Oakfall dashed through the bushes along with his mate Lightfall. She halted and panted. "You think we outran them?" Oakfall looked around for the wolves, and saw no sign of them. "I think we did." It was only them two stuck together, facing the dangers that laid upon them. Ever since they were banished from Flamewing's herd they had to live alone. Lightfall was with foal at that time, which was a couple moons ago. The fact that any day now she could give birth made Oakfall's feathers stand on end. He looked at his mate. "Let's rest and graze here for a while, then we can continue looking for the horses." Lightfall nodded and they rested, keeping alert for other predators. They faced many dangers, but they lived. And this encouraged him. What would happen in the future, he didn't know. But he laid thinking of the present and his job, keeping watch for danger this night and think of where the horses were migrating.
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Awesome!!
How have I not read this until now???? Anyway, awesome job
I agree, plz keep going :)
BAM
Another junior author is born :) i love it!! Even tho it doesnt have a plot, it just flows thru so well! Keep writin me friend :)
AWESOME STORY! VERY WELL WRITTEN. NEED MORE
I LOVE THIS ALREADY!!! CONTINUE PLZZZZZZZ
Thanks so much guys! :)
ikr
Amazing!
I do to:)
i love it!!!!!!!!!
Thanks! I will! =D
Love it, keep writing :)
I just made this and I don't have a plot yet.... but this is the first part. o:
Wait...
I just noticed that Oakfall and Lightfall have the same last names. ;-; Oh well. :P