We need to make another one
Last comment from part 4:
Bakari:
He shielded his eyes from the bright light, but couldn’t help but keep them both open at the same time, witnessing Thea’s graceful decent, her lovely voice, and her extraordinary power. Then it was gone, and there she stood in all of her magnificence. He’d never shown so much outward emotion before, especially not when she whispered to the new colt.
Vida:
"What do you need Seaglad?" She sighed. She could not be alone for 10 minutes. It was probably because of that pesky mare Shimmerstream. She wished she could just fall and be alone. She had seen her family. Thunderbrook and her Mother Mistburr. She had wanted to be with them for ever
( YES please, It’s gonna start glitching for my device if we don’t get a new part soon xd )
(Do you guys want a part 6?)
Seaglade:
The Rocky Mountain foal turned his head to Shimmerstream, and nodded once. He rolled his eyes when she wasn’t looking, for she had made him do the exact thing he didn’t want to do. He spread his wings, his right one still being slightly injured, and jumped into the sky as ungracefully as a cow would.
Seaglade quickly spotted Vida, and dived to gain speed, but pulled back up slowly and came level with her. “Vida! Are you okay?!” He shouted over the winds.
Bakari:
He turned his head towards Iden and smiled. “Thanks, Iden!“ He stumbled back at his voice. It, too, had changed, deeper now than it was before. He shook his head to get his forelock out of his eyes and continued to smile.
Iden:
When she finally awoke she noticed a star was missing. She had no idea who's star it was but she could tell it was the green one. She looked around. Yep. She definitely could tell who it was. Bakari. Of course. She looked at herself and then at Bakari. It was almost as if they had switched. His ribs were no where to be seen. His coat was glossy and so were his wings. He was even more hansom than before OWO. But he was Thea's and she had to respect that. And she did. Iden on the other hand, became skinny and her mane had matted. She was sure that in no time she would heal though. She took in a shaky breath and muttered what she could. "Congrats Bakari. Im sure you powers will be great." She said looking for Marlcloud. She noticed she had bandages on and furrowed her brows in embarrassment. She wobbled to her feet and looked as if she was a new born foal. But she quickly straightened herself so that no one would notice. "Who did this." She asked nodding to her bandages.
Seaglade:
Seaglade felt like dying.
The feelings and emotions and conscience he felt betrayed everything he believed in. He believed that he was nothing more than a body that would soon die, but his newfound conscience told him much otherwise. His feelings said he was worth something, and everyone around him was worth something, too.
He wished he hadn’t been so rude and careless to the fire-wielding filly named Vida, even though his old self would have highly disagreed. Even now as he gaze at her, he longed for her approval, but he knew he would never have it.
( Aww Bai!!!! )
Thea:
She awoke suddenly with a start. She didn't know why she was so scared, but something scared her and she reached out to Bakari for comfort.
But, she gasped gently when he wasn't there. He was missing from the spot where she'd last seen him. Her eyes darted up towards the sky, his green star...it was missing as well!
Her heart skipped a beat, "He gained his powers..."
She wanted to stand up and go find him, but she knew she was much to weak to do that, so she laid there, her eyes scanning the forrest and her thoughts shrouded with worry and excitement.
( ooooooooffff that was too long sorry )
( But I don’t wanna be dramatic.... )
( There we go)
Silren:
Silren, too, looked up at the burning ring of stars. Her eyes caught a golden, white one, and immediately though of Anblick. She wondered if his powers would have to do with something of good, or of light. Her star, on the other hand, was an ugly mass of oranges and greens and yellows and purples.
( Wait, hold on, I messed that up lemme correct that... Bakari has to get his powers before Silren lol )
Anblick:
He stood close to Iden and Silren, watching Shimmerstream bandage Iden's wound, and when it was finished, he glanced to Silren and shuffled his hooves, "What do we do now? Can I help with anything?" He asked, not knowing what to do.
( XD )
(wow)
(Umm... would anyone mind giving me a recap?)
Thea:
She smiled gratefully at Shimmerstream and nodded reluctantly. "Okay....fine." She said, feeling her eyelids getting heavier with each second.
Before she drifted off to sleep, Thea reached up and nuzzled Bakari, sending him a weak, but friendly grin, her eyes bright.
Thea laid her head down and instantly slipped into the darkness that sleep was offering.
(i gtg, goodnight!)
Shimmerstream:
She held Thea back saying. "Calm down and rest she will make it. I helped her. Rest now Thea, heal later." She layed her down
Thea: She overheard Silren, Vida, and Iden's voices. She slowly pulled her legs underneath her body and grunted as she tried to stand up, "W-Wait...I can....help." She said, between staggered breaths. Her voice was forced and rough and it barely came out audible.
Anblick:
His gaze softened, "Thea, you're in no condition to heal right now. Rest, then maybe, if you feel up to it, you can heal."
But, Thea, being as stubborn and determined as ever, shook her head "N-No...I feel up to it. I can....I can do it." She wheezed again, her eyes struggling to focus and everything in her line of vision was blurry.
Thea, using her wings for balance, straightened her legs and pushed herself up. But, her wings weighed her down and she almost fell again, but she forced herself to remain standing by locking her knees.
The world felt like it was spinning and she exhaled her breath and clamped her eyes shut as a wave of dizziness crashed into her. She suddenly couldn't tell if she was laying down or standing up.
(I don't know if this is too dramatic. Is it? Idk. I can change it if needed)
(Anyone here?)
Iden:
"Nah. Him and Thea are cute together." She said straining her eyes to look to see if they were okay. "It's fine. It's fine." She tried to keep her eyes open, knowing it was dangerous to pass out in her condition, but she couldn't help it. Her eyes closed and she went unconscious.
Silren:
Her eyes narrowed in confusion. “What’s wrong, Iden? Other than obvious, of course,“ Silren quickly justified, gesturing to Iden’s broken body, and then continued with, “but you seem out of it, as if something tragic has happened.”
RedLeaf
”hey SeaGlade, thanks for the nice word, give me another one and I won’t kill you, deal?”
( Dapplfray/Coraleaf, is Frayan talking to Seaglade? )
(bye!)
(sweet! I gtg, bai!)
(Raphaels powers is shockwaves that push things away. So now his flower tears now have the grass pushed away, instead of pulled toward them)
Frayan:
Frayan looked down at the happy colt, and smiled, "Good for you, Raphael," he praised. (what is Raphael's new power? I is the curious. XD) "I'm glad you got your power!"
Raphael
Raphael prances happily to frayan. “I got my powers and helped Thea save Vida!”
(anybody home?)
Frayan:
Frayan gazed around randomly and landed his eyes on a strange colt. He lowered his head not to look intimidating; Frayan walked up to the colt, "Who are you?" He asked, cocking his head a little, "I've never seen you before." The young stallion added gently, his wings folded on his back, his crystal blue eyes round in curiosity.
Frayan:
Frayan sighed in relief, everything and everyone were safe and okay. (was it Iden or Vida who was in trouble?)
(I thought seaflade lived vida)
(anyone still on?)
( GTG to bed, see you all tomorrow! )
Silren:
She noticed Iden fluttering to the ground and rushed over after quite a rude awakening. “Iden! Iden, are you okay? What happened!” She shrieked in alarm.
Bakari:
He caught Thea as she fell and gently laced her body on the ground. He bit his lip, unsure of what to do, so he just stood there, watching over Thea.
Seaglade:
He gave out with a cry when Vida woke up. He quickly regained his composure, though, and acted like the professional. He soothed Vida with a few poorly chosen words; “Welcome back to the real world, Ms. Scare Everybody to Death By Getting a Concussion,” he snarled, sarcasm poisoning his words even though his real feelings were very different. “Now, you just need to rest and make sure you have no contact with the ground with that big head of yours,” he scoffed.
(Darn it!!! I gtg sorry. i'll defiantly be on tmr! goodnight!)
Vida:
She thought she was dead. She saw Mistburr and Thunderbrook. They told her to wake up now. She tried and she ached. "Thea?" She asked opening her eyes. Her body was weak but she was alive
(WOW that was dramatic)
( Starleaf, I’m have such a guilty conscious omg can I make another colt to love Iden? I REALLY want to!!! PLEEEAASSSE I’LL FEEL SO BAD IF I DON’T )
Shimmerstream:
She jumped and tackled him. "YOU WILL NOT DIE!" She shouted in his ear
Iden:
She knew it would be embarassing if she shifted back. Bakari and Thea would know that she was there the whole time. But she didn't care. It's not like he loved her. She shifted back in front of everyone and flew up high to the branches. She kicked and bit. Her mouth filling with blood. Till eventually the last rays on sunlight poked through. She landed and waited for Thea t heal Vida. She stood away from everyone. Her heart was broken so there was no point in trying to help. She knew it would just break it more.
Thea:
She choked back a sob, but outstretched her wings over Vida again. She called upon all her power, everything. "C'mon!" She mumbled, every muscle in her body was tensed. She grunted and breathed heavily, but still, no sunlight appeared.
Thea's wings tingled, like her wings were just waiting for an ounce of sun to reach them.
Thea felt her Starfire writhe within her body, as if it was trying to escape. She tried with every fiber in her being to try and heal her friend, but every time she tried to force herself to heal without sunlight, the pain increased.
She held it until the pain became unbearable and her knees buckled and she fell. She moaned and tried to stand up, but her body hurt too much. "I'm sorry, Kifo. I love her to the sun and back, but I can't!" She cried, wincing at the pain in her chest.
Raphael
Raphael clenches his eyes as hard he can, and a shockwave rolls off him, pushing the clouds away. His star glows brightly.
Thea:
She nodded to Raphael, "I will. I promise, but right now, I wanna heal Vida." She glanced to Seaglade, noticing how much he cared for Vida, but she ignored this thought.
She outstretched her wings over Vida, and called upon the Starfire, but nothing happened. Her head shot up to the sky and she stamped her hooves in anger, "No! No no no! It's cloudy and about to rain....I-I can't heal her without the sunlight." She said, dropping her wings by her side, feeling totally useless.
She looked at Kifo, her eyes sad and filled with guilt, "I'm sorry...but right now, there's nothing I can do."
Shimmerstream:
"Marlcloud dont go over there. Let them handle it. Thea is a healer and they are grown up, let them deal with it." Her kind face said trust me
( OMG THAT WOULD’VE BEEN THE PERFECT OPENING FOR SEAGLADE BUT I JUST HAD TO BE AT SOCCER )