Ok guys i will do one more challenge.
If u want to join this challenge, u must sign up PRONTO!!!!
THIS IS A SHORT STORY CHALLENGE!!!!!
here r the rules:
there will only be 10 entry slots
1rst place will get them drawn as a pegasus(pls tell me the characteristics if it is a OC)
2end place will get 2 drawn feather of their favourite characters
3rd place will get 1 drawn feather of their favourite character.
there will not be a 4th or 5th place prize
u must use these 3 characters: Shadepebble, Star, and my OC Autumnhoney
pls make this a SHORT story, 5-6 paragraphs.
u can continue the story after the challenge is over
PLEASE HAVE FUN!!!!!
pananah/ bightberry, can you please tell me your favourite pegasi???
or do we call you brightberry now?
you are correct dragon! Pananah please tell me your favourite characters.
Meh its fine Clawberry. I was still figuring out how to write fan fics good.
Oh, and I believe that Pananah won a prize as well:
(copied and pasted from this post)
2end place will get 2 drawn feather of their favourite characters
I'm back (sorry it took so long to respond) could I have a drawing of my OC Sunstrike? He looks like this:
He has sky blue eyes, and jade wings
k thanks pananah, sorry that you didn't win
I can. Ive got her on pinterest
can someone pls tell dragon to go on here so that i can get the prize for her?
i only got two stories... but the winner has an inactive account, whatever that means.
It's mid March!
k
Ok
judging will be moved to mid march, im kinda buissy right now
any more entries????
good
none taken
no offence inteded
oh ok. i have always wondered why alaska was part of the us and not canada, but then my dad told me why and it kinda made sense
what does Inara mean? (sorry but i'ma bit out of the loop)
oh ok. i didn't know because i live in Canada and i am not sure we have CAP here...
Me: umm . . . . . . . . . .
Nightmist: x face wings x Really Inara??????
Gemfeather: x pats Nightmist on back x Don't get yourself overworked
Nightmist: x rolls eyes and sighs x
( it's like airforce )
what is CAP?
it's ok, and idk
Wait wha?!?!?!?!?! Sorry not reading comments . . . . . . . .
i'm not home schooled
what is the lower 48? (don't mean to offend people)
Yeah that is reasonable
Nice, I've been homeshooled since 3rd grade
Have been since 1st grade
You're homeschooled to Dragon?
I've never heard of it , but that's proudly because I'm homeschooled
ok
Ok I have lived in the lower 48, and I have heard that I just forgot
That didn't make it to Alaska? It's definitely in the lower 48. I'll set it up with my imaginary friends (not that I have any but whatever) Bob and Joe.
Joe: x-walks up to Bob-x "Hey what's nine pluh ten?" (yes its pronounced weird)
Bob: x-thinks, Is this guy that stupid?-x "Nineteen. Obviously."
Joe: x-knows Bob is right but wants to look cool-x "No, 21!!!!!!" (pronounced: TWUH-NEE WAN)
Or, if Bob says "21" Joe will say something like, "No it's nineteen, dumbo."
Wait... 21?
Yeah that doesn't make sense to me. Also the 9+10=21 thing, which I could start raging and ranting about but I won't.
Yeah, although my brothers logic, (basically all 3) is there are two answers. One is the real answer and the other is 22 for 2+2=?
For me, math is simple in one way. I don't often like math, but I do like that there is only one correct answer to each problem (unless it comes down to x=x, but I don't want to over-complicate things). 2+2=4, and always will. I don't get the answer right all of the time and I'm annoyed with myself when I answer incorrectly, but I like that there is one correct answer, as opposed to science lab responses where you answer what makes sense to you but the correct answer doesn't make sense because your answer is also right. For example, "What could you put in a barrel to make it lighter?" You answer, "A hole," which is technically correct, but they wanted was "Helium."
lucky
I always have an easy time with math.
meh, homework sucks... espically when its math.
I know I know! but I will have a bunch of homework in February with the GT thing
Your have over a month!
I will enter tentatively, so I will post my entry if I finish in time but it is quite likely that I won't
more entries pls!!!! remember u have until the end of February to write ur stories and that's when judging is
Thanks
yup, i like how u reunited me and autumnnhoney in the story =)
Thanks guys
I TOTALLY AGREE WITH PANANAH!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome!!!! This is AMAZING!!!!!!
Star flew low and fast over the tree tops, his patrol following close behind. Only a few months had passed since the battle with Nightwing, and Star was still adjusting to not having his starfire.
"Can we rest for a few minuet?" said Shadepebble, from some where behind Star. He had forgotten that the spotted mare still had difficulties flying, and the patrol had been flying for hours.
"Good idea." said Star, "I see a clearing up ahead, we can land there for a wile."
A few minuets later the patrol was resting beside the creek that ran through the center of the clearing. "This is nice." said Shadepebble, as she rolled in the grass.
Star was about to do the same when he spotted a light purple feather on the far side of the clearing. He trotted over to investigate. None of the pegasi in the patrol had purple feathers. Star sniffed it, this feather was diffidently not a feather that belonged to a River Herd steed. But then who's was it?
"Hay Shadepebble, take a look at this." called Star.
Shadepebble trotted over, "What is it?". Star pointed at the feather, and Shadepebble bent down to smell it. "I wonder who's feather this is."
With the help of the rest of the patrol Star and Shadepebble searched the clearing, but could find no other traces of another Pegasus. Until a mare named Clawberry spotted hoof prints. The patrol quickly followed them, but they lost the hoof prints only a few winglengths away.
"Split up." ordered Star, "Those tracks were still fresh, so the Pegasus couldn't have gotten far."
After only a few minuets of searching, Star spotted another purple feather, this one at the base of a tree. He signaled the rest of the patrol to be on guard, then he kicked off and flew up towards the top of the tree.
Before Star got very high, he heard a squeal of a startled filly. "I'll come down!" she squeaked, "Just don't hurt me!"
"We promise not to hurt you." said Star, he landed, and a few seconds later he was joined by a palomino filly who's wings were the same color as the feathers Star had found.
Clawberry gasped, "Autumnhoney!" The pinto mare ran to the filly.
The whole patrol stared, "Do you know each other?" asked Star.
"Yes, Autumnhoney is my sister." said Clawberry. "We were separated when Nightwing came. I thought she was dead!"
Star smiled as he watched the happy reunion between the sisters, and smiled. Happy to have helped bring them together.
The End
Ok thanks.
its great
a little feed back tho, u could do a new line every time someone new is speaking
like this
"Hi Star," Shadepebble said.
"Hello Shadepebble"
Is this right? I tried to add Shadpebble and Autumnhoney to my story. I'm sorry its so long, I had to do my school so I was writing the story quickly.
"Phoenix come play with us!!" Shouted a little filly, "Its so much more fun when you play with us." The pegasus they called Phoenix came trotting over to the little brown and white filly, "What do you want to play Featherheart?" At that moment one of the mares in River Herd came galloping through the trees, "Featherheart, Phoenix, Lakeheart, come on Star is back!!" 'As they ran through the forest Phoenix wondered what Star looked like, she had been born in the Trap so she didn't know who Star was. Until recently when the herds came to the trap to hide from Nightwing. I wonder what is like? Maybe he's really handsome and really strong. I wonder when I'll get to meet him? Phoenix wondered. As she had that thought they got to the clearing where the herds have council meetings. Theres Star!! WOW, he's handsome!!! "Star welcome back!!" "Star its so good to finally meet you." That was Phoenix, as soon as she said that everyone hushed. "She doesn't know Star?" "Why doesn't she know Star?" "Hello, it seams you know who I am but what is your name?" Star asked. "M-my name is Phoenix, Starwing." She answered quietly, I hope he NEVER finds out who my father is. He killed my mother and father, I can never forgive him for that. "Well its nice to meet you Phoenix, and please call me Star." Star said, "I have never seen you around the Trap, when did you get here?" "I was born in these woods, they belonged to my father and mother, but they died in a war between the herds." They are dead because of you. Phoenix added silently. "I'm very sorry for your loss." Star said sympathetically. Her father, Rockwing, was a wonderful father. Lightfeather was a good mother. I wish I could have known my grandsire. "Thank you Star." Phoenix said. "Phoenix if you don't mind me asking, who were your parents? And why don't you have two parts in your name?" "I will not say who my mother and father are, my name is because I am not born to any herds." Phoenix replied. "Why wont you say who your dam and sire are?" asked a voice from the trees. "Are you trying to hide them?" Phoenix finally located the source of the voice, it was coming from a young stallion. "I am only keeping a secret, I know you have a secret Whispertail." At that everyone gasped, "How does she know who he is?" "How does she know he has a secret?" came the reply. "I know because I'm an animus" Phoenix muttered "Whats a animus?" someone asked from the crowd, the pegasi parted to let two little fillies through. "I'm Shadepebble and this is Autumnhoney, my friend." Shadepebble said boldly, "What is an animus?" she asked again. "An animus is a pegasi who is born with more power than The Black Foal." Phoenix nickered. As she said 'more powerful that The Black Foal' everyone gasped. Who would have thought someone was so powerful? "Who are your parents?" Whispertail questioned again. "Yes who Phoenix?" This time Star asked to. "My sire was Rockwing. I wont say who my dam was."
no prob
Ok thanks
here
and btw guys the challenge ends at the end of february
Where do we post them?
Ok thanks, I think Ill join then
yes pananah, u can. thx for joining dragon.
I guess I could try, Ill probably suck at it though
oh yeah can we do stories we have done or are doing?
Make that four Clawberry
Wow this sounds interesting but i'm not gonna join
both works.i just want to see those characters in the story. so i have three entries, then?
Wait use them as main or can you use them as side pegasi?
I'm in
I’m busy almost all the time and dont have the opportunity to waste time on a roleplay. But okay sounds good.
that's ok. i can relate. if i have to write a short story for school or something, i go bonkers
Sorry but I won't join
r u guys joining??
Autumnhoney is very hyper and silly, if u were on my ROLEPLAY then u would know
YAY your back!! but sorry, I'm bad at short stories, I like writing longer ones
This sounds fun! What’s Autumnhoney’s personality? Or is that cheating if I ask?