ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Starleaf
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sandween RP 3 🤕

    in HERD CHAT

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    Lars Windshifter:

    He saw stars as Frei’s kick made contact, just grazing the back of his head. It would’ve completely damaged his spinal chord if he hadn’t of moved slightly in the nick of time. Even still, he couldn’t move, the whip had been ripped from his hand, and the last thing he thought of was Amaris.

    She would’ve called this perfect story material.

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sage,

    "Oh no!" Sage cried as she saw the new stablehand get kicked, she ducked and dodged kicks from the fighting kilhari to check on him once she got there, "are you okay?" Sage asked

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    Starleaf
    Nov 18, 2019

    (Arki blocked the kick. He is out side the fight rn)

    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    @Starleaf (okay)

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    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    Thunderglade:

    He calmed down a bit, trying to gather himself. Where was Stormblaze? Were his friends okay?

    What if he'd started this fight for nothing? Had he gotten his friends hurt?

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    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    (can people answer me pllelaAASEE)

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    Starleaf
    Nov 18, 2019

    (nu.......jk)

    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    @Starleaf (chicken lord, pls grace me wit your answers :D)

    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sage,

    Sage dodged kicks and bites as she tried to get to Arashi,

    "Arashi please try to stop this" Sage begged as she tried to push Arashi away from the fight


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    Starleaf
    Nov 18, 2019

    Frei\Stormblze:

    The fight had ceased and she pranced around, utterly spotless besides for a small cut on her shoulder. She looked like a true battle mare. Breath taking and determined. She stood watching carefully with her icey eyes for anyone who wanted to challenge.

    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    Thunderglade:

    He saw Sage reach for Stormwind (I hope that's her wild name I keep forgetting who's who) and lightly tugged Sage's shirt, forcing her into a stall and locked the door.

    He glanced around, seeing Firgo stationary, but looking thoughtful.

    Thunderglade assessed the stable-turned-arena (stable turned into arena), seeing who to help and who to fight

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    (It Is stormwind)

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sage,

    "Alko," Sage said getting up and unlatching the stall and walked over to safety

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    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    Thunderglade:

    He realised the battle had ceased and decided to assess himself; turned out his only souvenir of this battle was a small cut on his flank. He decided he looked like a captain; strong, determined and brave.

    Thunderglade saw Stormblaze doing the same to herself; looking for battles and whoever wanted to challenge her. He smiled at her, regardless of whether she saw it or not, and unlocked the stall doors that had been locked shut, allowing the Landwalkers to come out.

    He locked eyes with Asha for a second, and a surge of guilt crashed over him like a tidal wave. She looked utterly horrified.

    Instead of walking back to his broken stall in victory, he did it in shame, after asking all of his friends were alright of course.

    He saw Sage follow him to the stall, but ignored her, wishing he could sleep. He was tired, but every time he closed his eyes he saw his sister behind the dark screen of his eyelids, looking at him with shame and horror.

    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sage smiled as the battle ended the kilhari didn't look like they received much damage, she walked over to Arashi's stall and curled up to fall asleep.

    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    Firgo:

    He was glad the fight had ended yet at the same time sad. He hadn't had the chance to do anything. Also bewildered. Why had Alko rushed him to safety? Hmm. Perhaps Mordré was right.

    Mordré!

    That reminded him. He had to get home.

    With a quick stroke on Alko's now sullen muzzle and a slip of six alfalfa cubes, Firgo whispered a "thank you" and dashed out of the stable, making for home.

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    Echomoon
    Nov 18, 2019

    Asha:

    She was relieved the battle was over, but worried at the same time. Were Jett and Suko okay? Jett wasn't going to be flying anytime soon, and Suko had been knocked out by Riptide (with additional damage dealt by both Alko and Frei).

    She sighed, pawing the ground. She wished Mordré would come back.

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    Nightmist(old)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Lars Windshifter:

    The back of his head smarted as he brought himself back to reality. He took in a ragged breath, and felt the back of his head. It felt find, on the outside. On the inside, it felt like the skys had all come crashing down onto his head; the target.

    The stablehand pulled himself up and assessed the damage of the stable, his moond darkening further. He’d have to fix it all by dusk, or there would be serious consequences on his part. First, he picked up the wheelbarrow and performed the tough task of scooping all of the muck off the stone floor and into the wheelbarrow. After dumping it in a pile, he looked back at all the broken doors and gadgets.

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    RainFire
    Nov 18, 2019

    (is the escape happening?)

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    Windfeather
    Nov 18, 2019

    Riptide:

    She was in agony her hoof was permanently damaged she could tell that. She wanted Sage to come help her. Her wings were better so she could fly. She hovered keeping the weight off it. "Thunderglade. You need to go now! Take the herd and you can get safe!" She said. The pain was to strong and she fainted. Her body was very weak and she needed food and rest.


    Jett:

    He stood up bleeding and his wings torn. "YOU will Never get away!" He was limping on 3 hooves and wanted to fight but he could not so he rested

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    EverHope
    Nov 18, 2019

    ( Can i join the story?)

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    Nov 18, 2019

    Sage,

    Sage woke up, she rubbed her eyes and went to Valkyrie's stall, "sorry I forgot about your hoof," Sage said, walking over to her saddlebag glancing at the stablehand, she would help him after she took care of Valkyrie, she grabbed some herbs and started walking back to Valkyrie's stall.

    As she entered the stall she mashed up some of the herbs, "okay girl this might hurt some," she wispered as she gently applied it, she got up and held out the other herbs for Valkyrie to eat, when Valkyrie had finished eating them, she walked over to the new stablehand,

    "Is there anything I can help with?" Sage asked,

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    EverHope
    Nov 18, 2019

    Everhope:

    I want to be free again but i don't know how.

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    EverHope
    Nov 18, 2019

    Everhope:

    Can anyone help me get back to my family?

    Im scared and lost. Im a yearling and my parents are Hazelwind and Echofrost.

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    Windfeather
    Nov 18, 2019

    (We are really far past Echofrost and Hazelwind. I wanted to warn you. I hope it did not come out mean)

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    EverHope
    Nov 18, 2019

    Actually my parents are Wonderhope and Everfrost

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    Windfeather
    Nov 18, 2019

    (Everhope! You come back here. You are going to keep posting. I can change the era if I have too. It is my RP and I can do it. I always say the wrong thing stay. please!)

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