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    Nightmist(old)
    May 26, 2020
      ·  Edited: May 26, 2020

    Domination RP: Part 44 ❤️❤️❤️

    in HERD CHAT

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    Seaglade:

    He nodded. ”I love you. There’s no erasing that now,” he whispered, nuzzling her.


    Vida:

    "I wish you wouldn't have to deal with the pain of us being seporated when you die."


    Seaglade:

    ”I think it would hurt you more than me, Vida. That’s why I hate the idea in the first place,” he snorted.


    Summary:

    Brokenfire and his spies Ivyspring, Aspenwillow, and Oakheart have captured Frayan, and left Starstrike to die in the Trap. Some of our ships have been sailing, too! :D Otherwise, I’m not entirely sure much else has happened....


    HOORAY!!!! :D Six more parts and we’re halfway to 100!!!! :D

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    May 26, 2020

    Spottedwind,

    She stretched out her wings, then brought them back in, and laid down,

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Vida:

    "It will hurt and when ever the ancesters migrate I will look for your feathers in the sky." She said

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    Nightmist(old)
    May 26, 2020

    Seaglade:

    Seaglade gritted his teeth together, grinding them. ”I don’t want you to. I mean- I do, because I love you, but I don’t want you to be stuck on me for the rest of your forever,” he said. ”I want you to find new love, new friends, that sort of thing.”

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    Echolake
    May 26, 2020

    Caita stood up and laid her head under his, "I mean, is why did you choose me out of all the other mares in this world?" she whispered to him.

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Vida:

    "I cant do that Seaglade." She said softly.


    Windborn:

    "Because none of the other mares suited me." He said wrapping ehr in his wings. "You are perfect for me

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    Nightmist(old)
    May 26, 2020

    Seaglade:

    He snorted, tossing his head. ”Too bad, beause that is my wish for you. If you do not follow it, you will make me upset,” he snorted, half joking, but completely serious on the inside.

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Vida:

    "You will be to dead to care." She said.

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    Nightmist(old)
    May 26, 2020

    Seaglade:

    He stamped his hoof. ”The Ancestor’s I won’t! I will always love you, Vida. I will never forget this wish!” He insisted.

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Vida:

    She placed a wing tip on his cheek gently and looked into his eyes. "I love you Seaglade but you really should have forgotten me."

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    Nightmist(old)
    May 26, 2020

    ( BRB, gotta eat dinner! )

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    (Ok)

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    Echolake
    May 26, 2020

    Caita, "But you could have had someone who could help you deal with your past better than me, or someone who didn't already have a foal for you take care of if something ever happened to them. You could have lived a happier life without me in it." she protested then saw a flash of cream feathers and brindle go under her. She peaked her head down and saw Tideflight under her, just barely having to crouch, she laughed softly to him.


    Tideflight, "Family cuddle time!" he nickered getting out from under her legs and wrapping his wings around her legs cuddling close to her.

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    May 26, 2020

    Spottedwind,

    Her eyes slowly fluttered closed, and she fell asleep. Spottedwind soon found herself encased in a dream.


    (Dream)

    Ravenfrost dragged his wing on his face, "Seriously Spottedwind, why, just why are you like this!" he grumbled,

    Spottedwind's body trembled, "I-I, Star foals, are just amazing and deserve to be treated nice," she nickered quietly.

    "Really Spottedwind! They aren't like us normal pegasi!" Wildstrike retorted.

    "Y-Yes they are! They were just born with powers!" Spottedwind replied.

    "Then I guess you have no problem, getting close to them as a spy!" Ravenfrost said.

    Spottedwind backed away shaking her head, "No, I won't do it,"

    "Yes you will," Ravenfrost said.

    Wildstrike trotted up to Spottedwind, he towered over her, "You will do it Spottedwind!" he brayed.

    Spottedwind shook her head, "No, I won't, I can't!" she whinnied.

    Like lightning, Wildstrike, lashed out his sharpened hoof, against Spottedwind's side.

    Spottedwind screamed, "I still won't do it!"

    Wildstrike snorted, "Pathetic, you are such a weakling, showing so, so many signs of weakness!" lashing out again, a bit lower than his first cut.

    Spottedwind bit back a scream of pain, and slowly nodded, "F-fine I'll do it." she whimpered.

    Wildstrike snorted, "Good,"

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Estrel:

    He had tried hard but couldn't sleep he watched Spottedwind sleep hoping she had pleasant dreams.


    Windborn:

    "I would rather have you than any other mare in the world Caita."

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    (Question time! Why aren't wild pegasi stallions like wild horse stallions with a whole brood of mares?)

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    Echolake
    May 26, 2020

    (Uhhh, Am I supposed to know this...?? XD)


    Caita laid her head on his chest, "Thanks." she whispered to him wrapping her wing around Tideflight who nickered happily to her.

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    (Im just wondering if someone can tell me. I dont know!!!)

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    Echolake
    May 27, 2020

    @Windfeather (Cause their calmer and more tamed in generally...?? Or at least that is what I would think since they are technically fictional things, so they aren't really meant to be super wild...?? Idk really!! XD)

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    May 26, 2020

    Spottedwind,

    (Later in Dream)

    She flew wincing at pain in her side, soon landing back where her brother held camp, she landed quietly, and trotted over to her brother Ravenfrost, "I'm back," she nickered quietly.

    Ravenfrost lashed his tail and turned around, "Well," he nickered.

    "I haven't got where they are heading," she said quietly,

    "What!" he seethed taking deep breaths to calm himself but to no avail. "You didn't get where they were heading!"

    Spottedwind trembled, "N-No," she stuttered,

    "You worthless, loving filly!" Ravenfrost brayed,

    She trembled, her brother had used these terms about her before.

    Ravenfrost dragged his wing agross his face, "You're the reason mother died, Now GO BACK AND DO YOUR JOB!"

    She winced, tears sprang in her eyes, as she turned around and kicked off to the sky, her tears fell freely, inside and outside of her dream

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    Riverbreeze
    May 26, 2020

    Ivyspring:

    She recoiled back as she watched the colt turn into mist and literally run though Brokenfire. "That's impossible..." She muttered, then watched him crash into a tree with a huge thud. He slid to the ground and Ivyspring cautiously landed next to Brokenfire.

    Keeping one eye on the downed colt, she looked up to her leader, and shrugged, "I don't know. He hit the tree pretty hard, but he's also just water vapor, which still baffles me how he could accomplish such a thing." She said quietly, tensing her muscles and flaring her wings.


    Anblick:

    He felt heat rising into his ears and his heart skipped a beat. "N-No, I'm serious, Silren. St-tand up!" He fumbled to say, smiling sheepishly, but when she didn't immediately rise, he extended his wings around her shoulders and neck and manually pulled her up to face him.


    Thea:

    She giggled and narrowed her eyes playfully, "Oh, puh-lease." She snapped, rolling her eyes and flicking her tail. "She didn't give you brains-that's for sure." Thea challenged, pointing at his forehead and smirking.

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    Ashsong
    May 27, 2020

    Frayan:

    Frayan clutched his head with his wings, trying to stop the swaying of everything him. He looked up, realizing he was trapped as the big stallion, Brokenfire, stood before him. He rested his head back, his sides heaving as a heavy throbbing flooded into his head.

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    Windfeather
    May 26, 2020

    Windborn:

    "This is my home." He whispered softly. "You two are my home." He wrapped them in his long wings

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    Cinderfrost (Sunblaze)
    May 27, 2020

    Spottedwind,

    Tears slowly trickled down her face outside her dream

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