Jul 23, 2017

Help me name this please!:Chapter One

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Star woke up harshly from a nightmare about when he was all alone in his cave at Crabwing's Bay. He couldn't quite remember what it was about but he knew one thing... it wasn't good! "Where am I?!?!?!" Star thought. Then it hit him he was at Crabwing's Bay! He looked to his right and there was a sleepy Morningleaf cuddled up next to him. Across the beach was Shadepebble and Clawfire. Brakentail was also there.

"Good morning!" Morningleaf said with a yawn. "Oh no... Did I wake you up?" Star said quietly careful not to wake the others. "No... ok maybe...." She admitted. "I'm so sorry!" He whispered. "Its ok I was gonna get up soon anyway." She assured him. "Ok if you say so!" He replied. "Ok first things first! Morningleaf.. I love you but could you be any louder right now?!?!" Brakentail groaned. "Well good morning to you too!" Morningleaf said. Shadepebble yawned and Clawfire stretched out his wings. "Good morning guys!" Morningleaf said cheerfully. "Morning.." Clawfire and Shadepebble said in unison causing everyone to laugh. So,you see Clawfire had insisted he come with the group to Crabwing's Bay. He told them it would be good for him to get away for a little while!

But they all knew the real reason-he wanted to come so he could be with Shadepebble. "We should head back soon guys so lets eat up then fly back." Star told the group.

After they were all full and fully awake they flew back to River Herd.

Jul 23, 2017

So what did you think? Let me know! Sorry for any errors I may have made!

 

What did Brakentail mean when he said he loved Morningleaf? Was he joking or on the inside was he actually falling for her? And was to get away from the herd the real reason Clawfire came? Or was it actually something to do with Shadepebble?

Stay tuned to find out!

 

P.S: I may or may not be a shipper of Shadepebble and Clawfire! You will find out soon!

Till' Next Time, Your's Truly,

logan1705

Jul 23, 2017

This is interesting! And I'm excited to find out!

Jul 23, 2017

Thanks! Any title ideas?

Jul 23, 2017

Not yet.. I would have to know what the series is mainly about

Jul 23, 2017

Ok

I will post more tommorow

Jul 23, 2017

im excited and I might have a few decent ideas for the title name....... wait first whats the story gonna mainky be about? e.g. heatbreak, betrayal, prophicies/destinies, stuff like that. Plz let meh kno 😊

Jul 23, 2017

Ok sorry guys i will do ome (hopefully) late rtonight! my compute ris chargin grn and as uca ns ee my ipad doesnt type very well xD so im kinda just makin git up as i go! but i really like Destinies and i fi ts the idea i ju sth adso thanks secretspirit! Really sorry if you cant read this! if u cant just let me know and i will re type it on my laptop!

Jul 24, 2017

what did u say? The ky bits i could make out was my name and iPad but i can rwad it dont worry XDXDXD

Jul 24, 2017

and ur welcome :):):):)):):):):):):):):):)

Jul 24, 2017

Alright guys I'm so sorry that I haven't kept up with this! My life is CRAZY right now! I just moved last month, I'm going into junior high which means a new school,the A.C in my house broke last night (yay!), I'm trying out for the dance team and my mom convinced me to try out for cheer leading too! So I'm going to hopefully get (maybe don't hold me to this) get two chapters out today! Wish me luck with that!

Jul 24, 2017

Wow you have your hands full!

Jul 24, 2017

Ya as i said life is kinda hectic rn!

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