everything, and (now I remember) that’s how she got her injury. Thea finally healed Vida, Seaglade makes another smart-aleck and sarcastic remark, and Silren calls Shimmerstream over to heal Iden.
The End! (Sorry for any typos, I literally just woke up xd )
(I have to do this on my phone, so would anyone mind replying to my last post? Then I can use the notif)
(Umm... would anyone mind giving me a recap?)
Vida:
She looked at Bakari and he heart broke but she walked up to him she forced herself to lie to him. "Bakari I dont like you anymore. Sorry." Her heart tore in 2.
Bakari:
He protested quite heavily as Thea tried to stand, but, knowing her, he only helped her to keep balance by supporting her heavy wings. When Thea finally accepted Shimmerstream’s prescription, he smiled softly at her and nuzzled her, too, as she drifted off to sleep. Then he walked a little ways away, feigning a giant headache from the leaves he’d eaten earlier and a terrible stomach ache. He nearly fell into a ditch and decided to stop a few winglengths away from Thea’s resting place to take in a few deep breaths.
His breathing was hitched, but he ignored it as he sat himself down.
Thea:
She smiled gratefully at Shimmerstream and nodded reluctantly. "Okay....fine." She said, feeling her eyelids getting heavier with each second.
Before she drifted off to sleep, Thea reached up and nuzzled Bakari, sending him a weak, but friendly grin, her eyes bright.
Thea laid her head down and instantly slipped into the darkness that sleep was offering.
(i gtg, goodnight!)
Shimmerstream:
She held Thea back saying. "Calm down and rest she will make it. I helped her. Rest now Thea, heal later." She layed her down
Thea:
She glanced at the roots, and she realized just how exhausted she was, but she also desperately wanted to heal Iden, so she shrugged the plants away and kept attempting to walk towards Iden without falling over from tired muscles or the sudden waves of nausea.
Shimmerstream:
She walked over to Thea and gave her some roots and berries to calm her and make her sleep. She went to Iden and helped her dipping her into water and feeding her.
Thea: She overheard Silren, Vida, and Iden's voices. She slowly pulled her legs underneath her body and grunted as she tried to stand up, "W-Wait...I can....help." She said, between staggered breaths. Her voice was forced and rough and it barely came out audible.
Anblick:
His gaze softened, "Thea, you're in no condition to heal right now. Rest, then maybe, if you feel up to it, you can heal."
But, Thea, being as stubborn and determined as ever, shook her head "N-No...I feel up to it. I can....I can do it." She wheezed again, her eyes struggling to focus and everything in her line of vision was blurry.
Thea, using her wings for balance, straightened her legs and pushed herself up. But, her wings weighed her down and she almost fell again, but she forced herself to remain standing by locking her knees.
The world felt like it was spinning and she exhaled her breath and clamped her eyes shut as a wave of dizziness crashed into her. She suddenly couldn't tell if she was laying down or standing up.
(I don't know if this is too dramatic. Is it? Idk. I can change it if needed)
(Anyone here?)
Iden:
"Nah. Him and Thea are cute together." She said straining her eyes to look to see if they were okay. "It's fine. It's fine." She tried to keep her eyes open, knowing it was dangerous to pass out in her condition, but she couldn't help it. Her eyes closed and she went unconscious.
Shimmerstream:
She bandeged the fillys leg and said she would be fine.
Vida:
"Hey Iden." She mumbled. Her wings drooped on the ground and she had no spark in her.
Kifo:
He held Jeray and calmed her.
Silren:
Silren’s eyes flared open in alarm. “Whatever do you mean?! Are you talking about my idiotic, yet handsome, cousin? Ignore him. He’s no smarter than a blade of grass, believe me,” Silren said while rolling her eyes.
Iden:
"There's nothing left in my life for something to happen too."
Silren:
Her eyes narrowed in confusion. “What’s wrong, Iden? Other than obvious, of course,“ Silren quickly justified, gesturing to Iden’s broken body, and then continued with, “but you seem out of it, as if something tragic has happened.”
Iden:
She snorted. She had nothing else to say. She didn't know what else the filly wanted. She was bleeding to death from small branch scratches. Stupid. She just looked away trying to keep her eyes open.
RedLeaf
”hey SeaGlade, thanks for the nice word, give me another one and I won’t kill you, deal?”
Silren:
The filly snorted and said, “That is a lie with absolutely no evidence to back it up. You are not fine, and don’t try to lie to me!” She called out to Shimmerstream, knowing Thea needed to rest.
( Dapplfray/Coraleaf, is Frayan talking to Seaglade? )
Iden:
She heard Silrens calls but couldn't get up. She just made a happy sigh and muttered what was supposed to be "i'm fine"
(bye!)
(sweet! I gtg, bai!)
(Raphaels powers is shockwaves that push things away. So now his flower tears now have the grass pushed away, instead of pulled toward them)
Frayan:
Frayan looked down at the happy colt, and smiled, "Good for you, Raphael," he praised. (what is Raphael's new power? I is the curious. XD) "I'm glad you got your power!"
Raphael
Raphael prances happily to frayan. “I got my powers and helped Thea save Vida!”
(Yup)
(anybody home?)
Frayan:
Frayan gazed around randomly and landed his eyes on a strange colt. He lowered his head not to look intimidating; Frayan walked up to the colt, "Who are you?" He asked, cocking his head a little, "I've never seen you before." The young stallion added gently, his wings folded on his back, his crystal blue eyes round in curiosity.
Frayan:
Frayan sighed in relief, everything and everyone were safe and okay. (was it Iden or Vida who was in trouble?)
(Okay)
(Sorta)
(I thought seaflade lived vida)
Kifo:
"Jeray, Its ok my sister is fine and so is Thea, Iden is hurt and Bakari is sad. Seaglade was mean to Vida." Glaring at him. He held Jeray tight with his wings stroking her back
(anyone still on?)
Jeray:
Jeray ran to Kifo's side, "Kifo, what's going on?" The filly half screamed, trembling from head to hoof, "Is there anything I need to do to help?"
( GTG to bed, see you all tomorrow! )
Silren:
She noticed Iden fluttering to the ground and rushed over after quite a rude awakening. “Iden! Iden, are you okay? What happened!” She shrieked in alarm.
Iden:
She whatched from the trees, delited to see that Vida was okay. She was planning on asking Thea to heal her but Thea was to weak and she was too tired to move. She had lost a lot o blood and that she shouldn't pass out in this tree. She fluttered to the ground trying not to be noticed. She landed on her injured hoof and bit her tounge to keep from squeeling. She fought back tears as she made it towards a tree and passed out, not caring if she was still bleeding. All that mattered was that everyone else was okay. She didn't care about herself, as long as everyone else was okay.
( Bai RB )
Bakari:
He caught Thea as she fell and gently laced her body on the ground. He bit his lip, unsure of what to do, so he just stood there, watching over Thea.
Seaglade:
He gave out with a cry when Vida woke up. He quickly regained his composure, though, and acted like the professional. He soothed Vida with a few poorly chosen words; “Welcome back to the real world, Ms. Scare Everybody to Death By Getting a Concussion,” he snarled, sarcasm poisoning his words even though his real feelings were very different. “Now, you just need to rest and make sure you have no contact with the ground with that big head of yours,” he scoffed.
(Darn it!!! I gtg sorry. i'll defiantly be on tmr! goodnight!)
Thea:
She tried to crawl towards Vida, but just like her friend, Thea was equally exhausted and weak. Thea did manage to lift her head and nuzzle Vida and force herself to say, "I'm here, Vida. You're okay. I'm right here." She mumbled encouragingly.
Vida:
She thought she was dead. She saw Mistburr and Thunderbrook. They told her to wake up now. She tried and she ached. "Thea?" She asked opening her eyes. Her body was weak but she was alive
(I loved it!)
(WOW that was dramatic)
Thea:
She felt sunlight creep over her coat, which gave her the energy and inspiration she needed to heal. Her body still hurt from her last attempt, but no one was going to die. Not today.
Thea stood up on shaky legs, raised her wings and smiled at Bakari. She closed her eyes and focused. She began to feel that familiar sensation of healing as Starfire poured from her wings. "Yes! Come on...come on!" She snorted.
The tan markings on her legs glowed with a bright light-it was a warning, showing that Thea was starting to strain her powers. She grimaced but ignored the warning as she extended her wings, and guided the sunlight over Vida's entire body, but mainly on her neck and head.
Her instincts riled up, "Let go, Thea. You're straining your powers. Let go."
Thea listened to her instincts and lowered her wings, cutting off the Starfire. As soon as she did, Thea fell to the ground, her wings going limp and her eyes drooping wearily.
Her Starfire that she just poured on Vida, soaked into her coat, healing everything on the outside, now the only thing they could do was wait to see if Vida would wake up.
( NO PLEASEEEEE I WANNA CREAT MORE DRAMA NOT TO MENTION HEAL MY GUILTY CONSCIENCE XD )
Iden:
She smiled at Bakari and walked away. I only she had confessed first. Maybe her heart would stop aching. She walked away and whatched from the trees as Thea healed her friend.
(Nah it's ok. I think thew are cute. I just rally liked the whole love triangle.)
Bakari:
He nodded his thanks to Iden, and then smiled as he whispered to Thea, “I know you can do it.”
(The sun is back, you know that, right? Raphael pushed the clouds away)
( Starleaf, I’m have such a guilty conscious omg can I make another colt to love Iden? I REALLY want to!!! PLEEEAASSSE I’LL FEEL SO BAD IF I DON’T )
(His weakness is fire)
Shimmerstream:
She jumped and tackled him. "YOU WILL NOT DIE!" She shouted in his ear
Iden:
She knew it would be embarassing if she shifted back. Bakari and Thea would know that she was there the whole time. But she didn't care. It's not like he loved her. She shifted back in front of everyone and flew up high to the branches. She kicked and bit. Her mouth filling with blood. Till eventually the last rays on sunlight poked through. She landed and waited for Thea t heal Vida. She stood away from everyone. Her heart was broken so there was no point in trying to help. She knew it would just break it more.
Marlcloud:
“No!” She boomed, her voice silencing every animal in the glen. She glared at Kifo. “You will not. To die is to let your sister die in vain. Kifo, believe that she will live, and she shall. If you choose to kill yourself, than your belief will be invalid and she will be sent to the Beyond,” she growled. She knew about the Beyond, and since Vida had hurt herself she would be sent there if she died, and there would be no reversing the deed.
Kifo:
"THEN I WILL DIE TOO. Sorry Jeray. I love you but I have to go!" He knew what he had to do to do. He grieved but he wanted to stay with her
Bakari:
He stood beside Thea and pressed his muzzle to her cheek. “It’s okay, Thea. It’ll be okay. You tried, and that will always be good enough,” he whispered. He knew the, not only physical, but mental effect her healing had upon her. He glared at the other two who had tried to make her heal when she obviously couldn’t. He quickly looked away, though, realizing that he understood their desperation.
Seaglade:
He stared at Vida, waiting for her to open her eyes. But she didn’t. He shouted for Shimmerstream and Marlcloud once again, and this time Marlcloud couldn‘t stop herself from coming over to inspect the passed-out filly.
https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/main/comment/5dac7f640ea2430017cf9362 Are those powers open?
Thea:
She choked back a sob, but outstretched her wings over Vida again. She called upon all her power, everything. "C'mon!" She mumbled, every muscle in her body was tensed. She grunted and breathed heavily, but still, no sunlight appeared.
Thea's wings tingled, like her wings were just waiting for an ounce of sun to reach them.
Thea felt her Starfire writhe within her body, as if it was trying to escape. She tried with every fiber in her being to try and heal her friend, but every time she tried to force herself to heal without sunlight, the pain increased.
She held it until the pain became unbearable and her knees buckled and she fell. She moaned and tried to stand up, but her body hurt too much. "I'm sorry, Kifo. I love her to the sun and back, but I can't!" She cried, wincing at the pain in her chest.
Raphael
Raphael clenches his eyes as hard he can, and a shockwave rolls off him, pushing the clouds away. His star glows brightly.
Raphael
Raphael nods. ”Heal her.”
Kifo:
"Thea if you love her. TRY!"
Thea:
Her breathing hitched and her heart wrenched inside her ribcage. Guilt crushed her like a wave and she started to tremble, but she bit her lip try and stop herself. "I am so sorry, Kifo...but I can't. I can try, if you want, but it probably won't do anything."
Kifo: "HEAL MY SISTER!" He shouted. "YOU ARE A HEALER HEAL HER! please." He whimpered.
Thea:
She nodded to Raphael, "I will. I promise, but right now, I wanna heal Vida." She glanced to Seaglade, noticing how much he cared for Vida, but she ignored this thought.
She outstretched her wings over Vida, and called upon the Starfire, but nothing happened. Her head shot up to the sky and she stamped her hooves in anger, "No! No no no! It's cloudy and about to rain....I-I can't heal her without the sunlight." She said, dropping her wings by her side, feeling totally useless.
She looked at Kifo, her eyes sad and filled with guilt, "I'm sorry...but right now, there's nothing I can do."
Shimmerstream:
"Marlcloud dont go over there. Let them handle it. Thea is a healer and they are grown up, let them deal with it." Her kind face said trust me
Raphael
“Thea! Please! Can you heal 2 of her legs? Just 2!”
Seaglade:
He looked at Redleaf and squinted his eyes. He nodded. “Only two of her legs should be healed.”
He suddenly felt quite panicked as he turned his head to see the fire wielding filly, lifeless on the ground. Impulsing took over his muscles as he bounded over to her side and kneeled down next to her. Seaglade said nothing but inspected her eyes and her muscles as they contorted in pain. He squinted into her eyes, checking for concussion, which proved positive. He may not be fully educated in the medical field, but he could recognize concussion.
“Shimmerstream! Marlcoud!” He bellowed, his voice commanding and completely indifferent as he turned back to Vida to cradle her head and make sure there was no further damage done to it.
Bakari:
A pang of remorse hit him as he watched Vida and Thea. What in all of Anok had he just done? Why could he never have happiness without hurting someone else? The only way to make this right was to stay indifferent and he should’ve known that from the start as he galloped after Thea, his tail arched like an Arab’s. He saw the new colt, Seaglade, comforting her, and he wondered if there was something between them.
Raphael
Raphael walks over to SeaGlade and lies down. “You repented in a mtter of minutes. We gave you another chance. Do we give RedLeaf a chance, too?”
( OMG THAT WOULD’VE BEEN THE PERFECT OPENING FOR SEAGLADE BUT I JUST HAD TO BE AT SOCCER )