"Where is Star's herd at?" Riversun asked Brackentail. "They are spread out through Sun Herd's, Jungle Herd's, and Snow Herd's Territory. They have been changing herd territory's each season, and they were planning on migrating to Mountain Herd's territory for winter." (its fall right now) "But they are in Sun Herd's territory now." Brackentail explained. "I see," Riversun said nodding. "Lets go faster.. im ready to confront Star." Brackentail nodded and pumped his wings, picking up speed. A few hours later, the sun started coming up and Stormtail, Brackentail, and Riversun crossed the vein and entered Sun Herd's territory. "They are in Dawn Meadow," Brackentail nickered. It was noon now, and the small team quickly spotted the huge herd. "Lets hide in that grove of trees," Stormtail whinnied quitely. Riversun nodded and banked towards the trees. Brackentail landed first and made sure the coast was clear. "Its all clear," Brackentail whinnied softly. Riversun nodded and landed in the grove with Stormtail. Riversun stood beside Brackentail and whispered in his ear, "So who is Morningleaf? Is she that special?" Brackentail perked his ears and looked at the yearling. "Morningleaf is... she's just.. amazing.." he said softly. Riversun looked annoyed but nodded. Stormtail on the other hand was having an outrage. He was stomping his huge hooves and snorting. He gestured to Riversun to follow
him. Riversun was lead deeper into the trees. "What's wrong with you?" she asked. The stallion snorted. "How can you trust this colt?! He was a follower of Star!" Riversun shrugged her wings. "I trust him."
Stormtail snorted. "Then you are ridiculous. You dont know what you're doing!" Riversun curled her neck and made a hissing noise, just like her mother used too. But Stormtail didnt back down. "I know whats right. Now you keep quiet and let me worry about Brackentail." the filly snapped. Stormtail snorted but nodded. "Now lets go back, Im ready to meet Star." This time Riversun lead Stormtail back to Brackentail, who was sleeping. Riversun nudged him with her muzzle. "Wake up," she whispered. Brackentail jolted. "Morningleaf?" he cried. He looked up at Riversun. "Oh," he whispered. Riversun snorted. "At dark, lead me to Star." Brackentail nodded. "We're ready..." she added.
Thanks so much!
You know how you get that feeling-butterflies in your stomach-when you're about to do something you really enjoy? For me its swimming, and I ALWAYS get butterflies in my stomach when we're swimming. When I read this, the butterflies became more and more excited. GOOD SIGN!!! 😃👍
Good job!! This is really sounding like the book more and more!
I can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!