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    Dragon
    Mar 24, 2018

    Alternative Ending RP: Part 8

    in HERD CHAT

    Here's the last comment from part 7:

    Magicpetal to herself: -she smiled and layed her head back bown. With her mother's warmth and her long day behind her, she fell asleep instantly.-

    x next morning x

    Magicpetal to herself: the sun creeped out from the trees and rested on her body. She saw the sunlight through her closed eyelids. She slowly opened her eyes and yawmed. She hasn't slept that good in a long time. She stood and saw that Goldenstream was still asleep, while she heard Emberblaze's voice coming from the medicine mare's den. "He's probably checking on Snowfrost." -she thought. Starsummer was up and grazing in the feild. Darkstone and Whiteshdaow were dozing together under the shade of an oak tree. She trotted to her mother and started to suckle. Yesterday was so much fun, that she couldn't wait to start chasing her friends again. As she suckled, she thought about Snowfrost and Horizongold. They risked their lives for her. They helped save her. Without them, she might not be here right now. She wanted to find some way to tell them thank you, but she didn't know how. Once she had her fill, she trotted around the valley to be alone and to keep thinking her thoughts. She didn't know if Shadowstar and Silverflame were up, but she continued to trot around, trying to gather her thoughts.-

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    Riverbreeze
    Apr 07, 2018

    (YEAH!!!!)

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 07, 2018

    (lol I don't know but this RP is awesome!!)

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    Dragon
    Apr 07, 2018

    (I'm going to make part, umm... wait how did we get to part 9 already?)

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    Dragon
    Apr 07, 2018

    (AGH!! I did to)

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    Riverbreeze
    Apr 07, 2018

    (AGH!! I missed it all!!!)

    Starsummer to council: -she rolled her eyes. Even the patient and understanding mare was becoming agrivated. She cleared her throat, getting everyone's attention.- "Shall we continue....? Or at least try to continue."

    Darkstone to Whiteshadow: -he snorted in reply- "I'm not sure. Magicpetal is getting better, but.....I'm.....I don't know. Concerned? Confused? Annoyed?" -he paused for a long time- "I don't really know how I feel." -he said, dropping his head slightly-

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    (Yeah, sorry.)

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    (Back to the RP?)


    Breezecloud watched as the foal trotted away, then turned back to Blazefire, waiting.

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    (Oo I really like the idea of sparks/ something like that. Same.. One second

    Like Sam Sparks.)

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    (I think having Spunky or something in it would be weird, but how about something with Spark? Like he has "spark"s of energy. And what does he look like? I think part of his name should be based on what he looks like)

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    ( I know, but for some reason I liked the names. lol. Hmm. what should it be officially ?)

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    (I didn't mean that those would be in the name I meant it should be a name that reflects those characteristics.)

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    Nightmist(old)
    Apr 05, 2018

    ( XD Okay is it that umm..... I don't remember his name XD )

    Embermoon to foal: She shook her head. "I trust none," She said sternly.

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    (lol I have a name. I just forgot to say it.. Spunky, or defiant would be good. brb. I'll show a pic.)

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    (Okay you need to give this guy a name. Spunky, sassy, defiant, . . . also, what does he look like?)

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    Foal: "Really.. Every inch?

    You will... Trust me.." He said in a playfully turn, then kicked off to leave.*

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    Nightmist(old)
    Apr 05, 2018

    Embermoon to foal: She nodded and glared. "I know EVERY last inch of Anok! I have searched and searched for something and found it nowhere! And you say YOU know this land better than I Do? THINK AGAIN!" She screamed in pure rage.

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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    Breezecloud: "Why does that matter? We don't need to go anywhere."

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    Stardust
    Apr 05, 2018

    Foal:* The foal picked up his head, remembering why he wanted to come. "I see you'r aggravated, but I know this land. I have experience in this. My father taught me."

    He, glared at the ground, and shuffled his hoofs.

    If you don't believe me....I will go. He said the last part more cheerfully.

    You need food? I can show you.


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    Flamefrost
    Apr 05, 2018

    Breezecloud: "Oh? How so?" she said sarcastically. "Rhetorical question. GO. AWAY."

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    Nightmist(old)
    Apr 05, 2018

    Embermoon to foal: She got really angry at this pint and glared extremely hard. "No you can not! ANd HOW COULD AN IGGNORANT LITTLE COLT HELP US BIG STEEDS?!?!?!?!?!!?" She whinnied in agrivation.

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