Feb 26, 2018

Alternative Ending RP: part 6

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So just start up were we left off

 

(last comment in part 5)

Magicpetal to Brightwing: -she rolled onto her side and looked up at her sire with big, bright eyes- "Never better!" -she nickered, still proud of herself for figuring out the basics of flight-

Feb 26, 2018

(Hi!! I need to go catch up on number 5, but I’ll be back soon)

Feb 27, 2018

( PEGASI )

Embermoon to Brightwing and Magicpetal: She trotted up to Brightwing and Magicpetal. The fillie was laying on her side nickering. She nickered as she came near them. "Amazing job Magicpetal!" She whinnied. She spread her wings and jumped from the ground. Immediately she tucked her legs and a current grasped her feathers. She glided with picking up speed. She flew straight up and once she was little ways past the cloud layer, she did a back flip into a nose dive with her wings almost tucked to her back. She plumeted towards Magicpetal. Just as she was about to make impact with the ground beside Magicpetal she spread her wings and lifted her muzzle. She glided straight up and curved her wing tips on the current and slowly glided down to them. "It takes practice," She nickered as she looked at the wide eyed filly.

Feb 27, 2018

(all caught up!!!! Wow I was still in #2 or #3. I'm set to continue but can I make another character besides Ashbrook? I haven't used her yet and i want to have a part in this. What role should my new OC have?)

Feb 27, 2018

(Kinda any role, but it might be better if you were a male captain or an over-stallion)

Feb 27, 2018

(Ok, I'll make Dawn Herd's over-stallion and maybe a captain in Dawn Herd as well)

Feb 27, 2018

Magicpetal to Embermoon: -she stared at the aunt- "How did you........I wanna try that!!!!" -she said, standing up. She spread her wings and jumped into the air, like Embermoon did, but her wings were to small for the breeze to grasp onto. So, she just fell back to land and landed on her back, again.- "Ouch!" -she nickerd when she landed on her back. She rolled onto her side and looked uselessly at her tiny wings.-

Feb 27, 2018

Mistcloud to random Dawn Herd Stallion: Mistcloud landed in Dawn Meadow, and looked around pleased. Glacier Herd's army was rounding up all of the Dawn Herd pegasi and gathering them in the center of the meadow. The lead mare turned to a near by Dawn Herd stallion and said, "Do you know were Elmshade and Mintcreek are? I have a few questions I would like to ask them."

Feb 27, 2018

Whiteshadow to Darkstone: Starsummer was sleeping, the foals were out side playing with Brightwing and Embermoon, and Dappleroot was sorting out herbs in the other side of the den. That left Whiteshadow and Darkstone standing in an awkward silence. The couple hadn't really talked since Whiteshadow had shown him the cave with the crystals.

"I'm glad Starsummer isn't to badly hurt." murmured Whiteshadow.

Feb 27, 2018

Meanwhile, in the meadow with Dawn Herd, . . .

 

Bronzewing to Mistcloud (he was the random stallion Mistcloud was talking to): -barely containing his bitterness and anger at Glacier Herd as well as his own army, he responded through clenched teeth- "I have no idea, but can I have an explanation of why on earth I'm here?! My mate was killed in that skirmish, and for what point?!" -glares at Mistcloud more, silently- "Also, you're talking to the over-stallion of Dawn Herd here, so do I get any respect?"

Feb 27, 2018

(as you can see, Bronzewing holds a grudge and his dignity is injured easily)

Feb 27, 2018Edited: Feb 28, 2018

(Just realized we have OCs here that have names that include gold, silver, and bronze)

 

Mistcloud to Bronzewing: Mistcloud dipped her head. "I'm sorry for your loss Bronzewing, Breezecloud was a friend of mine at one point. She will be missed greatly. I will explain all of this when we return to Glacier Herd's territory. I will like Brightwing and Starsummer to be part of this discussion." and with that Mistcloud turned and ordered some stallions and battle mares to asses the damage to both herds.

Feb 27, 2018

(Olympic medals, and it's Breezewing not Gemwing)

 

Bronzewing to Mistcloud: "Wait, Brightwing and Starsummer are here? What is going on?" He then processed the mare's words. "I guess I'll know soon, won't I?"

Feb 27, 2018

(I should be doing homework, be back soon)

Feb 27, 2018

Cherrycloud to self in Flame Herd: Cherrycloud flew over her territory, thinking about the recent events in Anok. It was troubling that Glacier Herd seamed to be trying to enslave the other herds. Was Flame Herd next? What would happen if Flame Herd was attacked?

All thought about what might happen to Flame Herd made her want to return to her filly, Gingerblaze. Cherrycloud quickly went into a nose dive, pulling up a few winglengths before she hit the ground.

Feb 27, 2018

Mistcloud to Bronzewing: Mistcloud turned to face the over-stallion, "Brightwing and his mate are not here, but you will meet them soon."

Feb 27, 2018

Gingerblaze to Cherrycloud: Gingerblaze watched her mother land and hurried over. "Mama!" shouted the excided filly, "Papa let me watch him train his army! It was super cool!"

Cherrycloud looked down at her filly, "I bet it was."

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