Last comment from part 5-
Vida:
"What do you need Seaglad?" She sighed. She could not be alone for 10 minutes. It was probably because of that pesky mare Shimmerstream. She wished she could just fall and be alone. She had seen her family. Thunderbrook and her Mother Mistburr. She had wanted to be with them for ever
Frayan:
Frayan walked away to graze by himself; but he didn't feel like eating. The two year old stallion loped deeper into the Trap, away from the group of foals. As soon as he was out of reach; Frayan galloped hard until he tripped, tumbling into a tree in exhaustion. The young stallion lay there, breathing heavily. Finally, after what seemed hours, he stumbled to his hooves and decided to practice with his power. Frayan let lightning pour out of him with ease, but with caution not to cause a fire.
(Dragon, is it ok if Frayan has lightning, just lightning, he uses it like Star would of starfire.)
(Umm... so he should be a yearling if he has powers, and in addition to that, he can't have lightning powers because there's already an OC with those powers. I can go back to my character post and check to see which powers are yet to be taken)
@Dragon (Frayan's two)
@Dragon (Okay, i'll figure something out that no one already has.)
Seaglade:
He frowned, his forelock shadowing his face. He looked away, and the only noise between the two of them were the beating of their wings and the roar of the wind. Then Seaglade answered, “I need nothing but for you to be okay, Vida.” His voice was strong and he had to shout for her to hear him.
(how would you pronounce Vida, like Veedah, or Vi-dah
(Vi Duh)
(ok, good to know)
( so like the vi in vine and then duh? I was pronouncing it VeeDah xD )
(yah, I tink so)
Jeray:
Jeray's mind was whirling in confusion, everyone seemed to be hurt, fisically or emotionally. She staggered, almost falling if she hadn't caught herself against Kifo's sturdy body. Jeray snorted at herself; she had to be sensitive to this stuff; she could protect herself, by using her force bubble. But Jeray had been stupid enough in the panther attack to forget she even had a power, until at the very last minute. If it hadn't been for Kifo, she would have been cat-food, or would have had a serious infection, or died of blood loss. The filly shivered at the thought, and then slapped herself with her tail, dismissing her bitter thoughts.
Raphael
“frayan!” Raphaels looks around, and starts to search “frayan!”