Sorry it took me so long to make guys, anyways, here's the last comment (well, technically comments) from part 2-
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost was on her way back to the foals when she was Bakari and then she grabbed him and put him on her back next to Vida, "No more doing stupid things to save each other!" She shouted to them. Vida laughed, "Yes mother I don't want to ever have to put them in that position again." Her voice was drenched in pain. Her leg was damaged and her side was bleeding.
Vida:
She winced, every turn her mother made caused her to have to hold in a shriek. She pretended that her grimaces were smiles. "So Bakari, how are you doing?" Her heart rate sped up and her breathing started to hurry and she started to pant.







(okey dokey, Got it!)
(Sorry, I had to go to bed, and it's like 2:00 pm right now, I have limits in computer time.)
(Hello?)
(I am making part 4)
https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/herd-chat/where-is-dragon Pegasus Hunt! (Instead of manhunt) seriously, though, we need to find dragon
(Hello?)
(Augh! Raphaels powers could be so useful!)
Kifo:
Kifo used his powers to make a water bandage keeping the blood in the wound and keeping it wet. He looked up at the sky and said. "Ancestors help her!" He stayed by her side day or night. "Jeray, I will not let you die! I am here till the end!"
Raphael
Raphael Looks at jeray and frayan, his new siblings. โare you alright!?โ He asks jeray worridly (please dont kill her)
(Sorry I haven't wrote anything but here I go)
Silren:
She had been smiling and asking questions the whole way, and, finally, frowned. Silren wasnโt going to get to go into a foreign herd. She so desperately wanted to see how it was set up, and how hard it was to keep together. But, it would be safer this way, and she couldnโt argue her way through that protective point.
Marlcloud:
โThatโs what the moss is for, Kifo. My wings are cleaner than the grass on this earthy floor. If I stop, the wound will get infected, and she could die from it, or from blood loss,โ Marlcloud said between breaths, defending what she was doing and trying with all her might to keep the blood in. She turned her head to Jeray. โJeray, I know it hurts very strongly, but Iโm going to need you to be strong for me. Take in deep breaths, close your eyes, and squeeze something to distract you. Can you do that for me?โ Marlcloud asked in her gentlest tone.
Kifo:
"Easy, Frayan, easy." He used his wings to gently hold him back. He saw the girls leave and he felt calmer, "Frayan, I saw panther tracks in the wood, that is what happened." He tried to be calming but he was worried about Jeray.
"Merlcloud, Don't touch the wound! Your wings are not clean and you could give her an infection." Kifo said in a strong quiet voice. Leadmare's did not like being told something but he had to make her know. "My mother, Dovefrost, told me."
Thea:
"As I'll ever be. So what's the actual plan here. We just hide in the bushes while you do the talking? They obviously can't see me though-they think I'm the Destroyer."
(we should probably wait for Nightmist, and besides I gtg see you later!)
Iden:
-Time skip-
After a long flight stopping only to drink. They touched down and Iden shifted into a normal-looking pegasus. She didn't know who the pegasus was, but she guessed they were in her memories from when she lived in Ash Herd. (she can only shift into something she has seen.) "Ready?" She said sucking in nervous breath.
Thea:
The last thing she heard was Jeray gasping uselessly for breath. "We'd better hurry. Sounds like Jeray is getting worse." She called over her shoulder at Iden and Silren. She flew low and fast, using her strong wings to propel herself forward, all her energy focused on getting to Sky herd so they could save Jeray, no matter if it meant having to face her father again.
(i gtg)
Jeray:
Jeray cried out, tears streaming down her face, "My back, it hurts!" The filly laid her head onto the ground. Her sides heaved, gasping for air.
Fayan:
Frayan whipped his head toward his sister, "Jeray! Calm down, you- The two year old choked on his tears- "You'll be fine; just lie and try to breathe normally." He said, laying down beside her head and holding her in his wings.
Anblick:
He straightened, "I-It's fine. S-storms just aren't r-really my thing." He muttered, running to grab more moss from off a nearby oak tree so Marlcloud could keep pressure on the wounds.
(Woah, never heard of that. Frayan doesn't really "create" lightning, he just shoots it out of his mouth like starfire.)
(Lilith creates lightning and can control storms(her main thing is lightning) but how about Frayan can use lightning to teleport to different places? That way he still can use lightning, he's just teleporting)
Frayan:
Frayan looked at Anblick apologetically, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to frighten you, Anblick."
Jeray:
"What's h-happening?" Jeray squeaked, keeping her eyes open with effort, "Frayan?"
Her brother rushed to her side, "I'm here, Jeray," He said soothingly.
Anblick:
"I don't know. But, I assure you- a pegasus did not do this. It was probably a lone ice tiger." He said, still smiling at Frayan. He flinched as a bolt of lightning sprung out from Frayan. "U-uhm... could you....not shoot lightning bolts into the air?"
Thea:
"Okay, let's go. Fast and low-that way we won't draw as much attention to ourselves." She kicked off, but not before sending Bakari a guilty and apologetic glance. But, with Iden and Silren following her, she flapped her wings and led the way towards Sky herd.
(Is Kiro still beside Jeray?)
(Aw, I love electricity. Well, he only has lightning power, that's it.. is that okay?)
Frayan:
"What happened?" Frayan said through his clenched teeth. (Don't be surprised at Frayan's behavior tho, he can get upset like this... a lot.) "Did a pegasus do this?" The young stallion asked, controlling himself, yet still trembling.
Anblick:
He rushed to Frayan and pressed his wing against Frayan's. "Frayan! Calm down. Your sister will be okay. Thea, Iden, and Silren are going to find a healer, okay?" He said, his voice gentle. He smiled, trying not to show how scared of the lightning he was. "I'm your brother, remember? We're not going to let your sister die."
(Lilith, Dragon's OC, has really similar powers to Frayans- lightning and storm manipulation. Just letting you know that you made want to edit that)
Iden:
I want everyone to stay together. Once we get there, I'll shift and go get Shimmerstream while you wait. I don't want to sound selfish but im the only one who can get in there without showing my true identity. I don't want to risk any of us getting caught." She smiled and nodded for them to head off. The trip should take a day, more or less. She prepared herself for the challenges they would face.
(Don't mean to be pushy, but... anyone home?)
Frayan:
Frayan galloped towards his sister. "JERAY!" He cried, panicking over his sister. "What have you done to her?" He brayed, rearing, threatening to strike the mare tending Jeray's wounds. (I don't think any of the herd steeds knows Frayan well or at all.) Sparks of lightning crackled through his teeth; Frayan pawed the ground, turning up dirt and grass. He exploded electricity into the sky; out of fear for his young sister, not out of rage. Jeray shouldn't have to suffer these things, she was only a yearling; not yet understanding fully of her power.
Jeray:
Jeray jerked, kicking out with her legs, recovering her consciousness. She gasped as she found a strange mare pressing on her wounds; wincing from the sting of the deep tears in her back. "Where am I? Who are-" Jeray cried out as the wound was pressed again between her wings. "Who are you?"
Anblick:
His heart skipped as Marlcloud called Silren's name. His head darted to the filly, his eyes overwhelmed with worry, but he noticed that Silren looked excited about this. So, he softened a little, happy that Silren was able to follow her dreams and leave the Trap, if that's what she wanted.
Thea:
She nodded again, then looked from Silren to Iden. "Ready? Let's leave as soon as possible." She said, opening her wings. 'I might gain my powers while we're gone..." But, Thea shook those thoughts away, and stretched her wings for will power.
Marlcloud:
She looked skeptical as she continued to apply pressure to the wound, and half-heartedly agreed. โFine, but be quick and talk to no one! Silren, go with them,โ Marlcloud ordered her daughter, and then refocused all of her attention back to applying pressure to Jerayโs wounds.
Silren:
She nodded excitedly to her mother. She was going to leave the Trap! She hadnโt done so, ever! She knew she was being selfish, and she should be focusing on Jerayโs health, but she couldnโt help but be a little over enthusiastic about finding the mare Shimmerstream. Her mother had taught everything about landmarks near each herd, and what the vein looked like, and where to find water. She was ready.
Thea:
She nodded once, then glanced to Marcloud. "I say we bring one more steed-just in case something goes wrong. In this case, one more steed wouldn't be a bad idea." She said, her voice even and determined.
Vida:
"Iden can you go with Thea and get there and bring her back ok?" She liked to take charge in moments of disaster
Iden:
She turned to Foxspark. And then to Marlcloud.
"I can go with you. I can be disguised as a normal pegasus. My original plan was only to go with one or two others. The reason I even brought it up was because my powers are perfect for this job" She said looking confidently with her miss-matched eyes, at the lead-mare.
Thea:
After about 10 minutes of hard flying, Thea finally slowed down and stopped. "This is totally ridiculous! You are acting like a newborn! You just left your friends!" She said, aloud to herself. A wave of guilt hit her and she grimaced.
Thea quickly decided to head back to the herd. She whirled around and pumped her wings, aiming towards the faint spot of green clearing in the distance. Just as she was flying back, she heard a blood-curdling scream. She didn't recognize the scream and she started to fly faster, her heart beating anxiously.
She got to the clearing soon and landed next to Anblick, who was gathered around a strange filly along with Foxspark, Bakari, Kifo, Iden, and the others. "Anblick! What happened?" She called as she cantered over to him.
Anblick jumped at her voice, but relaxed when he saw her, "I-I don't know. K-Kifo just f-found her like th-this." He stammered, obviously bothered by all the blood pouring from Jeray's wounds. Thea flexed her wings and looked at Foxspark and Marcloud, "I wanna help. What can I do? There has to be something!" She said, her eyes wide and her muscles tense.
(Idea, how about Thea goes and gets Shimmerstream and when she is with her she gets her powers and Shimmerstream helps you heal her. Maybe?)
(Idea:
Skip ahead 4 days-hear me out- Foxspark and Marlcloud(and maybe Shimmerstream) heal her to the best of their abilities, but Jeray is still in critical condition and close to death. Then, Thea gains her powers(she's a healer), returns to Shadow herd and heals her? Is that too much? Is it too selfish and focused on Thea? We don't have to do it, if it is)
Kifo:
Kifo set her on the ground and stayed beside her. He was tired and hungry but he would not leave her. When he heard Foxspark's words he realed back and said. "You Have To Heal Her!"
Foxspark:
Foxspark heard the call of the leadmare and he started running back to camp, he had been grabbing tasty moss. He looked at the wound and he said in a low sure voice said. "Marlcloud, I can't heal that..... Neather can you. We need Shimmerstream, please fly over to Willow herd and get her. Have Bakari or someone handle the herd."
Marlcloud:
She turned her head to Kifo, who had shouted her name. She reared in surprise. How could one of them be hurt so badly?! A normal lead-mare would be banished or sentenced to treason for such an accident. Luckily, though, she wasnโt a normal lead-mare.
Marlcloud didnโt recognize the filly, but she instantly knew that the filly had received her gift from the Stars. โFoxspark! You and I both know what to do, now go do it!โ She hissed, already putting lots of pressure upon the wound to stanch the blood flow.
(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I gtg! Bye! I is soo disapointed. :()
Kifo:
Kifo gently used his wings to go under her body and carry her, He walked back to camp. "Marlcloud!" He said as loud as he could without waking her up. Her body was badly torn and he needed his mother to help.
Jeray:
Hearing her name being said, Jeray looked up into a young stallions face. "I- I am. I need... help." The filly's face was etched in pain as she drifted into unconsciousness. (Yay, i spelled it right!)
(ooo, do i think what it is to think?)
Kifo:
Kifo lept into the air and darted to the sound and he saw a filly. He landed and said gently, "What happened, you must be Jeray aren't you?" He saw the wound and was sorry for her, She was very pretty and he could not help noticing it.
Frayan:
Frayan galloped after Raphael; frothing already. His heart was beating wildly out of fear of who it might be... hoping with all his heart that it would not be his sister.
Raphael
Raphael hears the distress call and sprints towards the sound. โCome on, brothers!โ
Frayan:
Frayan's head jerked up from grazing, sure that he heard something. "Did anyone hear that?" The young stallion cried, not talking to anyone in particular. Another scream erupted from the direction in the Trap. What was any doing in there?
Jeray:
The yearling filly bucked, fortunately throwing off the panther. Jeray took that chance and bolted away; not caring where she went, only just to get away. Her back throbbed painfully as blood streamed down her shoulders, leaving a trail of red behind. The dark gray filly galloped as fast as she could; dodging trees as she tried to escape. But the obstacles were slowing her down as she went deeper into the forest. Jeray shrieked in fright as the panther gained on her with ease, leaping from branch to branch. Then immediately, just as the cat leaped off a branch to land on her back; her force bubble erupted out of instinct, surrounding her comfortably. The unfortunate panther hit the bubble hard. It rolled off the shield, too stunned to do anything. Jeray's shield popped, (or disappeared, or whatever. XD) as she stood as still as stone. Shocked, yet still having some sense in her, she edged away from the conscious, yet too stupid to do anything, panther. Jeray loped in pain from the cat; tears streaming down her face. It seemed minutes until the pain became too unbearable for the filly to go on. She stumbled, hitting the ground with a thud. Suddenly, Jeray lifted her head, and cried, "Help! Someone please HELP ME!"
Jeray:
Jeray walked deeper into the Trap, sticking to the deer trail. Her wings lolled along with her steps, her head swagging; like the horses when they walked. Jeray breathed in the deep piney smell of the dense forest, enjoying her stroll in the Trap. The yearling looked back, the opening long behind her. She didn't care much, as long as she stayed on the trail. Patches of light burst through the gaps of entangled branches; making the dew on the spiderwebs sparkle like the stones of a beach. Jeray stopped, closing her eyes; just for a moment, she thought as her mind drifted away.
A sudden loud snap pierced her ears, awaking her with a jerk. The sound had com from behind her. Jeray's heart thudded uncontrollably; she didn't dare turn around. The filly felt a sudden itching to fly, to get away from whatever was behind her. Jeray waited, waiting for something to happen. But nothing came. Finally, she gave in; Jeray turned her head slowly. Two yellow eyes glowed from the darkness. Suddenly, a huge black cat lounged out and landed on Jeray's back; the filly's scream echoed throughout the forest.
Marlcloud:
She tucked her wings and listened to the heated murmurings and the excitement emanating from the foals. She silenced them with one look to Iden. โI do not think you are ready. Perhaps, once more of you have achieved your power from the Stars, then I will allow you to go. But, now, it is too risky. If you are willing to be patient, than you will go in due time.โ She wasnโt meaning to sound harsh, but she was genuinely concerned for the safety of her foals.
Vida:
"Yes, we should. Lets send Foxspark, Thea and some of the others, like Dovefrost to Willow herd, Kifo, Frayan and Iden can go to Sky herd and Me, Jerry, And Silren can go to Ash herd. Deal? Marlcloud? Bakari and Anblick and Bumbleberry and Merlcloud can stay here?"
Iden:
Once everyone was gathered, she spoke.
"I want to go scout the other herds. I have a feeling that if we know what is happening, we can be better prepared." She said simply. She had a big announcement but little to say.
Bumbleberry:
Bumbleberry glared at Bakari. "Be Nice! I am coming with you." He stated calmly. He was used to being loved and Bakari had shown that was the farthest thing from his mind.
Vida:
Vida dropped her head concerned what Iden was going to say.
Kifo:
Kifo heard the call and said sharply, "Everyone gather someone needs to speak."
( XDDDDDD. I didnโt think this would happen when I first created him lol. )
Bakari:
โWhy would I lie to you when I have no lies left worth telling?โ He muttered to Bumbleberry. It couldnโt even be considered a snap, because it was so lifeless and dull even the trees cringed. He liked the trees. They were reliable, and they had amazing stories to tell, and heโd always listen.
โWhat do you need, Bumbleberry? I have to find someone, and I donโt have a lot of time,โ he snorted, perking his ears at the powerful bray he assumed had come from Marlcloud.
Iden:
"We better get back." she said ignoring Vida's comment. "Plus, I uh. I have an announcement to make."
She took a deep breath and called for Shadow Herd to meet in the clearing. The call went for a mile or two so she hoped everyone heard her.
Anblick:
He chuckled, happy that he had some adopted brothers. He'd never had siblings before, so it felt good to have colts his age he could talk too. He noticed Bumbleberry talking to Bakari, who looked distraught and sad. Unblock didn't have enough courage to ask the older colt about it though, so he backed off and waited till Bumbleberry returned. "Wait...if Bakari is here...then where's Thea?" He thought, his eyes immediately flashed towards the sky. He scanned the horizon, but the thick trees blocked most of his view and he frowned-not liking the fact that Thea was on her own.
(So...what do you think about redleaf becoming sort of a side kick
(Her sorta, She hates the star foals and just wants power)
(Is there a villain?)
(Note: Shimmerstream is like a sage, They dont call her Shimmerroot because she would not let them so she is Shimmerstream the sage, she is sort of a medicinie mare) (Yes)
(she is in willow herd territory?! That is awesome, cause RedLeaf is Willow Herd!)
Stormcloud:
Stormcloud, sighed, she was flying over to Willow herd to see a mare they call Shimmerstream. Her mate knew nothing of her trip and the other lead mares and stallions did not know either. Her wings cut through the air. Her fierce face did not change at all. She was concered and since Shimmerstream could see into futures some what there was where she went. She reached the border and crossed it not worried at all about the guards. They were foolish to try to stop her. She reached the land where she had guessed Shimmerstream lived and she brayed, "Shimmerstream come her! I am Stormcloud the lead mare of Sky herd and I comand you to obey."
Shimmerstream:
Shimmerstream sighed and Whinnied, "Adakitewing, Can you help me please, Stormcloud is here to see you." Then she went back into the cave and ignored the lead mare
Vida:
"I do not like him." She hated her self, she caused so much pain to everyone. "I think I am going to go back to Sky herd and...... And have Strikewing finish me off....... You and Thea can deside who gets him, I dont want him." She cringed inwardly at the lie she told her best friend. She hid how she felt. She dropped her head and tried to eat but she was too depressed. She silently sobbed, her tear flowers sprouted and she stamped them down so Iden could not see her crying. They left the ground burned but she ignored it. She wanted to leave but She could not hurt Iden that way.
Bumbleberry:
Bumbleberry trotted away from the other colts. He saw the colt who could not fly and he trotted over to him. He let his wings droop, he could fly but not well and it hurt him too fly. "Helow, Bakari. Are you sad, please dont lie to me, I can sense your feelings, tell me please." He tried to look kind and make Bakari not feel bad.
(Yes poor Bakari, 2 awesome (Thea and Iden) fillys and 1 hurting filly (Vida) like him. When will life get easyer)
RedLeaf (Raphaels mother, Willow Herd)
11 months ago
โThe...the...the ice tigers!โ RedLeaf fake sobs, โThey took my baby!โ These fools will beleave me! After all, what kind of mother chases her baby into the wildernes? Me! โThey just...appeared out of no-where!โ Inside, she grins Now that they feel sympathetic, they will give me whatever I want. Almost whatever she corrects Then, with enough hard work, I will be the lead mare! Jadecloud wonโt know what hit her, and adakitewing will give me power!
(They have flower tears too?)
Iden:
She watched as Vida ran, then Thea, then Bakari. She felt more abandoned now then she ever had. She realized both Vida, and Thea, liked Bakari. And them seeing her and Bakari together, must have left them heartbroken. But they had it all wrong. Bakari didn't care for her. Especially not after he ran off like that. He was just being a good friend. looking out for another friend. She decided that Bakari had too many fillies going for him. He had to talk to the others if she ever wanted Bakari to feel better. She flew slowly. She shifted to Thea just in case Vida were to run away from her. She found Vida. Landed and din't make eye contact. She shifted back to herself and held back tears.
"Look Vida. I know you like Bakari and you saw us together. But he doesn't care about me. He was just checking in on me because I," she stopped herself before she told the truth" I hurt my ankle. He was just being a good friend. It's time one of us lets him go before he is overwhelmed. And I might as well be the one."
A few tears escaped her mismatched eyes and matalic white flowers sprouted. She quickly stomped them out and looked away. She couldn't bare to make eye-contact with her sad friend.
Raphael
Raphael smiles at his new brothers. This is definitely where I belong. With my new brothers he thinks. He smiles broader.
( ;( Poor Thea and Vida and Iden..... NOT TO MENTION POOR BAKARI! XD Just kidding lol )
Bakari:
He felt a pang of remorse when Thea, too, flew away. Why was everyone leaving? Why did they all loathe him to such an extent? It appeared he could only trust and count on his cousin. Even with this conclusion, he couldnโt shake the feeling of being utterly alone. He had no other friends, didnโt feel inclined to make any other colt friends, and he didnโt have a family to protect him.
The thing he didnโt realize, was that the foals of Shadow Herd were his family. And he was leaving them as he muttered an apology for intruding on Idenโs space and galloped away, his pathetic wings dragging out behind him. No more fillies, no more anything, he thought to himself, his mind made up.
He didnโt know that it would come so soon.
Thea:
She watched as Vida ran. Run away from her and run away from Bakari. She suddenly felt miserably alone, again.
Thea huffed and angrily wiped away her tears, "Whatever..." But, 3 tan colored flowers sprouted at her hooves and she stared at them for a second, remembering when Bakari braided one into her mane, but the memory just brought more pain and she gritted her teeth and stamped the flowers out.
She composed herself-building her walls and guarding her heart so no one could get in.
When she finished, she looked up at Bakari, her expression showed no emotion and looked almost lifeless, but in her eyes there was a world of pain.
She snorted harshly at Iden, then turned her back and flew away in the opposite direction.
Thea soared as high as she dared, the planet started to curve beneath her hooves. The air started to get thin and her breathing turned forced and rough, but she didn't care.
A wiser pegasus would've slowed down and fly lower, but the thought only made Thea fly faster.
Bakari:
His head shot up at the sound of pegasi, and was thoroughly surprised to see both Thea and Vida land. Then, Vida dashed off, and a strange series of fire flowers followed in her wake. Now two of them were crying! He fell into a feeling of dismay, while his expression betrayed nothing. He stared at Thea, and then at Iden, and then stared at the trees in front him.
Vida:
Vida grabbed Thea's wing in her teeth and landed her, "Thea. I get it. I hate my father." She spat the word, "We are sisters. nothing else matters. Dont stress. Lets go back to the other foals." She walked slowly so Thea could keep up, she saw Iden with Bakari and she stumbled back saying, "I need to go eat sorry Thea!' And she darted as far away from them as she could. She was scared Bakari had seen her and she kept running. Her tears left a trail behind her and she could not stamp them out
Silren:
She took in a deep breath, internally tormented with emotions, but she put on a smile as Raphael asked Anblick this question. She found it cute, how all of them were promising each other to be brothers. She, on the other hand, already had a cousin, and didnโt need anymore siblings.
Bakari:
His eyes narrowed at Idenโs lie. He inspected her leg and snorted. โYou appear to be fine. Now, tell me what is really going on, Iden. I wonโt stop asking until you tell me, even if I have to wait until I am old and gray,โ his voice was hard like marble, but his face still held that same cool calm. His eyes, on the other hand, sparkled green with emotion.
Raphael
Raphael gallops to bumble berry and Anblick, full after eating with Frayan. โHi!โ He nickers breathlessly. โSo...if me and bumbleberry and you and bumbleberry are brothers...are we brothers?โ he looks at his hoofs and looks back up. i really hope he excepts. He was so shy when I nuzzled him...Raphael thinks.
Anblick:
"Bumbleberry!" He nickered, enveloping the colt into a hug. "Good to see you!" He grinned before releasing the colt. He looked back to Silren, sending her the same innocent and care-free grin that a newborn would show his dam after his first flying lesson. He swished his tail, still concerned about what Silren saw, but he knew that he would support her, with very piece of love in his heart.
Thea:
She smiled and nodded in agreement, then her expression deepened as she started thinking about every problem she had in the world. "Why is life so stupid!? Why-why does life HATE ME so much!??? Why does life give me so much pain, ALL THE TIME!!???" She suddenly blurted out, her eyes close to tears and her muscles falling limp-as if she was giving up.
Thea inhaled a shaky breath, trying to compose herself, "I'm so sorry, Vida. I'm going through a lot right now..." She mumbled, thinking about her deceased mother and the total jerk of a father.
Thea craned her neck higher until she was squinting at the sun.
She didn't know why- but she felt she had some connection to the sun. She didn't know what it was or how to describe it, but the sun gave her warmth- it gave her a meaning to live. At this moment, she didn't know what that meaning was, but she hoped it was more than just pain.
Iden:
She jumped at Bakari's presence, EXTREMELY embarrassed. She quickly wiped her eyes and thought of the first excuse that came to mind.
"Oh uh, nothing. I just... hurt my ankle." she said.
She noticed the fierce way he talked when he asked if anyone had hurt her. But she didn't ask. She focused on trying to make her excuse partially believable.
Bakari:
His ears perked up at the sound of uncontrollable sobbing in the distance. He instinctively grew closer to the sound, hoping it wasnโt an injured animal, but soon found it was a pegasus.
It was Iden.
He quickly rushed to her side, concern etched into his eyes. โIden! What is wrong? Who has hurt you?โ The last part was said in a low growl, as if he would kill the thing that had hurt her on site.
(Oh.)
(Is she with everyone else
Iden:
Before she realized it, everyone disappeared. She felt left out. Alone. She was never someone to complain or breakdown. She was that one filly who seemed like she had no problems, but deep down, she had more than most. She was always the one to help others when they are down. So, this time was good. She cried. And cried. letting everything out. She wanted the comfort of Bakari, but he probably liked Thea or Vida. She wanted Vida, but she was off with Thea. But she also didn't want people to care about her. It was her job to comfort others. Not for them to comfort her. Which is why she took this time, away from everyone, to let her feelings out.
(Bye!) Raphael
Raphael lowers his head to eat with Fraya.
(gtg!)
Frayan:
Frayan startled as a colt landed next to Bumbleberry, "I- I'm Frayan. I, I have one sister, uh, I have the power of lightning." The young stallion suddenly saw himself, asking questions as those.
Frayan:
Frayan let go of Bumbleberry, suddenly realizing that he hadn't eaten all day, "Yeah, I'm hungry, too!" He exclaimed as his stomach rumbled.
Kifo:
Kifo landed next to his brother. Raphael and The new colt named Frayan. "Hello. I am Kifo. That is my little brother, Bumbleberry. My sister Vida is out flying and my mother is on a trip to Sky herd. Who are you." Looking at Frayan. "And what do you like doing, If you know what is your power? Do you have a family or not?"
Frayan:
Frayan winced in astonishment, "How could anyone think you're weird? I don't; I think you're compassionate."
Raphael
Raphael smiles. โWell...um...I a, hungry, if anyone else Is tooโ (frayan) โNo, of course not, bumbleberry!โ (He doesnโt think bumbleberry is weird. He was responding to frayan)
Bumbleberry:
Bumbleberry hugged him back, "You dont think I am weird?" He asked concered.
Frayan:
"I-... I don't know what to say." Frayan confessed, lowering his eyelids. (Seriously, i have NO idea what to say!) The colt gazed at the foal, Bumbleberry; the colt's face was etched in concern, understanding and happiness. The two year old smiled, feeling the comforting warmth of the hug from his knew brother.
(Because I have a willow herd pegasus)
Raphael
Raphael smiles As Frayan leans in. โI always wanted siblings.โ
(does aby one on have a willow herd pegasus?โ
Frayan:
Frayan surprised himself again by leaning into Raphael's embrace. (I feel the emotions!)
Raphael
โOf course we can. You are very nice.โ Raphael manoovres his other wing to wing hug frayan
Bumbleberry:
Bumbleberry winced and sniffed, He could sense Frayan felt sad and abandoned so he felt it too, "Sorry...... I understand, Fraya." (He cant say Frayan) he whispered
(sorry, got a little dramatic there, i was listening to kinda sad movie music.)
Raphael
Raphael wing hugs Bumbleberry and smiles and Frayan.