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    kittycatburmise
    Jan 25, 2021
    Edited: Feb 14, 2021

    Battle Mare- Chapter 2

    in FAN FICTON

    Stormlake's captors rose into the air, heading east.

    Stormlake glanced around wildly, looking for her friends, for any Sun Herd steeds, really, but there was no one there except them. She trembled like an autumn leaf, trying to push a horrific memory out of her mind. She needed her dam.

    "Mama!" Stormlake bleated like a foal.

    Nightfires cold eyes were full of amusement. "No one can hear you," he taunted.

    Stormlake ignored him and continued bleating, even though she knew it was hopeless. But as they made their way over the vein, she had to finally accept he was right.

    She changed tactics, trying to pull her wings out of the steeds' mouths. Stormlake managed to pull her left wing out of Nightfire's mouth, making her and the gray stallion lose altitude. The piebald pegasus dived towards her, catching her free wing and clamping it hard.

    Stormlake tried her right wing, but the gray steed only bit harder. She winched as a drop of red blood ran down her wing, vibrant against her dark blue feathers.

    They crossed into Mountain Herd's territory. The meadow was empty of pegasi. As they touched down, Stormlake could see they were in their caves, asleep. The two stallions led her into an empty one.

    Stormlake watched the gray pegasus lay down next to her, and she did the same. Nightfire stood in the doorway, blocking escape.

    The gray steed fell asleep, but Nightfire didn't. Stormlake tried not to fall asleep, waiting for Nightfire to do so, so she could escape. But soon her eyes began to close, and she fell asleep, dreaming of the millions of things Rockwing could do to her and one terrible one that her sister had already endured...

     

    Sun Herd

    Over-Stallion

    Thunderwing- dark bay stallion with vibrant crimson feathers, black mane and tail, two white hind socks

    Lead Mare

    Silvercloud- light gray mare with silver feathers, white mane and tail, four white socks

    Medicine Mare

    Sweetroot- old chestnut pinto with dark pink feathers, chestnut mane and tail, white star on forehead

    Stallions

    Redheart- large dark gray warrior with dark red feathers, black mane and tail. Stormlake's sire. Deceased

    Mares

    Goldsun- palomino mare with golden feathers, two hind white socks. Stormlake's dam

    Yearlings

    Mintleaf- brown filly with mint green feathers, light brown mane and tail, pale scar on chest, green eyes

    Ashfeather- brown filly with maroon feathers, brown mane and tail

    Thunderblaze- gray colt with vibrant orange feathers, gray mane and tail

    Weanlings

    Starbeam- palomino filly with silver feathers, four white socks, thin blaze. Stormlake's sister


    Valley Herd

    Stormlake- large gray filly with dark blue feathers, silver mane and tail, two hind white socks

    Over-Stallion

    Pinewing- brown stallion with yellowish-green feathers, brown mane and tail, two hind white socks

    Lead Mare

    Elmcloud- chestnut mare with light green tipped in white, white mane and tail, four white socks

    Stallions

    Nightfire- Captain. Large piebald stallion with white feathers tipped in black, black mane and tail


    Constructive criticism welcome.

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    kittycatburmise
    Jan 30, 2021

    Would anyone support the idea that I do the next chapter about Goldsun (Stormlake’s dam) looking for her, or should I just continue with Stormlake?

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    Stormsun
    Jan 30, 2021
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    Hmmm... which ever idea you like! You could do back and forth so we know whats going on with Stormlake and whats going on with the others

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    Aspenray
    Jan 26, 2021

    this is great!!!!

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    Riverglade
    Jan 26, 2021

    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Stormsun
    Jan 26, 2021

    OOOOOOOH. *summons some popcorn*


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    Hazey
    Jan 26, 2021

    Oooh I like it! I wonder why Rockwing wants her!

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