Here's the last comment from part 10:
Redmoon to Emberblaze: She nodded and closed her eyes.
Can you guys please hold off on this until I get back from church? Last week when I got home, I had to read through like 5 or 6 pages of comments from the Stars RP
(Oceangold: x-hears her-x "What's a lawnmower?" ok, last comment on this post)
(HANDSOME!!!!!
Me: Magicpetal!!!!! Look!!!!!
Magicpetal: ..........oh........my.........pega-feathers........ -she said, breathless-
Me: "AHAHAHHHHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!"
Magicpetal: -snorts- "I LEFT MY LAWNMOWER ON!!!!! BYEEEEE" -runs-
(Made 12!!!!!!!!)
(ok!!! Lemme catch up)
(I made Horizongold on FHM!!)
Redmoon to Horizongold: She nodded and turned back to the breeding ground and left them to talk. She trotted up to one of the trees and put her wing on the skin or bark of the tree. She pulled her wing away when she felt prickley thorns slice through them and flapped her one wing to free her of blood. She then looked at the other trees a bit confused.
(Holy pegasi you guys went crazy!!! Caught up now, but Riverbreeze can you make #12 since my phone can't scroll through all of this?)
Horizongold to Magicpetal: The liver chestnut yearling was almost caught up to Magicpetal when he saw her hurry away. He stood there, crestfallen at the sight that she was avoiding him. Then he turned his head to follow her path and saw her going into the circle of trees. Moving urgently now, he followed the two fillies. "Get out of here!" he whispered to them urgently. Seeing Redmoon go, he turned to Magicpetal. When they had walked out of the puma breeding ground, he asked her, "Um, can we talk?"
Magicpetal to Redmoon: "Well, its not like I'm going to leave my friend to the mercy of the forest." she whispered, walking toward the center of the circle.
Redmoon to Magicpetal: She perked her ears. "Will if anyone attacks then I can't really help because my leg..." She said wincing just thinking about it.
( gtg )
Magicpetal to redmoon: "N-no. It's ok-kay. H-he s-said he k-killed them off...." she said, standing up a little taller, but shook-
Redmoon to Magicpetal: She shook her head again. " You should probably stay there so Emberblze doesn't have a cow if you get hurt," She said cautiously.
Magicpetal to Redmoon: "Ok-kay....." -she stammered, walking deeper into the circle-
Redmoon to Magicpetal: She shook her head. "I don't know. I just want to know what it is," She snorted.
Magicpetal to Redmoon: the little filly swallowed "What is it then?" she asked, eyeing each tree and bush, before walking past it
( ACK ;-; )
Redmoon to Magicpetal: She looked at Magicpetal. "I don't think that's it. There's gotta be something else involved in it," She said looking at the trees and rocks again.
(hello?)
Magicpetal to Redmoon: she heard and saw her friend moving toward the circle of trees and rocks. She galloped forward. "Let's not go in there. Remember the last time? It's a puma breeding ground." she said, her eyes looking everywhere and her wings ready to fly away
(hiii)
( potatoes )
Redmoon to self: She perked her ears when she remebered the strange clearing with the identical trees and rocks. She slowly stood and limped in the direction of the clearing, alone.