ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Echomoon
    Oct 30, 2018

    TGH Mary Sue/Gary Stu kinda thing

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    For those of you who don't know what a Mary Sue or Gary Stu is, it's basically a really, incredibly really overpowered character that has all the cliches: tragic past; dead parents/siblings; "special snowflake" tendencies. Gary Stu is the guy version and Mary Sue is the girl version. This post is just a trollfic for everyone to have a laugh at because it's so stupid XD


    CHARACTERS:

    Name: GALAXYBURST

    Gender: MARE

    Age: 102&2727299192827363638282817263787362517283645 but looks and sounds like a 16 year old in human years

    Role: GODDESS OF ANOK

    Herd: SHE IS THE GODDESS KF ALL THE HERDS

    Description: Bright White mare with rainbow mane and tail and rainbow eyes. Her wings are white but are tipped in rainbow. She has extremely strong starfire (even though she isn't the black foal), so strong that she can basically open her mouth at someone and the starfire will engulf them, either killing them or healing them. Did I mention her starfire is rainbow coloured? And that she can bring back long-gone pegasushis from the dead?! THATS HOW SRRONG HER STARFIRE IS CUZ SHES ABSOLUTLY PRFECTTTTTTTTTTTTT IN EVRY SINGL WAY POSSIBLEH


    Name: Lakefeather

    Gender: Mare

    Age: 2 years

    Role: Lead Mare's daughter, but she will fight you

    Herd: Desert Herd

    Description: Small White mare. Her wings are white, and her mane and tail are grey. Her eyes are blue. She has dark points on her legs and muzzle.

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    Love Those Cats
    Mar 16, 2019

    Galaxyburst sounds scarry. I wouldn’t wany to meet her in a dark alley.....

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    Echomoon
    Mar 18, 2019
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    xD that's the point, I seriously doubt anyone would... what an abomination

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    Scipio
    Mar 16, 2019

    XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!

    The Warriors canon chracters and non-canon has a lot of these. -cough- in the later series after like the first or first two Firestar. Hmmmm Spottedleaf. Dovewing.....

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    Scipio
    Mar 17, 2019
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    @Love Those Cats Yep. Jayfeather was my fav out of all of them

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    Dragon
    Mar 17, 2019
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    @Scipio same, and I think, since of course he's blind, he should have been able to keep his powers

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    Love Those Cats
    Mar 18, 2019
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    @Scipio Jayfeather is the best of the Three. Both Lionblaze and Dovewing are bland and boring. I wish it was Hollyleaf instead of Dovewing.

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    Dragon
    Oct 31, 2018

    Ah MLP would explain a lot of that

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    Echomoon
    Mar 14, 2019
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    yeah it would ^~^ XD

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    Brightberry(No Longer Active)
    Oct 30, 2018

    Oh my gosh I am laughing so hard!!! Rainbows Echo? Really?!! Lol I think its the main reason Im laughing!!

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    Echomoon
    Oct 31, 2018
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    Rainbows is the #3 cliche for Mary Sues /Gary stus. At least for the MLP fandom

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