Here's the last comment from part 7:
Magicpetal to herself: -she smiled and layed her head back bown. With her mother's warmth and her long day behind her, she fell asleep instantly.-
x next morning x
Magicpetal to herself: the sun creeped out from the trees and rested on her body. She saw the sunlight through her closed eyelids. She slowly opened her eyes and yawmed. She hasn't slept that good in a long time. She stood and saw that Goldenstream was still asleep, while she heard Emberblaze's voice coming from the medicine mare's den. "He's probably checking on Snowfrost." -she thought. Starsummer was up and grazing in the feild. Darkstone and Whiteshdaow were dozing together under the shade of an oak tree. She trotted to her mother and started to suckle. Yesterday was so much fun, that she couldn't wait to start chasing her friends again. As she suckled, she thought about Snowfrost and Horizongold. They risked their lives for her. They helped save her. Without them, she might not be here right now. She wanted to find some way to tell them thank you, but she didn't know how. Once she had her fill, she trotted around the valley to be alone and to keep thinking her thoughts. She didn't know if Shadowstar and Silverflame were up, but she continued to trot around, trying to gather her thoughts.-
(YEAH!!!!)
(lol I don't know but this RP is awesome!!)
(I'm going to make part, umm... wait how did we get to part 9 already?)
(AGH!! I did to)
(AGH!! I missed it all!!!)
Starsummer to council: -she rolled her eyes. Even the patient and understanding mare was becoming agrivated. She cleared her throat, getting everyone's attention.- "Shall we continue....? Or at least try to continue."
Darkstone to Whiteshadow: -he snorted in reply- "I'm not sure. Magicpetal is getting better, but.....I'm.....I don't know. Concerned? Confused? Annoyed?" -he paused for a long time- "I don't really know how I feel." -he said, dropping his head slightly-
(Yeah, sorry.)
(Back to the RP?)
Breezecloud watched as the foal trotted away, then turned back to Blazefire, waiting.
(Oo I really like the idea of sparks/ something like that. Same.. One second
Like Sam Sparks.)
(I think having Spunky or something in it would be weird, but how about something with Spark? Like he has "spark"s of energy. And what does he look like? I think part of his name should be based on what he looks like)
( I know, but for some reason I liked the names. lol. Hmm. what should it be officially ?)
(I didn't mean that those would be in the name I meant it should be a name that reflects those characteristics.)
( XD Okay is it that umm..... I don't remember his name XD )
Embermoon to foal: She shook her head. "I trust none," She said sternly.
(lol I have a name. I just forgot to say it.. Spunky, or defiant would be good. brb. I'll show a pic.)
(Okay you need to give this guy a name. Spunky, sassy, defiant, . . . also, what does he look like?)
Foal: "Really.. Every inch?
You will... Trust me.." He said in a playfully turn, then kicked off to leave.*
Embermoon to foal: She nodded and glared. "I know EVERY last inch of Anok! I have searched and searched for something and found it nowhere! And you say YOU know this land better than I Do? THINK AGAIN!" She screamed in pure rage.
Breezecloud: "Why does that matter? We don't need to go anywhere."
Foal:* The foal picked up his head, remembering why he wanted to come. "I see you'r aggravated, but I know this land. I have experience in this. My father taught me."
He, glared at the ground, and shuffled his hoofs.
If you don't believe me....I will go. He said the last part more cheerfully.
You need food? I can show you.
Breezecloud: "Oh? How so?" she said sarcastically. "Rhetorical question. GO. AWAY."
Embermoon to foal: She got really angry at this pint and glared extremely hard. "No you can not! ANd HOW COULD AN IGGNORANT LITTLE COLT HELP US BIG STEEDS?!?!?!?!?!!?" She whinnied in agrivation.
Foal: *stares blankly at them then regains thoughts.* "Okay, but I can help ya know? *He waited for a reply, but he already knew what they were going to say.
Breezecloud: "You know that wasn't what I meant. Leave!"
Embermoon to foal: She got angry and nudged the foal. "You will go somewhere else!" She growled.
* waits for a moment.* Foal:Okay, I promise to be quiet. *they sat immediately on their rump.
Breezecloud had been tolerant of the foals' interruptions until that point but was getting very impatient. "Yes, she does smile--rarely!!" the lead-mare said, annoyed. "But she WON'T if you keep annoying us! We are dealing with an important case here and foals are not involved."
Foal: Well yay. Respectful... There you go.
I'm sorry, who are you?
Embermooon to foal: She growled and pinned her ears. "Do you ever say anything respectful?!" She snorted glaring at the foal.
Azulbolt in Night Herd: She trotted through the dense forest following Teakwood not knowing what was going on but kept a good face.
(Lol I didn't know how to introduce my new character.)
Foal: *snorts* Well, someone woke up on the wrong side of the grass..... Do you ever smile.? / says swishing tail, and giddy grin.
( XD That was SOOOOO random )
Embermoon to foal: She looked at foal and glared. "They discuss terms of buisness like if we are going to let our herd STARVE or EAT!" She snorted with angry eyes. "You need to stop INTERUPTING!" She whinnied in anger.
*Foal comes out of no where.* BORRRINNNG. ... Council meetings are so boring. Jumps up from hiding spot, and runs out of the area. tries to sneak out quietly*
Redmoon to Bronzewing: She nodded and grazed with her sister for the afternoon.
Embermoon to coucil: She looked sternly at the group and sighed. "I guess I agree with Bronzewing's set of circumstances," She said.
Bronzewing: "Oh, sorry. You're right, I meant her." He turned to Redmoon this time and heard what she said, smiling as he heard it. "I'm glad that's clear. Now, I need to get back to the meeting." He smiled at the two of them and turned away to go back to the council. "Did anything happen?" he asked his mate, and was disappointed but not surprised when she shook her head.
Breezebell to Bronzewing: She tilted her head in a cute way. "For what? You did nothing to me," She thought a moment and has an "Ohhhhh," Face. "You mean Redmoon," She pointed to her sister.
Redmoon to Breezebell and Bronzewing: She lifted her head. "It's okay I have just never been bad in my life!" She nickered and smiled.
Bronzewing suddenly felt guilty. "Excuse me for a moment," he said to the council. "Call me back when Blazefire decides," he added to Breezecloud. Seeing his mate nod, he hurried away from the council, toward Redmoon and Brrezebell. "Hey, I'm sorry," he said to Breezebell when he caught up to her. "I shouldn't have said that." He waited for her reply.
Redmoon to coucil: -She was staring at nothing and and slowly scooted away back to the foals with a glum face and heard Horizongold say something. "I don't want to," She said. "I'm done playing you guys can carry on," SHe turned away and trotted back to her parents and put on a good face to not worry them.
Breezebell to Redmoon and other foals: She drooped her ears at her sister and looked at the foals signaling that she was done too and trotted after sister.
Whiteshadow to Darkstone:
The silence was making Whiteshadow feel uncomfortable, so she said "How have you been lately?"
Darkstone to Whiteshadow: he slowed just a little, enough for her to catch up. He nickered loudly, his wings beating in synch. Once the laughter quieted, they flew in silence. Darkstone swished his tail, trying to think of something to say.
Whiteshadow to Darkstone:
Whiteshadow whinnied in delight, "Slow down!" she called after him
Darkstone to Whiteshadow: -he nickered and shot up after her. He pumped his wings and rocketed past her- "Catch me if you can." he whinnied over his shoulder, doing loops and tricks
(k)
Horizongold to Redmoon: The filly came back from the council meeting, looking disappointed. To get her mind off it, he said, "Okay, give me a dare! But let's stay away from the council meeting."
(I still can't make up my mind on what Blazefire is going to choose, so I think I'm going to put it up for a vote)
Whiteshadow to Darkstone:
"Depends if you can keep up with me or not." said Whiteshadow, then she leaped into the sky, not looking to see if Darkstone was following her.
Darkstone to Whiteshadow: -he flicked his ears foward, curious. He wasn't expecting that answer from her- "Uh, depends? What do you mean by depends?" -he asked, shifting his weight from hoof to hoof-
(Dragon we need you!)
Starsummer to Redmoon: -she arched her neck, but her eyes still kind- "We are in the middle of discussing something very important. After this meeting, I would love to answer all the riddles you have, but please, let us carry on." -she said, gently nudging the little foal away-
Bronzewing: The blue roan was getting impatient. "It's a secret." he said tersely. "Now tell your friends who are playing truth or dare to stop interrupting this meeting!" He saw the filly's face fall and intervened quickly. "Sorry, I didn't mean it like that. But please let us carry out our council meeting without interruption."
Redmoon to Emberblaze: She gagged again. "But I have to eat it!!! No way!!!!!" SHe said getting ready to run away.
Breezebell to Redmoon and Emberblaze: "Okay calm down i'm daring her to do something else," SHe snorted and tossed her head. "I dare you to. . . . . fly inot the center of the council and say a riddle! And also see if they can answer it!" She said stifiling a nicker.
Redmoon to Breezebell: Her eyes narrowed towards her sister and she quickly thought of a riddle. She flew into the sky and landed in the middle of the council with all of their eyes staring at her. "Umm...... This is a dare so I'm gonna say a riddle and see if you can answer," She gulped. "If you have me, you will want to share me. If you share me you will no longer have me. What am i?" She snorted more confidence coming to her.
(I like your new profile pic)
Whiteshadow to Darkstone:
Whiteshadow smiled at the silver dapple stallion, "Umm... depends."
Darkstone to Whiteshadow: -Darkstone watched the foals play truth or dare, and in the distance he heard some parts of the meeting. Whiteshadow was grazing nearby and he felt like they haven't talked in foreever. "Maybe we can go on a fly again?" -he thought to himself. He walked over to her and nickered a friendly greeting.- "Hi. I haven't seen you in forever. Do you want to go on a fly with me? It's been a while since we did, so, I thought it would be fun." he asked, preening his orange feathers-
(same)
(Ugh, I have no clue what Blazefire is going to chose)
Mistcloud to council, medicine mares, Embermoon, and Blazefire:
"So the choice is yours Blazefire, agree to our terms and you will be allowed to stay, as long as you do not attack or harm another and agree to be guarded 24/7. If you decline you will be executed."
Starsummer to Bronzewingand council: -she snorted in agreement.- "That sounds more than fair." she nickered, tossing her head
Horizongold: "Shouldn't it be up to Redmoon anyway?"
Silverflame to foals and Horizongold:
"I vote we don't." he said, disgusted
Horizongold: The yearling snorted at the dare. "Really? Everyone poops. How is that a dare?"
Bronzewing was quiet for a moment, surprised by the sincerity of Dappleroot's voice. "Thank you for that, Dappleroot," he said, nodding toward her. "Now we need to make a decision as a council. I do remember offering a truce to you when we were fighting. You never answered, and I will give you the terms again if you have forgotten. If you say yes and keep the truce, you may stay here with no hard feelings--but note that we will all probably have a close eye on you. If you say no, I believe banishment would be wise to make sure that there is no more bad blood between any of us. And finally, if you say yes but you initiate more violence, the victim of this violence will do their best to kill you with the permission of the council. Do any council members disagree or have other suggestions? If not, I await Blazefire's answer."
Dappleroot to council, Embermoon, Blazefire, and Cloudroot:
Dappleroot had been hoping that she was not going to have to tell her side of the story, but she took a shaky breath and began. "Many years ago when I was a young medicine mare assistant," said Dappleroot, "There was a battle between Mountain Herd and Dessert Herd. It lasted for hours, and in the end, many steeds died. And many more were badly wounded. My mentor was doing her best to tend to as many steeds as she could, but the wounded just kept coming. So when a messenger came to fetch a medicine mare for a badly wounded captain by the name of Blazefire, I was dispatched to aid in what way I could."
Dappleroot paused, fighting back a wave of gilt before she continued. "When I arrived I realized that he was in worse shape then I had been led to believe. I knew I that Blazefire needed the help of a more experienced medicine mare then myself and he need to be moved to the medicine mare den, but I also knew that he was bleeding badly from several large gashes along his flank. I instructed the messenger and a few nearby battle mares to fetch the herbs I needed to stop the bleeding, wile I built a sling to carry Blazefire in. When the others got back I quickly applied the herbs to the wounds, but I was in a hurry, and I missed a nasty gash on his leg. We managed to get Blazefire back to the herd, but by the time someone noticed his leg," Dappleroot had to choke back tears, "It was badly infected. Beyond repair.
The medicine mare used her wing to point at Blazefire's bad leg. "It was my fault he can't use that leg anymore. So that day I vowed that if Blazefire was every injured again I would do anything in my power to heal him. When Cloudroot announced that he had been killed, I had a feeling in my gut that something wasn't quite right, so I snuck out after dark to investigate. I then discovered that Blazefire was alive, just in a deep coma. I managed to move him to a place where I thought he would be safe and kept him sleeping until he had mostly healed, then I woke him. That would be my side of the story up until this moment."
Starsummer to council: she snorted but didn't say anything. She had put her proposal across, now it was up to Mistcloud.
Mistcloud to council, medicine mares, Blazefire, and Embermoon:
"So now that we have heard from two of them," said Mistcloud when Starsummer had calmed down, "I would like to hear Dappleroot's side of the story before I make my decision."
Emberblaze to Redmoon: "Oh NO! Your doing it. I had to do the CHICKEN DANCE in front of the over-stallion and the whole council!!!! All you have to do is poop. I would have taken that dare over the one I had to do anyday!! You will do it."
Redmoon to self: She gagged and looked around for the dare and then decides not to do it- "Nope, i'm not doing it sorry," She said.
Breezebell to Redmoon and other foals: She shrugged. "Eh, I'll think of something else," SHe thought and an idea pinged in her mind-
Magicpetal to Breezebell: -gags- "I mean, I guess we all do it." -she said, having a disgusted look-
Breezebell to Magicpetal: She shrugged. "I don't know she's my sister she probabaly deserves it!"
Magicpetal to foals: "Ew. Why would you dare her to do that?" -she said, turning up her nose-
Starsummer to Embermoon and council: -she nickered her frustration and walked back and forth, trying to figure things out. She stopped once she met a verdict with herself. She whirled around to face Blazefire.- "Fine. This is my final proposal, we will give you ONE LAST chance. If you blow it, I will personally make you pay. " -she said, agrivated. She turned back around and walked back over to Brightwing's side, trying to calm down.-
Breezebell to foals: She looekd at each one of them and looks at her sister.
Redmoon to Breezebell: -She rolled her eyes.- "I'll go!" -She said-
Breezebell to Redmoon: SHe jumped for the chance to dare her sister. "Okay, Truth or Dare?" SHe asked.
Redmoon: -She thought a moment and said. "Dare,"
Breezebell: "I dare you too poop!" She said.
Redmoon to Breezebell: She gagged and shook her head. "No"
Magcipetal to Emberblaze: "No, I don't except." -she said, fluttering her wings-
Emberblaze to Magicpetal and foals: "Dang... oh well, who's next?" -he asked, looking each foal in the eye-
Embermoon to Starsummer: She looked at Starsummer with soft but determined eyes- "Starsummer, listen to reason. No more blood should be spilled. We should gie him 1 LAST chance then if he blows it over we WILL declare treason alright? And that's only if the coucil agrees with me about the chance policy," SHe said her eyes determeined and fierce but soft.
Starsummer to Embermoon. Blazefire, and council: -she angrily walked around Embermoon and stood up taller and pinned her ears as she spoke- "I declare treason right now! He has disobeyed Mistcloud's orders and almost killed Breezecloud, he has insulted me and my mate, and he has gotten into a fight with Bronzewing, which resulted in Embermoon getting teporarily paralysed." -she turned to face Embermoon- "This stallion doesn't deserve to be let off easy." -she said through gritted teeth-
Embermoon to Starsummer and Blazefire: -She stepped infront of Starsummer- "We're not here to fight! I agree with you, Starsummer but we need to think this through better," -She turned to Blazefire her eyes narrowed.- "Blazefire Valley Herd is Glacier Herd now and you must accept that. Dawn Herd is also apart of Glacier Herd. There was not to be deaths in that fight! I could declare treason apon you right now for being the sister of an over-stallion and i'm sure everyone would agree," She said looking at the coucil. "My hope for Blazwefire is very little so I will declare treason if he does not accept," She snorted her eyes filled with fire.
( I also commented on The love story blah blah of Darkfire Dreamdrop XD )
Starsummer to Blazefire: -when Blazefire glared at Brightwing, anger pulsed through her veins and she flared her wings and stepped forward to face Blazefire, the softness gone from her eyes.- "Brightwing is a better stallion than you ever will be. Unike you, he actually thinks before he acts. You would be wise to watch your mouth." -she snapped, fearless, staring him straight in the eye, challenging-
Blazefire to the council, Embermoon, Cloudroot, and Dappleroot:
Blazefire snorted, still a bit groggy from being out for a week, but he managed to speak in his defense. "I am loyal to Valley Herd. Nothing any of you could ever change that. I believe that I was right in attempting to kill Breezecloud as an act to save my herd's reputation. Because my so called over-stallion," Blazefire sent a glare towards Brightwing "Seems to be incapable of doing that."
( XD )
Embermoon to council: -She nodded- " I think we should have mercy on Blazefire and let him stay, but you will be very highly guarded and one wrong move you're gone," -She said feeling fierce. She shuffled her hooves waiting for the council's reply.-
(it cool)
(It's fine)
(Holy pegasi that was long!!! Sorry)
Horizongold: "I wouldn't take it, Magicpetal. He wants revenge so it will be absolutely ridiculous."
Cloudroot to council: "You were talking about Blazefire and what was to be done with him. I will say my piece and let Blazefire and Dappleroot add to it when I am finished. From what I saw starting in the Dawn Herd meadow, Blazefire knocked out Breezecloud with what was intended as a deathblow. I know Bronzewing well enough to realize that he was absolutely devastated, and the expression quickly turned to determination--I assumed wanting revenge. When Glacier Herd landed in the meadow, I was ordered by a warrior to bury Breezecloud's body. With the help of Bronzewing's nephew Horizongold I did, but I could see signs of life. I intentionally didn't bury her as far down as a normal grave so that she could dig her way out. If this is confusing, the reason I buried her in the first place was because the Glacier Herd warrior had ordered me to and I didn't want to spill blood. As I was burying Breezecloud, I was talking to her quietly. I won't repeat my words now, but I said that she should follow us when she could because I didn't want Bronzewing to be bitter. Anyway, we flew here to Glacier Herd's territory and I hoped the issue would resolve itself but obviously hasn't. Bronzewing challenged Blazefire to a fight and accidentally kicked Embermoon's withers instead of Blazefire, and Embermoon was temporarily paralyzed. After that, the fight resumed and Bronzewing knocked Blazefire deeply unconscious, similar to what Blazefire had done to Breezecloud. Bronzewing asked me to look at Blazefire and although I could tell he was alive, I declared him dead to try and end the issue. Then Dappleroot nursed Blzefire back to health--unbeknownst to me, I'll add-- and Horizongold found her in the cave with him. Bronzewing found out somehow as well and I was in the medicine mare cave when I heard the three of them arguing. I rushed in to see what was happening and tried to defuse the situation. Then Embermoon came to get us after Bronzewing had asked Mistcloud what to do, and we brought Blazefire out to face the music. So has anything been decided?"
Emberblaze to Magicpetal: "I have a dare for you, Magicpetal." -he said, wanting revenge-
Magicpetal to Emberblaze: "But, it's not my turn. And I didn't choose dare." -stands up and shakes dirt out of her wings and coat-
Emberblaze to Magicpetal: "I know, I chose it for you." -he said, smirking- "Do you accept the dare?"
(hewwoo)
Starsummer to council: -she calmed down, but she still stifled a nicker- "Okay. Soo, what were we talking about?"
Emberblaze to Magicpetal: -he snorted and pinned his ears at the laughing sister-
Magicpetal to Emberblaze: -rolls on back with laughter-
Mistcloud to Bronzewing, Breezecloud, Brightwing, Starsummer, Moonwing, Embermoon, Dappleroot, Blazefire, & Cloudroot:
"Yes lets." said Mistcloud.
(ok.)
Bronzewing: Once the blue roan stallion stopped laughing, it still took him several loud deep breaths to stop his wings twitching with mirth. When he was in control of his features, he could tell who the darer was. Horizongold was over with the foals, laughing the loudest. Bronzewing knew that his nephew could be formal or tactful, but when he was having fun he REALLY had fun. I'll talk to him later, he thought. Out loud, he said, "Well! Nothing like foals for comic relief--no offense, Starsummer or Brightwing. Now, back to the meeting?"
(Because I thought it looked cooler)
Emberblaze to foals: -he walked back to them with his head held high and his wings folded.- "Who's next?" -he said, like nothing had happened. Emberblaze was a spirited foal who didn't like to be embarrassed or admit he was wrong-
Magicpetal to Eberblaze: -she laughed loudly at her brother- "Did you see momma's face?" -she asked, rolling on the ground-
Emberblze to Magicpetal: -he stiffened and snorted- "Yeah. I saw it. So what?" -he snapped at his younger sister-
Magicpetal to Emberblaze: x she stood up x "Your gonna get in so much trouble!!"
Emberblaze to Magicpetal:-he huffed and rammed Magicpetal on her side, sending the small fily tumbling down. But, she was still laughing.-
Starsummer to everyone: -she blinked, not really sure of what to say- "Uhh...." -she swallowed, but couldn't stop her laugh when it erupted from her mouth. She breathed deeply when Emberblaze dashed away.- "I-uh." -another laugh escaped from her. She tossed the forelock out of her eyes and shook her head and raised her wings- "Um...That was my son. He obviously has been playing Truth or dare."
Breezecloud: As Emberblaze did the chicken dance, the former leadmare gasped quietly, trying to suppress the sound. "Wha-?" She started laughing silently when Emblerblaze dashed away. She quickly composed her features, however, when she saw Starsummer's face.
Emberblaze to everyone: -gaps at them, his jaw to the floor- x he sighed and sulked to the meeting x
Emberblaze to council: "Okay. Before you kill me, please know that this was a dare given to me by my friends. I would never do this under my own decisions." -did chicken dance. As soon as he was done, he bolted away, vever to be seen-
Starsummer to Emberblaze and council: as she watched her colt do the chicken dance she stifled a smile and buried her face in her wings, nickering softly and slightly embarrassed-
Magicpetal to everyone: "I'm suprised he still calls us his friends." -she said, watching in amazement as her brother embarrassed himself wih a "Lord, kill me now." expression-
(Why is the top line in bold?)
Silverflame to foals and Horizongold:
The bay colt stopped laughing. "This is what you signed up for."
Horizongold: The liver chestnut yearling managed to stop laughing long enough to say, "Yep. So I gave you a hard one. Now go ahead! You can say you're just fooling around if that helps."
Emberblaze to Horizongold and other folas: "NO way!!!! The over-stallion is there!!! And my mother!!! No way. Nuh uh."
Magicpetal to Embermoon: "You said you wanted a hard one." -she said, pushing him toward the meeting-
Horizongold joined in the laughter of the others. "Go on! Do it!" he said to Emberblaze, then nearly collapsed in a fit of nickering. Seeing Emberblaze turn reluctantly to go, he added, "But don't tell them I told you to!"
Silverflame to foals and Horizongold:
Silverflame burst out laughing.
Horizongold to Emberblaze: “Hmm,” he said, thinking. “Go run into the grownups council meeting and do the chicken dance in front of them.” -already is trying not to laugh-
Emberblaze to foals: "I'll go next." -he said, raising his wing- "I choose...dare. Give me a hard one." -he said, full of himself-
Embermoon to the council: She nodded and looked at the pair waiting for answers.
Mistcloud to Blazefire, Cloudroot, Dappleroot, Moonwing, Bronzewing, Breezecloud, Starsummer, Brightwing, and Embermoon:
Mistcloud turned her attention to Blazefire. "Blazefire, we are here to decide your fate, but I would like you and the medicine mares to tell your side of the story before we make our decision."
Breezebell to Silverflame: She smiled. "Easy dare!" She said and then lifted off and zoomed to the top of the tree and touched it. She dashed back down and landed. "There!"