Last comment from part 1-
Braircloud: She looked at Ripplestep with big eyes, he had helped through a rough time before maybe he could do it again. She thought of every time the stallion had said the right words at the right time, ”Violetray has your coat and Frostflower your eyes.” A tear rolling down her cheek “what kind of mother am I if I can’t even protect my daughter.” She said sadness clear in her voice
” I had almost lost her.” Ripplestep pressed his muzzle against Briarcloud’s “but you didn’t.” His voice steady and strong, they just laid like that in a few minutes, Briarcloud rose “ I said I could prove it.” A voice came from behind, she spun in a circle Bravefire grinning “ nice to see you Blossom.”
Hollyfire-
Hollyfire and Hazeltwist both took a sharp breath.
Her mind sank into realization and shock.
Wha- what? How? Why?
The captain trembled. All thoughts vanished as another wave of shock hit her.
Another few minutes, her senses came back.
She spoke.
"Why should we trust you, huh? Yes, it may be that newborn foal was another stallion's daughter... but that doesn't mean you can hurt her! What you did was very wrong, Bravefire. Oh- and perhaps you, Briarcloud, if he really is telling the truth."
Frostweed:
He watched as his sister and her friend flew off, jealousy squeezing his chest. He wished he had that kind of friendship with Applefly, but because she was striving to be a medicine-mare, she wouldn’t have time for friends. He sighed, tucked his wings, and trotted back through the forest.
Eventually, he came out into the same clearing before, still surprised to see the problem with Bravefire and Briarcloud had not subsided.
Coraleaf-
Coraleaf looked in the direction where the commotion was at place. She wanted to go but at same time didn't want to, she was torn between staying out of the way of the older steeds or going and investigating.
Coraleaf decided to get a bit closer, just enough to stay out of the way but yet hear what they were talking about. She glided toward the group; she gasped, the whole group was in shock all staring at a stallion.
(i didn't want to go too far so i stopped at a terrible ending)
Rainfire-
"Is this true?" he asked. And when he didn't get a response, he knew the answer. It was true. "Either way Bravefire, its a newborn foal!" he scolded. "I'm taking you to Blackwing." He murmured, disapointed. He grabbed the stallions' wing. " Strongfire, wanna give me a hoof"
(or hoof, XD)
I just changed it to hoof XD. Copyright Scipio 2019!!🤣
@Starleaf (xD)
Coraleaf-
Coraleaf's ears flicked toward a stallion talking, "If I can be of any assistance I would like to be of help." The small blue roan filly offered.
Coraleaf hoped that she COULD be of any assistance; she wanted to be as helpful as she could.
(Coraleaf loves to be of use!)
Strongfire-
Strongfire nodded at Rainfire and went over to them to help, once he got over to both Rainfire and Bravefire. He noticed the youngest of the Sky Herders, Coraleaf, wanting to help, "Is there anything she can do to help," Bravefire whinnied to Rainfire.
Coraleaf-
Coraleaf looked at the mare a stallion whinnied at expectantly; waiting for the answer of a denial or an okay.
Rainfire-
"Of course, if you and Stormfire could go find Blackwing that would be great because I have a rouge stallion I have to take to Blackwing but I don't know where he is" He chucked softly trying to lighten the moon.
Stormfire-
She nodded and trotted over to Coraleaf. "Lets go, I have no idea where to start" She nickered.
Coraleaf-
"Thank you!"
Ambersnip frowned. "Aaaaaaaaand I'm alone. Whatever." She resumed preening her feathers, until each feather laid perfectly in place.
She looked around. Every captain and steed who had seen the incident went to capture Bravefire. She rattled her wings and her frowned deepened. "I should go to help them. But, I'm a Sky Herder. I won't be able to do much. Besides, all the captains went to deal with him. And they should be enough to resolve the issue." Ambersnip thought. She shrugged and pushed those thoughts away, looking up towards the blue sky. "Where is that annoying younger brother of mine? He's usually out here in the meadow, either pranking somebody or playing." She mumbled to herself. She looked around again and sighed. "I hate being lonely..." She mumbled again, only softer.
Ambersnip turned and sulked toward the nearest lake.
Hollyfire-
Hollyfire followed close behind Rainfire, eyeing the stallion, Bravefire.
(Gtg getting ready for a string festival)
(okay! Have fun)
Hawkstride glanced at the sun. In was well on it's way down toward the other half of the horizon, telling him it was a coulpe hours past noon. He turned to look at Shellmist, who was flying besides him. "Hey! You wanna head back to the meadow?! I'm hungry." He called to her over the searing winds.
Shellmist:
She flicked her ears towards him, and picked up the words "Head, meadow, and hungry," and swiftly nodded to him. She angled her wings delicately and veered around to where she was flying inland, getting ever closer to the forest she so dearly loved. "Race ya!" She shouted, tossing her head as she flattened her neck and flapped harder. She didn't try to fight the wind, but instead used it to propel her forward, almost like a sail. She whinnied in delight as she watched the landscape quickly run by below her.
Bravefire: He looked At his broken wing, knowing it would take much time to heal. Bravefire saw every steeds face and they’re reactions to Briarcloud “ are you going to anything about them.” Bravefire asked quietly his question directed to nobody in particular.
Hawkstride whinnied with joy as her words reached his ears. He smirked and out stretched his wings as far as they could go and he climbed higher. The higher you go, the faster. He pumped his large wings harder and quickly pulled out in front of her, smirking down to her as he passed.
(Hey Nightmist and Cats, I just got an idea. We don't have to do it, but i'd thought it would add a little bit of romantic drama. What if we do a love triangle between Frostweed, Applyfly, and Ambersnip?? Frostweed loves Applyfly, Applyfly loves Frostweed, but Ambersnip has a crush on Frostweed, doesn't know and he only likes her as a friend...or something. It's just an idea and if you don't want to do it, we don't have to.)
(You know, reading this outloud, it doesn't sound as good of an idea as i had originally thought. We don't have to do it. And i feel like I'm being a little selfish by meddling my OC into the mix. So, nvm.)
( Oh it's fine. I just don't want to see Ambersnip get brokenhearted, but sure! :D )
Shellmist:
She gaped at him, momentarily stunned. She quickly got over her shock and surged forward, flying right behind him. She ducked, flipped upside down, and flew straight under and came up the other side, flipped back around, and ended up flying just ahead of him. She grinned and flapped harder, determined to win. Soon they passed over the trees, and she angled her wings and dove straight into the tree layer, dodging many trees and branches only by her instincts. Sweat rolled down her hide but dried before it could fall to the ground as she flew faster and faster, getting closer and closer to their destination.