This is just a sample of the full produced and @Thunderblaze i'm still working on it I hope i don't take to long! hope you like it!!
Morningsun was in the meadow grazing, and nobody was with her. But Jetflame came flying in the sky. She looked up, “Hi jet!” she cantered up into the sky. “Hey morningsun!It’s time for training! We have the same thing today: Flying drills! But if you can handle it?” he said teasingly. “Yes I can!” she huffed “We’ll see ‘about that' ' he rolled his eyes then flew to the training field near feather lake, and morningsun followed.
“Jetflame morningsun your late!” yelled there captain featherfire “Sorry” morningsun nickered “We lost track of time” Apologized jetflame “And morning was a slow flyer” he looked at morningsun. She glared back and kicked him in the leg. “Ouch” whispered jetflame He bit back his scream but acted cool “You kick like a filly” laughed jet “Then what are you because fillys can kick better that a colt”.
“Stop this and get to your positions and this time in the front!” commanded featherfire. He knew that everybody hated being in the front because that’s when the captains call you out and make the weakest cry.
I like it! Ever since I wrote what I want you to write, I've been wanting to write my version of it, but I've been holding back because it's your job. So far it's great and I cant wait to see how you finish it! Thanks Embermoon!
So what do we do? I didn't rlly understand the prologue
I just want to know if it's good. also it's a little sneak peak or something XD
I like it! Ever since I wrote what I want you to write, I've been wanting to write my version of it, but I've been holding back because it's your job. So far it's great and I cant wait to see how you finish it! Thanks Embermoon!
I'm so glad you like it!