Feb 17, 2018

The Story of Phoenix Chapter 9

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"Kill them?" Phoenix yelped, "But they're my family!!"

"Yes, yes, I'm aware." the voice said calmly.

"When am I to kill them, and why?" Phoenix's voice shook as she asked.

"I'll give you 1 month to kill them both, and why isn't of your concern." said the voice. "Will you let me think about it?" Phoenix inquired, "I'm not sure I want to kill my only family left."

"Fine you may think about. I will give you two days and two nights. On the second night, at midnight you will give me your answer. And if you don't kill them..." the voice paused, "I guess I'll just have to kill you as well as Star and Shadepebble." And with that the voice disappeared.

Kill them? But they're my family! I CANT kill them! NO I have to, or I will die to. I will kill them as soon as I have the opportunity.

Oh man what have I done? Now I'm gonna have to think of some way to keep Star, Shadepebble, and Phoenix all alive!!

Feb 21, 2018

WHAT?! I would sacrifice myself to save my family!!! Phoenix, DONT DO IT!!

Haha, but the voice said she/he would kill her AND then Star and Shadepebble. So either way Star and Shadepebble would be killed.

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