Meadowlake woke up to a bright, sunlit meadow. Like her name. She yawned and stood up, stumbling. Her back felt sore and injured, she remembered! Wolves had attacked her and Shadowstar. Meadowlake thought about Windherd and their black foal. She ran up to Riversky, her mother and asked her, ”Mama, were does Lakeherd live and why did the wolves break the truce?”. Riversky sighed thinking why was her weanling so inquisitive, ”My daughter, Lakeherd lives in the interior of Anok and none of us know why they broke the truce”. Meadowlake ran to Shadowstar, her best friend and the black foal. Meadowlake nickered a greeting and grazed next to Shadow, softly chewing lush grass. Shadow looked up and saw Meadowlake. Shadow sighed” I have to go see Treeroot” she said glumly. ”Ok, i’ll follow” Meadowlake whinnyed.
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Sorry its short!-Oceansun
i might do a contest soon about this series:Forbidden foals
Ty
This is great!
http://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/guest-book/writing-tips
jgracew421 made a post for that
Could anyone post writing techniques? Or like how to write good?
Lol
It was fabulous!
Yeah I was sort of confused there
I updated the post:D forgot Hearthwood is shadowstars mother not meadowlakes lol i changed Hearthstone to Riversky
Thanks you!:D
this is still awesome!! length doesn't really matter