Yay! Part 1! Ok, so the herds, not including Star Herd, are against Star Herd, they want the land. I can't really do a summary for this sense it's the first part, but ya! (You can still add characters to the character page if you want.)
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Moonflight (Star Herd):
She pawed the ground, "I'm scared..." She nickered softly.
Swiftfeather (Flame Herd):
"Orders, Ma'am?" She asked Foxcloud, her Sky Herder training kicking in.
(Hi! So I was wondering if I could get Foxcloud into this. Can Foxcloud be the one who cared for Sandsong after she was taken from Star Herd? So, Sandsong would think that Foxcloud and Flamewing were her parents? It would add a lot of drama to the story. @Cinderfrost (Sunblaze) @Echolake @Windfeather )
Darkstone:
He let out a little gasp.
Sandsong,
"Sure! I'm Almost a Yearling!" She replied.
(I gtg for the night, bye!)
Darkstone:
"Can I ask how old you are?"
(Could she be his sister that was kidnapped by Flame herd?)
Sandsong,
She flicked her wings, 'The other yearlings I don't like hanging out with, there all like, WAR THIS, STAR HERD THAT," she snorted,
Darkstone:
He gave a little laugh. She was like his little sister had been before she was kidnapped by Flame herd.
Sandsong,
"I dont wanna head back, it's soooooooooooooooo boriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggg"
Darkstone:
'You better get back, I don't want you in trouble." He said
Sandsong,
"That's alright!" She nickered, she looked at Hazleblade, "Anything I can do to help??!" She asked,
Hazleblade,
"I think your parents might realise your gone by now," he said, "You should get back to them,
Sandsong,
"Eh, they can wait!" She nickered.
Darkstone:
'I don't know."
Sandsong,
She lightly flicked her light green wings feeling sorry for Darkstone, "Whats it like there in Star Herd?" she asked.
Darkstone:
"Its fine I don't mind."
(Cool!)
Sandsong,
"I'm so sorry!" She nickered,
(He's 14 and turns 15 in one of the episodes)
Darkstone:
'It's fine. I was born with bad wings, I can fly but I have to have a running head start, and I can't fold my wings on my back so they get hurt getting dragged around, I think I proabaly broke some wing tip bones today."
(Cool, I'm guessin 14 if I remember right, so, the main chaercter is my age also!)
Sandsong,
"Thanks!" she nickered, she looked at his wings, and without thinking she asked, "What's wrong with your wings," "WAIT NO, I Don't mean it in a mean way! Sometimes my Mouth is faster than my head!"
Darkstone:
"Cool name."
(I think I prefer Rebels to Clone wars. It is more light and fun and very few episodes are dark, also the main character is my age)
(Alrighty)
(Thats really dificult to decide. I think Clone wars because Rebels talks about the Clone wars a lot, make sure you ask your parents first because some of the episodes in Clone wars are kinda dark)
Sandsong,
"Well, Hazleblade already said my name but I'll say it again, I'm Sandsong!"
(What star wars series should I watch first, clone wars or rebels?)
Darkstone:
'Thanks."
Sandsong,
"That's a really cool name!" she nickered,
Darkstone:
'I'm D Darkstone." He said softly, his voice almost a whisper.
Sandsong,
"it's alright," she nickered a little more calm,
Darkstone:
He stepped back quickly, a little nervously.
Sandsong,
"Hi! Who are you!" she asked, "YOu have to be from Star Herd, but, What's your name?" she asked talking quick.
Darkstone:
"Hello." he said, his large wings dragging as he walked toward the front of the cave.
Sandsong,
she snuck away from her boring parents, and headed off to where she heard there were two star herd foals, she spotted the cave on landed on the entrance, curiosity shone in her eyes,
Hazleblade,
"Sandsong, what are you doing here?" he asked, "You know your parents don't like it when you sneak off,"
Hazleblade,
he nodded slightly.
Darkstone:
His feelings were slightly hurt but he prettended he wasn't. "Ok."
Hazleblade,
"Not really," he nickered softly, not trying to be rude or anything like that.
Darkstone:
'You want to talk about it?"
Hazleblade,
He nodded slightly.
Darkstone:
"Did you have a childhood like mine?" He asked
Hazleblade,
He smiled kindly at Darkstone, before he returned his attention to outside, flicking his wings occasionally, "Well, that's good to hear," he said lightly,
Darkstone:
"I guess I do trust you a little." He said
Hazleblade,
He sighed softly, "I hope our herd is able to release the both of you soon," he nickered softly, truth be told, he hated seeing foals foalnapped, granted they crossed the border, but still.
Darkstone:
"I'll do what ever it takes to get her free." He said, he really did care for her and he knew the herd needed her back
Hazleblade,
"You tried to save her, that's what matters," he nickered gently,
Mistsun:
Her feathers ruffled and she twitched, still asleep.
Darkstone:
"I failed her. We are both caught now. What a real hero I am." He said sarcasticly
Hazleblade,
"I'm so sorry," he nickdred softly, "you were brave trying to save her," he nickered nodding at Mistsun.
Crystalflame:
She nuzzled Hazelblade, her brother. They had both lived a hard life.
Darkstone:
'Then I found friends. We were playing Hide and seek, the first game I had ever played when Mistsun got caught and I came to save her."
(Edited it some)
Hazleblade, He winced, "that must be rough," he nickered softly flexing his wings. "No one to ask for help, no one to talk to," he nickered softly, speaking about it as if he had lived something like that, which he had.
Skyflame flicked her ears back, "I can understand that one." she whispered quietly
Darkstone:
"It's life. I'm used to it. The reason I don't know the herd is because no one likes me....... not even my parents."
Hazleblade,
"I'm sorry about that," he nickered gently.
Darkstone:
He shook his head, "Nothing ever helps the pain in my wings."
Hazleblade,
He flicked his ears listening, "well, it will help with the pain," he nickered nodding at his wings and the wound on his hide.
Darkstone:
He took a small bite of Willow bark. "Doesn't taste bad."
Hazleblade,
He swished his tail back and forth lightly.
Darkstone:
"I don't trust easily." He said, standing slowly so that he wouldn't wake up Mistsun.
Hazleblade,
He nodded, "I understand your lack of trust," he nickered softly, then returned his gaze to outside the cave
Skyflame only nodded then turned back to the outside of the cave.
Darkstone:
"I don't trust you but I do respect you. Don't make me regret it." He said
Skyflame, "Think of us more as caretakers though. I would probably kill myself if I ever hurt a foal anyways. Even if I was told to." she stated keeping her voice level and calm even when talking about killing herself.
Hazleblade,
"Well, guard you and take care of the both of you, so if you ever need food or water, let us know," he nickered kindly.
Darkstone:
"And what are you guys here to do?"
Hazleblade,
He flicked his orange wings,
Darkstone:
"I don't know. I never asked her."
Skyflame nodded, "Do you know how old the filly, Mistsun right, is?"
Darkstone:
"I'm a yearling."
Skyflame looked back at them, "How old are you two anyways?" she asked calmly.
Darkstone:
He nodded, "Alright." He didn't trust them but they couldn't fake dying
Hazleblade,
"Here I'll prove it," he nickered biting a peice and swallowing it.
Skyflame stood up and walked over to them, she looked at the willow bark really studying it. She licked it once, "If I die in a little while then don't eat it. If I don't then it's safe to eat." she nickered quietly to the colt, then walked back up to the front of the cave, sat back down and looked out over the herd.
Darkstone:
"How do I know if I'm not being poisoned?"
Hazleblade,
"Cool name," he nickered, he glanced down at the untouched Willow Bark, "you know, that willow bark will really help with your pain," he nickered.
Darkstone:
"It's Darkstone."
Hazleblade,
"I'm Hazleblade," he nickered kindly, "and I'm guessing that you're Darkstar right?"
Darkstone:
He opened his eyes and spoke softly, "Who are you?"
Hazleblade,
He sighed lightly, then turned and headed deeper into the cave.
Darkstone:
He closed his eyes and made his breathing deepen, acting like he was asleep.
Hazleblade,
He looked back out at the herd.
Mistsun:
Her hide twitched as a fly buzzed close to her, but she stayed asleep.
Hazleblade,
He glanced at the two foals feeling sorry for them.
Skyflame flicked the flies away from her flanks with her tail, then looked back at the foals sleeping. She looked back taking a glance at Hazelblade then looked back to what was going on in the herd.
Hazleblade,
He landed he walked to the entrance of the cave then turned around looking out at the Herd as he stood, he glanced at Skyflame then quickly looked away.
Skyflame flew into the cave, trying to ignore how her ears were becoming warm because Hazelblade was around. She landed calmly in it and saw the two foals asleep already. She decided to lay down at the edge of the cave and watch the herd.
(I have to go now, bye!)
Hazleblade,
He nodded respectfully.
Skyflame nodded, "Of course ma'am." she told her simple and waited to see if Hazelblade had anything else to say.
Foxcloud:
She nods. โYou can also watch the foals if you like. They were trespassers from Star Herd. The filly is names Mistsun, and the male is named Darkstone. See if you can get Darkstone to chew on the willow tree bark, the medicine mare gave it to him to help with the pain.โ
Hazleblade,
He flew up beside Skywalker, "Same here," he nickeree softly.
Skyflame saw Foxcloud leave a cave and flew over to her, "I was supposed to be watching two foals ma'am. Flamewing told me to get the details from you." she told the lead mare kindly hovering a few feet away from her.
Darkstone:
He whispered to Mistsun, "I will never trust them."
Foxcloud:
โHazelblade and Ashflame, I want you to keep a guard on these foals. Make sure they donโt escape. Try to be kind, I want them to begin to trust us.โ She nickers.
Darkstone:
He layed his wing over Mistun hoping it would help her not to be cold
Mistsun:
She curled up next to Darkstone, shivering, though it was very hot outside.
Darkstone:
He walked, every step causing pain. He reached the cave and collapsed inside.
Summerlight:
She sighed and let go, nudging him to go forward.
Darkstone:
"Let's get this over with."
Summerlight:
She put him down, then bit into a different part of his wing.
Foxcloud:
Wincing at Darkstoneโs cry, she flew with Mistsunโs wing in her teeth to the cave. The cave looked like a normal Flame Herd cave, and she used red chalk to mark two lines at the front to show the cave was now occupied.
โThis is where you will be staying for the time being. I have already had some pegasi make it comfortable for you.โ The cave had only one entrance, and she lead the foals inside.
Darkstone:
He let out a short cut off cry of pain
Crystalflame:
"I....I....I won't," she didn't know what to say. Then she carefully grabbed Mistsun's wing.
Summerlight:
She gently bit into Darkstone's wing.