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Lars Windshifter:
He saw stars as Frei’s kick made contact, just grazing the back of his head. It would’ve completely damaged his spinal chord if he hadn’t of moved slightly in the nick of time. Even still, he couldn’t move, the whip had been ripped from his hand, and the last thing he thought of was Amaris.
She would’ve called this perfect story material.
Sage,
Sage shivered in the cold of the night ad she walked toward the stables, as she reached the stables she saw a stablehand taking a untamed Kilhari away but thought nothing of it.
She walked up to the two people guarding the entrance "may I go in?" Sage asked.
(next comment ill make another part)
Thunderglade:
He glanced at Calor from his stall, and saw the Kihlari's searching eyes on Stormblaze.
A hot rush of jealousy flared inside Thunderglade, though he wasn't really sure why.
He tried to calm down. He crunched his oats and swivelled his ear, thinking.
They've been friends for so long. I've made her drift away from him, he realised, horrified. Oh Calor. I'm so sorry.
He caught Stormblaze looking at him and smiled at her, hoping it would push away the guilt.
Nope. The guilt was still there.
But I don't want to be a friend-stealer. I need to make it up to Calor some how.
But... what's the price I'll have to pay?
Mordré:
She was still in shock. Oh. Fray.
FRAY.
She shuffled on her feet, feeling confused and awkward.
A little while later, maybe ten minutes, a stablehand requested exit. Fray and Mordré open the doors to reveal a male stablehand walking the unnamed Kihlari out from her stall. The Kihlari was strange peach pink in colour with brilliant pink wings and white markings. She was stressing.
Mordré attempted to soothe the kihlari, but to no avail.
As they closed the door behind the stablehand, Mordré asked him, "where are you taking her?"
Frei\Stormblaze:
She snorted and walked back into her stall. She lowered her head annoyed.
"Wats wong wif mister gwumpy hoovs. (whats wrong with mister grumpy hooves)" asked Calor playfully.
"Them. They keep doubting themselves and causing drama. there will be plenty of us to help each other. Plenty of us to find our way. Why can't they have a little hope in their lives!!" she whinnied.
Calor looked off and was caught deep in thought. He would miss Frei. Even if she always made trouble. They had been great friends when they first met as foals. She started developing urges to be free and became the stable rascal. Once she met the stallion now known as Thunderglade, they instantly became great friends. Probably because he shared her urge to be free. Calor and Frei loosened their bond as friends, but he didn't mind. He wasn't mad or anything. But he would still miss teasing her thats for sure. He caught her staring at her hansom friend Thunderglade. He chuckled and went back to eating his oats. But he could never leave Sonne. They were inseparable.
(should I make a part 4?)
Stormwind/Arashi
Stormwind nodded at Thunderglade, "I agree with Thunderglad, we can keep better count of all of us if we travel together," Stormwind
Thunderglade:
He snorted from his stall. He had enough of this drama. "No! We stick to the original plan: we leave at the camp and sneak off. Riptide will guide us across the Dark Water. ALL of us."
He knew he was sounding bossy, but he didn't care. He was sick of everyone fighting and getting upset.
(alright)
(Ok guys. I think we need to refocus a few things. I'm not picking on anyone in particular, I am guilty of it too
1. We can't just walk out of the barn. Our OC's are currently in their stalls. Plus if Kihlari could just walk out, there would be no reason for escape. There are a lot of stable hands and they will get the pegasi back to their stalls. That also goes with walking out of our stalls. As cool as it is, pegasi cant just walk out of their stalls.😥😥
2. We need to get our riders and tame pegasi in the action too. Not just the wild ones.
Again I am not picking on anyone in particular, I am guilty of this too.))
(XD my autocorrect almost changed my misspelled asked to akumatized)
Riptide,
Riptide wiped her tears with her wings and looked up at Ashlake, "really? I Ccan really lead you guys on the first expedition? " she asked,
'Finally they realise how important I am to them' she thought bitterly.
Later that Night. A Sandween walked into the barn and grabbed Everhope and took her to the castle.
Everhope:
" Help! I dont wanna be taken to guank because im a dud. Please I want to be free!"
FireStorm
”Hey, RipTide! We all like you. You know the way to star’s herd. Please don’t leave us,”
Ashlake:
She was confused. What was going on now? Why was Riptide crying?
"Riptide, of course we can let you guide us, if you really want," she whispered to the mare, cautiously trotting up to her. "I'm sorry if we hurt you. I'm here now," she extended a wing to the crying mare, heart beating sympathy and sadness.
Riptide,
Riptide was crying and looking up at the sky, 'How dare they not let me guide them! I was the one who was going to guide them!' She thought,
Duskfire,
Duskfire and Stormwind were trotting back inside, and took a spot on the other side of the barn to help discuss the travel plans.
Coldfeather,
Coldfeather looked over to Duskfire and Stormwind, "Will both of you help with scouting out the land and finding Star and the others when we reach the land?" Coldfeather asked,
"Yes we will," they both said simultaneously.
(I'm sorry, hope things get better soon)
(I have bad news! I am not going to be on for a long time! I got in trouble in school so I cant be on for some time. If my Oc's are needed, Echomoon, RB, or Sunblaze. You can use them but please keep them like I would. Coldfeather, is calm and tough. Riptide has problems and is upset when people want to take controle)
Thunderglade:
He snorted. "She got upset. Jealous, I think. I thought... –" he glanced at his sister, who shrugged her wings helplessly, pain on her face.
He turned to the others, sort of annoyed. "So the plan's changed, again. When are we leaving?"
Everhope:
" What about me? I Cant fly so how am i going to escape with you all? My wings are uneven."
Duskfire,
Duskfire nickered quietly to Stormwind, "I want to talk to you," he said pointing his wing to the secret exit, he walked to outside with Stormwind following him.
Once they were out if earshot of the others Duskfire turned to face Stormwind, "this is going to be a long and tough journey" he said pawing the ground stirring the soft ground underneath.
"I know," she whispered, she looked up at him, her eyes glittering in the starry night sky.
He nuzzled her softly, "we will be able to do this, you just have to believe in yourself " he said. "Let's go back, they're probably wondering where we are." He started heading back.
"Wait!" Stormwind called, Duskfire turned back to face her. "Can we please stay out here and enjoy the peace and quiet for a while?" She asked.
He smiled and trotted back to her, "of course" he sat down next to her and wrapped his wing around her to keep her warm.
( Sure thats fine. Plus can Everhope be a dud)
(Is it alright if strongwind is a captain named Duskfire?)
Everhope:
"He just wants everyone to get out safely I wish i could go with him but i can't. My wings are weak and i cant fly for very long and he knows it. He will be back with my brother and friends."
Riptide: She darted out of the stable and into the night sky.
Coldfeather: Turning on Thunderglade he asked in an icy calm voice. "What. Happened. To. Riptide!" He enunciated each word clearly. He was angry she was hurt
Everhope trotted away from the group and talked to Rivertail.
Everhope:
" can you find Hazelfrost by yourself? No one wants to go with you. I can if you would like."
Rivertail:
" Thank you Everhope but i must do this alone so......"
Everhope:
" No. Im going with you and that is final. "
Rivertail:
" But your flying..."
Everhope:
" Ill be fine ill just go back to the stables when i feel like i cant make it.ok."
Rivertail:
" Ok. bye. Ill leave now and if i can find them I will bring them here." He nuzzles Everhope and they put there foreheads together and Rivertail takes off.
(Okay
(Btw I am changing Strongwinds name it's to close to Stormwind, so I'll tell you his new name when I come up with one)
Strongwind shuffled his hooves and glanced around anxiously, "Stormwind and I could always help with the scouting" he
Thunderglade:
He was about to volunteer himself when Riptide's outburst interrupted him, making him second-guess himself. Rivertail's new. They didn't know if they could trust him just yet.
But he's Everhope's best friend. She trusts him.
He decided to stay back, wondering where the argument will lead.
Firgo:
He and the other stablehands had given up trying to chase Stormblaze back to her stall and had retired for the night. However, four stablehands were posted as guards outside the doors to alert the Headwinds if any of the kihlari tried to flee. Two of the guards selected were himself and Mordré.
I'm so glad Alko likes me now, Firgo thought as he paced the length of the stable's doors, careful to not intrude in the other stablehand's personal space (he must've been new, as Firgo didn't recognise him).
I can't believe I was such an idiot to him... but everything's fine now. I wonder how Mordré and Asharnai are doing.
Mordré:
She paced anxiously outside the stable's doors, repressing a yawn and trying to keep her eyes open. She glanced at the other stablehand that had been assigned to guard duty, who was glancing around boredly. Mordré had a brief memory of seeing her while training, and, being ever the optimist, decided to introduce herself.
"Hello. I'm Mordré, rider of Asharnai. It's nice to meet you," she started, holding out a hand to the stablehand.
The girl stared at Mordré as if expecting a bow at minimum. "I'm Fray," the girl said, ignoring the hand. "Rider of Varlo."
Mordré shivered as she realised who exactly she was talking to. One of the most important stablehands in the Clan.
The Crown Princess's sister.
(I'll post both Fray and Varlo in the original post after this)
Riptide:
"I am leading this!" She snapped. "I will Not take orders from you! I am the Guide and I am going to help you...... Not the other way around!" She brayed cruley
Rivertail:
" We will be fine. Now who would fly with me to search for Hazelfrost and his friends?"
Everhope:
" Ill be fine but i guess your right. I was born a dud with really short wings. Just like shadepebbles short wing.But are you and your group going to be safe?"
Rivertail:
" I think its best for you to go in the second group because you aren't a strong flyer and if pegasi comes with me in the first group then they would have to do some scouting. That would take us a night. Everhopes wings will give out when she is flying. Her wings will get still and give up so the second group would have to watch her and take lots of breaks. I need a pegasi that would help her travel and have watch on her in case she falls."
Rivertail:
" I will fly out with a couple tonight to gather Hazelfrost and his group. The rest will go tommorow night with Strongwind becasue to keep you all safe, we need to get you in small groups."
Everhope:
" I can volunteer to go in the second group to help keep things in order. If that is fine with everyone else."
Rivertail:
Your welcome and yes. We will find your brother and his friends."
( Heres a picture of Rivertail, Hazelfrost and Everhope
So you know what Rivertail and Hazelfrost looks like)
Stormwind shook her forelock out of her eyes, "thank you Rivertail," she said.
Everhope:
" But first can we find my brother and his friends first. I can't loose them again."
Riptide:
"We leave tomorrow! I can have the healers of Anok take care of my leg!" She was thrilled to be coming home!
RIvertail:
" Alright." He trots over to talk with her
Soon they come back inside and Everhope is feeling much better and calm.
Thunderglade:
Too many things were happening at once. "Everhope?" He asked, concerned for his friend. He gave Rivertail a look that told him "comfort your mare".
"What's the plan now?" He asked Riptide and Coldfeather as he sidled beside Stormblaze once again, hoping she didn't mind at the close contact.
(You guys should join the story Rebel. It would be more fun to have a lot of characters in the story)
Coldfeather:
The stallion landed his wings full of burrs. "Riptide! YOU ARE ALIVE!" He yelled and ran to embrace her. She held out her wings hand embraced him back.
Riptide:
She loved the warmth of him and the smell of his feathers. "Coldfeather! How I missed you!" She sobbed, letting her tears soak his feathers.
(
Coldfeather)
Strongwind,
Strongwind nodded, "sounds about right from my last count " he said.
Rivertail:
" When does anyone want to come?"
Everhope:
" Is my brother ok and my parents?"
Rivertail:
" Your brother is fine but your parents wernt so lucky. Im sorry."
Everhope:
" No. No! No! No!
She shoves Rivertail out of the way and runs outside
Everhope:
" About 120 pegasi are waiting for us."
Everhope:
" What do you all think. They can carry the injured so we can all escape ."
Thunderglade:
His ears pricked up and swivelled towards the noise of the cream stallion. He sighed and shook his head.
"At least I'll have some stallion friends now!" He nickered a greeting to the third newcomer. That had to be a new record, surely; three new pegasi in the span of 5 minutes. Thunderglade wondered how many wild pegasi were left on Landwalker territory.
Rivertail:
" What happened?" He wrapped his wing over Everhope and tells the other pegasi about their new awaiting herd.
Strongwind nodded and put a wing over Stormwind, "yes and what my friend fails to imply is that I like her,"
Stormwind sighed "he's liked me also since we were foals, and Hope's to one day date me," she sighed and glanced at Strongwind who was smiling at the others
Riptide:
She heard a loud "OWW!!" And a sharp thunk. "What the heck!?" She shouted. Then out of no where a beautiful cream paint stallion darted into view.
Ashlake:
She soothed Riptide, letting the mare cry into her wings. Ashlake felt like crying herself, seeing Riptide in such a state. She didn't come away from Riptide even when the two newcomers entered the stables.
Thunderglade:
He turned at the sound of Everhope's voice as she walked in with another unfamiliar steed. As she introduced him as Rivertail, Thunderglade once again smiled at the newcomer.
"Come over so we can all get acquainted," he beckoned the two over with his wing.
Everhope walked back into the barn with Rivertail
Everhope:
" This is my old best friend. His name is Rivertail and he said the herd that we traveled with here is still free! They are waiting for us to escape so we can go back to Anok together."
Thunderglade:
He smiled at the newcomer, Strongwind. "Nice to meet you, fellow stallion," Thunderglade extended a wing to Strongwind. "I'm Thunderglade. This might've been the wrong time to decide to settle though, since we'll be leaving in about three moons' time."
Stormwind
Stormwind sighed "this is Strongwind, we've know each other and were best friends since we were foals" Stormwind said looking at Riptide
Fost:
He entered the stable and grabbed Jett and Suko. And took them away.
(So I can make Riptide have a love)
Everhope:
" Guys guess what!!!"
Riptide:
"Stormwind! Who is this?!" She asked about the disrespectful stallion next to Stormwind
Everhope walks outside and Enjoys the view and starts to cry. "I-I just miss him" she whispered. Know one knows what really happened to her and the herd. Suddenly she sees a shadow walking towards her. She reconized the voice and she ran into his wings.
Strongwind,
"Easy there," he said looking at the young mare, he glanced at Stormwind.
"Please! I want to make sure you stay safe!" He pleaded,
"Fine! How come you always win me over! Since we were foals Strongwind you've always convinced me. There's a empty stall over there across from mine," she said pointing with her wing.
Everhope gets sad and walks away from her friends and glares at the night sky.
Everhope:
" Sorry i have to go. I need some space. Ill be outside if you need me."
Riptide:
She glared at this intruder. "You leave my friend alone!" She said packing a lot of menace
"I am not leaving! Knowing you could get hurt!" Strongwind said.
Stormwind snorted, "I'll have you know that my rider is really kind and generous!"
"Then it's settled! I am staying here." Strongwind
When Everhope saw Thunderglade and Stormblaze next to each other and remembered her family. Her older brother Hazelfrost and best friend Rivertail, a cute Stallion who cares about Everhope. She starts getting tears in her eyes. Everhope got separated from them when she got captured and forgot him.
Riptide:
She sighed. More pegasi captured. How could she get them all to Anok. She or they would die. It was ill fated
Strongwind,
Strongwind was hiding in the trees looking at the barn, watching the Landwalkers going in and out of it, he stomped the tree angrily, 'how dare they capture Stormwind and then her younger sister Oceanblaze,' he thought angrily. And then he remembered that one secret entrance that one landwalker used to set Stormwind free from time to time.
He flew down to the barn and trotted around it. There, he found the latch and carefully unlocked it. He walked inside.
Arashi/Stormwind
Stormwind swiveled her ears at the sound, she turned to see who was coming in, she stood there awestruck.
"Stormwind? What are you doing here? Your going to get captured! Go!" She said
Riptide:
"N no! I just..... I!" She sobbed. She leaned into Ashlake's embrace. She cried for a while. Hoping he would not notice much
Thunderglade:
Oh no.
"Riptide, I'm sorry if I did anything to hurt you. Is there anything I can do to help?" He asked cautiously.
Ashlake: She did her best to comfort the stressed mare. "We're here, Riptide," she whispered. "We're all here for you. We care for you. Promise."
(Yes Sunblaze) (Echo, she is jelous)
Riptide:
"I dont want to play Thunderglade!" She said sharply. Tears ran down her face, "No I am not ok! I never Will be!" She shouted.
Stormwind/Arashi,
Stormwind also unlocked her stall and trotted over to the others "hey Riptide you aright?" Stormwind asked,
(Also Nightsong, is it aright if I make one more pegasi OC?)
Ashlake:
She unlocked her stall and trotted over to Riptide. She gently nudged the mare with her wing. "Hey," she asked, "you okay?"
Thunderglade:
He saw Riptide tense up and stepped away from Stormblaze. "Riptide, do you want to go first?" He asked quietly, sensing something bad was happening.
Riptide:
She saw Thunderglade and Stormblaze together. Her heart bled. She ignored them and thought. "They really dont care about me! Nightwing was right! Pegasi only care about themselves! I will not be friends with any of them. I dont think that I should take them to Anok! they just mean! Star would take me not them or them not me!"
Thunderglade:
He felt Stormblaze flinch and tried not to look to see if she was uncomfortable. He wondered if he should've stayed in the stall, but no one was telling him to go back, so he stayed.
"Who wants to go first?" He offered.
Frei\Stormblaze:
Thunderglade trotted over to the group. She smiled. For some reason everything was better with him. When he stood next to her their shoulders touched. She flinched but didn't move away. She smiled slightly but didn't show it. She shook her long mane and continued the game, comforted by the stallion's touch.
Everhope:
" I don't want to think about that and prey to be free one day."
Everhope:
" Of coarse anyone can join. I just want to be distracted so i dont have to think about the landwalkers."
(Is he talking to FireStorm and EverHope?)
Thunderglade:
He saw Stormblaze thanking the two and felt sad, though he didn't know why. He saw her laughing and joking and decided to join.
He unlocked his door and trotted beside them. "Mind if I play too?" He asked, making a point to stand beside Stormblaze.
(😀 sunblaze, could you come onto thunderFeather rp? we are deciding about making a necromancer villain. Maybe read the last 2 pages of part 1)
Arashi/Stormwind
Stormwind shook her head and sighed, 'those two mares are going to cause alot of trouble in three moons' she thought.
Lightning/Oceanblaze
Lightning snorted at the two young mares.
Everhope
" I dare you to run around the stable and say your crazy."
FireStorm
”Dare”
Everhope:
" Alright. Truth or dare."
FireStorm
”Nowhere, don’t worry. Why don’t we play that game?”
Everhope:
" Where are they taking us?!"
FireStorm
FireStorm nods. “Okay. Thank you,”
Frei:
She heard the 2 talking. "Guys you can stop kicking now. I heard from Arki that they are bringing the wild pagasi so that they can break them." she said. "And if that doesn't work, kick more with your body and depend less on your legs." she said, kindly giving them a suggestion. She trotted beside them. "Thanks for being my friend. Most Kihlari hate be because I want to be free. But you guys get me." She smiled, content.
FireStorm
”Okay! What game?”
Everhope and FireStorm starts kicking the metal but soon they get tired.
Everhope:
"We should play a game to keep us entertained for a while."
FireStorm
”Okay.” She starts kicking the door gently
Everhope:
" Alright I will start."
(Okay. I was curiou, cause I built the characte. Who Is epic!)
( I can right now if you would like)
(@EverHope, when are you joining the ThunderFeather RP?)
FireStorm
”Well...lets start by weakening the metal. We will kick gently and over time, the metal will strain and weaken. By the time the three m9nths is up, you should be able to easily barge through it and cause you distraction.”
Everhope:
" Yeah your right. What are we going to do now. What about our plan to escape."
FireStorm
”Yes, really. Your family can eat cacti! you are different. Would they feel sympathy for a pegasus with a broken leg? No! They would kill him/her!”
Everhope:
" Thank you for forgiving me. I really appreciate it."
Everhope:
" Really. My family has a long legacy of lying and cheating to pegasi. Sorry i acted the same as them for a little bit."
FireStorm
FireStorm spins around and kicks down the door. “Hey, hey, hey. It’s alright. Don’t cry!” she walks over slowly and puts a wing over everhope. “Don’t worry. You are our frien!”