Thank you all for your patience, and now I will explain how this works:
I want this to be a more relaxed rp. So instead of posting one sentence, I was thinking more of one paragraph (I will post first so I can give more of an example). But other then that it will be just like the other rp. Oh and I also don't want to have multiple people typing at the same time, plz be considerate because not everyone types fast, and there's no need to race
Story:
A year after Star battled Nightwing. All the pegasi in Anok were rounded up and divided into two groups, the first one was all the pegasi who still thought Star would destroy Anok or wanted to rule Anok for them selves. The second group was all of the pegasi who trusted Star and his friends, and were loyal to Anok.
The first group led by Riversun was banished to Snow Herd's former territory, wile the second group led by Star traveled all over Anok.
19 years later, the foals of these steeds live in the were their parents lived. Wither or not they deserve to live there is what we'll have to find out...
Characters:
River herd:
Starsun, daughter of Star
Echomoon, daughter of Echofrost
Secretbreeze, daughter of Bumblewind
Starbrooke, daughter of Dewberry
Riverbreeze, daughter of Shadepebble
Horizonfire, daughter of Sunray
Snowfrost, son of Iceriver
Spiderangel, daughter of Morningleaf
Banished herd:
Wintersong, daughter of Frostfire
Stormpebble, daughter of Riversun
Note: you can still a characters, just post their description under "Guardian Herd Descendants RP: Character Board
Stormpebble- Stormpebble bent down to get a drink from the pond near the cave Banished herd used for a camp. Suddenly she heard a thump behind her, and Stormpebble turned just in time to see one of Riversun's under-stallions, before he shoved her into the water.
"Why'd ya do that?" Stormpebble demanded.
"To prove I'm not scared of you or you mother." Laughed the under-stallion, and he flew away.
"I'll show him." Muttered Stormpebble angrily, as she pulled herself out of the pond.
Out RP -- its Echofrost not Evhomoon XD sorry not to be critical or anything also idk what to add.......... eh sorry i can delete this comment if the comment section is used only for rps! Hava good day :)
(Sorry Echomoon, I'll change it right now)
(tell me if i am doing this right)
Riverbreeze-Riverbreeze glided above the trees of the river herd camp and landed next to her friends Starsun, Horizonfire,Starbrooke,Seceretbreeze, and Echomoon and folded her wings. "Hey let's play chase!" She ran over to Starbrooke and tagged her, "Your it!" she squealed and cantered off playfully.
Pause (was i doing that right?)
(You did great)
k yay! (unpaused)
Stormpebble- Storpebble flapped her grey wings and raced after the under-stallion. Rumors had started the last few months that Riversun was getting soft, and was looking to find a replacement so she could join River Herd. The rumors were of course untrue, but they still bothered Stormpebble.
She caught up to the stallion and slammed onto him knocking him out of the sky.
pause i feel like u need more characters in the banished herd
do u want me to be one or is that not fair
Actually, it's better not to have that many characters in banished herd because I was thinking more steeds would be in river herd, but if you want to have a character in banished herd I won't stop you :)
WHY DO I HAVE LIVE THE BANISHED HERD!? WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS TO ME?!
Because Frostfire is kinda a villain, and otherwise I would be the only one in Banished herd
i mean u only hav 2 characters in banished herd so......
it is whatever u wanna do dragon u made the rp after all
Echomoon: Uh oh -gallops off avoiding Starbrook and catches up with Riverbreeze- There sure aint no way im being it! -folds wings and fits neatly between trees- (pause Yeah Riverbreeze u were doin that right XDXDXD good call me freind-
(pause wait i just realized we r all daughters no sons XDXDXDXDX)
Yeah I thought that was funny to when I was writing down all the names
Stormpebble-The under-stallion fell from the sky, Stormpebble worried she had knocked him unconscious when she slammed into him, but just before he hit the ground the under-stallion spread his wings and flew to safety.
Stormpebble gritted her teeth and raced after him
Starsun- starsun sprinted over to echomoon and riverbreeze " starbrooks gaining on us "