Flash whinnied in happiness as he and his boy Jack flew through the finish line, made out of the top of two tall trees. The crowd cheered, and Jack whooped. He hugged the stallion's gray and white neck, smiling. "You did it Flash. We won." Flash nickered, and flew towards the crowd. He hovered above them, rearing. Flash splayed his wings, and whinnied as loud as possible. He was used to winning. So was the crowd, but they never stopped enjoying it. Flash and Jack were rookies, but undefeated. For both of them, racing was life. They would never stop loving it.
Flash glided down to the Winner's Circle, and landed. Jack dismounted, and one by one the crowd stroked Flash and congratulated Jack. After everyone had seen them, Jack's best friend, Anna, hugged him. "You did great," she whispered. Jack smiled. "Thanks." Anna looked at him. "I'll get you one day!" "We'll see about that." Jack answered. Flash nickered. The two always joked around.
"How's Winter doing?" Jack asked. a
Anna shrugged. "She's doing good, but i have a feeling she's going to have twins." Flash perked his ears. He forgot his mare was with foal. Anna and Winter were racers too, but last month's last race was their last. Winter was getting closer and closer to having her foal. But Flash was excited. He was going to be a sire.
Jack nodded. "It will be nice if she does. That way we dont have to argue on who is getting the foal." Anna nodded. "Yeah. Well I better go, or Winter will be angry." Jack laughed. "I better go too. Or else Flash is going to get impatient." He turned around to look at the stallion, who was pinning his ears. Jack laughed again. "See you later?" he asked Anna. "Yep, see you."
Jack mounted Flash, who took flight right away, anxious to get home to rest and eat. In only a few minutes, the two were half way home. Suddenly Jack screamed. "Rock!" Flash turned, seeing a rock flying towards him. He ducked, dodging it. Flash perked his ears, hearing wingbeats. Jack turned and gasped. Flash turned his head to look behind him, noticing a group of riders and pegasi. Suddenly the lead rider shot a rock at Flash and Jack, with a rope tied to two weird shaped branches. Flash ducked his head again, but was to late. He gasped as a stabbing pain shot through his head. He wings collapsed to his sides, and the last thing Flash knew was he was falling, and Jack screaming. "Fly! Flash! FLY!"
(By the way guys, I kind of ditched Ocean Herd. Sorry.. but I just lost interest in it. And also, I really hope im not copying Jasper Pony with this racing stuff)
I was to... DO NOT DITCH OCEAN HERD!!!!!!! OR I'LL DIE!!!!! By the way pretty good story.
Sorry..
R.I.P. Ocean Herd
man i was looking forward to chapter 10...
Btw Flash:
Age: 8
Gender: Stallion
Coat: Gray paint
Mane and Tail: Dark gray
Feathers: Deep purple tipped in bluish-yellow
Markings: Star on forehead
Mate: Winter
Winter:
Age: 7
Gender: Mare
Coat: White
Mane and Tail: White
Feathers: Very light aqua
Mate: Flash
And Jack has tan colored skin with black hair
Thanks, and ya that's what I thought about Ocean Herd lol
This story is great
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!