Last comment from part 1:
Alkomaru:
"Great idea. Going to Anok would be the best thing that could ever happen, at least in my opinion." He replied, wilting a little as Mordré walked right passed his stall, lead rope in hand attached to Asha.
He needed to get out of here.
Alko bucked at his stall door, aching to spread his wings and fly away, galloping to freedom.
"How about... next time our ... 'riders' (his disgust at the very word was obvious, like lemon on his tongue) take us out... we buck them off while they're on the ground and fly, as far and fast as we can go?"
As soon as the sentence left his muzzle, he realised how stupid it was. The Flyers would be on them within a second of their attempted escape.
"Nevermind," he sighed, wondering if Frei thought he was as stupid as he thought. She was, seemingly, the only other pegasus (he refused to brand himself or her as "kihlari") that wanted out of this captivity.
"Hmm... how about at night, when everyone's asleep, we buck our stall doors and make a fly for it?"
He sighed again, shaking his short mane and pawing the ground in annoyance. He was more or less scheming to himself now, regardless of whether Frei or any other kihlari was listening in or not.
"You have any ideas, Frei?"
Then he realised the price he would have to pay if he were to leave:
Asha adored Mordré. Asha didn't know what living free was, and as far as Alko knew his sister, she had no intention of finding out.
Alko stood still, wilting a little more, as he slowly folded his wings and dropped his head, ears drooping.
If he were to escape... Alko would never see his sister again.







( Yes, please, gtg now guys, school night lol. Bai!!! :D )
(lol we probably should for our mobile users)
(You want to I dont, to lazy)
( Ohh, now I see it, I think my device glitched because it’s over 10 pages. XD Sorry, I’ll fix that, forget the whip thing )
Lars Windshifter:
He saw stars as Frei’s kick made contact, just grazing the back of his head. It would’ve completely damaged his spinal chord if he hadn’t of moved slightly in the nick of time. Even still, he couldn’t move, the whip had been ripped from his hand, and the last thing he thought of was Amaris.
She would’ve called this perfect story material.
(should we make another post?)
Thunderglade:
He squeal in fury when he saw Lars wave the whip around, and came up behind the foolish stablehand. In one swift, smooth motion, Thunderglade yanked the whip out of Lars' hand and Lars was once again thrown to the floor. Thunderglade yanked the stablehand out of the fight by grabbing his shirt and roughly throwing him into one of the abandoned stalls.
Thunderglade saw Oceanblaze join the fight and nickered to her. "Yes! Come on, Oceanblaze, we can do this!" He neighed encouragingly, his eyes scanning the battlefield again. He caught Jett unaware by ramming the stallion dead-set in the ribs with such force he cracked a few and bit down on one of Jett's wings, ripping out the flight feathers and causing blood to streak down the wing.
Riviare:
She stood in the stable door. "NO Valkyrie stop! Alko Frie! STOP IT!!" She darted into the fight. She blocked blows trying to get to Valkyrie one of them slammed a hoof into her chest and she gasped. Valkyrie trew her into a stall and closed the door
( yes, I did see your comment Starleaf, did you see mine in which Lars slapped Frei on the nose xDDDD )
Lightning/Oceanblaze
Lightning kicked her stall door and it splintered to pieces, then she ran to join the flight.
Sage,
"Not you to Lightning!" Sage cried.
Sage, Sage stood up and hurried to were the others were, as she watched in horror
Lars Windshifter:
He dodged each attack on him as he grabbed a whip from the tack room and started to wave it in the air. It was a long one, one not normally used when riding, one used for lounging. It was long and made a resounding crack when in contact with stone floor. He cracked it once and visibly saw as each pegasus flinched in response to the loud nose, and their ears went back. His right knee ached from when Frei had dropped him, but he ignored it as he continued to crackle the whip.
Thunderglade:
He had time to assess the battlefield where he saw Firgo.
He dashed to Firgo, grabbed his shirt and set him gently in Thunderglade's stall, to keep him safe, then whirled back around to see if any more of his friends were getting hurt.
Thunderglade:
He heard Riptide scream and threw himself at Jett, angling his broad shoulder to smash the stallion right in the ribcage, causing Jett to shriek. Thunderglade whirled back around and let loose his back hooves, slamming Jett in the chest and throwing him again the wall.
Arashi,
Arashi gently thronged Sage across the stable, because she did not want her to get hurt
Frei\Stormblaze:
The second lars hit her she reared and struck Lars with a blow that should've killed him. But instead, Arki ran in and grabbed one of the replacement doors that were there or when Stormblaze broke her's. She held in up and blocked the blow. The door splintered and Arki had time to grab Lars and get him out of the fight.
Jett:
He trew the Idiot who went infront of him landed him on the floor and fought. He grabbed RIptides leg and twisted it causing her to scream.
Sage,
"Be carufull!" She called, as she tried to get her mount Arashi out of the fight.
( Lars is very dumb with horses, just so you all know, so he’s guaranteed not to handle a pegasus all that well )
Lars Windshifter:
In response, his hand came hard down on Frei’s nose in the force of a whip, so big was his hand. His anger spoke wonders as Frei wrinkled her nose and dropped him hard. He recovered quickly, stood back up, and stood in front of Jett, protecting the tame khilara.
Frei\Stormblaze:
She grabbed Lars' shirt in her teeth and gently set him aside. She joined the fight delivering fatal blows to anyone that got in her way.
Sage,
Sage stood there horrified, she really wanted to get in between them, but she did not want to get hurt
Lars Windshifter:
Being not used to horses, he dashed into the middle of the fighting, right between Frei, Alkomaru, and Jett. “Stop this!” He bellowed. “If you kill each other, I swear to the Realm I’ll kill you all myself!” He cursed. For once, he’d lost all of his politeness.
Arashu/Stormwind
Though, she had been kicked, she fought through the pain and whirled to face Jett, "YOU DARE THINK THAT WOULD WEAKEN ME!" She brayed,
Sage,
"Oh no," she wispered,
Arashi,
Arashi gently bit Jetts side, and spat out the fur, "That was a warning!" Arashi neighed
Lars Windshifter:
He had been winded when a wing bone slammed into his stomach with the sudden motion. “Oof!” He exclaimed as he stumbled backward, his composure flattering as he darted forward again, unable to breath, to contain Alkomaru and get everyone to safety.
(oof im way too dramatic)
Thunderglade:
The second he saw Jett try and kick Stormblaze he broke.
It didn't matter some of his feathers were ripped.
It didn't matter Riptide had just burst in, or Firgo for that matter.
It didn't even matter that Stormwind had blocked the strike.
All that mattered was Stormblaze could have been hurt.
With a scream that sounded like a roar, Thunderglade galloped into Jett, ramming the stallion to the ground and delivering strike after strike with his teeth and harsh sharpened hooves.
He whirled and slammed Suko with his back hooves and coaxed Riptide to help.
"FIGHT!" He brayed like an over stallion.
Asha:
This was a new worst.
Her brother was fighting.
And she didn't know who to help.
Riptide:
She wanted to please Sage but Jett needed to be taught a leson
( That’s why Lars was talking to Alkomaru and Frei, Nightsong )
"Good girl Arashi," Sage softly said as she saw Alko back down.
Riptide:
SHe darted inside the barn and tried to help Thungerglade "LET ME FIGHT!" She roared
Thunderglade:
He faltered, feeling guilty at Stormwind's words. He folded his wings, torn.
Firgo:
He ran with the stablehand to the barn. He flew through the doors where he saw Sage, Arki, and the new stablehand Lars.
In the middle of the hall:
Alko and Frei, fighting with Suko and Jett.
Lars Windshifter:
Lars voice rang out in a high pitched hiss as Frei struck Jett on the nose. He saw and heard Alkomaru’s bray and said in a low toned voice, “I will not advance on you, Alkomaru, but I cannot allow you two to commit an act of violence towards Jett here. It would mean your owners would either have to take you away from this stable, or put you down. Your choice.” Lars wondered if they did want to be taken from this stables.
Suko:
"GET BACK!" He screamed and torn out some of Alko's feathers
Jett fought and Tried to kickFrie but Arashi blocked him
Sage,
"Arashi! Can you help me?" Sage called.
Stormwind/Arashi
Stormwind imeaditly trotted to stand between the 2 escaped horses and Jett, Arashi reared, "No matter what other pegasi think it does not give us the right to attack!" ARASHI brayed
Thunderglade:
He saw Lars out of the corner of his eye but ignored the anxious stablehand. "Lars, get back," he warned, but to Lars it was a half-nicker, half-bray. He saw Sage approach him and whinny. "Get back." She couldn't understand him, but he was close to breaking point. Something was about to happen.
He saw Stormblaze strike Jett lightly on the nose.
Thunderglade advanced on Suko, striking the stallion on the shoulder as a warning, making a scratch but not doing damage either. "Do not try it."
Firgo:
Called home on family business? Great. Not more bad news. Not when his life was finally getting better.
He found his sister in front of their door, looking just as anxious as he.
Firgo opened his mouth to say something, but never got the chance.
"Firgo!"
Firgo turned to face a stablehand he vaguely remember mucking out stalls with.
"Firgo. Your mount. Alkomaru. He's about to fight two more Kihlari... with Frei, Arki's mare."
Firgo felt the colour drain from his olive face.
"Has Arki been informed?" He asked instead.
The stablehand nodded.
Firgo turned to Mordré. "Tell our parents I have to do something about this," he said. She nodded, and Firgo turned back to the stablehand.
"Take me to them. Quickly. Please."
Jett fflared his wings and darted out of his stall and readiyed for fighting. He brayed at Lars and Sage telling them to back up and stay safe. "I dont want to fight but I will if you force me too!"
Frei\Stormblaze:
She struck Jett softly on the nose making a scratch but doing no damage. This was meant as a warning. She was sure the landwalkers would try and stop her, but she was ready to fight. "TEST ME ONE MORE TIME I SWEAR!!!!!!" she neighed so loud that the birds outside the barn scattered in fright.
Sage,
Sage glanced at the Headwind, "looks like these two escaped" Sage said calmly, she slowly approached Alko,
"Easy boy" Sage said
Lars Windshifter:
Alarm struck him and he dropped the wheelbarrow, dumping all its contents onto the stone floor. He quickly, yet very slowly approached the two pegasi that had broken their stall doors. He clucked, speaking in a language of clicks and whistles. He knew they couldn’t understand him and wouldn’t listen to him, so he just stood there, continuing to cluck and whistle in a secret language.
Two pegasi had escaped and were now advancing on a stallion. “Ma’am, approach at your own risk!” He said calmly to Sage as he grew closer, posture straight, to Alkomaru.
Arki:
She came out o the clan's nurse office and was walking towards the barn when Sage landed and ran in. "Oh no! Frei! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!" She said running into the stable. The headwind burst into the barn and saw to steeds ready to attack Jett. "SAGE WHAT'S GOING ON???"
Thunderglade:
Yet he still readied himself for attack, hoping his friend would listen.
"We will NEVER be tame," he brayed.
"Just because you are doesn't mean WE have to be."
He flared his wings and lowered his haunches in case one of them went to ram him.
( Oof than never mind, yes the wheel barrow was spilled all over the floor and my comment in which Lars uses the term ma’am did not happen xD I’ll post my comment again here, and then we can go from there )
Thunderglade:
He lashed his tail, anger igniting him.
"Stormblaze," he warned, then whispered, "wait for them to attack first."
Jett:
"I live in this stall I LOVE this life and I will fight you for it Suko will help me! WE ARE TAME AND YOU SHOULD BE!" He readyed himself to fight and Suko did the same
Asha:
She was confused.
Two Kihlari (one of which is my bRoThEr) broke their stalls to berate Jett and are about to kill him and nothing's wrong?
sEeMs LeGiT
( Sunblaze, ignore the comment in which two pegasi are out of their stables, those two pegasi left a few hours ago )
( XDD)
Lars Windshifter:
He looked up from his work as a girl entered the stables in alarm. “Nothing is wrong, ma’am. Did you need something of me?” He asked politely, his heels together, arms behind his back, and posture perfect.
(haHA I MADE THE TENTH PAGE)
Thunderglade:
He knew if Jett or anyone else angered him they would surpass his breaking point. He was dangerously close to teetering over all by himself.
Deep down though he knew Jett didn't REALLY deserve to be fought. He was just voicing his opinion.
But still.
Jett was provoking them.
Then Sage entered the stables and Thunderglade knew something bad was going to happen.
Arashi,
Arashi soared through the sky, rising up, but suddenly stopped swiveling her ears there was a commotion coming from the stables, she imeaditly dived back toward the stables.
Sage,
"Woah what i-" Sage stopped speaking when she heard the commotion, Sage slid off once Arashi hit the ground and ran inside the stables,
"What happend?!" Sage asked when she walked in
(oof, if you were re ferrying to Mahoganysand and Specklepond, than ignore my previous comment in which the wheelbarrow is spilled onto the floor xD )
Thunderglade:
He narrowed his eyes at Jett, holding his neck and head low. He pinned his ears and bared his teeth.
"Star won against the Destroyer. We don't serve him, he is equal to us. He doesn't WANT us to serve him, and we don't. We don't serve the Ancestors either. We have free will."
His voice was low, words away from striking Jett. He knew Stormblaze was as well. It didn't matter if he or she struck first, because he knew both he and she would fight with him.
(Well by Sage!)
Frei\Stormblaze:
She had a very short temper, and Jett just passed it. "YAH? YOU WANNA SWITCH. LEMME SEE HOW LONG YOU SURVIVE IN THIS BOX!!!!" She screamed while rearing and baring her teeth. She was words away from striking Jett. And if she wasn't stopped. She just might do it.
( Wait, are you referring to Mahoganysand and Specklepond who left in the middle of the night, Echomoon? )
Sage,
Sage walked over to Arashi's stall, when she reared, "shhhhh girl its okay," Sage whispered.
Sage walked into her stall left the door open, and hopped on, "okay girl, you ready to ride like the wind?" Sage asked.
Arashi nodded her head in agreement Galopping full speed past the new stablehand,
"WHOOOOHOOO!" Sage shouted.
Jett:
"What would I be called. I would be killed out there I am Tame and I love it. FREE! THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS FREE> YOU CAN SAY FREE IS BEING ALONE BUT YOU ALWAYS SERVE SOMEONE. THE ANSESTORS FOR NIGHTWING OR LANDWALKERS OR STAR ALWAYS SOMEONE!" HE screamed at Alko
Lars Windshifter:
Alarm struck him and he dropped the wheelbarrow, dumping all its contents onto the stone floor. He quickly, yet very slowly approached the two pegasi that had broken their stall doors. He clucked, speaking in a language of clicks and whistles. He knew they couldn’t understand him and wouldn’t listen to him, so he just stood there, continuing to cluck and whistle in a secret language.
Asha:
She shrank down, folding her wings around herself. "Oh no," she whispered, startled.
Who would she fight with?
Her brother? Jett, who shared her thought?
Or did she stay on the sidelines, helplessly watching mayhem break out?
Thunderglade:
He brayed loud enough to have been a roar. "You are NOT better than us!" He brayed, loud and clear. "THE LANDWALKERS NEVER HAD THE RIGHT TO CAPTIVATE US! WE WANTED TO BE FREE!"
Mordré:
She and Firgo had both been called away on family business, which made Mordré anxious, for obvious reasons.
Are we being called away? What now?
Thunderglade:
He nodded at Stormwind, but never took his eyes off Jett. "Imagine being able to do what you want. Grazing when you want. Flying when you want. Finding new friends and new pegasi who love and relate to you. Imagine making your OWN DECISIONS and exploring wherever you please, with no Landwalkers or Patrols monitoring where we go and running after us when we try to think for ourselves!" Thunderglade brayed, rearing and flaring his wings like an over-stallion.
Asha:
She saw Lars approaching and sniffed him. A new friend? Someone who would settle her brother and his friends? She hoped so.
She would be lying, though, if she said she hadn't taken Alko's words into thought. A place where she could do what she wanted would've been amazing.
Jett:
"Ha! So I can starve? So I can be cold and hungry and never loved? NO I AM BETTER THAN YOU! YOu want to break their hearts so you can be 'free' ANd I am sick of it!" He brayed
( Wiat, THEY BROKE THE DOORS?!?!? Hold on a minute.... )
Lars Windshifter:
Lars head slowly looked up as he heard a murmur rippling through the pegasi. Are they talking? I wonder what they are saying.... Lars wondered what they were saying, and if they were arguing or debating. He looked at the stallion by the name of Alkomaru, was silent, and they returned to mucking out his stall.
Lars quickly finished up with his stall, gently placed the pitchfork back into the wheelbarrow, and brought it out of the stall to the next, next to a mare’s stall by the name of Asha.
Stormwind
Stormwind did a small rear wings spread and rattling,
"I'm tired of all of you tame pegasi, thinking this life is better! Imagine being free flying whenever you want!" She brayed
Asha:
She had seen enough.
"Alko, please," she pleaded. "Frei, let him be!"
Her pleads did nothing, though for a second she could've swore she'd seen Alko shoot her an apologetic look.
Thunderglade:
He wondered if Jett was going to be a new enemy.
That reminded him of Oluja and Mahoganysand, who had been silent since yesterday.
Ancestors, forgive me for upsetting both of them. They didn't deserve that.
He sniffed the new stablehand (who he had overheard as "Lars") when he approached his stall.
He glanced over at Stormblaze, eating her alfalfa cube and sipping her water.
He nibbled at the grass Sage and Mordré had gotten for him. Firgo had been called away a few minutes after visiting on family business, leaving Thunderglade to his friends.
He stomped a hoof. He wanted Riptide back so they could plan about escape.
Thunderglade gave a sideways glance at Jett, who was holding his head high and wings taut, as if he was above them all.
Thunderglade snorted and scraped the ground with his harsh hoof.
"Stormblaze is right. I'm sick of you tame pegasi looking down at us because we're wild!" He too reared and thundered his hooves down, splintering apart his stall door so he could face Jett beside his friend.
(We've wasted like 2 pages because of me XDDDDD)
Frei\Stormblaze:
"Because this place sucks!" She said addressing Jett's question and breaking her door so she could face Jett. "You get to parade in your little costume all day while we are stuck here in these stupid boxes!!!!"
(I bow before thy royal chicn nuggetness)
( 0-o )
(I TIS LE ONE AND ONLY CHIMKEN GOD!!!! YOU THREATEN MY CHIMKEN KINGDOM, YOU ANSWER TO ME. PUNISHMENT FOR CHALLENGING IS ALL CHIMKEN NUGGETS VANISHING OFF THE FACE OF THE EARTH. ARE YOU WILLING TO RISK YOU PRECIOUS CHIMKEN NUGGIES??????????????????????????? REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!)
(xGaspsx. HOW DARE YOU STILL MEH CHICKNZ NUGGETZ!)
( Oh my macaroni...... )
(HOW DARE YOU! THREATEN MY CHIKN NUGGETS!)
Thunderglade:
He snorted in Jett's direction. "How you love this life I shall never understand," he said, "but that's your opinion. In our opinion, it's stupid to stay."
(U KNOW WHO THE REAL CHICKEN OVERLORD IS?? STARLEAF, SHE STARTED THIS)
(BOW BEFORE ME FALSE CHICKUM QUEEN! I WILL CONCER YOU!! ALL OF YOU!!
"Oh" Sage said seeing the new stable hand by the brushes, "it's okay girl, it's just a new stablehand," Sage said stroking Valkyrie's face.
(I DARE CHALANGE YOU OH GREAT AND POWERFULL CIKEN QUEEN!)
(No one gets that Lars must be destroyed. I mean loved Right..... Thats what I meant.... Right. Insert evil laugh)
( -cowers- Oh, no! MIstress Chicken Queen! Please have mercy on thy rump! )
Lars Windshifter:
He listened to the Headwind as he gave out instructions for mucking out all of the horse stalls. Lars nodded once, not saying a word, as he went to empty stalls, tidying them up with excellent precision. It was as if he was made to do this, but a reason could be because he had worked so in the fields. He was one to never give up.
As he came to the stall next to a beautiful stallion with a name plate of ‘Alkomaru,’ he started to feign fatigue. He shook it off quickly and continued his work, his calluses breaking open once again as he moved the pitch fork back and forth.
(I IS QUEEN OF TE CHICKUM!!!! YOU DARE FIGHT ME?!!!!)
(No Jett is ready)
Riptide:
"Someone came in and I need you to see them!" She squealed at Sage trying to get her to understand
(I TIS THE CHICKEN QUEEN! COWER BEFORE ME YOU PEGASI OF ANOK! MWAHAHAHAHA!)
Sage,
"What is it girl?" Sage kindly asked, glancing around to see what was causing it.
Riptide:
She saw the new land walker and started to kick her door and fight to get out.
Jett:
"Why do you want to go wild?! I love it here and I think it is dumb to leave!" He said lofftily
Asha:
She had been silent most of the time, but she was seeing something remarkable. Alko wasn't attacking Firgo and Firgo was being nice to Alko.
"Alko! It's really nice to see you bonding with Firgo!" She nickered, shaking her head and throwing her long white mane in an arc above her head.
Thunderglade:
He took a deep breath and decided this was the right time to tell his sister of his plan.
"Asha," he started, ignoring Stormblaze's snide remark but shooting her a side grin all the same, "I'm thinking - no, planning," he corrected himself, "of leaving and flying across the Dark Water to Anok. Once Riptide's wings and legs heal, of course. I'm going with Riptide - Valkyrie; Stormwind - Lightning; Stormblaze - Frei; and Firestorm. I'm going back to our home. Do you want to come with us?
Asha:
She stool still. The question "wanna leave everything behind and journey across days of water, unknown whether there's actually land at the end?" came spiralling out of the blue, slamming into her with surprising force. She shook her head, throwing her long white mane in an arc.
"I -" she choked out.
"I need time."
She couldn't leave, could she?
But her brother... and she did long to be free...
She saw Alko nod understandably and turn towards the newcomer, who she heard the Headwind talking as "Lars".
Thunderglade:
"And one more thing," he whispered to his sister from his stall opposite her, "I couldn't remember my wild name, so with the help of my friends, I made one myself. You can still call me Alko, but my new name is Thunderglade."
( XDDDDd Goof job in making me smile, Nightsong XDD I haven’t done a lot of that today, now that I think about it... )
(Wait...what's happening right now? I'm confuzzled)
(THE CHICKENS ESCAPED WE NEED TO SAVE THEM BEFORE ANOCK! NOW LETS GO HERD!!!!! Riptide to Alko)
Lars Windshifter:
Lars was very upset.
Very, very upset.
His father and mother had talked with him two nights before about how they thought he worked too much and he was too anti-social. So what if he was anti-social? That didn’t mean they had to take him away from the barn to be a stablehand at a Kihlari barn!
Lars’ sister, on the other hand, couldn’t contain her excitement for him. Amaris had been jealous from the moment their parents had discussed it at the dinner table.
Now, as he shifted uncomfortable in his leather clothes and was on their front porch, she was jumping up and down. He embraced his mother and father, and messed up his sister’s hair with a small smile. As he stood to his full height, he towered over them all and stepped off the porch step.
“Be careful!” Cried his mother.
“Follow all the directions and good luck, my son!” Called his father.
”Bring me with you!” Shouted his sister as she came bounding up to him to hug around his waist from behind. He stumbled, groaned, and gently pulled her off of him. He sat her back down on the porch, pointed at her like a dog and muttered, “Stay.” Then he set off, his long strides expanding as he waved goodbye to his family.
The trip wasn’t long, and he soon tiptoed into the barn, cringing at his long feet and loud footsteps. He glanced at the Kihlari, ignored them, and headed straight for the tack room to set his brushes, cleaners, and oils down.
( LOL )
( I’m not sure where to have my characters come in.... Hmm...... )
Frie\Stormblaze
She caught the alfalfa cube in her mouth and munched on it happily.
"You know. I'm kinda disappointed you didn't bite his head off" she joked finishing her cube and starting on the apple.
(OH NO I WOULD’VE LEFT THE WEBSITE IF I HAD BEEN YOU STARLEAF xd )
( Omg that sucks Echo I’m so sorry, I once did that and I raged for half an hour xD Bai Nightsong )
(Gtg be on later)
(imma rewrite it but it's not gonna be as detailed adjewndijwnk)
(AAAAAAAAAAA im in peril)
(oNE OF MY FRIENDS DELETED THE TAB SO THE LONG THING I WSA GONNA WRITE IS GONNENNE)
( Question: What time is it in the RP at the moment? I haven’t been keeping up lol )
(lololol so he does end up leaving too?)
(Suko is jerk. He goes with you to be a brackentail)