''why did i do it?" Morningleaf thought, "why did i have foals with Brakentail.". After Star and Nightwing fought, Morningleaf had become lead mare of River Herd where Star was the over-stallion. Morningleaf watched her brown filly who had a wide blaze with orange feathers edged in blue, Morningtail and her chestnut colt who had four white socks and a big wings with dark blue feathers, Brakenleaf play water tag in feather lake. Star had left to see how storm herd was doing in the landwalker territory. Redfire had returned to tell them they found a land for themselves and star crossed back with him to check on them. He left Morningleaf in charge of the herd. Morningleaf was outraged with herself for having foals with Brakentail. "Star's going to be so mad at me. "what was i thinking," she thought. Brakentail landed next to her taking her mind off her thoughts. "What are you thinking about?" he asked her. " oh... nothing," she responded. "hmm," Brakentail said, "thinking about what star might do to you after what happened right?" he said glancing at the foals. "Don't worry about it i'll tell him what happened.". "But i'm the lead mare" Morningleaf shouted, "i'm supposed to be responsible!". "Morningleaf i'm back", said a new voice. Morningleaf knew it was Star. "hey Brackentail,". he looked at Morningleaf's guilty expression and and Brakentail's shocked face. "what are you guys no telling me?" he asked them. Then he noticed the foals. "who are these foals?" he asked morningleaf not recognizing them. "umm..." Morningleaf said, speechless. Then, understand showed on his face.
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I like it so far!!
Cool!
This is interesting!
Sounds awesome! Just a tip, do a paragraph after someone finished speaking so its not all jumbled.