( It’s fine lol, I can repost your comment on the new post if you want )

(I didn't know there was a new part)

( Ashsong, PLEASE stop commenting on the old parts. The reason why your comments aren’t being answered is because there is a new part xd I do remember that, tho )

(ANYYYBODY??)

Frayan:

Frayan leapt into the sky, heading toward the Trap. An image of his sister lying on the ground, her back covered in blood from the panther attack flashed in his mind. The Trap, merely bad memories lured in its depths, where none could escape. (DO ANY OF YOU WHO WERE HERE FOR THE FIRST PART REMEMBER THAT??? When Jeray got attacked and Kifo found her and was like, "I'll never leave your side!" Ahhhhh, memories. XD)

The stallion landed silently before the great wall of trees. He stood before the dark opening, splaying his wings.

( I’m here, I’ll make a new part in a sec. Also, thanks, RB! :D )

Estrel:

"Its ok. He wont EVER hurt you again!"

Spottedwind,

"For me, it's just another reason for my brother to hate me," she

Estrel:

"I've come to terms with her death."

Spottedwind,

"I'm so sorry," she replied.

Estrel:

"I'm sorry Spottedwind. My mother was killed."

(Did you see Spottedwind's comment?)

Caita laid her head back down on his shoulder and just stood there, being with him just made her happy in general.

Windborn:

"And I will be here for you." he said

Caita, "I don't know how much dying there will be, but I can say that I will always be here for you, no matter where we are." she whispered to him a smile across her face.

Windborn:

"I love you want I want to grow old and die or grow old and live with you forever our forever."

Caita looked away she could feel her ears growing warmer by the second, she looked back up at him, "I don't know what to say to that, I'm astonished that anyone would even like me in that way, but I can't say that I disagree." she whispered to him her face calm but joyful at the same time.

(That's what I was saying!!)

(Hey he has already died once gotta live your one life)

(OH HECK)

Windborn:

"When we grow up..... I want you to be my mate." He said blushing

Caita nuzzled him, "I love you too, with my whole heart and soul" she whispered her smile bright as her eyes trailed to him.

Windborn:

"I love you Caita. With my whole heart."

Caita smiled and her brightness started to fade as they left she kept her head on Windborn's shoulder though and watched as they left.

Windborn;

"Bye Papa bye Starlight!" he called out then at the last minute he called out. "Bye Star! And thank you!"

Rose kept her eyes on the fading lights then she turned back and headed back towards Sunsky and her own home.

Jigun:

He softened and smiled, his black eyes twinkling with sudden compassion. "You're sire sounds like a jerk." He nickered gently before continuing, "Now that I'm apart of Shadow herd, I won't let him hurt us." As he spoke he swept his wing over the territory, meaning everyone-all the Star foals.

Anblick:

After the colors disappeared, he sighed and drifted back towards land. He had wished he could've spoken to his mother or seen her, but he knew that it was a selfish and impossible wish. His dam was dead, in the Golden Meadow, with no way to speak to him or comfort him.

He suddenly felt totally alone-he was surrounded by his friends and fellow Star foals, but he felt alone and forgotten. He tucked his tail and dropped his head, but moved forward and looked for Silren- the one foal who could always comfort him.

Thea:

She didn't stop following the colorful lights, even as they disappeared over the crest of the horizon. She wished she could join them, flying freely over the land with no regrets, no worries, no fears, and no pain.

But instead, she was left in the mortal world with no way to escape.

"Take me with you! Don't-don't leave me....please." She whinnied painfully into the clouds, her voice cracking and echoing across the mountains, but the Ancestors didn't answer her pleas. Thea stopped running.

She inhaled a shaky breath and casted a yearning glance one more time over the horizon-silently wishing to see her mother again-before she turned and sullenly trotted away, back to Shadow herd.

Spottedwind,

She sighed, "my mother, she died giving birth to me," she nickered.

(Hey Cinder, things are happening on Kihlari with Clint...XD)

Estrel:

"They are beauftiul. Can I ask how she died?"

Spottedwind,

"Cool," she nickered, "those are my mother's feathers," pointing To a ice colored violet tipped section.

Tideflight laughed softly and waved goodbye to the ancestors as they flew away his father's emerald green wings following with them.

(Nightmist you have nothing to worry about! Your characters aren’t being focused on! I like Silren’s story a lot! Her mother and father ignoring each other and how confusing it is. But you don’t have to worry about your oc’s being too focused on)

Estrel:

"My Mother is there too see those silver tipped pink feathers?" He asked pointing

(Did you see Spottedwind's comment?]

Lonestar:

"Pwtty!" She said again.

Bumbleberry:

"Mama! Bubba look its mama!" He said pointing to her fading feathers as she flew away

Vida:

"Wait come back!" She whispered her wings turning back to their redish orange color the sparkles gone. "Mama I miss you!" She whispered and then gasped as she saw aqua feathers dance by and knew who it was. "Your my sister." She whispered remembering the tail her mother had told ehr about her older sister, Dancingsun. Who had died at birth. The feathers flew by and she looked at the ancesters and smiled. "Home. What a beautiful thought."

( So I’ve been thinking about Silren and her family for a little bit (sorry this is so focused on my characters, I just need opinions xD), and how none of them seem to realize the strangeness of their family. Any suggestions? Also, here’s the comment to go with it:)

Silren:

Silren had landed in the grass a while ago, already munching in thought. Knowing that she had not lost anyone made her think about her family, and how strange it is. Her mother and ’father’ weren’t together, and she had a cousin.

Then she really started to think about it, and then got very claustraphobic, or unsure of herself. Her father, Thunderfire, had been evil once, but had now humbled and quieted. She realized she had been ignoring him for the longest time, and how she didn’t want to ignore him anymore.

But she was always with her mother, and her mother and father had been ignoring each other forever. Panicking, she searched frantically for her cousin, then for Thea, and then for Ablick, seeking comfort among her friends and fellow star foals.

( XDDD )

(Idk..... I'm gonna leave that up for you guys to decide, I'll just play the part!! XD)

( So, can we agree that we’re capturing Caita? Or Caita AND Frayan? )

Bakari:

At the sign of the Ancestors, he had drifted into the sky, eyes open, scanning for a color he may have recognized. He did not remember his mother’s feather color, but Marlcloud had told him it had been beaautiful purple with green edges.

Grinning, he saw the purple and green and waved with his wing. ”Hi, Mom!” He whispered, content to see her feathers dancing. As the other star foals did, he bowed his head in respect as the Ancestors continued on their journey across the sky.

Sighing with happiness and content, he flew down and landed, searching for Thea to make sure she was okay.

Iden:

She furrowed her brow, stumped on how to respond. "If it makes you feel better my sire is hunting us down and trying to take over Anok. I mean, imagine if I was actually related to him. By blood!" She sneered gagging and giggling at the though. "You don't need to have lost someone to appreciate it."

Hugur watched them go he bowed his head then looked away from them letting them keep going with their journey.

Caita stayed close to Windborn as she kept radiating green from her powers watching as they left the scene.

Jigun:

He stiffened and frowned. He didn’t want to tell Iden that he hadn’t lost his mother, or anyone he cared about, but he didn’t want to lie to her either.

So, he inhaled gently and folded his wings, “My dam didn’t die at birth. Like Silren’s mother, she survived. I’ve been fortunate-no one in my family has died.“ Jigun paused, his black eyes narrowed, and he clenched his jaw.

“But, I wouldn’t care if they had-my own parents hated me and sent me away without hesitation and my own brother tried to kill me... I never want to see them again. They can rot in a grave for all I care.” He snorted harshly, lashing his black tail and pounding the ground angrily with one hoof.

Rose watched helplessly as her parents colors faded away in the distance, she hovered in the sky silently a few tears falling as they left, but she didn't make a big scene out of it.

Iden:

"Yah, im good. My dams were there. My milk dam and my birth dam.... yet, I didn't go up to them. I just felt so weird, like it was so real that it couldn't be true. I don't know. What about you? Why didn't you go find your dam?" She said looking back to him.

Jigun:

Unlike the most of the other Star foals, he hadn’t lost anyone. His dam had almost died at birth, but she managed to survive. Like Silren, he felt awkward for not having someone to grieve, which just felt weird. He bowed his head in respect as the Ancestors continued on their migration. He hovered silently for a few more seconds, watching the colors slowly disappear over the horizon, before he fluttered down and landed next to Iden.

He blinked at her and snorted to get her attention, “You alright?” He asked simply, knowing that Iden cared more about the Ancestors than she would admit, but Jigun saw through her-she loved one Ancestor in particular.

Iden:

She stared at the glowing lights fixed in front of her. After she lifted from her bow, and so did the others, they lights moved away, continuing on their path. "Wait!" She yelled reaching after them.

She pulled out, respecting that they had their own life in the golden meadow, "Come back...." She whispered.

Bright amber lights caught her eye as they stopped in front of her, waiting for her to join. "Mapleleaf, I.." She said.

It was her adopted dam, the one that told her all her stories. The one her dad killed. She decided she didn't want to draw attention to herself. So she left, leaving the amber lights alone. She looked back, bright blue lights appeared beside her, "Momma?"

She felt the connection she didn't get to as a foal. It had to be her real dam. She wanted to return, but for some reason, she didn't. She returned to the ground and watched as the amber lights disappeared, but the blue lights stayed for longer. Soon, both dams moved on and continued on the journey. As soon as they left hot regret boiled in her stomach. She wanted to bleat for them, like a newborn foal, but she didn't. Again she didn't know why. She aimlessly ate the sweet grass as she listened to the other foals fly with their parents. But she felt happy for them. Maybe one day she'd see the ancestors again. If not, perhaps when it was all over, she would see them in the golden meadow. She smiled, and continued to graze, satisfyed.

Zmina

she looked up, "Wow!" she whispered.

(Oh cool!! I be there to look!! :) I leave it up to Wind if she wants to suggest any of the ships that I am in with her, I really only have one, and that is with Caita and Windborn, so I'll leave it up to her!! XD)

(Just a little announcement!

I'm working on drawing Thakari at the moment!! It looks really good so far and my goal is to finish all my favorite ships from this RP! I'll probably do Jiden(Igun) or Silblick(Anren) next cuz i rly like them, but i probably finish Thakari tonight and post it sometime tomorrow! So be on the look out for that!

And if anyone has any requests for ships in this RP, i'll try to complete them! (please don't go overboard with requests tho i can't draw fast lolol))

Hugur turned on his power and he glowed a light tint of blue he could now hear Zmina's thoughts but he ignored them as he found it natural to let himself glow with his powers with Star right over head, "Look at the front, it's star." he nickered to Zmina as they flew.

(I think that's how you spell her name...XD)

Ivyspring:

She bowed her head respectfully, "I will not disappoint." then, with a new sense of determination, went to Starstrike's wings and inspected the feathers. One by one she yanked out each flight feather with her teeth, meticulously picking and choosing which feather to pull out. If it was essential for flight, she ripped it out.

After about 15 minutes, both of Starstrike's wings were stripped of the long flight feathers and her wings looked half naked. The long feathers laid tattered on the ground in piles, drifting in the wind. "It is done. She is grounded for several moons." She snorted to Brokenfire then nodded in the direction of the Interior, her dark amber eyes curious, "Will we be leaving soon?"

Brokenfire:

Brokenfire stared at Ivyspring for a few moments, and only flicked his ears towards Oakheart. ”I trust you, Ivyspring. But,” he snorted, ”if I come back to here long gone, if I come back to find you disobeyed my wishes, I promise you I will not hesitate to throw my trust of you out the window.”

Brokenfire glared at each of them. ”Do it, then, Ivyspring.”

(Cinder are you here??)

Spottedwind,

She looked at the lights, "Wow," she whispered, "My mother is up there,"she added in a more quiet whisper

Tideflight flew over to Lonestar and hovered by her, "I know isn't it!" he nickered to her with a smile, "Those are the ancestors, they must be migrating right now. if you look hard enough, you can see my real dad, look for his wing color, it's a dark emerald green tipped in light purple." he nickered to her with a smile.

Oakheart:

"I'll break her wings if you want sir!" he said a blood thirsty glint in his eyes

(I think it’s okay for both Frayan and Caita to get captured... its fine with me. Btw, Nightmist- Ivyspring spike to Brokenfire)

Lonestar:

"Pwedy! (Pretty)"

Rose flew with her mother and father nickerng to them, she ended up at the herd in the end radaiting her gold and aqua green starfire brightly, the aqua green out standing the gold on her.

(Kidnp Kidnap Kidnap! I dont care who I just want it to happen people!)

(I mean... I really don't care!! XD)

Estrel:

"Spottedwind look!" He said pointing to the streaks of light. "Mama!" He called seeing Gentlecloud's feathers.

Starstrike:

She arched her neck with pride not revialing she was terrified

( I don’t think it’s a good idea, unless they’re capturing Frayan instead of Caita, or both Caita and Frayan are being captured )

(Phooey, I gtg anyway!)

(But what about Caita being kidnapped..... what if he doesn't get caught, like a stealth mission??)

(So can Frayan...?)

(mebbe i can make Frayan come...? 😁)

(Where are they right now?)

Ivyspring:

She turned to Starstirke, her eyes apologetic. Ivyspring was obedient and reliable, but she wasn't a killer, and breaking Starstrike's wings and abandoning her meant certain death for the mare.

Icyspring couldn't be responsible for that. She turned to Brokenfire.

"I can pull out her flight feathers, sir. It was apart of spy training. It will have the same effect of breaking her wings-she will be grounded. It takes months, almost a year, for flight feathers to grow back. Plus, I fear that breaking her wings could give away our position-the wing bone is heavy and dense and would make a loud crack." She offered respectfully, pointing out the long, skinny flight feathers at the tips of each pegasi wing that are essential for flying.

Frayan:

Frayan shook his mane and snorted, slowly splaying his wings. He leapt into the air, cutting through the trees and bursting into the open sky. He hovered, taking in his bearings for a moment. The stallion pumped his wings higher until the point of everything below was but a blur of mixed natural colors. Frayan could just make out pegasi's wings of different bright colors. He looked to the east, were the sun rises. He dove at a ridiculous speed, tears leaking out of his eyes and streaming down his cheeks as he rocketed toward land. The moment when he was about to break through the treetops, he disappeared, leaving behind him an explosion of ice blue feathers and mist.

Frayan reappeared on top of a hill, the wind ripping through his tangled black mane. (Just to get SOMETHING in here!!!!!)

Starstrike:

"Then break my wings now." She said her voice icey

Brokenfire:

”Then you shall meet them, Starstrike,” he said. ” You shall meet the consequences head on, with no complaint.”

Starstrike:

"Yes I did that! The consequences are me dying or living with broken wings. I'm not scared to face the consequences!"

Brokenfire:

Brokenfire narrowed his eyes. ”Spies do not protect, Starstrike. They do what they are told, they do not resist, and they follow the job through no matter the consequences,” he snarled.

Starstrike:

"I was a good spy! Stormtail told me to watch the herd and help protect the Star foals." She said

Brokenfire:

Brokenfire snorted. ”You would if you understood, Starstrike. But, too bad you don’t,” he snarled. ”You would have been a fine spy.”

Starstrike:

She stood still waiting for her punishment. "I would never help you!"

Brokenfire:

After they had waited tucked away into the Trap for over thirty minutes, he decided it was safe. No one had come looking, not yet, at least. Looking at Starstrike, he debated bringing her with them. Deciding against it, he said to Ivysong, ”Leave her here. Break her wings, so she will be immobile.”

(Me like that Idea Starlife! (I just noticed I wrote Starlife but I'm not changing it) I dont know which one I like best for Windborn!)

(Windfeather, you could do growing or shrinking like you said, but alsoIce powers. I dont think thats taken. Like his starfire is frost and it can freeze pegasi till they are able to break out ya know?)

(I can't stop laughing at the tiny Cole dancing down there in the GIF)

(Frayan continues to be saddddddddd. XD Idk wat to make me OCs do right now!)

(Any other could be used for evil powers?)

Windborn:

He did the same and his star fire caused his wings to sparkle

Caita listened ad watch Iden and Vida. She obeyed too her starfire rushed through her causing her to glow with a bright green, memories of her past surfaced and she didn't like it but she trusted her starfire and let it do as it liked then her memories went silent and she could feel the warm glow of it she smiled and kept her head on Windborn's shoulder.

(Could Windborn have the munipulation of feelings and silver starfire?)

Vida:

She obeyed and her long orange wings sparkled with her starfire

Iden:

"Let your starfire flow free. Feel his presense. Dont try to control it or stop it. Trust it." She explained as her wings glowed even more vibrantly.

(You know.... the entire fact that she was guarded for being a star foal... you know when her family abandoned her...XD And now she is going to get kidnapped!! XD)

(Again?? lol XD what happened the first time?)

(YAY CAITA'S GONNA BE LOCKED UP AGAIN!!! XD)

( LOL. I love feeling and mental powers xD )

( Hmm... Has anyone taken the manipulation of feelings? I find that one cool! Also, here we come, Caita!!! :D )

(Ok I have been stuggling with this for a while but I hate Windborn's powers. Being able to find out people's true intentions is kinda suck. I want to change it but dont have any ideas!)

(Aight...... Let's go for it if you want I guess!! XD)