Riverglade winced as the two bay appaloosa stallions' teeth dug even harder into the base of her wings. She fought, bucked, and kicked in midair as they were taking her and Lightbreeze to Plains Herd. They only bit harder, drawing blood.
She couldn't believe Sablestone would do this. Trading her and Lightbreeze to Plains Herd for... for what? Freedom from Plains Herd? No, that couldn't be it. She and Lightbreeze had overheard him talking to the very same pegasi who stole them. This was a mission Hawkwing had sent him on, to capture the fillies, 10 moons ago. Riverglade was only nine moons old, and by the time she was born, Canyon Herd trusted him. She grinded her teeth, seething with rage at the stallion.
Her thoughts were interrupted by the perlino captain, Cloudfire. "We're almost there" He whinnied to his team. Riverglade bucked and tried to free her wings, to fly away, but the stallions only tightened their grip, making the wound there even larger. their grip was tight, she could feel each of their teeth individually on her bones. Blood trickled down her wings, between her feathers, onto her coat, and into the wind. It took all she had, not to cry out in pain.
Cloudfire ordered his team to land in a large grove of trees. He called for the overstallion of Plains Herd, Hawkwing.
Hawkwing was known for being the most ruthless and cruel overstallion in the history of the herds. Riverglade shuddered, just thinking about the things she's been told the power-hungry stallion has done. And he is undoubtedly where Cloudfire is taking them first.
The stallions holding her tightened their grip on Riverglade's wings even more, causing more blood, more pain, and a worse wound. They suddenly lurched forward to land, making it extremely uncomfortable while landing on purpose. When they made contact to the soil, they were surrounded with small trees, and autumn colors. Riverglade's fears intensified, and used all her strength trying to hide it from them.
She wouldn't let them see how scared she was, how much pain she was in; No, she couldn't let them see.
A large, winged figure trotted through the tree's, towards them, their large hooves slamming the ground, causing the trees to shake. They stopped in front of the group.
This is AMAZING, River!!
Wow! This good! I want to see what happens next!
It's great! (One comment, though. I noticed your tenses don't always match)
Descriptions: Canyon Herd
Riverglade: Bold, blue roan filly speckled with dozens of tiny light-brown, gray, and white dots, with dark, dusty-blue wings, dark stormy-gray mane and tail, brown legs.
Lightbreeze: Pretty light palomino filly with gold-tipped pink-champagne colored feathers, thin blaze, and one small hind sock.
Stormwing: Overstallion. Intimidating brown grullo with dark-turquoise feathers, snip on nose, 4 high socks.
Brightcloud: Lead mare. Pretty cremello with mix of light and dark pink feathers, thin stripe down face, 4 small socks, and twinkling blue eyes. Dawnriver: Medicine mare. Buckskin with sky-blue feathers, 2 front socks, and 1 blue eye.
Flamefire: Top captain in Canyon Herd's Army. Bay roan stallion with blood-red feathers, stripe down face, and two hind white socks.
Ashwind: Dark, dapple gray colt with pale-green feathers and silver mane and tail.
Nightshade: Boisterous bay colt with yellow feathers, golden eyes. Sunfeather: Shy dun filly with red-orange feathers, dorsal stripe, and golden eyes. Nightshade's twin sister.
Sunflower: Palomino mare with a light purple feathers, large star on forehead, and 3 white socks.
Sablestone: Young, buttermilk buckskin pinto stallion with sky blue feathers, blue eyes, bald face.
Mistfeather: young, light gray mare with alternating light pink and silver feathers, darker mane and tail.
Thunderhoof: Dark bay pinto colt with mix of dark blue and yellow feathers, 2 tall hind white socks.
Oakbrush: yearling. Liver chestnut colt with dark green feathers, and four tall stockings.
Moonflower: yearling. Delicate dark silver bay filly with powder blue feathers.
Heartsong: yearling. red roan filly with gold feathers, wide blaze, four socks.
Crystalwood: Light gray mare with mix of light blue, pink, and purple feathers, slightly darker mane and tail.
Hawkwing: Overstallion. Ruthless brown pinto with white feathers tipped in brown. (or whatever color hawk wings are hehehe see what I did there? hehe)
Cloudfire: Captain. Perlino stallion with dark purple feathers, thin blaze down face.
Aspenglade: Skyherder. Small, red dun mare with coral feathers and blaze.
(when I originally made these characters, I may or may have gone a bit overboardXD it was fun, though hehe)