Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

Tears : Chapter 1

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Edited: Jul 26, 2017

*AT THE END OF WINDBORN AFTER STAR DEFEATS NIGHTWING AND HAZELWIND & CO. LEAVE ANOK*

Starbrook looked around for her half sister. "Where is she?!?!" She mumbled to herself. Starbrook saw a group of pegasi fly away and among them she saw her. She stood there in shock as she watched Dewberry's emerald feathers fade into the distance. She saw Morningleaf and ran over to her. "Where are they going?!?!?" She asked. "Starbrook! There you are!" Morningleaf said while nuzzling the young filly. "Where?!?! Tell me!" She said and noticed her emerald and brown tipped light pink feathers were falling to the ground. Star walked over to where Morningleaf and Starbrook were standing. "She found out?" Star asked. "Yes... We should have just told her! I knew she would find out eventually!" Morningleaf said. Starbrook started crying. "First my parents now Dewberry?!?!? She was all I had left!" She cried into Morningleaf's chestnut shoulder. Starbrook backed away. "Tell me where their going and tell me NOW!" The feisty filly demanded. "They are going to... the Landwalkers territory." Star told her. "WHAT?!?! They're crossing the Great Sea?!?!?!" She wailed. "Yes..." Morningleaf said quietly realizing she might not see her brother, Hazelwind, ever again. "Don't worry! I know how you feel... Hazelwind and Echofrost are with her." Morningleaf said softly trying her best to comfort Starbrook. Brakentail walked over. "Oh no! She found out?" He asked. "Yeah..." Star answered for Morningleaf who was to busy comforting the filly.

Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

Alright guys a new series! YAY! Notice anything with Starbrook's feathers? Was Dewberry really her half sister or was she more?

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CassTucker1
Jul 26, 2017

Huh???? Is this something with Bumblewind???

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

You might be on to something Cass! And thanks!

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

I think I might name this series Tears! What do ya think?

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

Ok! Thanks! Tears it is then!

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CassTucker1
Jul 26, 2017

Ya I think it's great!!! And is Starbrook secretly Dewberry's and Bumblewind's foal?

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

I can't tell you! That would ruin the whole series!

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

But you will find out soon!

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Logan1705
Jul 26, 2017

Im working on chapter 2 so u don't have to wait long!

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Wispiflower
Jul 27, 2017

I really hope she is secretly their filly!

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Logan1705
Jul 28, 2017

Go read chapter 2! you will find out!

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Wispiflower
Jul 31, 2017

YOUR AWESOME! I LOVE YOU FOR WHAT YOU WROTE!!!!!!!!!!!

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Logan1705
Jul 31, 2017

Awww! ILY TOO WISPIFLOWER!!!

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