Thank you all for your patience, and now I will explain how this works:
I want this to be a more relaxed rp. So instead of posting one sentence, I was thinking more of one paragraph (I will post first so I can give more of an example). But other then that it will be just like the other rp. Oh and I also don't want to have multiple people typing at the same time, plz be considerate because not everyone types fast, and there's no need to race
Story:
A year after Star battled Nightwing. All the pegasi in Anok were rounded up and divided into two groups, the first one was all the pegasi who still thought Star would destroy Anok or wanted to rule Anok for them selves. The second group was all of the pegasi who trusted Star and his friends, and were loyal to Anok.
The first group led by Riversun was banished to Snow Herd's former territory, wile the second group led by Star traveled all over Anok.
19 years later, the foals of these steeds live in the were their parents lived. Wither or not they deserve to live there is what we'll have to find out...
Characters:
River herd:
Starsun, daughter of Star
Echomoon, daughter of Echofrost
Secretbreeze, daughter of Bumblewind
Starbrooke, daughter of Dewberry
Riverbreeze, daughter of Shadepebble
Horizonfire, daughter of Sunray
Snowfrost, son of Iceriver
Spiderangel, daughter of Morningleaf
Banished herd:
Wintersong, daughter of Frostfire
Stormpebble, daughter of Riversun
Note: you can still a characters, just post their description under "Guardian Herd Descendants RP: Character Board
(Pretty sure.)
Echomoon: -she and Horizonfire flew back to River Herd to inform Star about the plan (assuming Star's herd is River Herd)-
Riverbreeze woke to a mare saying "Get uuuuup" she looked up and saw Riversun staring at her and she stood up. Riverbreeze: "What is wrong?"
Riversun: "Prepare to fly... you are leaving soon."
And Riverbreeze's mind snapped back to the present..
(sry Dragon if i stole ur part)
(I am back!!!!) Clawfire started to get nervous... "Were is my daughter?!" he thought to himself and trotted toward Shadepebble who looked just as nervous...
Shadepebble:"Were is Riverbreeze?" she said frantically
Clawfire: "I dont know... I will check the lake......" "Nothing" he said when he got back
Shadepebble bleated like a foal...
Clawfire; Dont worry.. Star is missing Starsun as well.. "
Shadepebble:"And Snowfrost is gone to!"
Clawfire:" I will go tell Star what is happening... try not to worry... we will get every one back."
(Ok.)
(I'm going to make another part real quick)
Spiderangel- Spiderangel looked around, where was Starsun? She went over to her sire, Star. "Father, have you seen Starsun?" "The last time I saw your sister was when she went down to the Lake to look for your friends." Said Star. The young mare nodded and headed down toward the Lake.
" ill go up to star and act like im distracting him, but really i am telling him riversuns plan"
the three pegasi flew back to the pasture" i cant believe i just said i would kill my father"
Echomoon: -whispers- okay. We've got the plan anyway. We can go tell Star, and maybe even plan an attack. -inhales- I just hope the others will forgive us if they get into trouble.....
Stormpebble- "Good." said Riversun, "You will leave at dawn." then Riversun turned to Stormpebble, "Go inform Wintersong of the mission."
Stormpebble sighted,"Yes mother." and she flew off to find Wintersong.
(Me back) x Riverbreeze- Riverbreezes ears were hot with anger but she swallowed x "Cant wait!" she said lying
Horizonfire- "Sounds good," she whispered as she held back tears. "Should we go back and warn the herd right away?" "Or do we need to rescue them?, I know they are spying but...it just doesn't seem to be going as planned" she said gesturing to the pegasi with Strompebble and Riversun.
( i should be able to rp more tomorrow. im at my grandmas currently so im not on much)
" when are we going to leave"
Echomoon: -Echomoon notices Riverbreeze's tear but dismisses it and soon realizes that she's crying too- Horizonfire, lets hear the plan, and then report back to Star. -holds back a sob and bites down on quivering lip- sound good? -shifts through the trees- because we found them -swivels ears and strains to listen-
(k) Stormpebble- Stormpebble landed beside her mother, "I brought them." then Stormpebble turned and started to fly away, but Riversun called her back.
"Stormtail and I have come up with a plan to kill Star, you three," said Riversun pointing Snowfrost, Riverbreeze, and Starsun, "Will bring my daughter Stormpebble, and her friend Wintersong to river herd, tell Star you found them and that they want to join the herd. Then as soon as you get a chance, kill Star."
Stormpebble shifted nervously, she didn't trust her self after what she had done to the under-stallion.
(I gtg to riding sry be on tonight)
x Riverbreeze kicked off and followed Stormpebble to an oak tree, were Riversun and Stormtail layed together.x
Riverbreeze- "Okay. Come on guys lets go.."
Stormpebble- "Stormpebble, I need you to get the three new pegasi, I need to talk to them alone." order Riversun.
Stormpebble sighed "Yes Mother."
Stormpebble flew over to Snowfrost and his friends, "My mother wants to talk to you three."
(thanks)
(i'm not in this part but I am just saying it sounds super cool :-D)
x Riverbreeze looked up a little relieved that he thought so x "Well we better find it soon"
Snowfrost- "It'll be alright Riverbreeze, we'll find some way out of this mess." conferred Snowfrost, he hoped Riverbreeze and Starsun believed what he said because Snowfrost didn't believe it himself.
Another tear rolled down her cheek at the thought, but she wiped it away quickly "How about once we "go and kill star" we can secretly tell him what is going on........" she stopped and sighed, "This plan was for us to show my father and everyone else that we arent foals...... but that is exactly how i feel right now...... like a foal..... helpless..... afraid.... and so tiny."
Snowfrost- "I think we just got involved in Riversun's plan to kill Star" whispered Snowfrost.
x They were led out of the cave and into a grazing spot nearby, Riverbreeze dipped her head and pretended to eat, a single tear rolled of her cheek x " Snowfrost.... what have we done...." she said loud enough for him to hear but quiet enough not be be heard by anyone else
(lol) Stormpebble- Stormpebble watch her mother nod, "Very well you may join banished her, but you must prove your selves. For a wile now I have been planning on attacking Star and his "perfect" herd, now I can have pegasi in inside." and with that Riversun flew out of cave.
Snowfrost- What have we gotten our selves into, thought Snowfrost.
Riverbreeze: "Please let us join Banished herd... we DESPISE Star.... he thinks he is SO perfect!!!" (what did i just type..... whatever it is it made me gag)
x Riverbreeze noticed Snowfrost nervousness and swished her tail onto his flank letting him know that she hated lying as much as he did x
(sure let's do that. un pause) Horizonfire- Echomoon and Horizonfire dart between trees in search of there friends, but careful not to get too close to the banished herd
(well since Snowfrost, Starsun, and Riverbreeze, aren't on a official spy mission, how bout Horizonfire be spying on them with Echomoon)
(If you don't mind I'll jump into the spying with you too, I will be with Stormpebble and the rest of you that were spotted. But if you think it is too many spies now I will gladly stay with the herd.)
Snowfrost- This whole lying thing was making Snowfrost nervous, and he kept shifting his weight for hoof to hoof, "Yeah, Star keeps treating us like foals." said Snowfrost, he hoped his voice didn't shake and give him and his friends away.
Starsun- " yes, stormpebble is telling the truth"
Echomoon: -flies and jumps from tree to tree, tucking wings in and trying to make sure that vibrant colours arent spotted- I hope they're okay... -whispers while following them to Stormpebble's mother, Riversun...-
(awww a SPYING mission?? And you never thought to wake meh??! DUDES IM A SPY I TRAINING XD lel anyways im gonna try and jump into this spying rp here bc i love spying oh god im so weird) Echomoon: -watches from trees overhead, nt being spotted. Shakes head- oh no... -follows friends- (p.s. if you dont want this to be here Dragon, i can take this down :3 also to be fair i wasnt here i was stuck in the hellhole known to normal people as school instead. But stell, i feel bad... okai i dont bleme u giuys anymo I BLAME SCHOOL :3)
(To anyone who wants an update here it is:
While playing tag Snowfrost son of Iceriver, and Riverbreeze daughter of Shadepebble, discovered a ice tiger cub near where River Herd was grazing.
So Star sent Clawfire, Snowfrost, Riverbreeze, Starsun, and Echomoon to investigate, the patrol killed the mother ice tiger and another near by one.
When the patrol got back Clawfire insisted on babying his daughter Riverbreeze, so the next morning Snowfrost, Riverbreeze, and Starsun snuck away from river herd so they could spy on banished herd and prove they aren't foals anymore.
But in the proses they were spotted by Stormpebble daughter of Riversun, and the trio had to lie about what they were doing in banished herd territory and told Stormpebble they were mad at Star and wanted to join banished her. so Stormpebble took them to meet her mother)
Stormpebble- Stormpebble led the three strange pegasi into the cave and headed to the back of the cave where her mother, Riversun, usually was at this time of the day.
When Riversun spotted her daughter, she smiled coldly and said, "Ah, Stormpebble, we thought we lost you, but I see you have captured Star's young foal."
Stormpebble dipped her head, "Sadly mother I didn't capture them, they are angry with Star and have come to join banished herd."
Riversun looked at the three river herd pegasi in surprise, "Is this true?" she asked.
(See ya tomorrow)
(gtg i hav to go to bed sowwy :C)
x They got to a big cave with pegasi inside it and were led to the way back... toward Riversun... the pegasi inside stared at the three. Riverbreeze trembled a little when she saw... Stormtail standing next to..... Riversun... Shadepebble was right, that stallion had rocks for hooves. x
Stormpebble- "Fine, but my Mother makes the final decision." Stormpebble led the way towards banished herd's cave."
Snowfrost- Snowfrost, Riverbreeze, and Starsun exchanged worried glances, then followed the strange colored mare.
(ikr)
Snowfrost- "Yeah!" said Snowfrost, he hated lying.
(i hate every word i just typed)
Riverbreeze - "Sun herd should hav killed Star during his 1st birthday."
Snowfrost- "We're here, is that enough for you?" said Snowfrost, as he shifted uncomfortably.
(LOL) Stormpebble- Stormpebble looked at the three steeds skeptically "And your going to make you believe you how?"
(i am not the best at lying even in a rp)
Riverbreeze -An idea formed in her mind - "We dont want to follow Star anymore... we want to rebel against him.. he is a terabble leader and Nightwing was right about him." x she lied
x Riverbreeze gulped, if we tell her she will kill us, if we dont tell her she will kill us..... what to do... what to do.... x
Stormpebble- "Why are you here?" demanded Stormpebble
x Riverbreeze in her mind x Ansecters hear me now and protect us..." We dont mean any harm." x she said quietly
Snowfrost- the three pegasi landed.
"I'm Snowfrost, and this is Riverbreeze and Starsun." said Snowfrost.
Riverbreeze: "Right... "
Stormpebble- "Identify you selves imminently, or you die!" ordered Stormpebble.
Snowfrost- "Uh oh..... we better land." said Snowfrost.
x Riverbreeze looked up and said x "Snowfrost.... we might hav a problem..." x as Riverbreeze stared at the pegaus the rays of the sun reflected of the strangers wings x "Oh no........."
Stormpebble- Stormpebble was almost back to the cave when she spotted three pegasi she had never seen before flying in the same direction she was.
Stormpebble- Stormpebble stayed where she lay the rest of the night, then when she saw the first streaks of light coming over the horizon she got up and went to a near by stream to get a drink.
I should probably head back to the herd, thought Stormpebble after a few hours.
Stormpebble flapped her gray wings and rose above the trees, and headed back to the cave where banished herd lived.
(wrong rp)
(oh yeah sowwy!!!)
(You mean banished herd?)
x They flew for several more hours x- riverbreeze gasped - "I see something." x and she slowly and quietly made her way down x
Riverbreeze- "Hoofprints... and feathers... Banished herd is nearby."
x Riverbreeze lifted off x
(thx) Snowfrost- "Yup, lets go." said Snowfrost
(BTW i rly like that one... so much drama i lov it!!!!!) Riverbreeze: "Ready to get back into the air?"
Stormpebble- "I'll teach you to be scared of me!" yelled Stormpebble as she charged at the under-stallion.
The under-stallion landed on the ground he lowered his head, "I surrender! I surrender!"
But Stormpebble was to angry to listen, she blasted him with silver starfire, turning him to a pile of ash.
Stormpebble snuck to the ground, "What have I done?" she cried.
Riverbreeze: "Alright... "
Snowfrost- "I think we just passed the grandmother tree." said Snowfrost
" How far away are we from their camp?" she said still out of breath
x As soon as her hooves touched down her knees buckled and she colasped into the half-melted snow x "I am okay... just tired"
Snowfrost- Snowfrost nodded, "That's a good idea."
Snowfrost lead his small group over to the trees and landed.
- a couple hours later-Riverbreeze: "Snowfrost, I need to rest. Besides this wind is picking up. We should rest there." x she said nodding toward a grove of trees x
(sry my computer was lagging) x Riverbreeze followed and the 3 flew over the trees and to the border x
Snowfrost- Snowfrost looked up at the sky, "The coast is clear, so we better go now." he said as he spread his wings and flew in the direction of the banished herd border.
Riverbreeze: " We better make this quick... Star usually patrols with his captins right about now!"
Riverbreeze: " Our cover will be, we r going to the lake to swim and if anyone asks.... say we lost track of time."
(Sry my mom keep wants me to do stuff) Riverbreeze; "Ready?" x she said anxiously x
(That's what I was thinking)
(It would be cool if we made stormpebble and starsun have a epic fight with their starfire)
(Never mind, i cant keep up with two pegasus)
(K)
( im going to make a stallion)
(Ok)
Snowfrost- "Great!" said Snowfrost, "This will show Clawfire and the others, that we aren't foals." (We can go as soon as Riverbreeze comes back)
" ill go with you. My dam was a spy and she showed me all her secrets"
Snowfrost- Snowfrost lowered his voice so no one else could over hear, "We're going to spy on banished herd to prove we're not foals."
Starsun saw her best friends, riverbreeze and snowfrost. she trotted up to them and said "what are you two planning?"
( bye )
(gtg, bye!)
(Of course not!!!) Riverbreeze-"Thats true.. you saw what my father did last night... he treated me ike a newborn!!"
(I'm going to church in a few minuets, but I'll be back in a couple of hours, plz don't go to Banished herd without me)
Snowfrost- Snowfrost looked around to see if any other pegasus was in ear shot, "No. I haven't told Star, I think the older steeds have been treating up like foals a lot."
(ok thx) Riverbreeze: "Does star know of your plan?" x she said while preening her feathers x
(Banished herd is in Snow Herd's old territory)
(how far away is banished herd from river herd)
Riverbreeze: "Hmmmmm... thats pretty risky... but, i like a challenge!
Snowfrost- "Well today I want to see if we can spy on Banished Herd." said Snowfrost, "I mean if your up to it."