Here's my sister's story part 3. She can't wait to hear what you guys think! By the way, she typed it too.
The moment Starleaf heard the words, she knew something weird was about to happen. Suddenly, she just dropped. When she hit the ground, it was like she just fell asleep. Then she saw an image. It was of Star and Morningleaf and some foal. Then, there was her. They were separated by a wall of fire.
"Bumblebush!" she heard herself crying. So that was the foal's name. She tried going over the fire, but it did no good. She could not fly that high at the time. She had just been born. Then Star and Morningleaf toke off carrying Bumblebush on there backs. The fire was getting closer. Then in the nick of time, the Spring Herd patrol found her and picked her leaving the fire in the dust. Then she woke up.
Moonmist, their medicine mare, was looking at her.
Then she said "There seems to be nothing wrong with you. You just experienced a slight shock, nothing to severe. You can go now."
"You ready to go home?" Star neighed.
"I think I am," Starleaf whinnied back. "Just let me say good bye."
She walked over to Hazelfrost and nuzzled him.
"I'm going to miss you," Starleaf said.
"Same here," Hazelfrost said. "Except the fact that I get all your sweet spring grass." Starleaf laughed. "Of course that's what you say. Goodbye, I'll miss you."
Then they were off. They were silent the whole way. Until they landed.
Then the foal she saw in her vision came up to her and said, "You're back! You're back! Did you miss me?"
"Sweetie, she might not remember," It was Morningleaf. Then all of a sudden the feather in her hair, the one that had always been there, started glowing. There was one in Bumblebush's hair too. It got really bright, then everything got quiet.