Haha great job soul sis (BLINK BLINK BLINK BLINKITY BLINK [INSIDE JOKE] thats rlly sispicious). And no worries, but you can edit the posts you make. I'm already loving this story! Please write more :D
dawn rose through the clouds and closer to the golden horizon the wind muffling against her thin long main. on her right wing flew nightdust and duskwing who were shoving each other playfully and then doing flips in the air, then when they noticed her flew over with a grin. in the sky there was nothing to worry about and nobody to worry about at that . suddenly she stopped looking In a frantic circle around herself eyes wide. "ECHOMOOM!!!!"she tried to shout but all that came out was air that she was loosing fast. when she said "nobody to worry about" she forgot that she was usually jinxed. Just then wings tapped her on the head "rar" echomoon laughed and called happily as dawn reared forward. dawn stopped and erupted hysterically at her mistake followed by her friends and then suddenly her lungs tightened she was out of air she neighed at her friends for help but they ignored her and then she tumbled at a high altitude down toward the forest before everything turned black. she woke to dull dark drown and still couldn't breathe, she got up quickly panting and then snarled "SERIOUSLY" she whispered to pecockferns long, thick, colourful tail that had just draped itself over her muzzle. all he did was snore and she snickered a little laugh. apart from just suffocating halfway through that was the best dream dawn had ever had, one without war, fighting, sadness and most importantly for dawn ....one were she wasn't a dud.
Haha great job soul sis (BLINK BLINK BLINK BLINKITY BLINK [INSIDE JOKE] thats rlly sispicious). And no worries, but you can edit the posts you make. I'm already loving this story! Please write more :D
thanks guys XD I loved writing it
AWESOMENESSSSSSSSSS
But sad too..
This is pretty good!!
I suck at editing soz XD
"ECHOMOON" I meant soz XD
THE DREAM chapter1
dawn rose through the clouds and closer to the golden horizon the wind muffling against her thin long main. on her right wing flew nightdust and duskwing who were shoving each other playfully and then doing flips in the air, then when they noticed her flew over with a grin. in the sky there was nothing to worry about and nobody to worry about at that . suddenly she stopped looking In a frantic circle around herself eyes wide. "ECHOMOOM!!!!"she tried to shout but all that came out was air that she was loosing fast. when she said "nobody to worry about" she forgot that she was usually jinxed. Just then wings tapped her on the head "rar" echomoon laughed and called happily as dawn reared forward. dawn stopped and erupted hysterically at her mistake followed by her friends and then suddenly her lungs tightened she was out of air she neighed at her friends for help but they ignored her and then she tumbled at a high altitude down toward the forest before everything turned black. she woke to dull dark drown and still couldn't breathe, she got up quickly panting and then snarled "SERIOUSLY" she whispered to pecockferns long, thick, colourful tail that had just draped itself over her muzzle. all he did was snore and she snickered a little laugh. apart from just suffocating halfway through that was the best dream dawn had ever had, one without war, fighting, sadness and most importantly for dawn ....one were she wasn't a dud.