(Okay, I'm going to make part 7 real quick. Please don't comment for the moment)

Iden:

She with the foals and the new mare when something triggered her senses. (good senses in kinda part of her powers) "EVERYONE BE QUITE" She yelled her eyes fixed on the ground so she could focus. Her ears flicked back and forth, trying to picking up very sound. She could feel that someone was in trouble so she concentrated harder to piece the noises together and find out where it was coming from.

Astro/Amero-

The moment Stormcloud released Vida, Astro had the light rays pull back from her worried that they might do more harm then goo at this point.

Stormcloud:

She glared and kicked the foals who came near her. Vida was slumped and she released her. She said again but to Merlcloud. "Merlwood, come home..... They miss you! We we could be friends! Lets give it a try!?" Her face hopeful, Fake but it might trick Merlcloud

“Their all...so young.” Bitterness shot through the mares blood. How could the herd’s through all of them away! Semper guessed she was the eldest one there. Her mind ached with all the seeming chaos. She had not been around more then one pegasus in her life, and now she was surrounded by them! (Bye!)

Jeray:

Finally they arrived in the middle of the clearing. Many foals were either grazing, chatting or playing. Jeray turned to Semper, "This is where we stay," she said, "and we cannot fly, usually, but here we can." The filly swept her wing over the small herd. Her eyes were sad as she turned away to go graze by herself. (gtg!)

There was silence for some time until Semper broke it ruffly. “How are you supposed to fly when the canopy over head is this compacted?” She wondered allowed.

Semper was fooled by the lie easily and she went on her way with the filly in front of her.

Jeray:

Jeray didn't turn her head, "I'm fine," she replied hastily, even though it was not the entire truth. The terrible night-mares of the almost fateful day haunted her every evening in her sleep; and even in the day, she didn't dare be by herself, in fear that a large cat, or other creature, might spring out at her any moment.

She looked around her as the sky above her quickly faded and her instincts told her that this was somehow a trap. The thought faded as she began to reason with this. “They don’t call this place the Trap for nothing.” She muttered

Semper noticed that something was wrong as they touted into the deep woods. “You ok?“

Jeray:

Jeray recovered quickly, "Oh, ah, yes of course, I'm sorry; follow me," the filly said promptly, turning her back to Semper to guide the young mare to the Shadow Herd grounds. The filly's wings sagged as she walked, her shyness replaced with slight sorrow.

She’d tuck in her star-scattered feathers and flip her mane impatiently. “Are we going to go inside the territory what?” Her voice went back into a commanding vibe.

Jeray:

Jeray lowered her head sadly again, "Not when you forget that you have it," she whispered, and a flashback of the panther's claws on her back blocked her vision. The filly staggered backward as she seemed to feel the razor sharp claws tear down her back.

“I assume that could be helpful.” She nodded her head as she began to imagine the possibilities of such an abnormal combat power

Jeray:

Jeray raised her head to a proper height, "That is amazing, Semper," she said, smiling shyly, "I have what you could call, force shield, or bubble."

To the*))

“I traveled through those wastelands for three days and three nights without stopping.“ she motioned today the rocky rotten tera behind her “I don’t need to eat, or drink, or sleep for that matter.”

Her large dark feather flared as she stretched them. ”I guess you could call it unlimited energy.”

Jeray:

Jeray lifted her head a little, "What is it?" She asked quietly.

She sighed “As a matter of fact I do.” her voice went calmer, finally showing empathy to the shivering filly

Jeray:

"Yes, this is Shadow Herd, where all the star foals go to," Jeray replied, lowering her head again, her shyness coming on again. The small filly looked Semper from under her forelock; her soft golden eyes glowing with curiosity, "do you have a power, Semper?"

“That is my intention.” She twitched her ears as if this was obvious. “Your the ‘Shadow Herd’ correct?” She seemed not to be bothered at all by the fillies sudden stance

Frayan:

Frayan reared, as mist took his place; and reappeared panting by Bakari's side, "We need to work are powers together, Bakari, "we have to work in unision."

Her tail whipped through the air as she swatted an insect that flew out of the forest. “This place is already on my nerves.” She grumbled to herself under her breath

Jeray:

Jeray stepped backwards in surprise, "I'm sorry," she said quietly, "I like your name, it's nice; my name is Jeray," the unusually spotted filly said, "you don't belong to a herd?" Jeray asked, cocking her head, "you could join ours."

Marlcloud:

She brayed an alert to all the foals, and Bakari was right behind her. Once she had gotten to the clearing, she had managed to hear Stormcloud’s comment on war. She reared, her eyes like murder. “You have already besieged us with war! Who are you to speak?!” The powerful lead-mare roared.

Bakari:

He saw the blood, and took in a sharp, painful breath. Before he even knew what was happening, tree roots had sprung from the ground to wrap all the way around Stormcloud’s legs, allowing no movement whatsoever. Again, without him even knowing, the tree roots had created a bed for Vida to lie on and was slowly moving her away from Stormcloud.

Seaglade:

Thea reared the moment Thea had finished with the healing, galloping to Vida. “Get your hooves off of her!” He thundered after Marlcloud had spoke, coming dangerously close to Stormcloud.

“Don’t worry your tail off.“ she scolded “I don’t belong to a Herd. My name is Semper.”

(Thx)

Jeray:

Jeray looked at the strange filly, "Who are you?" she asked quietly, lowering her head. (Jeray asked it to Semper, Love the name btw)

(ok)

Mk. Imma stop too sense your the only one I’ve interacted with yet :p ))

(aw, bai!)

Frayan:

Frayan narrowed his eyes as mist exploded in his place; suddenly the colt reappeared beside the mare, he reared again and clobbered the mare in the cheek knocking her over away from Vida.

Jeray:

Jeray trotted nervously up to Kifo's side, "Kifo?" She whimpered, "What is going on?" The filly noticed another filly standing in front of him. She swallowed, she had been afraid, standing alone by herself, especially when she saw a strange large colt walk away into the Trap.

Stormcloud:

She dogged the colt and struck Vida again. The foal was almost unconsous from loss of blood. (Gtg might not be on later)

“My name is Semper.“ her voice was stern and to the point as she stomped one hoof down

Frayan:

Frayan reared, his anger burning through his veins. The one and a half year old charged at the mare.

Kifo:

"I am Kifo, Who are you?" He was nevous

“Your one of the magically gifted foals, aren’t you?” Semper’s voice was tight with suspicion

“Who are you?” she nickered, being cautious

her ears pricked at the sound of an unknown voice

Kifo:

He heard a pegasus and looked out of the trees and said. "Come here." to it

Thx!))

Her hooves shuffled eager to see if any of the foals were still alive, and if they had in fact been sent to this thick canopied forest called the Trap. She opened her mouth as if to shout ”Is anyone there!?” But her neck arched realizing that this would make her presence obvious to any predators lingering in the woods.

Stormcloud:

"Who is this! The unloved Fraya, You KILLED YOUR FATHER!" She screamed at him. Her words would cut she made sure of that

(wow! Your writing is so good Riverdawn!)

Frayan:

Frayan's head snapped in the direction of a terrifying scream about fifty wing-lengths away. (hopefully that's accurate enough!) The young stallion lunged into a gallop, his hooves gaining rhythm at every step. His neck was flat as he raced, leaping over rocks and dodging low branches. Frayan skidded to a stop as he arrived in the middle of the commotion, "You leave Vida alone! You have no right in killing star foals!" He screamed, rearing while slicing the air with his hooves; mist curled out of his nostrils as the stuff hung on the tips of his wings. (the mist gets like this when Frayan is emotional)

Semper:

Semper’s silver hooves lightly touched down near the base of the darkened forest. Her breath was steady and still despite the fact that she had been flying through the wastelands for three days straight, non-stop. The stench of rotting trees and cockroach-like scavenging creatures burned her snout and shot through her lungs. She had finally made it.

(yeah, a lot better, thx!)

(Vida and stormcloud and astro are about 5 or 10 minutes walk from the clearing. Astro is trying to save Vida while she is bleeding from a cut artery in her neck. The other foals are in the clearing and Thea just healed Seaglade's wing. Vida feels like an idiot and trys to get astro to save himself but he wants to save her. Better?)

(guys? I'm kinda confused, i want to make Frayan do something, but I don't know what's happening and where this is taking place. :/)

Stormcloud:

She found the sharpest arrow in her quiver. "You are a monster. Even your own mother could not love you!" She purred. "Who would love you. You like this filly dont you?" She said getting under his skin. "You think if you save her than someone will care for you and you wont be alone?!" She walked in a small circle. Her mate would come soon and then he could kill this foal

Astro/Amero-

In that moment, Astro was having to draw on Amero's anger and rage to continue to hold onto the light beams. When Stormcloud moved to attack Vida yet again, the shards held their positions cause several deep cuts along the lead mare's foreleg which only caused her more pain. "You are a trespasser on our land," Astro pointed out, gritting his teeth, "As herd law dictates, you gave up your right when you crossed over our border. Your mate can do nothing."

Amero scoffed at Astro's words, Keep this up and you'll be the most feared pegasus in Anok.

"Shut up!" snapped Astro out loud, forgetting that the others could hear him. He was using every last bit of his energy on keep the ice shards up.

Stormcloud:

"GET AWAY! My overstallion will avenge me! You Will Start A War for Shadow herd. And you will all die!" The pain grew and she slashed at Vida's neck again. Vida screamed.

Astro/Amero-

Ugh, he though. Astro needed to get Vida away from this lead mare as soon as possible! In a split second decision, the yearling made the light shards close in even further around Stormcloud, some even began cutting into her hide and wings, drawing some blood. Astro allowed the shards to keep moving at a very slow speed, creating more and more pain for the lead mare. He only stopped them right before the beams penitraited anything vital. "Let her go." ordered Astro, "I don't want to have to you, but I will if I have to."

STormcloud:

She brought the sharpened edge of her hoof down on Vida's neck causing her to gasp in pain.

Vida:

"I am an idiot walking away from the herd. I will die for this and so will Astro." She thought then said. "Save yourself!" Her neck was bleeding. Stormcloud had hit an artery and she was loosing blood fast.

Astro/Amero-

Astro took the full impact of the blow and was push backwards. This caused the beams of like to flicker a bit, but the yearling was able to gain control of things before Stormcloud could escapee.

Amero continued to laugh all throughout this.

"If you try that again," Astro threatened, attempting look as less fazed as possible, "I can kill you faster then you can ever hope to move." with that, for added affect, he made the light shards close in around Stormcloud, sharp ends toward her. Astro stopped them only a half a feathers length away from the lead mare, and stared her down letting her know he was serious.

Stormcloud:

She slammed her hooves into Astro's chest and threw him back. "Keep trying and I will kill her!' SHe rasped

Astro/Amero-

Astro snapped to the moment that Stormcloud appeared. By the ancestors, how did she find us? he thought to himself. At this point, the white yearling was still having to fight against Amero over control of their body, but for a split second he was able to focus on what was happening around him. "Stop!" he brayed, and lunged forward creating a wave of razer sharp light shards as he moved. Astro steered the shards toward the lead mare, and then created a sort of cage around her which forced her to stop where she was. "One wrong move and you're dead." Astro warned taking a few steps closer, and as he did, he felt a cold shiver run down his spine. The reason for this was that Amero had momentarily abandon his attempts to take over, and was letting loose and was laughing.

You think I'm the one they're going to fear? came Amero's deep raspy voice that echoed around in the head currently controlled by Astro, You're the one threatening death at the moment.

Astro tried his best to ignore Amero, and instead focused his attention holding the shards of light that encircled Stormcloud and Vida in place.

Vida:

She smiled, As she looked at the sun and sighed. Her powers were hard and then she heard a loud snapping sound. Something grabbed her and gabbed her from behind. "Suprise you little Brat!" The evil voice of Stormcloud broke into her thoughts. She was dragged away into a wooded aria

(Where is Frayan?)

(Never mind, I see you are pretty on top of things. Glad you're joining in)

A distant figure flew swiftly and quietly in the far, far off distance. It could only be seen from the edge of the Trap if a pegasus squinted their eyes hard enough. It’s vague appearance glided smoothly over the flat wasteland’s as dawn began and the sun emerged over the horizon. It would take hours for the figure to be maked out for any sort of creature or pegasus.

(same night)

( GTG, Goodnight! )

Thea:

She closed her eyes and focused. She felt her Starfire pulse through her veins and up to her wings. The sunlight shone brightly as Thea pressed down harder on his wing. Thea clenched her muscles as she could feel Seaglade's broken bone shift into its proper position in his wing.

Once his base wing bone was back in place, she opened her eyes and released his wing from her grasp. She was breathing heavily and felt dizzy, but Seaglade's broken wing was set back in place as if he'd never broken it and Thea grinned proudly at her work.

(@Dragon I love your new profile picture!!! :D )

Astro/Amero-

Once Astro saw to it that the others had made their way to Vida and Seaglade, he slunk back a little. More then anything he wanted to stay here. True, they had mostly been annoyed with him in the past, afraid that he might have one of his sudden outbursts, but that sort of thing was in his past now, and it had been replaced with a strong longing to be with his own kind.

Could we stay here, for a little while at least? thought Astro.

They'll never accept us came Amero's grumbling response.

Deep down Astro feared that, that might be true, but his longing was stronger then his fear, Please he pleaded.

No growled Amero. Astro could feel that his body mate was trying to take over their shared body.

We have to stay, argued Astro trying to suppress Amero. But it didn't really matter what the dark colt did, Astro had already made up his mind that he was going to stay. 'They might accept me, if they don't have to worry about him' thought Astro to himself.

Seaglade:

He stiffened further and scowled. “No need to make fun of me, ma’am. I have my reasons,” he muttered.

Thea:

Her face scrunched in confusion, but she shrugged it off and exhaled sharply, "Whatever, weirdo. Let's get on with it. Stand here-in the center of the sun's rays, please." She pointed towards the middle of the beam and while she waited for him to stand still, she stood directly next to him and placed her wings gently onto his broken one. Realizing why he suddenly stiffened, she explained

"I'm gonna have to stand closer to you and place my wings on top of yours in order to only heal your broken wing-because we don't want my healing in your heart and brain, now do we?" Thea snorted, her tail flicking mischievously.

Seaglade:

His ears went back as he cautiously stepped forward. He didn’t like it when Thea healed him; that was what had originally given him the outburst of feelings. “If you promise to focus your healing away from my heart and my brain, than I will agree,” he said between gritted teeth, sending a look at Vida.

Thea:

She rolled her eyes and turned to watch Seaglade, "C'mon! You want me to heal your broken wing or not? It's not like you can fly home with a broken wing, so let me heal you and you can go."

Seaglade:

The rocky mountain colt stopped short as he heard a familiar voice shout his name. Something about healing a wing. He rolled his eyes as he trotted back, head all the way down, ears drooping, and eyes narrowing. Seaglade’s ears perked as he saw the sad figure of Vida’s lifeless wings as she walked to a large patch of sunlight. He raised his head and refused to walk any further.

Vida:

She smiled sightly and walked to the sun.Her wings dragging she looked like Star as a foal

Thea:

She reluctantly agreed, "Fine. Seaglade! Come here and I'll heal your wing for you." She called to him, trotting towards a big and bright sunbeam.

Vida:

She looked down. "No Thea I dont want to hurt you." Her heart hurt that Thea cared but she said. "Only heal the smallest bit so I can get better but not all of it and heal Seaglade first. Please!"

Thea:

She couldn't believe Vida-it tore her heart in half that Vida was thinking of herself in these ways. "I healed you from your concussion so you wouldn't die! I can't bare to go through life without you Vida, and neither can the rest of us!" She snorted. "He would be happy to see you, but we would be devastated if you left! Think about everything you'd be leaving behind....do you really want to put me through that pain?"

Vida:

"NO! I think my father would be happy to see me!" She said in anger. She was mad they would not let her do this

Thea:

"Vida! You didn't cause this pain! Seaglade chose too save you from the jet stream. Yes, Shimmerstream told him to fly after you, but that doesn't mean he had to stay with you. He could have flown home, but he didn't. You're not at fault here, Vida, and I wish to Ancestors that you could see that!"

Thea's pupils dilated and she took a step back, "Vida, I am your best friend. I am NOT going to just let you feel pain that you don't deserve to feel. I am sorry Vida, I promise you I will heal Seaglade, but I am NOT letting you endure any more pain."

Marlcloud:

She nodded to Thea. “Heal her wing base, then,” she whispered.

(THE CHICKENS HAVE ESCAPED NUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Vida:

She stayed in the shadows, "Thea dont do this! You cant heal up both and I caused this pain. Let me feel it! Please....."

Thea:

She stared into Vida's eyes, "Vida...you are in extreme pain because of your wing. And if I don't heal it, it will only get worse. Plus, you wing bone might not heal correctly. It might heal crooked-causing you to be a dud as well- if I don't heal you." She stepped closer and nuzzled Vida, "I promise, I'll heal Seaglade. But, Vida, I care about you so much that you don't have a choice right now. I'm healing you. It's my powers-my choice."

Vida:

"No. I dont want you to heal me. If you care about me, dont do this!" She said pained. "I Will Not hurt anymore pegasi!"

Thea:

She followed Marcloud and stood next to Vida.

Thea inspected Vida's broken wings, gently and slowly extending them so she could see how bad her fractures were. When she finished, she walked up to Marcloud, her face twisted into a frown, "I can heal the base of her wings, but that's about it. I'm not sure if I have the strength or energy to heal both entire wings- but as long as the base is healed, the rest should heal up okay."

Luckily for Thea, it was in the middle of the day and because of Raphael's shockwave, there weren't any clouds in the sky. "Bring her into the biggest sunbeam you can find." She said, glancing longingly at Vida. "Oh and Seaglade? Before you leave, I'll try to heal your wing too."

Vida:

"Yes I am. I am always putting myself and others in danger for no good reason. I will not let Thea heal me. I need to handle this. Send her to heal Seaglade. His wing is so bad he will be a dud if she does not. I will heal. He will not. I I think it is smarter to ask Strikewing to kill me. Then I will be no one's problem." her voice dry and serous

Marlcloud:

“Vida, you are not a bad pegasus. Seaglade’s home is in Willow Herd, with his family. I can’t he’ll keep quiet about our location, and if he doesn’t, than I’ll have to resort to certain effects I won’t discuss with you,” she muttered, referring to killing the colt, which she wanted to avoid. “If he wants to come back, than he will, but I’m not going to fly all the way to Willow Herd, and I certainly won’t let one of my foals go,” she snorted as she called Thea over and asked her whether or not the healing filly felt up to healing such broken bones.

Vida:

"She went back to Willow herd. Go help Seaglade he ran off because I am a bad pegasus. I got mad and now." She sobbed.

Seaglade:

His ears went back, his usual confidence faltering. Normally his charm worked on everyone, along with his genius, but apparently not on this filly. All he did was move out of the way as she walked towards the lead-mare. He finally decided this wasn’t the place for him.

Seaglade would return to Willow Herd that very day, and nothing was going to stop him.

He left all his feelings behind, hardening them into a stone that he could toss into the depths of the ocean as he galloped away, deciding he’d just live as a dud for the rest of his life as his wing was broken. It didn’t bother him.

The only thing that bothered him was he was still clutching to the stone.

Marlcloud:

She immediately jumped into action, stabilizing Vida’s wings and calling for Shimmerstream to come and help.

Vida:

She spit out. "You want me to lie to you?! Why would I wast my breath on you!? I HATE YOU!" She yelled at him. She hated him with all her heart. She stood up ad started to walk to Merlcloud. Every step hurt soo bad but she made it and colapsed at her hooves

Seaglade:

The rocky mountain colt shook his head vigorously. “Not a good enough answer. If you give me a valid reason, then I’ll let you stand up,” he whispered, his smile evil and malicious, yet devilishly handsome.

Vida:

"Let me get up!" Her voice was low and dangerous. She fought him but in her weak state she could not do much. "I answered it. I just had to something told me to."

Seaglade:

Immediately he burst into action, shoving her gently back down, his rage consuming his thoughts and his terrible feelings. “Stay down, you are in no condition to stand. Now, would you please answer my question?” He asked once more, towering over her.

Vida:

She ignored him. She would talk to Shimmerstream when she stood up. She did not have to answer him and if he would treat her like that she would not. She tried to stand up and gasped in the pain but she did it anyway.

Seaglade:

His expression hardened. “I followed you because that was the orders given to me by Shimmerstream. You can go and complain to her, for all that I care, but you still haven’t answered my question. Why. Did. You. Enter. The. Jetstream?” He seethed, pronouncing each word very slowly as if she hadn’t heard him the first time or his accent was too strong.

Vida:

Looking down. "I had too. I just had to." She said and then added. "I didnt think you would follow me since you Hate me!" Trying nt to be cruel

Seaglade:

He noticed as she avoided his gaze. “Why did you jump into the jet stream,” his voice rang out in a statement, not really a question, but seeking an answer none the less.

Vida:

She sent her power through her to her heart and turning it into another layer of obsidian, it went over her body and gave her enough energy to handle this till Thea was better and could heal them both. She would not look at him