Ok....in the last part, lots of stuff happened: Lightmoon, Moonflight, Emberfall, Hawkstrike, Darkstone, and Mistsun were playing Hide and Seek, then Mistsun was caught trespassing, Darkstone tried to save her and he got caught too, so they were sent to Flame Herd, now Mistsun's leg is broken, Darkstone got hurt on his back, there in a cave and Sandsong comes in.
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Darkstone: He let out a little gasp.
And:
Moonflight (Star Herd): She pawed the ground, "I'm scared..." She nickered softly.
Swiftfeather (Flame Herd): "Orders, Ma'am?" She asked Foxcloud, her Sky Herder training kicking in.
Ok....and in Star Herd's and Frost Herd's borders, Twistflight and Cinderfrost are there, and they see Cinderfrost's dad.
And in Cloud Herd Lightbloom and Greyheart are racing.
(I think I did this right, but if I didn't, please tell me and I will make sure to do it right in the next one)
Lightbloom:
"We...we need to help our Herd....but were are every one else we were playing with?" Lightbloom looked around.
(Do you mean part 2? You wrote part 1)