Valen turned Wynter towards Anselma and Tori, her red flaxen hair floating on the winds. She said, "Tori! whens the next reaping? is mother coming along?" For she had already had her ceremony from childhood to fully-fledged Valkyrie. Tori called out to Valen, "The reaping is in 40 minutes! be ready. Also, mother is out on errands for Odin"
She leisurely cruised over Asgard, often looking down at the people and animals. She flapped her large hawk wings and headed toward one of her favorite places in the Kingdom, The Flower Garden, where Bailyn often hangs out.
(Actually, I have a question, so when do they end up in Anok? Do they just wake up one morning and they are all mysteriously in a new land, or do they find Anok?)
(Oh, I kinda had an idea in my mind that my OCs [the werewolves and werecoyote] just woke up in Anok after a full moon, and before that they were just hanging around the woods in the Landwalker's territory)
She was sitting peacefully on a rock, her knees pulled to her chest and her arms wrapped around them. She was humming slightly to a slow, but pretty tune as the wind ruffled her long hair. Suddenly, a twig snapped and her pointed ears flicked toward the noise. She climbed off the rock and stood up and peered into the bushes. "Hello?!" she asked, thumbing thought the leaves. Two pairs of amber eyes beaded back at her. She gasped as the figure lurched out of the bushes. She stepped back and the figure tackled her to the ground. It spread it's wings wide, it's amber eyes still lurching down on her, as the beast placed it's sharp talon on her chest. Bailyn yelped her covered her eyes with her hands, feeling like this thing was going to end her life.
~~
"GOT YA!!! HAHAHAAA!!!!!" yelled a familiar voice. Bailyn peeked through her hands to see Nova rolling on the ground with laughter and she stood up. "Nova!!?!!!???! Don't scare me like that!!!! Odin have mercy!!" she said, out of breath.
Nova:
"Hahahahahahahaaaaaaa!!!!! I got you SO good!!!" she chuckled, arching her neck, feeling proud.
Bailyn: She sighed and chuckled "I'm going to have a heart attack and I'm only 13, thanks to you!" she said, catching her breath and starting to laugh at how silly she acted.
Valen steered her silvery steed towards Odin's palace. the time was up and she had to go to the human battlefield now. The Valkyries let out their powerful Valkyrie battle-cry even though they were not fighting. Dale, Tori, Brin, and Anselma rode aongside her with Hurrikan, Jaspion, Grante, and Volter. All of there ravens, Siel, Kor, Londer, and Rion flew by their shoulders. They descended on a almost deserrted battlefields, many soldiers lay dying on the dusty grounds. Val swerved to a brown haired, green eyed soldier clutchjing is injury. even in his throes of death, his green eyes sparkled, they were beginning to dull. Only a few minutes remaining, Val thought. She gently pushed the brave soldiers head up, "I am a Valkyrie, i shall reap you so you shall reach Valhalla, a place for the bgravest soldiers. Would you like me to give you my name? you woluld have to be attached to me though, and bear my mark." Valen said, feeling the slightest attractive pull to him. "you are brave honorable soldier."
He blinked and hesitated, "i'm... i'm not sure, no, please. thank you....." his spirit flew above his body, and they rode up towards Asgard with everyone else. Heimdall, the Bifrost's guard came up to greet them, "keep going!" HE CALLED OUT.
The night Star received his starfire, something strange happened. It awaked the destroyer, but it also awaked something inside other mythical creatures around the world. Not knowing what to make of this strange feeling, the creatures continued about their lives as normal. But when Star defeated Nightwing, a large amount of exes starfire was left in the air, and was blown away from Anok. Nothing happened for a wile, but one night, on a full moon, the starfire sparked, and it caused all the mythical creatures that lived out side of Anok, to be transported to the land of the flying steeds.
I was thinking that my werewolves/coyote would have been in their Canidae forms when the starfire sparked, and their animal instincts took over so none of them remember exactly how they ended up in Anok)
Ulric stood on a mound of stones in the middle of a clearing in human form, looking around for signs of danger. Tala, Ulric's young beta, sat a few feet away on an old fallen down tree, also in human form. The pair been hiking all day to reach this spot, and now they were anxiously waiting for nightfall. This was because tonight there would be a full moon, and it was common for newer werewolves, like Tala, to loose control of their animal side and go full wolf, and so to protect both the girl and others, Ulric and his beta got as far from civilization as possible.
"Do we really have to do this again?" ask Tala, looking up at her alpha.
Ulric sighed, "We've already been over this." he said, "You haven't show very good control during full moons so far, and I'm not going to take any chances."
Tala looked disappointed, "I wish you'd have a little more faith in me."
"You are seriously going to go there?" said Ulric, shaking his head. "I have faith in you Tala, but I don't have faith in the wolf. Ever since I bit you, you have struggled to maintain control, and I'll admit that you are much better now then you were at the time, but you are not ready to go at this without help."
Tala rolled her eyes, "Okay, one, I didn't ask to be bitten, and two, your 'help' sucks."
"If I hadn't bitten you, you would've have died from cancer a year and a half ago." pointed out Ulric, as he recalled seeing Tala when she was on her death bed. She had been pale and week, but her eyes had this fierce look in them, and that look had given him an overwhelming erge to save her.
"Hellooooo?" said Tala, and Ulric realized that he was staring of into space again.
"Uh, sorry." said Ulric, then there was a brief science before he added, "And my help dose not suck."
Tala snorted, "Says the werewolf that chains his only beta to a tree every full moon."
She looked up. "It's getting dark. You should go find Cloudbreaker, he's probably at the palace with Pegasus." she said.
Nova:
"And leave you here? You know it's a full moon tonight, right?" but Bailyn hadn't forgotten. "No, I know. But, I'll be careful, besides, the werewolves of Asgard don't mean to harm anyone...right?" she asked.
Nova:
She shrugged. "Not sure, but I don't wanna find out. Just be careful and try not to make yourself noticed. I'll see ya bright and early tomorrow!" she said, lifting off and soaring towards the palace.
Bailyn:
She waved goodbye, then walked back towards the flower garden. She closed her eyes and focused. She felt her body get smaller and a pair of wings sprout from her back. When she opened her eyes again, the world looked a whole lot smaller and she was wearing a rosy-pink dress that matched her wings. She fluttered away, now in her fairy form, toward no where in particular.
As soon as the sun touched the horizon, Ulric pulled Taya's chains out of his backpack, and with a lot of complaining on Taya's part, managed to secure the girl's arm's and legs.
Valen turned Wynter towards Anselma and Tori, her red flaxen hair floating on the winds. She said, "Tori! whens the next reaping? is mother coming along?" For she had already had her ceremony from childhood to fully-fledged Valkyrie. Tori called out to Valen, "The reaping is in 40 minutes! be ready. Also, mother is out on errands for Odin"
Nova:
She leisurely cruised over Asgard, often looking down at the people and animals. She flapped her large hawk wings and headed toward one of her favorite places in the Kingdom, The Flower Garden, where Bailyn often hangs out.
(Oh phew, when I saw you guys had started this I thought I was going to have like a million comments to read through before I could start)
(Actually, I have a question, so when do they end up in Anok? Do they just wake up one morning and they are all mysteriously in a new land, or do they find Anok?)
(yea, I was wondering that too. Maybe they had to expand some territory?)
(we are in Asgard. how about they have a quest? and find Anok.)
(Oh, I kinda had an idea in my mind that my OCs [the werewolves and werecoyote] just woke up in Anok after a full moon, and before that they were just hanging around the woods in the Landwalker's territory)
(Yeah!! That works!)
Bailyn:
She was sitting peacefully on a rock, her knees pulled to her chest and her arms wrapped around them. She was humming slightly to a slow, but pretty tune as the wind ruffled her long hair. Suddenly, a twig snapped and her pointed ears flicked toward the noise. She climbed off the rock and stood up and peered into the bushes. "Hello?!" she asked, thumbing thought the leaves. Two pairs of amber eyes beaded back at her. She gasped as the figure lurched out of the bushes. She stepped back and the figure tackled her to the ground. It spread it's wings wide, it's amber eyes still lurching down on her, as the beast placed it's sharp talon on her chest. Bailyn yelped her covered her eyes with her hands, feeling like this thing was going to end her life.
~~
"GOT YA!!! HAHAHAAA!!!!!" yelled a familiar voice. Bailyn peeked through her hands to see Nova rolling on the ground with laughter and she stood up. "Nova!!?!!!???! Don't scare me like that!!!! Odin have mercy!!" she said, out of breath.
Nova:
"Hahahahahahahaaaaaaa!!!!! I got you SO good!!!" she chuckled, arching her neck, feeling proud.
Bailyn: She sighed and chuckled "I'm going to have a heart attack and I'm only 13, thanks to you!" she said, catching her breath and starting to laugh at how silly she acted.
(Dragon what if we used your idea and tweaked it? we need an explanation about how they got there)
Valen steered her silvery steed towards Odin's palace. the time was up and she had to go to the human battlefield now. The Valkyries let out their powerful Valkyrie battle-cry even though they were not fighting. Dale, Tori, Brin, and Anselma rode aongside her with Hurrikan, Jaspion, Grante, and Volter. All of there ravens, Siel, Kor, Londer, and Rion flew by their shoulders. They descended on a almost deserrted battlefields, many soldiers lay dying on the dusty grounds. Val swerved to a brown haired, green eyed soldier clutchjing is injury. even in his throes of death, his green eyes sparkled, they were beginning to dull. Only a few minutes remaining, Val thought. She gently pushed the brave soldiers head up, "I am a Valkyrie, i shall reap you so you shall reach Valhalla, a place for the bgravest soldiers. Would you like me to give you my name? you woluld have to be attached to me though, and bear my mark." Valen said, feeling the slightest attractive pull to him. "you are brave honorable soldier."
He blinked and hesitated, "i'm... i'm not sure, no, please. thank you....." his spirit flew above his body, and they rode up towards Asgard with everyone else. Heimdall, the Bifrost's guard came up to greet them, "keep going!" HE CALLED OUT.
(How about this:
The night Star received his starfire, something strange happened. It awaked the destroyer, but it also awaked something inside other mythical creatures around the world. Not knowing what to make of this strange feeling, the creatures continued about their lives as normal. But when Star defeated Nightwing, a large amount of exes starfire was left in the air, and was blown away from Anok. Nothing happened for a wile, but one night, on a full moon, the starfire sparked, and it caused all the mythical creatures that lived out side of Anok, to be transported to the land of the flying steeds.
I was thinking that my werewolves/coyote would have been in their Canidae forms when the starfire sparked, and their animal instincts took over so none of them remember exactly how they ended up in Anok)
(oki! letsdo that!)
(When shall we do that? Now? I kinda wanna do it now!)
(What about all the other characters? Will they get transported to?)
(If you want them to, but you'll have to come up with how it happens to them)
Ulric:
Ulric stood on a mound of stones in the middle of a clearing in human form, looking around for signs of danger. Tala, Ulric's young beta, sat a few feet away on an old fallen down tree, also in human form. The pair been hiking all day to reach this spot, and now they were anxiously waiting for nightfall. This was because tonight there would be a full moon, and it was common for newer werewolves, like Tala, to loose control of their animal side and go full wolf, and so to protect both the girl and others, Ulric and his beta got as far from civilization as possible.
"Do we really have to do this again?" ask Tala, looking up at her alpha.
Ulric sighed, "We've already been over this." he said, "You haven't show very good control during full moons so far, and I'm not going to take any chances."
Tala looked disappointed, "I wish you'd have a little more faith in me."
"You are seriously going to go there?" said Ulric, shaking his head. "I have faith in you Tala, but I don't have faith in the wolf. Ever since I bit you, you have struggled to maintain control, and I'll admit that you are much better now then you were at the time, but you are not ready to go at this without help."
Tala rolled her eyes, "Okay, one, I didn't ask to be bitten, and two, your 'help' sucks."
"If I hadn't bitten you, you would've have died from cancer a year and a half ago." pointed out Ulric, as he recalled seeing Tala when she was on her death bed. She had been pale and week, but her eyes had this fierce look in them, and that look had given him an overwhelming erge to save her.
"Hellooooo?" said Tala, and Ulric realized that he was staring of into space again.
"Uh, sorry." said Ulric, then there was a brief science before he added, "And my help dose not suck."
Tala snorted, "Says the werewolf that chains his only beta to a tree every full moon."
"So?" Ulric shot back, "You haven't killed anyone yet."
"Have you?" said Tala.
Ulric rolled his eyes, but chose not to answer, and instead watched as the sun crept closer to the horizon.
(So, their still in Asgard...right?)
Bailyn:
She looked up. "It's getting dark. You should go find Cloudbreaker, he's probably at the palace with Pegasus." she said.
Nova:
"And leave you here? You know it's a full moon tonight, right?" but Bailyn hadn't forgotten. "No, I know. But, I'll be careful, besides, the werewolves of Asgard don't mean to harm anyone...right?" she asked.
Nova:
She shrugged. "Not sure, but I don't wanna find out. Just be careful and try not to make yourself noticed. I'll see ya bright and early tomorrow!" she said, lifting off and soaring towards the palace.
Bailyn:
She waved goodbye, then walked back towards the flower garden. She closed her eyes and focused. She felt her body get smaller and a pair of wings sprout from her back. When she opened her eyes again, the world looked a whole lot smaller and she was wearing a rosy-pink dress that matched her wings. She fluttered away, now in her fairy form, toward no where in particular.
Ulric:
As soon as the sun touched the horizon, Ulric pulled Taya's chains out of his backpack, and with a lot of complaining on Taya's part, managed to secure the girl's arm's and legs.
(yep and all the characters are looking at eachother)