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    Meadowleaf
    Jan 06, 2021

    Sorrows: part 1

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    Meadowleaf flew high into the sky, her deep green eyes blinking wildly. She needed to escape, the sorrow was overwhelming. The four year old mare had just watched her twin sister die. Her feathers matched the color of the clouds, a light orangeish pink. Suddenly they cramped, she began hurtling twards the ground. Meadowleaf became awear of the trees but her wings wouldnt move. She landed in the leafy canopy and passed out. when her eyes opened, the medican mare, Skyroot, was pooring water on her face. Skyroots voice rung in her ears. "Meadowleaf? Are you awake?" Meadowleaf groaned. " Can i PLEASE be alone for two seconds?!?" "As you wish, Your Magesty." Skyroot nickered and roled her eyes. " But not really. youve broken a leg and spranged both wings. you wont be going anywhere. I'll help you over to the medican nest though." Once Meadowleaf was in the nest, Skyroot trotted off." Stay put!" she whinnied over her sholder. Meadowleaf looked at the sky, greif in her eyes. She saw a shadow twisting around the trees. "Skyroot? Are you back already?" A pegasi burst through the trees. "Meadowleaf!" The bay stallion stood in front of her, his brown eyes twinkling. when he saw blood trickeling down her chest he gasped. "What. Did. You. Do." "Hi Duskfire! well, I-" "Never mind". Duskfire moved almost machanicly. He tore down some banannas from a nearby tree and went about peeling the leaves from them. he placed them on her wings and legs, which stopped throbbing in a few minutes. "I get back from my meeting only to find you broken." Duskfire said humerously. "Humph, well remember the time you cramped and fell during flight class?" Meadowleaf snickered. "AND the time when you broke your leg in a gopher hole? Careless, careless." Duskfire nickered. " where is Rosewind? I would expect her to be here." Meadowleaf cringed. "S-Shes, dead." She hung her head, the sorrow coming back. Duskfire's eyes widened."I-I'm sorry, I didnt know. I better get going. See you in the morning!" And with that Duskfire was gone.

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    Thats it for now! I would LOVE for some friendly pointers! this is my first fanfic so im really exited to see how you like it! (also tell me if you ship Duskleaf!)

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    Meadowleaf
    Jan 07, 2021

    Thanks Aspenray! I will try to check for spelling!

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    Aspenray
    Jan 07, 2021

    this is great! I think I ship Duskleaf but again to early to be sure also I suggest spell checking a little more. but that's just me.

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    Meadowleaf
    Jan 06, 2021

    THANK YOU!!!! i will try to remember the paragraphs River! and Rosewind died because she was sick. I didnt think of it being to early to tell:( now i'm rethinking Duskleaf..............XD new twist!!!!

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    Stormsun
    Jan 06, 2021

    OH! YAS! I LOVE IT! I think I might ship Duskleaf... but idk... to early to tell....eh...

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    Riverglade
    Jan 06, 2021

    AWESOME!!!! I would recommend putting a new paragraph whenever a new character speaks, just to make it easier to differentiate who's talking, but this is REALLY GOOD!!!!!

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    Iceberry
    Jan 06, 2021

    This is good!! I think I ship Duskleaf, but I'll have to read more. How did Rosewind die, though?

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