May 31, 2018

Alternative Ending RP: part 14🤯

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Last comment from pervious part:

 

Silverflame:

Silverflame was still in a little bit of shock from being attacked by wolves, but he stayed by Breezebell's side. Mistcloud came to check in on him, accompanied by Shadowstar and Pearlsong, but left after a short time because Pearlsong couldn't keep still.

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(Actually, I wrote one last comment on part 13)

 

 

Horizongold streaked into the clearing where his yearling friends were fighting the wolves. He stopped when he saw them, knowing that the whole scenario would just get too confusing if he joined them. Besides, Silverflame and Emberblaze were doing quite a good job.

 

Horizongold skirted the edge of the clearing to check on Crimsonstorm. He got to the other side of the clearing and could see Crimsonstorm's kind face looking longingly at him. Then, strangely, a growl seemed to come out of the injured stallion's mouth. Horizongold looked around, confused. He saw a pair of steady, golden eyes, soon joined by another set.

 

The two wolves charged him. One of them, a black-and-brown wolf with white circles on an eye and an ear, ran toward his chest. Horizongold reared and clobbered its skull, killing it. The larger of the two wolves, however, had jumped onto Horizongold's back. Horizongold, bucked, reared, and twirled, but the wolf held on for dear life. Horizongold quickly launched into the sky and employed the same dizzy trick he had used on Magicpetal when they were playing tag. It worked. The large gray wolf sailed across the sky, howling in terror. The howl was abruptly stopped when the wolf hit a tall pine trunk. Horizongold heard the dull cracking snap of its backbone breaking. Horizongold shook off the feeling of battle and dove toward land, toward Crimsonstorm.

 

Emberblaze was already there, trying his best to clean off the injured stallion's wounds. Horizongold nodded approvingly to the younger stallion, then kept watch for wolves. As he suspected, two more ran out, but they charged Emberblaze instead of him. Horizongold kicked the smaller one and watched Emberblaze kick the larger one, the alpha. Unfortunately, Emberblaze wasn't strong enough to have a kick kill the wolf. Horizongold followed the alpha wolf back into the trees silently, until the alpha and the wolf pulling it were next to a large fallen log in the forest. The small wolf stopped pulling and stood up here, so presumably they were at their lair. That's when Horizongold came out of hiding. He reared and flashed his hooves at the small wolf, scaring it away. Then he brought down his hooves on the alpha male's head. The large wolf let out a small grunt, then the noise died away. It was dead.

 

Horizongold hurried back to the medicine den and his father. He needed to tell them that he had found the lair.

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(Go to the post titled "Alternative Ending RP: Characters" and add your character's description. Flamefrost I created this post hours before you wrote that comment)

May 31, 2018Edited: May 31, 2018

x in the morning x Out of the triplets, Emberblaze was the first to wake up. He grunted and all the memories from last night flooded into his mind. Crimsomstorm, Magicpetal, wolves attacking, blood, cracking bone, and.....Redmoon. Emberblaze stood up and didn't even bother to stretch or shake the leaves out of his mane or tail. He stifly walked forward. Horizongold was in the medicine den, explaining that he found the lair. Starsummer trotted tiredly out of the cave and stopped when she saw her son. "Were you in the cave all night?" Emberblaze asked her. She shook her head "I was just checking on Crimsomstorm." she expained. Embelaze peeked into the den but Starsummer stopped him.. "He needs rest...you can come see him another time..." she said, walking toward the sisters. Magicpetal was having a dream and she kicked her legs outward and nickered a little. Starsummer walked faster and nuzzled her filly awake. Magicpetal groaned and woke up in cold sweat. She breathed heavily and nuzzled her mother, her eyes bulging. Emberblaze stayed outside of the den and forced himself to nibble on some grass.

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( Actually Riverbreeze's was the last comment. )

Redomoon had been long awake before any others and she was still kicking the tree trying to get her anger out. When she finally stopped, the tree barely had any bark left. She sighed and trotted around and then to the lake. She threw pebbles on the water and they skipped across. She grumbled. She hadn't realized she was so hungry but she didn't eat.

 

Crimsonstorm woke up steadily and groaned. He attempted to stand but stopped because he was still hurt and just lay his head back down. Fruitfire was in the cave and he was watching Crimsonstorm.

"Feeling better?" Fruitfire asked.

"Nope,"

"Just thought I'd ask because you were mumbling in your sleep and rolling," Fruitfire answered.

Crimsonstorm nodded and then peered at him.

"Are you near here?" Crimsonstorm said skeptically.

"Yes actually. My name is Fruitfire, former captain of FLame Herd till a few years ago when I was banished with my family so I guess I'm actually Fruitheart," He rambled. Crimsonstorm smiled as if not caring if he was Flame Herd.

"I am Cimrsonstorm of Glacier Herd," He said. "I was orginally from Valley Herd,"

"Heard it's nice there in the spring," Fruitheart said. Crimsonstorm nodded but wuickly stopped at a pain searing through his neck and then his body went numb.

 

 

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(u can join, but it will take u a while to catch up)

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Redomoon had been long awake before any others and she was still kicking the tree trying to get her anger out. When she finally stopped, the tree barely had any bark left. She sighed and trotted around and then to the lake. She threw pebbles on the water and they skipped across. She grumbled. She hadn't realized she was so hungry but she didn't eat.

Crimsonstorm woke up steadily and groaned. He attempted to stand but stopped because he was still hurt and just lay his head back down. Fruitfire was in the cave and he was watching Crimsonstorm."Feeling better?" Fruitfire asked."Nope,""Just thought I'd ask because you were mumbling in your sleep and rolling," Fruitfire answered. Crimsonstorm nodded and then peered at him."Are you near here?" Crimsonstorm said skeptically."Yes actually. My name is Fruitfire, former captain of FLame Herd till a few years ago when I was banished with my family so I guess I'm actually Fruitheart," He rambled. Crimsonstorm smiled as if not caring if he was Flame Herd."I am Cimrsonstorm of Glacier Herd," He said. "I was orginally from Valley Herd," "Heard it's nice there in the spring," Fruitheart said. Crimsonstorm nodded but wuickly stopped at a pain searing through his neck and then his body went numb.

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(Wait, y u comment that twice?)

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( I don't know because maybe you didn't see it XD )

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Emberblaze needed to see Crimsomstorm. "I won't be there for long. Just a quick hello....or goodbye..." he said in his mind, walking into the cave. He stopped in the center of the cave and dipped his head to Crimsomstorm and nickered a soft greeting. "Hey...how are you? Anything I can get for you?" he said, kindly

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Crimsonstorm had the most painful face any steed could possibly had but managed to shake his head before he rolled his eyes back into his head and closed them.

 

Redmoon finally just sat at the lake and froze when she looked at her reflection. What has become of me? Why am I beautiful? Why do I look.....angry? She thought. She sighed and rose into the air and landed beside Forestbeam. Breezebell wasn't here so she finally let all of her feelings out and cried so silently her mother wasn't sure what to do but just gripped her into a hug.

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Emberblaze sighed, turned around and trotted back toward the clearing.The sun was up and most of the herd steeds were awake and chattering quietly.

He saw Rdmoon crying silent tears with her mother, and decided to leave them be. He set off in a slow and careless canter toward his own family.

The council meeting had resumed, so Starsummer and his father wasn't there. Magicptal and Goldenstream were chattering quietly while they picked on some grass. Emberblaze slowed to a trot, then a walk, and nickered a greeting. He dipped his head to graze, but he couldn't eat.

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Redmoon pulled away and trotted toward theforest again btu took off over it not wanting to have a repeat of the day before. She soared over it until she saw a filly in the woods. She dropped down and waked to her. It was a palomino FLame Herd steed with emerald wings that looks much like Fruitfire now Fruitheart. Redmoon talked to her and nodded. Then they both flew back to the herd and Redmoon brought her to the council meeting. "Um excuse me but, I have found Fruitfire's daughter. Her name is Moonleaf," SHe said. Moonleaf stepped forward and looekd as scared as a mouse infront of a cat.

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Crystalcloud tossed her head. "So, maybe Fruitheart wasn't lying about his family. Maybe they do exist." she said, nodding toward the little filly as her proof.

Brightwing:

"Should I take her to Fruitheart?" he asked the council

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Moonleaf shivered at the presure under all of the powerful steeds and jolted up at the name of her father. "Father?! He's....here?!" She asked suprised.

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Starsummer still didn't believe it. "She could be just a random filly. We don't know for sure that that is Fruitheart's daughter because he could just be lying."

Maplewing stepped forward. "But, Moonleaf just addressed Fruitheart as her father."

Crystalcloud narrowed her eyes, agreeing with Starsummer. "The filly could be lying, too. See? We don't know for sure. This could all be a set up!" she said, stamping her hoof

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Moonleaf glared. "He's a palomino with violet feathers," She answered sassily. By then, Redmoon had trotted away and went to Crimsonstorm in the cave.

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Crystalcloud looked back at the filly, just as sassy. "Well, he could have told you to say that. This filly could also be a spy along with Fruitheart."

Maplewing shook his head. "She's just a filly."

Crystalcloud puffed out her chest, not caring. "She's still from Flame herd. And right now, having a spy in our midst is the last thing we need."

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