The sun was well through the sky when he finally spotted the Trap. His heart sped up and almost stopped. He was finally going to see Marlcloud.
And finally get the chance to kill her.
He whistled, sharp and shrilly to the battalion. (Dragon, I’ma need some help here ;3 I don’t know how this works, plz correct me xD) The battalion consisted of four groups, each of which contained ten pegasi, meaning there were forty pegasi, including Thunderfire, in the battalion. There were two companies, one of which was lead by Thunderfire, and the other by Garnetfire, one of Thunderfire’s most trusted steeds.
The wind ruffled against his furry coat, and his forelock whipped into his eyes. He tossed his head, which sent a surge of adrenaline as the world spun around him. It quickly leveled out, though, and then the adrenaline was gone.
It took another thirty minutes of high-speed flying to reach the boundary of the Trap. Thunderfire looked to Garnetfire and nodded. Garnetfire understood and started to dive downwards. Thunderfire escaped the dive as the rest of the battalion landed, to pursue into the Trap with two other stallions and one mare.
Thunderfire had informed these three steeds previously, before the battalion had taken off. They hadn’t gotten any rest, and were rather sluggish in their movements as they landed. There were two under-captains, and one spy. Thunderfire had chosen them specifically for their infiltration and spy skills.
Thunderfire allowed them a moments’ rest as he went to peer into the thickly wooded forest. There was an air of moisture, yet it felt quite dry, cold, and cracked. He wondered how Marlcloud could live in such a place.
Even though he hated her, he still remembered her sensitivity to the cold.
She buried her head into Seaglade's feathers and spoke softly to him. "Seaglade..... You know what I see when I look at you? I see a colt who is hurting and wants to be healed. Not by Thea....... But by something deeper." She looked into his eyes and said with tears. "I see me! My broken heart my tears my pain my hopelessness. I had to grow.... I fell in love with an amazing colt named Bakari..... I liked him but Thea and him just fit. He showed me what a real pegasus is. I judged you by him and you passed. You are perfect for me.... He was not you are. I love you Seaglade with all my heart!" She hugged him closer. "You are perfect Seaglade perfect for me!"
She looked at her foals and felt some creepy feeling like something bad would happen. Something she learned being the leadmare. She grabbed both foals and climbed a tree she hid them in a hollow. "Thunderstar! Keep sister here and stay in this hollow no mater what happens till I come for you ok?"
“I missed you so so much!” She looked up and faced her older brother. “Why aren't you in Ash Herd? Why are you here in the first place?” Questions came flooding out of her mouth.
Rainshiver:
”Hang on there, you talk too much!” Rainshiver was over joyed. He had accomplished he mission to find his sister! Rainshiver had not seen Semper sense their mother died about a year ago. Just then Rainshiver’s thoughts broke. “What was that?” His ears stood on end. He remembered how they were close to the edge of the forest. The young pinto stepped forward and peered out the thick forest, one of his wings around his sisters back protectively. Rainshiver’s eyes widened as he set his eyes on a full battalion. “By the ancestors!“ He whispered harshly to himself. Suddenly all of the steeds he saw flooded into what seemed to be a ditch almost as quick as he had seen them. Rainshiver shook his head. He must have been seeing things.
Thunderray/star:
“Mama?” The young cows worried but kept a wing over his sister and nodded. As he watched his mother.
The rocky mountain colt smiled pleasantly. “If you say so, fire-wielding filly. But nothing you can say will convince me that you love me more than I love you,” he whispered.
Thunderfire:
Thunderfire ordered his three chosen steeds to stay put as he went to converse with Garnetfire. He observed their location, and was proud to notice they were hidden in a deep ditch, completely obscured from anyone’s view inside of the Trap. He planted most of his weight on his front feet and spreading out his wings for balance as he gracefully stumbled down the slope.
He quickly conversed with Garnetfire of where he was going and when he should be back. If he wasn’t back by the time, he gave Garnetfire the permission to fly swiftly over the canopy of the Trap, and send a few steeds diving into every clearing, searching for the Shadow Foals.
Thunderfire quickly dashed up the slope, this time planting his back feet with all his weight and tucking his wings at an angle. He finally came back to his three steeds, who were rested well and itchy with anticipation.
The silver blanketed appaloosa overo gave them the signal to follow them at a brisk, silent pace into the thickly wooded Trap.
(I say we should wait till the foals see the battalion because remember they're in the Trap. There's barely even enough sunlight to break through, much less the ability to see an entire battle squad coming towards them. Plus, it adds to the evil factor of Thunderfire)
She watched Vida and Seaglade, happy that Vida was happy with someone she cared about.
Anblick:
He felt the same way Stormfrost felt, except his was twice as worse. Every time a sound reached his ears, he jumped. He was shy, but he was never spooked so easily. Anblick stepped closer to Silren, hoping that her presence would make him feel better. But, strangely, it only made him feel worse. He figured that this might have something to do with his powers-telling the future or some sort.
This didn't make Anblick feel better and his heart raced and his instinct was telling him to run-run as fast as he could and escape. He took a deep breath, trying to calm his nerves, and it helped. But, in the back of his mind, a dark shadow clung to him like a tick-sending fear and adrenaline coursing through his veins with every breath.
(I say we should wait. remember they're in the Trap. There's barely even enough sunlight to break through the dense trees, much less the ability to see an entire battle squad coming towards them. Plus, it adds to the evil factor of Thunderfire)
She lowered her head to look up at Anblick in confusion. “Hey, are you alright? You seemed flushed..... What’s wrong?” Silren asked, genuinely concerned.
(Thank you!)
Thunderfire:
The sun was well through the sky when he finally spotted the Trap. His heart sped up and almost stopped. He was finally going to see Marlcloud.
And finally get the chance to kill her.
He whistled, sharp and shrilly to the battalion. (Dragon, I’ma need some help here ;3 I don’t know how this works, plz correct me xD) The battalion consisted of four groups, each of which contained ten pegasi, meaning there were forty pegasi, including Thunderfire, in the battalion. There were two companies, one of which was lead by Thunderfire, and the other by Garnetfire, one of Thunderfire’s most trusted steeds.
The wind ruffled against his furry coat, and his forelock whipped into his eyes. He tossed his head, which sent a surge of adrenaline as the world spun around him. It quickly leveled out, though, and then the adrenaline was gone.
It took another thirty minutes of high-speed flying to reach the boundary of the Trap. Thunderfire looked to Garnetfire and nodded. Garnetfire understood and started to dive downwards. Thunderfire escaped the dive as the rest of the battalion landed, to pursue into the Trap with two other stallions and one mare.
Thunderfire had informed these three steeds previously, before the battalion had taken off. They hadn’t gotten any rest, and were rather sluggish in their movements as they landed. There were two under-captains, and one spy. Thunderfire had chosen them specifically for their infiltration and spy skills.
Thunderfire allowed them a moments’ rest as he went to peer into the thickly wooded forest. There was an air of moisture, yet it felt quite dry, cold, and cracked. He wondered how Marlcloud could live in such a place.
Even though he hated her, he still remembered her sensitivity to the cold.
(oooooooohhhhhhhh things about to get interesting up in here XDD)
(Can I be the spy?)
( XDDDDDD Is he too harsh? )
(No! I love it. I'm just saying that things are getting good)
(the new wave of villains! I will introduce one too)
Vida:
She buried her head into Seaglade's feathers and spoke softly to him. "Seaglade..... You know what I see when I look at you? I see a colt who is hurting and wants to be healed. Not by Thea....... But by something deeper." She looked into his eyes and said with tears. "I see me! My broken heart my tears my pain my hopelessness. I had to grow.... I fell in love with an amazing colt named Bakari..... I liked him but Thea and him just fit. He showed me what a real pegasus is. I judged you by him and you passed. You are perfect for me.... He was not you are. I love you Seaglade with all my heart!" She hugged him closer. "You are perfect Seaglade perfect for me!"
Stormfrost:
She looked at her foals and felt some creepy feeling like something bad would happen. Something she learned being the leadmare. She grabbed both foals and climbed a tree she hid them in a hollow. "Thunderstar! Keep sister here and stay in this hollow no mater what happens till I come for you ok?"
(;-; Thunderfeather/Thunderstar/Thunderray is very confused at what his name is)
xD
(Sorry let me fix that)
Semper:
“I missed you so so much!” She looked up and faced her older brother. “Why aren't you in Ash Herd? Why are you here in the first place?” Questions came flooding out of her mouth.
Rainshiver:
”Hang on there, you talk too much!” Rainshiver was over joyed. He had accomplished he mission to find his sister! Rainshiver had not seen Semper sense their mother died about a year ago. Just then Rainshiver’s thoughts broke. “What was that?” His ears stood on end. He remembered how they were close to the edge of the forest. The young pinto stepped forward and peered out the thick forest, one of his wings around his sisters back protectively. Rainshiver’s eyes widened as he set his eyes on a full battalion. “By the ancestors!“ He whispered harshly to himself. Suddenly all of the steeds he saw flooded into what seemed to be a ditch almost as quick as he had seen them. Rainshiver shook his head. He must have been seeing things.
Thunderray/star:
“Mama?” The young cows worried but kept a wing over his sister and nodded. As he watched his mother.
(could Rainshiver see the battalion? They were at the edge of the Trap. Not trying to be rude, I'm just confused)
Seaglade:
The rocky mountain colt smiled pleasantly. “If you say so, fire-wielding filly. But nothing you can say will convince me that you love me more than I love you,” he whispered.
Thunderfire:
Thunderfire ordered his three chosen steeds to stay put as he went to converse with Garnetfire. He observed their location, and was proud to notice they were hidden in a deep ditch, completely obscured from anyone’s view inside of the Trap. He planted most of his weight on his front feet and spreading out his wings for balance as he gracefully stumbled down the slope.
He quickly conversed with Garnetfire of where he was going and when he should be back. If he wasn’t back by the time, he gave Garnetfire the permission to fly swiftly over the canopy of the Trap, and send a few steeds diving into every clearing, searching for the Shadow Foals.
Thunderfire quickly dashed up the slope, this time planting his back feet with all his weight and tucking his wings at an angle. He finally came back to his three steeds, who were rested well and itchy with anticipation.
The silver blanketed appaloosa overo gave them the signal to follow them at a brisk, silent pace into the thickly wooded Trap.
( Yeah, I didn’t think the pegasi in the Trap could see the battalion.... aren’t they near the clearing? )
(I say we should wait till the foals see the battalion because remember they're in the Trap. There's barely even enough sunlight to break through, much less the ability to see an entire battle squad coming towards them. Plus, it adds to the evil factor of Thunderfire)
( Anyways, I need Thunderfire to NOT be caught to be a better villain..... Otherwise, I have no idea what I’m doing :/ )
(I think that he can escape)
Thea:
She watched Vida and Seaglade, happy that Vida was happy with someone she cared about.
Anblick:
He felt the same way Stormfrost felt, except his was twice as worse. Every time a sound reached his ears, he jumped. He was shy, but he was never spooked so easily. Anblick stepped closer to Silren, hoping that her presence would make him feel better. But, strangely, it only made him feel worse. He figured that this might have something to do with his powers-telling the future or some sort.
This didn't make Anblick feel better and his heart raced and his instinct was telling him to run-run as fast as he could and escape. He took a deep breath, trying to calm his nerves, and it helped. But, in the back of his mind, a dark shadow clung to him like a tick-sending fear and adrenaline coursing through his veins with every breath.
Stormfrost:
"Thunderstar. I need to go now baby I love you!" She flew down ready to fight
(I say we should wait. remember they're in the Trap. There's barely even enough sunlight to break through the dense trees, much less the ability to see an entire battle squad coming towards them. Plus, it adds to the evil factor of Thunderfire)
(Stormcloud/frost is in the trap. Her foals are in a tree)
(NP! I already changed the comment to make Rainshiver think he was seeing things again. He sees stuff a lot.)
(Cool, i just don't want it to get confusing to anyone)
(MERLCLOUD! We need you!)
Silren:
She lowered her head to look up at Anblick in confusion. “Hey, are you alright? You seemed flushed..... What’s wrong?” Silren asked, genuinely concerned.
(Wait, why do we need Marlcloud? )
(Seaglade needs to get her. Battalion attack Stormcloud needs to talk to her.... Ring a bell? :P)
( Right... I thought they couldn’t see the battalion )
(Never mind)
Vida: "Seaglade... want to go walk?" Vida was nervous but wanted to talk tp him away from everyone