Mar 24, 2018

Alternative Ending RP: Part 8

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Here's the last comment from part 7:

Magicpetal to herself: -she smiled and layed her head back bown. With her mother's warmth and her long day behind her, she fell asleep instantly.-

x next morning x

Magicpetal to herself: the sun creeped out from the trees and rested on her body. She saw the sunlight through her closed eyelids. She slowly opened her eyes and yawmed. She hasn't slept that good in a long time. She stood and saw that Goldenstream was still asleep, while she heard Emberblaze's voice coming from the medicine mare's den. "He's probably checking on Snowfrost." -she thought. Starsummer was up and grazing in the feild. Darkstone and Whiteshdaow were dozing together under the shade of an oak tree. She trotted to her mother and started to suckle. Yesterday was so much fun, that she couldn't wait to start chasing her friends again. As she suckled, she thought about Snowfrost and Horizongold. They risked their lives for her. They helped save her. Without them, she might not be here right now. She wanted to find some way to tell them thank you, but she didn't know how. Once she had her fill, she trotted around the valley to be alone and to keep thinking her thoughts. She didn't know if Shadowstar and Silverflame were up, but she continued to trot around, trying to gather her thoughts.-

Mar 24, 2018

(Should I make a new OC??)

 

Mar 24, 2018

(Only if you want to)

Mar 24, 2018Edited: Mar 24, 2018

(I think I will. What herd should they we apart of?)

Mar 24, 2018

Bronzewing and Breezecloud to each other: As evening dawned (no pun intended) Bronzewing saw one of the medicine mares from the den go into the den and not come out for a long time. He knew it might be nothing important, but he remembered her coming to the fight clearing after he had left and on casual glances afterwards he couldn’t see Blazefire’s body. He hadn’t put the two together, but now it clicked. “Come with me,” he said quietly but urgently to Breezecloud. She nodded and the two of them walked toward the cave. They saw a well-hidden tunnel and Breezecloud heard hoofbeats. “That way,” she said, nodding towards the opening. They walked down the tunnel and found themselves face-to-face with a bitter and more importantly alive Blazefire.

Mar 24, 2018

Redmoon to Breezebell: She had slept very well all night and awaoke to find a beautiful sunrise laying on her. She pricked her ears with her eyes wide open and she nudged Breezebell, Crimsonstorm, and Forestbeam awake. "Sis! Pa! Ma! Look!" Crimsonstorm ruffled his feathers and opened his eyes and they instantly became filled with wonder. "Wow . . . . . ." He said. Forestbeam had opened them before him and was staring into its beuty. Breezebell lifted her head slowly and peered at the sunrise because it hurt her eyes. "Wow it's Beutiful!!!!!" SHe whinnied and stood up to see it more clearly.

Mar 24, 2018

Magicpetal to herself: she heard Redmoon and Breezebell awakening with their parents. But, she didn't stop. She had too much to think about and too little to say. "I need to clear my head." she thought. She galloped off, heading somewhere into the woods. She came upon a small lake. With the sunlight hitting it, it looked a golden color. She waded in to rest her wings and legs, but the water was to cold to go past her shoulder. Once she was rested enough, he waded out again and shook off. She cantered back to the clearing and saw that not much had changed. The birds were starting to sing their songs and more pegasi woke up to greet to day. She trotted into the medicine mares den to check on Snowfrost. "Maybe that's a good way to say thank you." -she trotted into the cave and saw Snowfrost laying down in one of the far corners. Emberblaze was standing next to the stallion, nuzzling him. She slowly walked in and stood next to Emberblaze.-

 

Emberblaze to Magicpetal: -he nickered a quiet hello to his sister, then turned back his attention to his friend. Before he got hurt, Snowfrost was beginning to teach him how to fight, fly, and defend himself. One of Snowfrost's wing was badly sprained and one back leg was broken. There were several other cuts and bruises on the gray stallion. Emberblaze nuzzled Snowfrost then sniffed his wounds-

Mar 24, 2018

Horizongold: He too woke up to greet the sunrise. He wondered what he should do that day and in the meantime started grazing.

Mar 24, 2018

(Can't RP right now)

Mar 24, 2018

( Okie Dokie I comment on WIspi chat instead XD )

Mar 25, 2018

(I'm back, give me a few minuets to catch up)

Mar 25, 2018

Blazefire to Bronzewing, Breezecloud, and Dappleroot: Blazefire had been awake for roughly five minuets before Bronzewing and Breezecloud, him mind was still cloudy from being passed out for a week. All he knew now was that he had woken up in a cave, surrounded by all those who had ever wronged him.

Mar 25, 2018

Dappleroot to Bronzewing, Breezecloud, and Blazefire: As Dawn Herd's former lead mare and over-stallion, Dappleroot jumped. "I-It's not what it looks like." she said.

Mar 25, 2018

Bronzewing: Oh? Then what is it?

Mar 25, 2018Edited: Mar 27, 2018

Breezecloud added, ”Because I see a living stallion. Not just any stallion, mind you, but the one who did his best to kill both me and my mate. On top of that, Cloudroot was certain that he was dead. Explain yourself, both of you.”

Mar 25, 2018

Cloudroot: The gray pinto mare had been busy in the medicine mare cave when she heard her lead-mare’s voice down a tunnel. She went to investigate it and ran into another medicine mare, Bronzewing, Breezecloud, and Blazefire. “Oh, hello everyone. I heard Breezecloud talking and wanted to make something clear.” She looked tentatively at Bronzewing, who nodded encouragement. She took a deep breath and said it. “I was knowingly wrong in my verdict. Blazefire was never dead and I knew it.”

 

“WHAT?!?!” exploded Bronzewing.

 

Cloudroot hung her head in shame. “It was to end the issue. No one should kill for revenge. I figured if you assumed he was dead, you would let the matter drop. Please forgive me.”

Mar 25, 2018

Embermoon to self: SHe had heard everything. Stress erupted inside her on what was going to happen.

Mar 25, 2018

It’s 1,2,3,4!! (12:34)

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