(Me too! it is so...fun, I guess is the word)

(Yup. It vilifies her way more than anything else. It shows just how selfish and evil she can be)

(I love how calouse StormCloud was. now that RedLeaf is going to be capture, it will be so fun! red will be fighting 2 armies)

(Hi!)

( Hey, this has reached 10 pages, so later tonight one of us needs to make a new part. )

Bakari:

He shielded his eyes from the bright light, but couldn’t help but keep them both open at the same time, witnessing Thea’s graceful decent, her lovely voice, and her extraordinary power. Then it was gone, and there she stood in all of her magnificence. He’d never shown so much outward emotion before, especially not when she whispered to the new colt.

Seaglade:

Seaglade saw stars behind his vision, but they weren’t stars. It was a filly, a beautiful one, who was healing his torn neck. It felt like he was a rock, a rock with algae all over it, suddenly being wiped clean to show beautiful metamorphic patterns underneath all the grime and gunk. It was like all the false stars had suddenly been cleared to show none but one; a beautiful, golden tan star.

Then it was over, and he was on his feet like nothing had ever happened. Then he looked around him, so confused. Nothing in the name of science could have explained what had just happened, and it scared him. All of them. They were frightening him.

Not just them.

But the feeling of love in his heart.

That feeling of hope.

(Wo, StormCloud just ignores RedLea? That is awesom! (Honestl, it is. Infighting will be epic!)

(Just letting you know that Thea just got her power)

Iden: She took a deep breath. The mare had completely beleived her her! She saw that Thea and Silren had already found Shimmerstream, so she looked up staring at the now lit moon. She shifted into an eagle so that her lungs could breath at the high altitude and flew to where Anok's horison rounds. Once she found the jet stream she shifted back. She had only flew in a jet stream once and she was still scared. Ash Herd decended from mostly from the ancient Desert herd and Sun herd steeds. Her desert herd heritage made her lean and perfect for jet streams but still muscular and strong (Sun herd). She flew carefully in the Jet stream and Shifted to an eagle just for safety during her decent. She landed perfectly in the clearing and sat on her hind end, exhausted.

Stormcloud:

She desiced to abandon Redleaf and do it on her own. "Solders lets go to the coast with the foals and give them a warm welcome!" They took off

Shimmerstream:

"Good Thea!" Shimmerstream clapped, (Bumbleberry is not here) She had watched and was ready to help her. She handed her some mint for her head ache.

Vida:

Vida saw Thea get her powers and it made her smile. She loved seeing someone heal and help people. "Good job Thea!" She clapped her wings and accidentally lit a small warming fire to help the foals as it was getting colder.

Kifo:

Kifo saw that Jeray was better and he whinnied, "Thank you Thea!"

Thea:

Thea's coat glowed just as bright as the sun, and her each one of her feathers dazzled.

Thea landed in the middle of the clearing and her eyes flared open. The first thing she saw was Jeray, Bumbleberry, a new colt-one she'd never seen before- all laying in the grass, bleeding and dying, surrounded by foals trying to help them.

Thea's eyes flickered and she spread her wings, capturing everyone's attention with her strangely uninjured and gorgeous wings, "I can help them. I can heal them, actually." Her voice sounded sure and mature, like she was a grown mare. Thea walked toward the bloody, injured foals. "I know what I have to do. You all need to trust me." She said again, and raised her wings over her fallen friends. She made eye contact with the new colt with the green wings and felt herself send a small, reassuring smile in his direction- he obviously was't from Shadow herd, but Thea would heal him anyway

Thea turned away from the colts eyes and focused. The sun's rays gathered on her wings and Thea pushed her wingtips towards the dying foals.

Starfire poured out of her wings as she guided the sunlight over all three foals. Her Starfire lifted the three up into the air The wounds on her injured friends glowed a golden tan before disappearing completely. This only took about a minute, but when it was over, Thea gently lowered them back onto the grass and once Thea knew that their hooves touched the soil, Thea lowered her wings and released the sunlight from her possession.

Healing three foals with excessive injuries took a toll on Thea and she staggered, but she used her wings to regain balance. Thea had a splitting headache, she was dizzy, and she felt like the world was spinning, but the sight her injured friends being healed and brought back to life put a grin on Thea's face.

Thea:

She craned her neck behind her and nodded at Shimmerstream's words.

The next three hours went by in a blur for Thea. She was so distracted by all the thoughts swirling around in her mind about her birthday and her powers, that it took her a minute before she realized that the clearing was approaching quickly.

Thea whinnied in delight and the sight of her friends and started to fly faster.

Just then, the sun reached it's highest point in the sky. Noon.

It looked and felt like all the sun's rays were concentrated on Thea. Thea's golden-tan star pulsed and grew bigger. Thea's heart hummed in excitement and nervousness. She felt herself being drawn towards her star, like it was calling to her. Thea glanced behind her one last time at her friends, her loved ones, and her supporters, before she ascended into her star and vanished.

Thea closed her eyes, opened her mouth and could feel the power of her star stream into her body. The golden tan power filled her heart, her blood, and her very being. Her dark purple wings started to tingle as the sun's rays reflected off Thea's glowing body. Suddenly, Thea saw a vision of her mother a few hours before she died. The memory caused tears to swell in her eyes, but she let the tears come. Thea listened to her mother's voice and could feel her mother's warm pink wings wrapping around Thea, making her feel safe. "Thea. Oh my sweet Thea, listen closely." The memory of Thea's past consumed her. "I know that you are going to do big things one day. You are going to show everyone how strong and beautiful you are. You are going to be amazing, no matter what your father, or anyone else says. You are going to heal them, Thea." Her mother's last words to Thea, echoed through her brain. "You are going to heal them, Thea...."

As Thea remembered her mother's calming touch, her soft muzzle, and her beautiful voice, any cuts, bruises, scratches, or scars, began to fade. Her mane shimmered in the sunlight, and her coat was sparkling. Thea had healed herself.

And just as quickly as it started, Thea's glowing tan star was gone- all its power was now inside Thea.

Shimmerstream:

"Thea, Later today we are going to collect medicine ok?!" (When it is time for her powers)

Vida:

Vida looked up and saw that it was Thea's birthday. "I hope she gets here in time." She thought.

Thea:

She saw the mare that Silren and Iden were supposed to bring back to the Trap- Shimmerstream- was running towards the Trap. Thea glanced at Silren, very confused. "Um...okay....so that happened. I guess we can go home now. Come on Iden!" She whispered, not wanting to draw attention to herself and Silren.

When all 3 fillies were back together, they also darted towards the Trap. The sun was setting on the 3rd day.

Tomorrow, Thea would gain her powers. Her heart thrummed at the thought, but for right now, she just tried to focus on getting back to the Trap.

-skip until tomorrow morning, a few hours before Thea's bday(if that's okay)-

The three fillies and one mare flew all night, only stopping to eat and drink. They took turns drafting off each other, and before Thea knew it, the sun was rising over the dark horizon. They were still about 3 hours until they made it back to the Trap, but Thea looked at Silren and Iden and said, "Today is my first birthday...I want you both to know that if something goes wrong with me or my powers, you both are so brave and I am honored to spend my last few hours as a foal with you two." She called her voice shaking with emotion, even though she tried to hide it.

(aww! right when i get here! and wow...this exploded)

(Gtg. Be on tomorrow! Or maybe later tonight)

(Frayan's attitude can change within seconds)

Raphael

Raphael follows quickly.

RedLeaf

”I am RedLea, you scum! I would tear your throat out if I could. Would you, by any chanc, know where I could find and kill my son? Raphael? You and the other foals don’t know how bad you are going to have it!”

(YAY!)

Jeray:

Jeray looked up at Kifo blindly, not knowing what to say.

Shimmerstream:

Shimmerstream darted toward the Trap.

Kifo:

"Shh Jeray I'm here help is comeing," He stroked her with his wings

(okay, good! X) )

Frayan:

Frayan, being so impatient, (as I often can be) turned and galloped away, following an animal trail, without waiting for the mare's response. Frayan thundered deeper into the dense forest, yet unsure of where to go. He knew a thing or two about herbs, and roots. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Frayan immediately tripped, hurdling himself headfirst into a pile of pine needles. He rolled onto his haunches, sitting upright, spitting out leaves and other stuff, still dazed of what happened and how he fell. A dark shape lay in the middle of the trail; Frayan squinted, getting up. He gasped, it was a pegasus. He crept cautiously to the body; now standing over it. And again, with another shock, he realized it was a mare, but not of his herd. The mare had crossed the territory.

"Who are you," The young stallion said gruffly, trying to sound tough, "and what are you doing here in Shadow Herd's territory?"

(Yup. She is mine.)

(great idear, but do you own Redleaf?)

(She is somewhere in the trap. Maybe he wanders aroun, looking for some herb or something. Food! Then he stumbles upon her.)

(i know she's hurt, but i'm not sure where. Frayan capture Redleaf... hmmm, i gues that would work; hey are you Redleaf?

(Umm...he could capture RedLeaf. He doesnot have to worry about hurting her, cause she is super nice. I don’t know if you read the most recent flashback)

Frayan:

Frayan couldn't stand sitting there being helpless, he had to do something! The young stallion turned to the mare tending Jeray's wounds, "I can't just stand here," Frayan exclaimed, "I need to do something, go somewhere, get something; Jeray is my sister!"

(RedLeaf is waiting for someone to come by cause her legs are broke, and Raphael is waiting around for shimmerstream to answer his question, so I can’t do anything right now)

(yah, it's hard being 2 OCs at once!)

(I think he is with jeray. Or nearby)

(yeah, i'm not even sure where Frayan is! Lol)

(Oh. Sorry. I wish Raphael could be in 2 places at once)

(sorry, I was doing 2 things at once, texting and doing this.)

Jeray:

Jeray shivered uncontrollably, fever had struck her because her severe wound had gotten infected. The filly looked around blindly, her eyes dull. Sweat rolled down her brow. Jeray's forelock was stuck, wet, to her forehead. The filly's heartbeat was not at all normal; it fluttered like a humming bird falling from the sky. Jeray wanted someone to hold her, to stay beside her when she leaves. But she felt alone, even with the mare doing the best she could to stop Jeray's blood-flow leaving her body at great amounts.

(Coral?)

Raphael “They are in The trap. StormCloud and RedLeaf found us!”

Shimmerstream:

"I know. Where is she, Jeray, I mean? Where is Merlcloud, Foxspark and Mistburr?"

Sharkstone:

Sharkstone tumbled head-over-hooves backwards. He sprung up and reared, fury ablaze in his yellow eyes, "Fine," He snapped, and then glared at Raphael, "You don't realize who you're messing with, foal." With that he lifted off, his painful leg tucked under him.

Raphael

Raphael looks up at shimmerstream. “We need your help. Seaglade is wounded“

Shimmerstream:

She ran at Sharkstone and rammed him (She is really important so people lsten to her, plus they think she is a witch)

Shimmerstream:

"SHARKESTONE! Go back to the herd! Dont talk about this I will deal with them!" A older mare said, she was a brownish paint. "Raphael! Hello again."

(Are you hurt cuz Sharkstone called him a fool? if so, i'll change it, i'm sorry.)

Sharkstone:

"Shimmerstream? Ha, like you have rights here anymore!" Sharkstone whirled and kicked Raphael square in the chest with both hind hooves.

(Einsteins definition of insane. He keeps throwing himself at sharkstone, but sharkstone is a larger pegasus and a better fighter)

Raphael

Raphael rolls to his feet. “Let me see her! I am not a fool.”

Sharkstone:

Sharkstone clenched his teeth onto Raphael's mane, tearing him away and half lifting him off the ground before flinging him into a nearby tree, "You are a fool to fight me, Raphael," He snarled, panting his injured leg curled beneath him, "And you are a fool to return!" (Don't take this actually as an offense, Sharkstone is very much of a bully)

(Stormcloud is evil)

Iden:

She bared her teeth.

"Thea, Silren. Change of plans. Go find shimmerstream. Stay safe and out of site." She couldn't emphasize that more. "I'll take care of this." She kicked off and shifted into the form of a messenger she saw land. (The messenger was part of the Herd. So they will recognise her.)

"Stormcloud!! Wait!!" She cried, "A scout has informed us that they are moving east towards the coast in hope that they can escape us. If we move, we can cut them off at Crabwing's bay." She explained, looking very confident. But deep down, her heart was beating 1000 mph.

Raphael

Raphael flips up and lunges at him again, this time getting a grasp on his shoulder. “I won’t leave till shimmerstream sees me!” He yells through the mouthful of sharkstone.

(I know, Sharkstone is very, very, mean.)

Sharkstone:

Sharkstone lowered his head quickly, haunches lowered and hind legs spread out. He reached his head out and bit into Raphael's leg, throwing him to the ground. "You don't belong here anymore,

Shadow foal!" He brayed.

(the comments can be edited. Everything else he said was fin. They can even know his name)

(ooooohh, okay, scratch what he said then)

(RedLeaf told everyone he died in an ice tiger attac) Raphael

“I am Raphael, and you will not stand in my way!“ he lunges at sharkstone

Sharkstone:

Sharkstone sputtered, "No you don't, your mother exiled you from Willow Herd, you have no place here." He snapped viciously, glaring heatedly at the colt, "I know you... you're that colt name Ra-" Sharkstone started, trying to remember the colt's name- "Ra-something, I don't remember."

Raphael

“Yes I do! I was born here! Where is shimmerstream?”

(HI RAINFIRE!)

Sharkstone:

Sharkstone hovered, gazing along the territory of Willow Herd; the two year old glared in the direction of Shadow Herd, where all the abnormal foals lived. Powers, he thought, everyone has to have powers. Suddenly, a glint of dark coat galloped below him; the pegasus had an unusual pattern, yellow stripes on a dark brown hide. Instantly, he knew; it was a Shadow Herd foal, entering his territory. Sharkstone dove after the colt; but keeping out of sight as well as he could. He darted above the colt and landed in front of him, prancing, head arched.

"What are you doing here?" He snarled; his ears pinned at the yellow striped colt, "You're one of the Shadow Foals with abnormal powers." (Sharkstone is talking to Raphael) "You," Sharkstone pointed at the astonished colt, "don't belong here."

(Bye)

Raphael

Raphael runs as fast as he can towards willow herd territory. Towards his birthplace, and all his memorie, but mostly, towards shimmerstream, so she can heal SeaGlade, so he can save shadow herd

Raphael

“You are not fine, but later. I promise. I won’t hurt you. I mostly forgive you.”

FlashBack Time!

”It is alright, Raphael. This won’t hurt at all.” Young Raphael smiles and lies down.

”Okay mama!” RedLeaf smiles evilly, and brings her hoof down on his skull. Not killing him, but knocking him out. She grabs his wing and drags him to a small glen. (place of flashback 1)

Mistburr:

"Shh. Seaglade. Shh you are going to be ok and so is Shadow herd."

Seaglade:

He heard muffled sounds and saw blurry faces as he tried to whisper, “I’m... so.... sorry....”

(Is she with shadow herd?)

Mistburr:

"Of course.... DO you mind getting Shimmerstream for me.... Thanks."

Raphael

Raphael thanks MistBur. I am glad Bumbleberry is out of here “I need to find an army and fight it!”

Mistburr:

She rushed and grabbed the foal, bandeged his neck and triied to stop the bleeding, it stoped and he slept

Raphael

Raphael clenches his teeth. “Hold on, SeaGlade! I will help you. I need to get a healer! I will.” He runs towards the shado herd camp, “MistBur! MistBur!”

Seaglade:

He was shocked at Raphael’s sudden outburst. He stood there for a moment, his head churning. He wasn’t good with emotions and action, but with precise points he was. He then spread his wings wide, flew into the air, and then brought his wings in very quickly, all hooves pointed down at one target; Stormcloud’s head. All four made contact, but not being much of a fighter, didn’t do as much as would have been proper to kill a pegasus, but he was sure it would be enough for a major concussion.

Then, taking advantage, he pounced on her back bone with four hooves to send a tremor down her back. Then he turned to Redleaf. He zipped back into the air and landed a hard blow to both of Redleaf’s front legs, but was unable to avoid a terrible bite close to his main artery. He gasped and fell, dazed as blood started to trickle down the wound.

RedLeaf

”Yes.” She tries to stand, but fails

Stormcloud:

"Should I just kill him now?"

Raphael

“This is wrong! We have powers! I...I...hate you!” He kicks at RedLeafs leg, then twists and bites StormClouds neck. “They are coming!” He screeches, then turns and faces them. “I will die for them!” And lunges at them again.

(do RedLeaf and StormCloud have an army?)

Stromcloud:

Stormcloud helped grab Raphael. "Bring him with us and we will finish them off together."

(Hello?)

Raphael

“Maybe it doesn’t have to be like this. Maybe we can win. If we fight them. Do they have an army?” Just then, RedLeaf drops from the sky. “Scum ball ! You are nothing! You are the same wimpy baby you were when I chased you off! I will kill you now!”

”Mother, this isn’t what is importan. Why do you want to fight us? What do you gain? This is not going to change the fact that you aren’t in charge of everythin. Work hard, be nice, that is how to become the next lead mare. And don’t kill anyone.”

RedLeaf

”No, idiot! Come with me SeaGlade!“ she grabs his wing, but Raphael lunges, knocking her back.

“Run, SeaGlade! You are more use in a fight than I am!”

Stormcloud:

"Bring him with us them he can see what he did."

Mistburr:

"I could not tell her I escaped when Stormcloud and Redleaf where there. I can fight but-" She saw Jeray. "Oh no let me help." She broke away from Foxspark and started snapping orders. "Grab moss and grass Hurry."

Seaglade:

He reared back on his hind hooves and landed, facing his left, glaring at Raphael. “Why would you want my help after I’ve just condemned you all to death?! Now go away before I tell Willow Herd too!” He snarled. He didn’t want to tell Willow Herd, and Raphael was right; he wanted to help. Desperately.

Raphael

Raphael drops in front of SeaGlade. “Come back! I know what you did. You can help us!” (Can his powers come in the fight? I can change his age to make it realisti, but they could win the fight or they can not come. Then the fighting would be more dramatic)

Marlcloud:

“Shimmerstream doesn’t know you’ve come? You did the right thing to warn us, but you should have told Shimmerstream where you were going. Not that she doesn’t know you’re here, she knows everything.” Marlcloud concluded with a faraway look.

Seaglade:

He glared at Redleaf. “So what if I tell the entirety of Willow Herd? You won’t be able to touch me!” He back-talked under his breath.

RedLeaf

”Traitor, you will die with my foal!” She screams, “StormCloud, go on! I need to deal with this vile rebel!” RedLeaf sprints top speed to SeaGlade, quickly catching up to him.

”If you tell willow herd about this, I will break your legs and throw you to the ice tigers that you and the other fools thought took my baby! He is in shadow herd now, and I will rip his throat out!” She veers off and runs back to StormCloud.

Mistburr:

"Merlcloud! T... they are coming they know enough to find you that colt Seaglade told they know they are coming!" She looked down. "Shimmerstream does not know I am here."

Foxspark:

"MISTBURR!" He shouted in joy and ran to embrace her.

Stormcloud:

"Lets go to the Trap and get them!"

Marlcloud:

She looked down at Vida, and then reared in surprise. “Let her go, Vida! I know this young filly by the name of Mistburr. Mistburr, what is it darling?” Marlcloud asked kindly.

Seaglade:

Then he dashed away, telling them no more. He had to get away, from everything.

Mistburr:

She had waited for a minute to hear and she knew he saw her. Then she zipped away. She flew all day before she reached the Trap. "Merlcloud!" She coughed. Her throught dry. She walked farther in to the Trap. "Merlcloud!" SOmething grabbed her and covered her eyes and she tried to scream but a gag was put in her mouth.

Vida:

After she gagged nd blindfolded the foal she lead her to Merlcloud. "Merlcloud! I found and intruder." (Merlcloud should know Mistburr)

Marlcloud:

She nodded to Vida and called for a meeting. She gave Jeray a break, and then turned to the rest of the foals. “An attack is imminent. Luckily, most of you have received your Gift from the Stars, but some of you haven’t. Regardless of the powers, we will not use them to kill. We will train like a normal pegasus, and we will fight like normal pegasi. Many of you will not see why we do this, but I fear if you kill with your Gift you will become hungry for more power,” Marlcloud spoke.

Seaglade:

“Most of the foals have their powers already. They are located in a large clearing on the northeastern side of the Tra-“ he cut himself off short. A strange, innocent though had just possessed him. Why was he doing this? What good was it too take part in the murder of all of these foals?

Stormcloud:

"YES! Where? Who has powers yet?"

Mistburr:

Mistburr heard and darted off to go find Shadow herd.

Seaglade:

He took in a deep breath and the most malicious smile lit up his face. “I know where to find the Shadow Foals and that disgusting Marlwood,” he deliberately said Marlwood instead of Marlcloud because he didn’t think she deserved such a title.

( What do you mean, ‘heck’? )

Marlcloud:

She lifted her head to Vida, and then a look of complete and utter shock and anger. She stood up from comforting Jeray. “Show me,” she said to Vida.

Seaglade:

Fatigue had finally started to kick in when he spotted Stormcloud and Redleaf conversing in WIllow Herd. He rushed forward with renewed energy and cried, “Stormcloud! Redleaf!”

(HECK)

Vida:

Vida rushed back to Merlcaloud "Merlcloud.. That colt is going to inform on us! We have to perpare I know he is!"

Seaglade:

He scowled along the way. Deep down, he was slightly grateful, but he mainly hated that the filly had followed him. It was his business where he was going, not hers! After this ordeal, he would definitely be informing Stormcloud and Redleaf of Shadow Herd’s position.

( Recomment:

Seaglade

He howled with laughter. “My hypothesis was right! Only bad thing is that you didn’t die,” he hissed under his breath. Then he glared at her with ears pinned and had no gratitude towards the filly. He turned away and continued to canter to Willow Herd. )

( XDDD I told you Seaglade was mean! XDDDDDD )

( Just me, then? Okay.... )

( Hello? Anybody home? )

( Gotcha )

(Willow herd)

Seaglade:

He howled with laughter. “My hypothesis was right! Only bad thing is that you didn’t die,” he hissed under his breath. Then he glared at her with ears pinned and had no gratitude towards the filly. He turned away and continued to canter to Willow Herd. (They’re in Sky Herd, right? Stormcloud and Redleaf, with Shimmerstream? )

Vida:

Vida was torn she could not let him die. she went under him and caught him on her back and then she landed with a stumble letting him off her. She knew he saw her and she was not ashamed any more