ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020

    The Yearling's Secret

    in FAN FICTON

    Prologue


    In Snow Herd's old territory, a large herd of Pegasai were resting for the night under the watchful eye of their Over-Stallion. The large stallion's ears twitched as he watched the mares, under-stallions, yearlings, and foals settle down to rest after a day of hard flying. The night was quiet, and the moon glittered off of the snow covered valley below him. Shaking out his mane, the stallion spread his wide purple wings, stretching his sore limbs. His ears perked, the sound of soft wingbeats alerting the stallion to a possibly unwanted presence. With a snort, the large dapple gray stallion stamped the ground with his hoof, alerting a couple of the mares in the Herd, who perked their ears, trying to see if they were in any danger.

    “Relax,” Said a voice from the shadows. “It's just me.”

    “Ah, Birdcall…” The stallion snorted as the light gray mare landed beside him. “Perhaps let me know it's you next time…BEFORE I accidentally send the Herd into a frenzy." The mare just snorted in reply.

    “Perhaps,” She began, slightly mocking the stallion. “YOU should make sure there's nothing to be afraid of before you send the Herd into a frenzy.”

    The Stallion narrowed his eyes and glared at the mare beside him. “What do you even want.”

    “I'm just here to deliver a report on my charge!” She said in mock surprise, placing her wing over her chest as if his words stung her. “Buuut…if you DON'T want to hear it…I guess I'll just be on my way.” She spread her wings slowly, preparing to take flight.

    “Wait!” Ordered the Over-Stallion harshly. “What report?” He asked, slight menace in his voice. The mare smirked, slowly lowering her wings.

    “All our patience has paid off…” She said simply.

    “She has it!?” The Over-Stallion asked in surprise, his ears twitching in slight excitement.

    “Yes, Stormwing.” She said with a nod. “She has it.”

    “Then my plans…” The cruel gray stallion said with a smirk, “Can finally be put into motion…”

    Birdcall stepped forward, “Petalcloud would be proud of what you, her most trusted Warrior, Stormtail, have become.”

    Stormwing smirked “Bring her to me at the first light of dawn…I have an assignment for her.” He said, turning his attention back towards his herd. Birdcall nodded and stepped back.

    “Of course, Stormwing.” She said spreading her wings and leaping into the air, coasting back towards the herd. Stormwing smiled maliciously.

    “Star's undoing…” He murmured. “Is at my wingtips.”



    TADA! GOT THE PROLOGUE DONE TONIGHT! XD I had the BASIC idea of what this story is going to entail, so I decided to start the prologue! The next part SHOULD be out in the next few days (No promises though, a couple things need to get done before I can start work on the main story)! Also, after realizing that Stormtail was my main baddie, I have to change the name of Morningleaf and Star's son...hehe. HINDSIGHT 20/20 AM I RIGHT!? XD ANYWAY, enjoy this prologue!


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    Morningmist
    Sep 08, 2020

    Wow! I love you describe everything in so much detail! I am really interested to see what is going to happen next. (BTW, I love your art style!)

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020
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    Thank you so much!! I can't wait to share Part 1 with you guys!! This is gonna be a wild ride, but one I'm excited to be on!

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020

    XD It's fine! I was just making sure you saw him because he got kinda lost in all of the comments...XD Really? Let me go check real quick!

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020

    I'm back!

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020
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    @Skysun YES I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020
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    @Skysun Sorry I didn't reply sooner, I had another zoom meeting for school.

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020
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    oh, and I believe Moonbreeze asked Skysun a question in the Interior RP

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020

    I gtg for a second, I'll try to get back on soon

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020
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    Alrighty! I'll work on another OC!! :)

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    Echomoon
    Sep 08, 2020

    love itttt!!! also I'm guessing the "she" and "it" is Riversun with the star fire? <3 I'm so excited for the first chapter!!!

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    Riverglade
    Sep 09, 2020
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    @Skysun I don't WANT to do that.... I'm scared of heights (ironic, I know)....... But if they don't become mates..................... idk....... we'll just have to see..........XD

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    Skysun
    Sep 09, 2020
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    @Riverglade I WILL CATCH YOU IF YOU FALL!!

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    Iceberry
    Sep 09, 2020
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    @Riverglade I know a nice tall cliff near the sea....

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020

    SAME ICY!!!!!!! I ACTUALLY LIKED HIM FOR THE FIRST COUPLE SENTENCES! ANYWAY, YAYYYYYYY IT"S OUT!!!!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!!!

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    Riverglade
    Sep 08, 2020
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    Hehe this is funny, because Riverglade's father is also named Stormwing, and is the EXACT OPPOSITE of THIS STormwing XD

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020
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    @Riverglade XD THANK YOU! I'm glad you like it so far!

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    Iceberry
    Sep 08, 2020

    STORMTAIL YOU EVIL STAR-HATER!!!!!!! WHO HAS WHAT?!?!?! At first I was about to like "the gray stallion who makes sure his herd is safe" AND THEN!!!

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020
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    XD Never trust first appearances I suppose, Lol!

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    Skysun
    Sep 08, 2020
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    And as to who has what, I GUESS you'll have to wait and see! But speculation is ALWAYS welcome! :)

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