(next day after Wishrivers flight)
Wishriver nickered to her friend, Dawnfeather,
”Lets go swim!,” She Added, ”Today’s sunny”
They all looked at her as if she went crazy, ”But, What if the captains see us?” Dawnfeather asked.
”They won’t, I promise you” She said, with a mischevious glint. ”At this time of the day, they should be resting and, i’m leading you to a remote spot”
As Dawnfeather catched onto the idea, She said, ”Oooo”
The friends flew were the sun was strong but, cold. They were descended from Lake Herd and Desert Herd steeds, so thats why they could fly high in the sky. They banked sharply towards the river which ended in a waterfall, the wind buffeting there wings and they glided there wings on, not their bodys, that was the trick to flying fast. Diving in a spiral with on wing tucked in, they dove towards a grove of trees so they wouldnt be seen. Almost touching the ground, they both stuck out both wings and sped faster than normal, towards the sparkling river. Thick tree tops covered the pegasi from the sky, though still rays of sunlight seeped in, Dawnfeather gazed in wonder, ”What is, this place?” She asked.
”This is Sunlight River” She said, then added, ”well, as I call it”
”They can’t see us can they?” Dawnfeather questioned at Wishriver.
”Nope!”
”You really did, lead us to a remote spot” She marveled.
Wishriver neighed, ”C’mon! The last one to the river eats a Rotten birds egg!”
”No waaay” Whined Dawnfeather.
They galloped towards the river and splashed in, brrrrr, She thought as she splashed in.
”It sure is sunny, but the water is freezing” Dawnfeather nickered as she splashed her with a wingful of water.
”Who is it?” a voice said.
THanks!:D
Good job