”Sunburst?” She called walking near the wall. She had not seen them go to Vine Herd, so she didn’t know the dangers that still lurked near the wall. Her new sleek muscular body made her feel powerful. Her hooves had been sharpened, and her mane and tail is sleek and shiny. And her favorite, her wings were stronger and slightly bigger. She had lost enough weight to fly like a normal Pegasi. “SunBurst?” She called uncertainly.
(ooof! Cinderwing flew away! He is no longer in the wall. We can either pretened her already caught her and dragged her with him or maybe she wanders into his territory...It will all make more sense once i post the Sequel part for this Rp.)
- The glade is pretty much empty, and the humans are probably wondering about what is going on. Some of them might be trying to raid Vine Herd to get more pegasi for the enclosure, while others might decide to wait for pegasi to come back.
- Flarewing is a good overstallion, but unlike Cinderwing, he is almost too lenient. He might allow some pegasi to do things that they shouldn’t. He is also probably afraid of the former Glade Herd pegasi rebelling against him. He is still very paranoid about pegasi going back to the enclosure, especially with his family.
- In Vine Herd, Sunburst was kind of the ‘heir’. Everyone expected that he would become overstallion one day. But now Citrusblaze is in the herd, and some pegasi are putting more faith in him. Citrusblaze was the one who dragged Cinderwing into the trap. Sunburst might feel somewhat threatened.
- The foals of Cinderwing are going to face a lot of bullying in Vine Herd, and since Flarewing is a lot more lenient, he won’t be able to stop it as easily.
@Riverglade (Yup! Moonbeam would agree with them. Honestly, I think she would prefer Citruswing. She doesn’t like being part of the ‘leader’s family’.)
"It is still possible that one day you will, but for now...Would you like to use a vine to tie them up?" He looked over at Flamefeather, Citrusblaze falshing through his mind...was the colt dead? And if so...Would that filly be ok?
He hated to think about it, but he wondered...For how long? He winced slightly as the medicine mare worked on him. He looked up at Sunburst weakly, "thank you...your trap was genius,"
She started to apply a poultice to Citrusblaze’s wounds.
Sunburst:
He was smiling slightly. ”Cinderwing is gone, you don’t have to worry anymore.” Now, he wasn’t the outsider anymore. He was the insider, the one that would help his friends get used to Vine Herd, like they had helped him get used to life in the glade.
He weakly lifted his head and for the first time got a glimpse of himself. He winced at the sight and lay his head back down focusing on each and every breath. He needed to slow his breathing to keep from bleeding out.
Clearpath:
He looked up at the over-stallion. This is what a good leader looks like. he looked around for Starsong.
He flew over the Vine and Glade Herd pegasi. “Cinderwing is gone.” He nickered. ”Anyone who wishes to join him can follow. Anyone who wants to stay in the Glade can. You are tree to make your own choice, but Vine Herd will always be open.”
SHe nodded. "I had to help Rosedrop get out, since CInderwing was trying to force her to stay, but now everyone's out." Her eyes took in CItrusblaze's injuries. "You need to see a medicine mare," She told him.
(So sorry i just disappeared. My internet just flat out died...)
Citrusblaze:
He tried to force a smile through the pain and asked, "The herd...did they make it out?"
Tidepelt:
He looked at the big world beyond the wall his eyes wide with wonder. He had been able to deal with the loss of his father even though the wound was still fresh. He let out a joyful neigh and pranced around in the tall, wild grass.
He and Sunburst set Citrusblaze down, then he flew above the wall and gazed at Cinderwing. "You'd better leave now, and stop harassing the members of my herd. Leave now, or I'll revoke my previous deal and send my soldiers after you." The setting sun caught his feathers and made them shimmer.
(I know this is pretty late, but what of CinderWing kidnaps someone the yearlings that tricked him all care about, and make both the captured and the yearlings feel powerless? Since I guess he likes that feeling? just a thought)
He didn't notice Rosedrop and he barreled towards the filly. He knew just by watching that Nasty colt (Citrusblaze) That he had a fascination with this filly!
Oh no... she thought. She flew back over the wall and went to help Rosedrop. "Hey, Cinderdummy!" She called, a mocking tone to her voice. "How does it feel to have your herd escape?"
”Perhaps it will, perhaps it won’t.” He gave Cinderwing a sold kick in the chest. “And that’s for hurting my son.” He grabbed Citrusblaze’s wing, and Sunburst grabbed the other. Together, they flew him over the wall, leaving Cinderwing in the mostly empty Glade where his herd once was.
SHe set Starsong down, then helped another Vine Herd pegasus carry Clearpath over the wall. SHe set him down, then waited for everyone else to go over the wall.
”I am Flarewing, leader of Vine Herd, and I am seizing control of your herd. I have heard things about you Cinderwing, and you don’t deserve to be a leader. Leave now and never come to Vine Herd lands, where my pegasi are ordered to kill you on sight.”
Sunburst:
He trotted over to Citrusblaze, and took some of his friend’s weight. “Everyone is flying over the wall.” He nickered. “We will carry you out.”
"Let's go," SHe said. They reached the wall. "Everyone who can fly, fly over the wall, those who can't can get carried. I'll stay behind to make sure that everyone gets over." She told the group, making sure her voice was loud enough for everyone to hear.
One of his captains came over to help him, and they pulled Cinderwing out. Another duo of captains gently lifted Citrusblaze out, trying to be careful.
His wings rattled as he released the colt's wings. He valued his life more then that, and he was offering him a get out of jail free card. he continued to let his hooves brush against the colts skin as he tried to get up, angling them so they would cut the deepest.
Clearpath:
"We don't have much time," He let out a loud neigh calling the steeds of Glade heard to freedom.
He let out an angry neigh and gripped Citrusblaze's wing and mumbled through the feathers, "Stand down, or i break this colts wing!"
Citrusblaze:
HE tensed up slightly but had been prepared for this. He looked at the overstallion and shook his head. Don't back down. He thought. Maybe through his pain, generations to come wouldn't have to go through this...
(hiiii)
(Posted the Sequel RP Character Page!)
(Welp here goes nothing 🥲)
OakLight:
”Sunburst?” She called walking near the wall. She had not seen them go to Vine Herd, so she didn’t know the dangers that still lurked near the wall. Her new sleek muscular body made her feel powerful. Her hooves had been sharpened, and her mane and tail is sleek and shiny. And her favorite, her wings were stronger and slightly bigger. She had lost enough weight to fly like a normal Pegasi. “SunBurst?” She called uncertainly.
(What should I do with OakLight and HoneyLemon? I kinda want something to happen to them not gonna lie XD)
(back!!!)
(gtg :( will be back in around an hour)
Ideas for the Sequel:
- The glade is pretty much empty, and the humans are probably wondering about what is going on. Some of them might be trying to raid Vine Herd to get more pegasi for the enclosure, while others might decide to wait for pegasi to come back.
- Flarewing is a good overstallion, but unlike Cinderwing, he is almost too lenient. He might allow some pegasi to do things that they shouldn’t. He is also probably afraid of the former Glade Herd pegasi rebelling against him. He is still very paranoid about pegasi going back to the enclosure, especially with his family.
- In Vine Herd, Sunburst was kind of the ‘heir’. Everyone expected that he would become overstallion one day. But now Citrusblaze is in the herd, and some pegasi are putting more faith in him. Citrusblaze was the one who dragged Cinderwing into the trap. Sunburst might feel somewhat threatened.
- The foals of Cinderwing are going to face a lot of bullying in Vine Herd, and since Flarewing is a lot more lenient, he won’t be able to stop it as easily.
(lol I've barely been paying attention in my class, I've just been writing a new fanfic XD))
(I gtg)
(Should we do another time skip to a few days later soon?)
Starsong
she smiled back but it was clearly forced
Clearpath:
He nodded offering the filly a small smile.
Starsong
”Thank you, Clearpath.”
Clearpath:
"Me either," He muttered tightening the vine and stepping back, her wings not tucked to her sides with the vine. He looked at Flamefeather.
FLamefeather:
SHe smiled. "I can't believe it actually worked," SHe said.
Clearpath:
"We are free. You yearlings did a wonderful job," He said then began to wrap Starsongs wings. He wouldn't mention Citrusblaze until she did.
Flamefeather:
SHe walked over to Clearpath and Starsong. "How are you guys?" She asked them.
Starsong
”Yes please.”
Clearpath:
"It is still possible that one day you will, but for now...Would you like to use a vine to tie them up?" He looked over at Flamefeather, Citrusblaze falshing through his mind...was the colt dead? And if so...Would that filly be ok?
FLamefeather:
She checked on the steeds, and made sure no one was injured.
Starsong
”They’re useless, I’m never gonna be able to fly, am I?”
Clearpath:
He looked at his own wings and then at hers, "Your wings are beautiful."
Starsong:
She looked at Clearpath
FLamefeather:
SHe walked through the herd, checking on everyone.
Citrusblaze:
He hated to think about it, but he wondered...For how long? He winced slightly as the medicine mare worked on him. He looked up at Sunburst weakly, "thank you...your trap was genius,"
Med Mare:
She started to apply a poultice to Citrusblaze’s wounds.
Sunburst:
He was smiling slightly. ”Cinderwing is gone, you don’t have to worry anymore.” Now, he wasn’t the outsider anymore. He was the insider, the one that would help his friends get used to Vine Herd, like they had helped him get used to life in the glade.
Starsong:
"I hate my stupid wings."
Clearpath:
He heard her and walked over, "We are free," He breathed, "Are you ok?"
Starsong:
"I wish I didnt even have wings!"
FLamefeather:
"I'm going to go check on everyone," SHe told Citrusblaze.
Citrusblaze:
He clenched his teeth and nickered weakly.
Sunburst:
He flew with the Vine Herd medicine mare back to Citrusblaze. “This is ____root. She is our medicine mare.”
Med Mare:
She looked over Citrusblaze’s wounds, and gathered a few herbs.
Starsong:
"Stupid useless wings! I hate you!" she sobbed, glaring at her wings. She wanted to fly so badly
Citrusblaze:
He weakly lifted his head and for the first time got a glimpse of himself. He winced at the sight and lay his head back down focusing on each and every breath. He needed to slow his breathing to keep from bleeding out.
Clearpath:
He looked up at the over-stallion. This is what a good leader looks like. he looked around for Starsong.
Flarewing:
He flew over the Vine and Glade Herd pegasi. “Cinderwing is gone.” He nickered. ”Anyone who wishes to join him can follow. Anyone who wants to stay in the Glade can. You are tree to make your own choice, but Vine Herd will always be open.”
FLamefeather:
"Yes," She said. "But you're not."
Starsong;
She tried to lift her wings, hoping that maybe today she'd be able to lift her wings again. She couldn't and the pain in them grew worse. She winced
Citrusblaze:
His breathing quickened and came in large puffs as he nodded, "E-everyone...ok?"
Flamefeather:
SHe nodded. "I had to help Rosedrop get out, since CInderwing was trying to force her to stay, but now everyone's out." Her eyes took in CItrusblaze's injuries. "You need to see a medicine mare," She told him.
(So sorry i just disappeared. My internet just flat out died...)
Citrusblaze:
He tried to force a smile through the pain and asked, "The herd...did they make it out?"
Tidepelt:
He looked at the big world beyond the wall his eyes wide with wonder. He had been able to deal with the loss of his father even though the wound was still fresh. He let out a joyful neigh and pranced around in the tall, wild grass.
FLamefeather:
SHe flew over the wall, and landed next to CItrusblaze. "Are you ok?" SHe asked him, her expression worried.
OakLight:
”Want to meet our new herd?” She asked ForestFire. “We can go meet people,”
ForestFire:
”Yes, this is your treat for doing a fine job training,” he said, nodding
Rosedrop:
She landed, walking over to Starsong.
Clearpath:
He sighed a big sigh of relief, not yet seeing the damage done to Citrusblaze. The herd was free. They were all free!
Starsong:
She hoped everyone had made it out of the enclosure safely.
Creekfire:
He rolled around in the grass, "FREEDOM!" he whinnied joyfully
Citrusblaze:
He clenched his teeth and shut his eyes tight, his left side burning with pain and matted in blood, his right sticky with tar and honey.
Cindrwing:
His eyes flashed in a murderous rage and he flew off, disappearing into the distance.
(I'll go type out the sequel. I think we should finish closing this part off first though before we actually start the next one.)
OakLight:
She pricked her ears and heard others coming. She looked to see what all the commotion was about
Flarewing:
He and Sunburst set Citrusblaze down, then he flew above the wall and gazed at Cinderwing. "You'd better leave now, and stop harassing the members of my herd. Leave now, or I'll revoke my previous deal and send my soldiers after you." The setting sun caught his feathers and made them shimmer.
(I know this is pretty late, but what of CinderWing kidnaps someone the yearlings that tricked him all care about, and make both the captured and the yearlings feel powerless? Since I guess he likes that feeling? just a thought)
Cinderwing:
His eyes full of fury he bolted towards her his blood red wings flashing in the setting sun.
(Gtg! See you tomorrow?)
Flamefeather:
She calmly leapt out of the way just before Cinderwing crashed into her. "You didn't answer my question, dummy," she taunted.
Cinderwing:
He didn't notice Rosedrop and he barreled towards the filly. He knew just by watching that Nasty colt (Citrusblaze) That he had a fascination with this filly!
Rosedrop;
She flew toward the wall
Flamefeather:
"Go," she told Rosedrop.
Rosedrop:
"RUN FLAMEFEATHER!" she screamed, leaping into the air
Cinderwing:
He looked up and took off towards the Yearling...The difference between the Mare and the filly is that the filly will get no mercy!
Flamefeather:
Oh no... she thought. She flew back over the wall and went to help Rosedrop. "Hey, Cinderdummy!" She called, a mocking tone to her voice. "How does it feel to have your herd escape?"
Rosedrop:
"Neither."
Cinderwing:
"So!" He sneered, "What will it be?"
Rosedrop:
Her eyes widened and she wrapped her wings around her stomach, wanting to protect her unborn foal.
Cinderwing:
He stood over her, no mercy in his cold eyes, "You either join me! Or i kill you!"
Rosedrop:
Her wings cramped and she went plummeting to earth, she hadn't gotten over the wall
Cinderwing:
He growled knowing that unless he went over the wall...there was no catching her now!
Rosedrop:
She leaped into the air and flew toward the wall
Cinderwing:
It was a race to the wall! if she made it out... So be it! If not, She was stuck!
Flamefeather:
She looked around for any other pegasi, then flew over the wall.
Rosedrop:
She heard hoof beats behind her and ran faster
Cinderwing:
HE spotted the mare and ran after her.
(I gtg for the night)
Rosedrop:
She ran toward the wall, planning to leave the enclosure
Citrusblaze:
He moaned slightly as they took off, pain burning on his left side.
Cinderwing:
He growled and walked around the enclosure, looking for any one left.
Flarewing:
”Perhaps it will, perhaps it won’t.” He gave Cinderwing a sold kick in the chest. “And that’s for hurting my son.” He grabbed Citrusblaze’s wing, and Sunburst grabbed the other. Together, they flew him over the wall, leaving Cinderwing in the mostly empty Glade where his herd once was.
(I talked to Sky and she said that since she was barely on this one, that I could be in charge of the "Sequel" Rp if any of you are interested.)
(oof gtg :( will be back on my phone soon as possible)
Starsong:
Tears of pain filled her eyes, she hated that she couldn't fly. Her wings still hurt
Citrusblaze:
"Thank you," he nickered weakly. It had worked. The herd was safe.
Cinderwing:
He growled, "THis will not be the last you see of me!"
Clearpath:
He looked up...Please make it.
FLamefeather:
SHe set Starsong down, then helped another Vine Herd pegasus carry Clearpath over the wall. SHe set him down, then waited for everyone else to go over the wall.
Flarewing:
”I am Flarewing, leader of Vine Herd, and I am seizing control of your herd. I have heard things about you Cinderwing, and you don’t deserve to be a leader. Leave now and never come to Vine Herd lands, where my pegasi are ordered to kill you on sight.”
Sunburst:
He trotted over to Citrusblaze, and took some of his friend’s weight. “Everyone is flying over the wall.” He nickered. “We will carry you out.”
Starsong:
She winced, her wings on fire with pain
FLamefeather:
SHe grabbed one of Starsong's wings, and a Vine Herd pegasus grabbed the other wing, and she flew Starsong over the wall.
Citrusblaze:
He let out a painfilled cry and then slumped into their grip.
Cinderwing:
He sneered and growled, but didn't fight it happy at the sound of the colts pain...
Clearpath:
He opened his wings but knew he couldn't fly.
Vine Herd Pegasi-
They helped carry other pegasi over the wall.
Starsong:
She glanced at her useless wings. "I-I need to be carried."
Flamefeather:
"Let's go," SHe said. They reached the wall. "Everyone who can fly, fly over the wall, those who can't can get carried. I'll stay behind to make sure that everyone gets over." She told the group, making sure her voice was loud enough for everyone to hear.
Flarewing:
One of his captains came over to help him, and they pulled Cinderwing out. Another duo of captains gently lifted Citrusblaze out, trying to be careful.
Starsong:
She nodded.
Cinderwing:
His wings rattled as he released the colt's wings. He valued his life more then that, and he was offering him a get out of jail free card. he continued to let his hooves brush against the colts skin as he tried to get up, angling them so they would cut the deepest.
Clearpath:
"We don't have much time," He let out a loud neigh calling the steeds of Glade heard to freedom.
Citrusblaze:
He clenched his teeth wincing with every sting...
FLamefeather:
"There you are!" SHe called to CLearpath. "Starsong was about to look for you. Let's go now!" SHe said, leading them toward the wall.
Flarewing:
He had a different deal in mind. “How about if you leave that colt alone, you will face banishment instead of the brutal death you deserve.”
Cinderwing:
He let out an angry neigh and gripped Citrusblaze's wing and mumbled through the feathers, "Stand down, or i break this colts wing!"
Citrusblaze:
HE tensed up slightly but had been prepared for this. He looked at the overstallion and shook his head. Don't back down. He thought. Maybe through his pain, generations to come wouldn't have to go through this...
Flarewing:
He dodged Cinderwing’s teeth, and hit the overstallion in the head with a sharpened stick that had been connected to the first net.
Clearpath:
He walked out of the trees towards the yearlings.
Starsong:
"You guys go, I'm gonna look for him."
FLamefeather:
SHe looked at Starsong. "DO we have to look for him?"
Cinderwing:
"This colt will die!" If only he could get to his hooves! He tried to bite the Steeds leg to pull him down.
Citrusblaze:
He looked up at the over-stallion, his side burning as blood ozzed down the side off it.
Sunburst:
He didn’t follow Flamefeather. He would wait it out, and stick by his father.
Starsong:
"where's Clearpath? I thought he was coming with us."
Flarewing:
“Leave the colt alone!” He bit Cinderwing’s wing, and gave it a sharp tug, trying to pull him up.
FLamefeather:
SHe motioned for the other yearlings to follow her as she led them to the wall.
Clearpath:
He shut his eyes...Citrusblaze...You have done well...