Sorry it took me so long to make guys, anyways, here's the last comment (well, technically comments) from part 2-
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost was on her way back to the foals when she was Bakari and then she grabbed him and put him on her back next to Vida, "No more doing stupid things to save each other!" She shouted to them. Vida laughed, "Yes mother I don't want to ever have to put them in that position again." Her voice was drenched in pain. Her leg was damaged and her side was bleeding.
Vida:
She winced, every turn her mother made caused her to have to hold in a shriek. She pretended that her grimaces were smiles. "So Bakari, how are you doing?" Her heart rate sped up and her breathing started to hurry and she started to pant.
Lilith-
Lilith had shot up the tree along with Iden, "Do you mean you think we could scare them off?" she panted.
Astro-
Thankful his plan worked, Astro raced after Silren, looking over his back every now and then to see if they were in any further danger from the ice tigers
(I just wanted to move this last post over for Nightmist)
Bakari:
He stumbled off of Dovefrost’s back, refusing to be carried around. He also did not like leaving the ground, and he turned to canter alongside them, matching pace and answered, “It’s not me we need to worry about, Vida!” He flicked his ears behind him when he noticed Silren and Astro galloping up to them, also escaping a dazed wolf that would seen come out of its temporary torpor. He was glad to see all of them okay, but was worried for Vida. Even from the ground, he could still clearly see the scratches and bites running along her left flank and back muscles. Of course, he expression still betrayed nothing and remained in its stiff position.
(okay)
Vida:
They all reached the trees, Dovefrost set her on a branch and Vida gave a short scream, "Ahh!" She lifted her injured hoof. Her orange wings hung limp and some of her right wing had been scratched, "Is everyone here?" Vida mumbled, She was slowly starting to black out from the pain.
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost whinnied, "Is there a medicine mare here?! I can't treat this!" She hovered.
Kifo:
Kifo heard the small cry, "Help please. I am in the tree!"" Kifo looked at a tree to his left. He glided to it and found a tall foal the foal said. "I am Foxspark and I am lost!" They flew back to the other foals and he said to Lilith, "I found this foal, his name is Foxspark."
(Anyone home?)
Lilith:
"Sorry, we don't have a medicine mare." said Lilith, in answer to Dovefrost's question, in a slightly panicked voice. Just then, Kifo poked back in with the announcement about finding yet another lost foal "Really? Another one?"
Foxspark:
"I am Foxspark and I am a Normal foal. I live with Willow herd and tried to leave but got lost."
He rattled his feathers, "I Am learning to be a medicine Stallion I can help her"
Vida:
Vida shrank away from Foxspark when he tried to fly up to her. "No don't let him come near me. Bakari tell him no!" She tried to fly but her wings were damaged and her leg was hurt to bad to run. She whimpered
Bakari:
He had somehow managed to scramble up the tree with nothing but his hooves, and when this new foal by the name of Foxspark tried to help Vida, he hesitated. He wanted to push Foxspark away for the sake of Vida, but if Foxspark could help Vida, than he wouldn’t stop the colt. “Go ahead,” Bakari said softly to Foxspark. He sent a look of apology to Vida, for he knew Vida didn’t always know what was best for her.
(@Nightsong thanks for moving my comment over xD )
Iden:
"Oh no. They can't treat her down there!" She saw a cat closing in as young colt was tending to Vida's wounds. There was no time to carry her up so she dove down and stood her ground infront of Vida. Her eyes turned to a firey yellow that matched the cats'. She grabbed a large stick and threw it at the cat. She made herself look as big as possible. "C'MON!!!!! LILITH, BAKARI. I NEED HELP!!!!" She screamed as the cat sliced her leg. She hovered to take pressure off of it. "NOW!"
(Vida is in a tree)
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost came soaring in, kicking the tiger in the head again and again, "Everyone get into the trees I got this!"
Vida:
Vida shook as the foal named, Foxspark came up to her, "Hey, easy dont worry I got you. Umm other foals get some sticks and leaves for me ok!" He gently grabbed her leg and she screamed. "DONT TOUCH ME!" But then the fight went out of her and she collapes out of the pain and fear.
Foxspark:
He tried not to sigh, usely the fillys thought him handsome but she seemed not to care. He took the sticks from them and used them to create a brace and then he bandeged her wing using the leaves. He then flew down and said, "You guys know what happened to her?"
Thea:
The fact that Bakari disappeared after Vida, and the fact that Vida had sacrificed herself to save the other foals, Thea was quite shaken and frightened--for what reason she didn't know.
But, Thea did know was that she was not in the mood for this colt. After all the crazy events that had happened throughout the day, the last thing Thea needed was to deal with Foxspark. "She was attacked by an ice tiger. Isn't it obvious? Look at the scratches along her wings and sides. Look at the bite mark on her leg. Clearly an ice tiger or at least a large cat." She snapped, glaring suspiciously at the colt. "He should've known that. He's training to be a medicine stallion."
It sounded suspicious and sketchy the way this colt just happened to show up at the right place and the right time. Thea immediately didn't like Foxspark and she thought that Foxspark was lying and he was some sort of spy sent by the other herds. She pinned her ears at the idea.
Thea swished her tail back and forth, her eyes dark and unforgiving as she warily watched Foxspark's every move.
Foxspark:
Foxspark gasped, "Y you are Dove cloud the lead mare f from Sky herd. You are a legend!" Pointing at Dovefrost. He was confused. The filly who had snapped at him had said, "an ice tiger attacked her."
He looked at the filly and said, "Sorry. Where I live we have no tigers or big cats." he looked down and sighed.
(Guys will you look at my new fan fiction)
Lilith-
Lilith looked at Foxspark skeptically, it just seemed weird that they had just happened to stubble upon this colt who had received training to be a healer. This job usually only went to mares and fillies, and furthermore, how could he have just ended up in the tree they were all hiding in. Shadow Herd was either the most lucky herd in all of Anok, or this was all a clever set up.
Thea:
She still didn't buy it. Like Lilith, she doubted this colt's true intentions. She cast a side-long glare at Foxspark. Even though his herd doesn't have cats or ice tigers, he should still be able to recognize the obvious, bloody bite of a large cat. Thea glanced at Lilith and nodded in agreement as she could see that Lilith also didn't trust the colt.
Anblick:
He held tightly onto Bumbleberry high up in the tree, not wanting the newborn to fall. He flicked his ears at the sound of Thea's voice, but he didn't say anything. He listened to the conversation, and frankly, he didn't care if Foxspark was training to be a Medicine stallion, or not.
He was just thankful that the ice tigers couldn't reach them, that everyone was safe, and that Vida was at least getting her wounds cleaned. He didn't understand why everyone kept avoiding the the big picture-everyone was safe.
Bakari:
At Iden’s cry for help, he leaned forward, ready to jump down from his high perch on the tree. Right as he was about to spring, there was a sharp pain in the back of his tail as he was yanked backwards and into the canopy. He twisted his head around, teeth bared and ready to attack his assailant.
To his great surprise, it was none other than Marlcloud, stopping him from injuring himself further. He grinned and whinnied an over-stallions call, alerting everyone else that Marlcloud had finally returned. She whizzed in between the rest of the canopy and dove down to Dovefrost’s aid.
Thea:
She smiled at Marlcloud, happy the mare was safe, but to her dismay Marlcloud jumped right back down and into the fight with the ice tigers. 'Ugh! Can everyone just stop trying to get themselves killed?! It's getting really old." She groaned, folding her wings close to her back. She stole a glance from Bakari when he wasn't looking, but turned her head away before he caught her staring. "Come on, Thea-you foolish filly. Focus!" She snapped to herself in her mind.
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost saw Marlcloud and shouted, "Help me distract them!" She went down and started to kick them again and again. Then she went in for the kill. She killed one of them but could not kill the other one.
Foxspark:
Foxspark jumped from branch to branch, till he reached Thea's side and then he spoke, "Why do you all hate me? What did I do? I am a yearling, aren't you?"
Thea:
She jumped as he suddenly appeared at her side, which made her expression darken. She sighed and glanced at Foxspark,
"Not everyone hates you. I just think it's funny how you coincidentally show up as soon as Vida needs help. Does anyone else ,other than Lilith, find that strange? And isn't it odd how we needed a healer and pop- there you are? You showed up at a perfect time- it was almost too perfect. And, also, isn't it perfect that you know how to heal, but conveniently don't know what a bite mark looks like?...I just think it's more than a coincidence." She said, looking to Lilith for approval.
"Sorry if I jumped to conclusions." She added, preening her feathers, not wanting to admit that in her secret heart-of-hearts, she was never mad at this colt.
Thea was angry at the world, angry at the herds, and angry at her father and she had been taking some of her anger out on Foxspark.
Lilith-
Lilith nodded, keeping one eye on Merlcloud and Dovefrost as they fought off the ice tigers, "It's nothing personal," she said
(i want to incorporate her powers sorta. Like sinse she can become an animal, she can sorta communicate with them. You know?)
(Sure, but just remember that she can't actually use her powers yet)