Sorry it took me so long to make guys, anyways, here's the last comment (well, technically comments) from part 2-
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost was on her way back to the foals when she was Bakari and then she grabbed him and put him on her back next to Vida, "No more doing stupid things to save each other!" She shouted to them. Vida laughed, "Yes mother I don't want to ever have to put them in that position again." Her voice was drenched in pain. Her leg was damaged and her side was bleeding.
Vida:
She winced, every turn her mother made caused her to have to hold in a shriek. She pretended that her grimaces were smiles. "So Bakari, how are you doing?" Her heart rate sped up and her breathing started to hurry and she started to pant.
Lilith-
Lilith had shot up the tree along with Iden, "Do you mean you think we could scare them off?" she panted.
Astro-
Thankful his plan worked, Astro raced after Silren, looking over his back every now and then to see if they were in any further danger from the ice tigers
(I just wanted to move this last post over for Nightmist)
Bakari:
He stumbled off of Dovefrost’s back, refusing to be carried around. He also did not like leaving the ground, and he turned to canter alongside them, matching pace and answered, “It’s not me we need to worry about, Vida!” He flicked his ears behind him when he noticed Silren and Astro galloping up to them, also escaping a dazed wolf that would seen come out of its temporary torpor. He was glad to see all of them okay, but was worried for Vida. Even from the ground, he could still clearly see the scratches and bites running along her left flank and back muscles. Of course, he expression still betrayed nothing and remained in its stiff position.
(okay)
Vida:
They all reached the trees, Dovefrost set her on a branch and Vida gave a short scream, "Ahh!" She lifted her injured hoof. Her orange wings hung limp and some of her right wing had been scratched, "Is everyone here?" Vida mumbled, She was slowly starting to black out from the pain.
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost whinnied, "Is there a medicine mare here?! I can't treat this!" She hovered.
Kifo:
Kifo heard the small cry, "Help please. I am in the tree!"" Kifo looked at a tree to his left. He glided to it and found a tall foal the foal said. "I am Foxspark and I am lost!" They flew back to the other foals and he said to Lilith, "I found this foal, his name is Foxspark."
(Anyone home?)
@Nightsong (sorry, I'm in a slightly later time zone then most of you XD)
@Dragon (What time zone. I am in california)
Lilith:
"Sorry, we don't have a medicine mare." said Lilith, in answer to Dovefrost's question, in a slightly panicked voice. Just then, Kifo poked back in with the announcement about finding yet another lost foal "Really? Another one?"
Foxspark:
"I am Foxspark and I am a Normal foal. I live with Willow herd and tried to leave but got lost."
He rattled his feathers, "I Am learning to be a medicine Stallion I can help her"
Vida:
Vida shrank away from Foxspark when he tried to fly up to her. "No don't let him come near me. Bakari tell him no!" She tried to fly but her wings were damaged and her leg was hurt to bad to run. She whimpered
Bakari:
He had somehow managed to scramble up the tree with nothing but his hooves, and when this new foal by the name of Foxspark tried to help Vida, he hesitated. He wanted to push Foxspark away for the sake of Vida, but if Foxspark could help Vida, than he wouldn’t stop the colt. “Go ahead,” Bakari said softly to Foxspark. He sent a look of apology to Vida, for he knew Vida didn’t always know what was best for her.