So I am creating and book but don't know if I should keep it. It looks dopy and boring so I'm thinking of erasing it. What do you think I should do for this? Plz comment. This is the book-
Chapter 1
A New Life
I’m a Pegasus. My name is Macy, I’m two years old. I am a pretty blue roan with blueish grayish wings! My huge crush is on a Pegasus Jaden! He’s a Palomino with white wings, he’s three. He doesn’t seem to notice me but I sure notice him a lot! I live with my herd in a tree grove! I love it here!! I walk through the grove and see Jaden with his family. He’s playing with his little sisters. I watch and watch and watch until he looks over to me and I quickly duck away. I walk to the shore of the ocean. I splash around in the water. I notice a shadow on the beach and turn to see Jaden.
“H-hey,” I say, blushing, “W-what are you doing here?” I ask him. He smiles and blushes.
“I came to hangout with you. Mind?” He asks me, gesturing towards the ocean.
It looks cool. Keep in mind that that the first chapter, you are setting up. (At least in my experience) The first chapter is never going to be as exciting as say the chapter right in the middle of the book. I think you are doing really good and I would love to see how it goes!
Cool!
It's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah I think you should post these in chapters