Here's the last comment from part 8:
Starsummer to council: -she rolled her eyes. Even the patient and understanding mare was becoming agrivated. She cleared her throat, getting everyone's attention.- "Shall we continue....? Or at least try to continue."
( Hold on leme catch up )
(ok that works)
Horizongold to Redmoon: He trotted over to the morose filly. "Are you okay? Be honest." Seeing her stubborn and sad face, he said, "Look, admitting that you're hurt isn't a bad thing. You were in a fight with a puma and it smacked your leg, I'd be surprised if you escaped with no ill effects. Can I look at it?"
( Okay let me read )
(yeah we can pause it, but this will be the first place I check when I'm back from April break, so could you put the links to other posts that were created or that there are a lot of new comments on here? )
(Wait Riverbreeze you’re getting notifications?? Mine aren’t working.)
Horizongold to Magicpetal: Hey where are you going?” he asked, following her into the forest.
(Gtg to bed)
( XD I won't since it's only me )
(I gtg. I don't think I'll be back. Try not to blow up my notifications.)
( gtg soon)
Magicpetal to Horizongold: -since Emberblaze was fine, he was talking with Starsummer just outside the cave. Magicpetal was in the cave with Horizongold, holding her breath as Cloudroot preformed her tests on Horizongold. Once she said that he was fine, she turned away.- "Where's Redmoon?" -she asked herself. She trotted out of the cave and into the valley where she lifted her head, trying to pick up Redmoon's scent. She got a faint wiff of it, coming from a mountain. The mountain was very far away, it would take her all day to get there by hoof. She looked at her wings. The last time she tried flying above the trees......she didn't want to think about that. She decided to stay safe, so she lept up into the air and stayed well below the trees. She glided into the forest, her nose twitching. She followed Redmoon's scent up to a very tall waterfall. "Can my wings carry me up that high?" -she asked.- "Come on, Magicpetal. This is for Redmoon! Your friend. You have to help her." -she said, trying to motivate herself.-
( YAY )
( Riverbreeze? Are you there? )
Redmoon to self: She walked deeper into the forest. Her heart pounded in her ears. She emerged on a cliff. Her eyes grew huge with amazement. There was a waterfall and geese flying above her head. She had never gone this far into the Glacier Herd territory. Was it the Glazier Herd territory? She didn't know and didn't care. She sat down but then her leg swelled in pain and she fainted. Her body lay there peaceful but her leg growing redder and hot.
Redmoon to Shadowfire and self: She snorted silently and stayed at the border of the forest. She laid down and drooped her ears. Her leg was broken. She had dishonored her soter. She had dishonored her family, and most of all, had dishonored herself. She sighed and though for awhile.
( XD )
Remdoon to Shadowfire: She rolled her eyes. "You're trying to make me go to the medicine den to get healed so i'm the horse being taken to water and is not drinking it," She said and she turned around and walked away into the forest where she could hide.
( Right XD Sorry i'll fix that )
Redmoon to Shadowfire: She puffed out ehr chest and feathers. "My leg is just fine thank you very much," She said. Her skin shivered and her leg ached. She made one sign by pain and fear flickeriing across her eyes.
Redmoon to Emberblaze, Horizongold, and Shadowfire: She was still laying down breathing heavily and stood but a fierce pain gripped her leg and she squinted and bit her lip. She tried to hide it best she could when they looked at her and she smiled very warily. "Yep....... Fine here...." She lied.
( Okay hold on didn't finish reading XD )
(ok)
( Hold on brb grotta eat )
Shadowfire to others: The captain stood proudly on the body of the now-dead puma, grinning triumphantly. "Okay," he said. "Horizongold, Emberblaze, here." When the two young fighters came closer, he stepped off the puma's body and continued speaking. "We need to make sure there are no more pumas here. You two, go to the left of that bush. I'll take the right." He pointed to the bush that the most recent puma had jumped out of. They crept up and Shadowfire was relieved to see that there were no more pumas. They checked the other bushes in the clearing, all of them strangely symmetrical. None of the other bushes were hiding pumas and Shadowfire could no longer smell the strong scent of the predators. "That's settled, then," he said. "There are no more pumas in the area. Now back to what we were doing before that last puma showed up. Is everyone all right?"
"Not really," answered Horizongold. When his sire and Emberblaze looked at him, alarmed, he quickly added. "I'll be fine. I can make it to the medicine mare cave. But I'll probably need to stay there for a while. I'm headed there now."
"Good," Shadowfire said approvingly. "Emberblaze, are you okay? Do you need to go with Horizongold?"
Horizongold turned back from his way to the medicine mare den when her heard the growls of a puma. He saw an adult launch out of another bush at Emberblaze and galloped to to help. Shadowfire (I'll go with this one) hadn't yet left the clearing and also came toward it. Horizongold was pleased to see that Emberblaze had done what he'd done; flew a short distance off the ground and attacked from the air. Horizongold did the same and kicked the puma as hard as he could. But this puma had seen the pegasi attack his family, so he was wise to this trick. As Horizongold's hind hooves sailed toward his head, the puma ducked and swiped up at Horizongold's underbelly. Miraculously, Horizongold had moved and the blow only lightly scraped his shoulder, removing some fur. Horizongold was a bit off-balance after his strike hadn't met any resistance, and he flew higher to think. He soon devised a counter-plan and nodded at his sire to put it into effect. Shadowfire knew what his son wanted and got into position, rearing and whinnying furiously to bait the puma toward him. The puma did just that and Horizongold went to work, kicking at the tawny predator's legs. Soon three of them were broken and the other was dislocated from the hip. The puma, now grounded and immobile, was still a long way from finished. Its jaws snapped with fury and it growled menacingly, daring the pegasi to get closer. Wisely, none of them took it up on that offer. Shadowfire joined the fight for real at this point; flying and landing on the puma's already bruised and bleeding back, causing it to scream in pain. Shadowfire did what he had come to the clearing to do, and that was kill a puma. The creature's eyes went blank and its head sunk to the forest floor as it died.
( Aww pega-sushi I missed her )
( Wow I missed a lot XD )
(lol)
(flamefrost? Dragon?)
Emberblaze to everyone: -he folded his wings- "I'm okay." -he suddenly remembered the fillies in the clearing. He turned around and cantered back to them.-
Magicpetal to Emberblaze: -she flicked her ears toward hoofbeaats coming toward them. When Emberblaze came out of the trees, she sighed in relief and checked him over for wounds- "Where's Horizongold and his father?" she asked, smelling his hooves where he crushed the puma's skull- "There still in the circle of stone and trees. I just came back to check on you." -he said, reasureingly-
( btw I'm going to be in Georgia visiting relatives for April break (Friday April 13 to Saturday April 21) so I won't be on here. )
(Dang it!! Hmm . . . . Duskfire?)
(Awww!!!!!! Ok.....bye)
(handsome!!)
Emberblaze to the puma: -he whinnied and dived out of the way and without thinking launched his hind hooves onto the puma's ribs, breaking them. The puma fell to the floor in agony. Emberblaze darted over and crushed it's skull with his front hooves. He whirled around ready for the next attaker. His stallion blood cursed throug his veins. Fighting was so exhilerating.-
(ok same)
(u still here Riverbreeze?)
(aww!!!! Okay. Bye!!)
( gtg to bed bye )
Emberblaze to puma: -they all stood deathly still, waiting to see what the puma would do. His muscles twitched ready to pounce and defend his friends at any moment-
Emberblaze to everyone: -he reared and bared his teeth. He kept his head down and his wings close to his body, a trick he picked off of from Snowfrost-
Redmoon to Emberblaze: She tilted her head in a cute and confused way and shrugged. "Ehh I'm not funny anyways," She said and trotted forward more.
Horizonfire: "Thank you, Magicpetal. Look, Redmoon, how do you think your sister would feel if she recovered only to find that her sister was injured from a puma as well? Now, stay here or come with us. It's time to attack."
Redmoon to others: "I'm going and that's that!" She snorted and walked forward.
Magicpetal to Redmoon: "Just listen to him. He's a captain." -she said, crouching-
Redmoon to Horizonfire: She shok her head. "I'll be fine. I'm a lot stronger than I look" She said.
Horizonfire: "Redmoon! When I said stay here, I meant here. Don't get involved in the fight."
Redmoon to Emberblaze, Horizongold, and Horizonfire: She nodded and walked forward. She pranced her tai; held high.
Emberblaze to Magicpetal: -he gave her a warning glance, then turned and followed Horizongold into the circle of trees and stones-
Emberblaze to Horizonfire and Magicpetal: -he lifted his head, proudly from the compliment. He thrusted his wing outward stopping Magicpetal in her tracks- "Stay here." -he said, his eyes firey-
Redmoon to Horizonfire: She puffed out her chest and flared her feathers. "I am staying RIGHT where I am because this is for my siter," She said proudly. Breezebell blushed a bit from her sister.
Horizongold. "We're almost here, Father. Just past that log was where Breezebell was attacked."
Horizonfire nodded. He whispered, "Okay. Horizongold, stay with me. Others, be silent. Oh, and Emberblaze, you can stay if you like. I can tell you'll make a good warrior and this could be a valuable experience for you. Fillies, I would advise leaving."
Emberblaze to everyone: "Nope. I just hope the pumas aren't still here." -he said, glancing protectively at his younger sister while keeping his other eye trained on the forrest-