Onward to another part!
Nightmist, if you wanna make the post, I can delete this so you can make it. but, here we go!
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Jeray:
Jeray snapped out of her obliviousness, jerking her head toward Frayan.
Her brother smiled sadly, "Jeray..."
She whimpered as new tears formed at the corners of her eyes, "Frayan,
Kifo-" she sobbed into his neck, wrapping her wings around him tightly.
"I know, Jeray. I know," her brother nickered sadly, burying his muzzle into her neck. "I'm so sorry... sorry that I wasn't there for you."
Jeray cried loudly, soaking Frayan's coat with her tears. "I- I wasn't there! I didn't even know! I wasn't even able to say good-bye!!" She screamed into his shoulder.
Frayan:
Frayan looked up, holding back tears. He stroked the poor young mare with his wing. If only- if only she had gotten to say good-bye. Then maybe she wouldn't be in this state of utter grief. Why did this have to happen? Jeray was now hurt more than ever, she had no one. It wasn't the same with him there with her. One tears rolled down Frayan's cheek, it was never going to be the same without Kifo there for his sister.
Tideflight heard Windborn shouting for help and he quickly turned around and ran towards his voice with a frightened look as he saw his mom, "Mamma!!" He brayed in a scared voice as he slowed down and nuzzled her but didn't get anything in response from her as he laid down next to her tears streaming from his eyes.
Caita sat back on her hunches as she saw Tideflight approach in her dream his voice mad but sad as he yelled at her even though she could it was fake it still hurt her, he also looked much older in her dream, his muscles where rounder and more plump his wings were bigger and spread across more space, but he was still smaller compared to the rest of the steeds that he was now chatting with.
Iden:
She stood thinking of what to do. "Im the quickest flier here, ill go get Mossroot."
Her wings pumped off the ground and she shifted into an eagle, letting her reach speeds faster than a normal Pegasus. She reached the old mare and shifted back to herself, stumbling as she landed. "Mossroot I need your help!"
Summary:
Soo Thea and Bakari were talking- Bakari was in a dilemma by he couldn't eat the grass because it hurt him and he also didn't want to eat it because it was apart of him(his powers coexist with nature) but he was hungry, so Thea was just supporting him.
Mossroot flew off in a huff of depression and grief, still sad and lonely.
Caita fainted due to using her powers too much and straining them. Windborn and Tidelfight are panicking. Iden just went to find Mossroot after she finished playing with Jigun.(which was absolutely adorable)
(Yeah that way the RP doesn’t get too boring and repetitive)
( Also, I feel like Brokenfire should actually capture a star foal, just because it would give Shadow Herd a new goal; to find the foal. Yeah? )
( I’ll make a new part )
Brokenfire:
The moment Starstrike whizzed past him, he snapped back into place. He just manaaged to catch her broken leg with a horrible kick, sending her sprawling.
Starstrike:
She zipped past them. "I wont help you!" She shouted flying deeper into the interior. After hard flying she came upon the small herd and whinnied loudly. "Help! Your under attack!"
Ivyspring:
She glanced at Brokenfire and flapped her wings in place, hovering. What was he doing? She tried to make sense of his strange demeanor and flying pattern, but the more she watched him, the more confused she became. He looked..lost.
“Sir?” She called gently, unsure if he could even hear her over the Interior winds. “Brokenfire? Your orders, sir?” She asked again only louder, flicking her tail in confusion.
Brokenfire:
The Interior soon came directly ahead of them, and the Trap far, far to their left. And then it happened, and it was horrible. Brokenfire broke into a sweat, confused as to where he was and what he was doing.
He paused in the air, circling as his nostrils flared and his mind reeled. Where was he? What was he doing? Who was he?
( Sorry, having a rough/awesome day xD )
Jigun:
He listened to her and never once looked away. He felt his fascination growing and the longing to know more about Star and his life. "What did he do after his second birthday? Where did he go?" He asked, storing away and memorizing all the details and stories that Iden was telling him. "Tell me more about Nightwing...He was the Destroyer, right? And what happened to River herd?" These were the first legends he had ever heard of, and so far, the stories of Star and his friends adventures were by far his favorite.
(we can. i was just waiting for nightmist tho)
(So can we say they are in the interior now?)
(When will they arrive)
Starstrike:
She flew faster away from Ivyspring.
Oakheart:
He kicked her his sharp hoof slicing her leg leaving a large deep gash.
Ivyspring:
“You always have a choice.” She said simply, her eyes bright and calm. She looked away and flew faster, determined.
(She has heard stories about them from some of the Sky herd traitors)
Starstrike:
"I was born into Sky herd. I had no choice." She said angrily
(How does she know of Thea?)
Ivyspring:
She glanced at Starstrike, “You shouldn’t have said anything. If you didn’t want to hurt the Star foals then you shouldn’t have joined Stormwing.” She whispered harshly, but continued to follow Brokenfire without hesitation
Starstrike:
"When will we get there?" She asked
Starstrike:
"Maybe that foal Thea will heal me." She thought flying next to Ivyspring. Her leg hurt badly but she knew it would heal
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire cocked his head, trying to pick out her motives. ”Good choice,” he snarled, turning away to fly back into the sky.
Starstrike:
She had no plans to obey the stallion but she bowed her head. "I will obey you." She said sounding obediant
Brokenfire:
Ignoring Oakheart for the moment, he replied, ”My orders are for you to follow my orders. Unless of course, you mean the orders given to me by Stormwing. Well, those are only for the trusted.”
Oakheart:
"We should just kill her she is a traitor!"
Starstrike:
"What are your orders?" She asked her head held high
Brokenfire:
”You have two options. One: continue to deny me, and I shall leave you here to die with your broken leg. Two: You can follow my orders, live, but forever be crippled with a broken wing. Which would you like, Starstrike?” He asked.
Starstrike:
"Never!" She snarled. Her leg was broken a clean break that would heal well.
Oakheart:
He bowed his head but wished he could destroy that traitoris mare
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire wheeled aroud, glaring at Oakheart. ”That is forbidden. Next time, let me handle it,” he snorted. Gliding down, he landed, Starstrike at his feet. ”Now are you more willing to help?” He asked.
Oakheart: (Another spy if thats ok)
He slammed his hooves into Starstrike's side knocking her out of the sky. She landed on 3 hooves.
Brokenfire:
His eye twitched as heat flooded throughout him. ”What is this right that I do not have?” He snarled. ”Choose your next words carefully, Starstrike.”
Starstrike:
"I wont help you. You have no right!" She said her sharp hooves flashing
Caita turned back to the elder mare and trotted over carefully, "Why couldn't you treat us like your children. It's not about giving us things, it's about being a role model, a parent figure that not many of us get." she nickered to the mare not realizing that Windborn had spoken to her.
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire stopped in his tracks, hovering over the ground. ”What did you say, Starstrike?” He threatened, his voice light as he turned his head.
Vida:
"This is so fun! Come catch me!"
Starstrike:
She froze. "No." SHe said her voice calm and firm. "No I wont help you do that."
Windborn:
"How you feeling Caita?"
Seaglade:
Seaglade pummeled after her, breathless and laughing.
Brokenfire:
He snorted. ”Pay attention better next time. We are currently hading to the Interior to spy upon Shadow Herd, capture a foal for interrogation, and make it back safely under the orders of Stormwing.”
Spottedwind,
"Alright!" she nickered angling her wings and flying higher,
(Vida is a shrimp she is about half the size of a normal colt but her wings are larger than normal foals)
Estrel:
"Lets go to the cloud!" He said
Spottedwind,
SHe kicked off to the sky, and to the side of Estrel
Estrel:
he flapped his large wings and qickly moved into the sky.
Starstrike:
"I dont remember sir. I I was thinking about something else." She whispered her head hanging (I dont know the plan, people!)
Vida:
"Really!" She zipped after him. Her large wings and small body made flying easy. She caught him and then flashed past him. "Haha cant catch me!"
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire looked behind him and called, ”I do not find your forgetting games very funny, Sunstrike.” He had already told them the plan, and he did not like being made fun of for his blankness and memory spaces.
Seaglade:
Seaglade grinned, spread his wings, jumped into the air and said,” Bet you can’t cath me!”
Spottedwind,
"Sure" she nickered
Estrel:
"Want to fly?" He asked Spottedwind
Aspenwillow, (My spy)
She flicked her ears looking over to Brokenfire.
( I didn’t realize they knew the legends lol )
Starstrike:
"What is the plan, Brokenfire sir?" SHe asked calling out to him.
Vida:
"Seaglade lets fly!" She said gliding back to him (I just skimmed!)
(Disclaimer: I know some of this is exaggerated, but that is to be expected with legends, and I want to make it realistic.)
Iden:
She grinned, "Of course! My dam, er uh, adopted dam, used to tell me all about the legends! Before Stormfire..... thats irrelevant.
Star was all black except for one large star on his forehead, born to the mare Lightfeather. She was said to be pure white, just like an evening star. Thunderwing, the over stallion of Sun Herd at the time, vowed to execute Star on his first Birthday. The day he would receive his Starfire, just like us! He was an outcast from then on, but Thunderwing's mate Silvercloud took him in and became his milk dam. Her daughter was Star's best friend, Morningleaf. They did everything together, some say they were more than best friends.
He had over sized wings. They were so big that he couldn't even lift them onto his back. He migrated with the walkers alone without his friends. He had long legs, like a land horse, and could outrun anything. A bit before his first birthday, Silvercloud took him away and hid him on the coast, which led to her banishment. The other herds found out and went to war. The Sun Herd army was the strongest the largest, but they were still outnumbered. The war ended with the mountain herd over stallion battling Sun Herd's honorary leader of the walkers, Woodwing was his name I believe. No, thats not right. Grasswing? Yes, I think it was Grasswing. It was said they were old enemies and that he hunted down Grasswing's foal and mate and killed them.
Grasswing lost and Star came back on his Birthday in order to save Morningleaf, who was to be killed if he wasn't found. He has learned to fly by then, practicing on the shore in Crabwing's bay. Just before Star was to receive the death blow, Morningleaf got in his way and took the blow, dying instantly. He recieved his powers and healed Morningleaf! He brought her back from the dead!! She is the only living pegasus in the history of Anok, to have seen the Golden Meadow!" She explained the rest of his life excitedly, sometimes acting scenes out, sometimes shedding a few tears. (RIP anyone who had to read that whole thing)
Estrel:
He looked at Iden and Jigun and realized he wanted to fly up in the sky. He wanted to fly through the clouds and watch them explode. He wished he could dive through the clouds and wished that he would not live forever. " guess we dont get what we want all the time. Do we...." He whispered.
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire glanced behind him at Starstrike, and nodded, then continued forward, flying low over the grass.
Starstrike:
She pulled back to speak with Ivyspring. "What is the plan do you know?" She whispered
Ivyspring:
She glided behind Starstrike and watched their lead-captain regain his balance. She exhaled, not surprised that he was able to catch himself. Brokenfire was a captain-he could recover easily. She didn't say anything, knowing that Brokenfire was just fine.
She glanced upward and sniffed the air for no reason. Ivyspring had always been cautious, but now that she was about to go and spy on the most powerful steeds in Anok, it set Ivyspring on edge more than usual. At the thought, her heart rate increased, but quickly calmed herself as they neared the Interior, "Focus, Ivyspring." She thought to herself, and flapped her wings, anxiously awaiting Brokenfire's instructions.
Starstrike: (My spy)
"Brokenfire sir!" She called flying next to him. "Are you alright?"
( Recomment:
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire squinted his eyes, panic sezing and tightening his throat. He then lost balance and plummeted towards the ground, reeling around to catch himself before he fell.
Rolling, he spread his wings again and regained his altitude, glancing behind him at the confused and untrustworthy spies. Only Brokenfire knew what had just happened, and he didn’t feel like telling any of them. )
( Yes I will find it lol )
Jigun:
He listened with pricked ears and found himself wanting to know more. He frowned, remembering that he had lived in the Interior by himself his whole life. He had never heard the legends before because no one had bothered to tell him.
He stepped closer, his eyes sparkling with curiosity and fascination, "Tell me more. I...I don't know any of the legends because I've been alone for so long. None of my family or past herdmates had bothered to tell me." He snorted and shifted his weight amongst his hooves and his ears went hot with embarrassment.
(I'm so bored and I definitely wanna rp let me go and make my spy character lol. but can you recomment that?)
( I don’t know if anyone saw, but anyone with a spy, I had a Brokenfire with a comment where he kind of fell and then regained his altitude but didn’t tell them. That’s if anyone is bored and wants to RP xD )
Iden:
"Did you know, Star was actually a "dud" for almost a complete year of his life. Its said that he couldn't even move his wings they were so big. They just hung off of him. He first flew when he was being attacked by the desert herd over-stallion, I forget his name. Its said that he had a vision of his mom, and that she told him to fly, and he did!" She said her eyes sparkling.
"Imagine if the legendary Morningleaf wasn't a good story teller!" She laughed.
Jigun:
He smiled, his face alight, “I know...It’s crazy to think about.” He replied, as he too, broke off pieces of frost and ice that clung to his coat and wings.
He sighed happily and inhaled deeply, allowing the warm air to fill his lungs before exhaling, “That was amazing. I love flying- I bet Star did too.” He nickered, and folded his wings comfortably on his back. He preened his wings and grinned at how his back and shoulder blades weren’t tired yet. He could have flown for another hour before exhaustion set in, and he fluttered his new wing, silently celebrating its newfound strength and endurance.
Iden:
She dipped down and landed, icy crystals breaking off her hide in the process. Her whole body was covered in an entire layer of frost, so she shook her head and neck, clearing as much as possible. She gulped happily at the fresh air.
"Just think, we flew where only Star, the black foal of Anok, the Healer, Anok's Healer, has flown." She smiled excited but tired, as she had used most of her energy to fuel her starfire. There wasn't much wildlife that far up.
Hugur fly without saying a word about anything, he didn't know what to do.
Rose checked her mental map and saw the direwolves, so she wasn't worried about that. She looked over at Sunsky who was grazing, and shrugged then started to graze too.
(Welp, Here we go anyways!! XD)
Caita, thought back to their conversation, and the bits that she had heard, "Wait, why wouldn't she be able to treat us as her children though?! She doesn't have to give us anything, we're all foals here, all she needs to be is a role model, a figure in our life to look up to. So why doesn't she?!?" her mind raced through it so fast that she almost couldn't hear it. She looked away and then looked back up at them, "I shouldn't get in the way though." she thought with a small smile using her wings again and turning to look at Windborn with a smile.
(I'm honestly bord.... I sorta wanna make Caita join in on this, but I feel like I would be invading things!! XD)
Caita looked back up, "I wanna stand up." she thought carefully. She steadied her legs under her and pushed herself up, she used her wings and balanced herself with them she stood for a few minutes making sure that she was good. When she knew that she was stable she looked back up and tucked in her wings, she looked around silently, "Hmm, why could she be acting like that?" her mind wondered about the old medicine mare as she looked around. Her face calm but determined.
Caita flickered her ears curiously at their conversation, and thought about her parents. She knew that her brother was still alive, but not her parents. "That is something I need to talk with my brother about as soon as I can." she thought looking away from them but still listening in as best she could.
Vida:
"I know Mossroot. I will die with the burden of not saying goodbye to Kifo or to my dam, Dovefrost." She said tears falling
Mossroot:
She sighed, "I cannot raise Tideflight. He already has a mother. I cannot raise you, either, Bumbleberry-you have Anblick. And I have nothing for Lonestar-I have no milk and nothing to offer her. I have nothing..." She replied to Bumbleberry, then lowered her gaze, "They may be at peace, but I am not. I have to live the rest of my life without them. I have no one... I am alone." Anblick flexed his wings at her words, his golden eyes flashing with sadness and surprise.
He ran to his aunt and wrapped his wings around her and buried his head in her neck, "NO! Don't say that! You are not alone. You never will be alone. I am here even though your mate and son are not. I promise-you have me. I'll never leave you!" He cried, and squeezed Mossroot tighter.
His elder aunt wrapped her wings around her nephew and nuzzled his neck. "I know, my dear....I just miss them and I wish that I could've said goodbye."
Bumbleberry:
"Be happy for new life! Be happy about Lonestar and Tideflight! Raise us like we are your foals!"
Vida:
"Mossroot." She said flying over there. "Mossroot! Seaglade helped me understand, we want to live the life they couldn't and be happy while we are living. They dont want us to be sad! They are at peace. At least you know that. My brother is not in peace but we have to keep going!" She said
Mossroot:
She stopped dead in her tracks and stood as still as a rock. Her ears pinned flat against her neck, and she slowly turned to face Bumbleberry. Before Caita had even had to speak, Anblick rushed forward and blocked Bumbleberry from Mossroot’s view with his body and wings. “No! No more fighting! Auntie, look at me.” Mossroot’s eyes lifted to face her nephew, but instead of filled with anger, it was simply pain.
“I know your hurting, but so is everyone else. I lost my mother and I thought you were dead for the longest time! Don’t focus on the negative. Focus on the positive!” He said and offered a small smile and winked at Silren. “Like your friends, and loved ones.”
Mossroot hung her head, but lashed her tail at the same time, “Anblick...I’m not as strong as you. I’ve tried focusing on the positive, but how can I do that when all the positive things in my life are gone? There’s nothing for me to be happy about.” She glanced at Silren, then stepped away from them.
(You gonna respond to Bumbleberry?"
Jigun:
He smiled to Iden, then found himself staring at her wings which were reflecting rainbows and casting lights all over her body. He snapped his eyes away and felt his wings thrum steadily. Whatever Thea did, it had worked. His once crooked wing was free of all pain, and he could fly faster and farther. Deep red sparks crackled out of his hooves and the corners of his eyes, radiating his silvery-gray coat in red light. He never wanted the land, but he knew that he would have to eventually, plus he needed to thank Thea. So, he tilted his wings downward and gently glided towards the puffy clouds below him.
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Bumbleberry:
He followed Mossroot. "Do you think you are the only one who lost someone?! We have ALL lost at least someone! I had to see my mother die and then my brother, Kifo died and I didnt even get to say goodbye. THEY WERE MY FAMILY!" He shouted the last bit)
(Want me to find it and recomment it?)
(Uhhh I don’t think I saw it sorry. My phone makes it harder to see)
(You read Bumbleberry's new comment?)
(Oof Sorry here now)
(Re-comment for RB) Iden:
She followed straining her neck upwards. The cold air nipped at her mussel, yet the radiant rays from the sun burned brightly, making her sweat. She let her starfire flow through her, making her glow a rainbow of colors. Her wings became matalic, reflecting the color off the ground below, and the sky above. She let out her breath as sparks of white starfire fell towards land, but she continued, letting her starfire fuel her.
The dark blue sky became darker and darker, and she could feel the tingle in her hooves as the sun melted away the rot and outer layer. Her eyes watered, and her tears and sweat turned into small droplets of ice, stuck to her hide. Her eyes sparkled as she started out into the dark space above. They flashes as she watched a twinkling star shoot across the black canvas.
No matter how hard she pumped her wings she could go no further. The air was so thin, practically non-existent, she couldn't even propel herself forward, They had gone as far as possible. She looked back at Jigun, unable to speak. She was at loss of words. Mentally and physically. She imagined Star, the large black colt, all alone. No one to understand what he was going through. She smiled satisfied and looked back to Jigun.
(Tala spoke to Hunter)
Rainflight let him sleep standing up and grazing.
(If you see the comment from before, I deleted it. I typed the wrong thing by accident!! XD)
Darkstar:
He let his head droop and drifted into sleep
Rainflight looked up at him with a smile, "Alright. Now rest you must be tired." she nickered to him still smiling.
Whitewind grazed with Riverstar at her side feeding, Forrestfire walking around and making sure that nobody was hurt.
Darkstar:
He nodded. "As you wish." He turned and walked back to Rainflight. "Hey sorry about that. That mare is traveling with us now."
Jadelake, "Alright, I'll stick with you. But once I have my son I will be going back to Ash herd." she stated calmly to him her face turning calm and stern like it usually was.
Darkstar:
"Well you can travel with us. We are going to the interior to find my sister."
Jadelake was a little surprised by him being Over-stallion, "Well a traveling herd will be better for me since I am looking for my son, I was going to travel alone but I wouldn't be as welcomed because they could see me as someone who was banished." She said calmly to him with a small smile.
Darkstar::
"Hmm. So you know I am Darkstar the overstallion of Ocean herd. We are just passing through Willow herd."
Jadelake, "I understand, I am from another herd anyways. I am not a lead mare, I am only a battle mare. And I come from Ash herd." she said calmly to him keeping her wings tucked and out of the way.
Darkstar:
"I'm sorry Moonfire doesn't trust you. Are you a leadmare? What herd are you from?"
(Ok thanks!! also I feel that not being able to spell I always have to check through my comments for spell check before I post them!! XD)
Jadelake looked over at the area, "Sure." she said with a smile and started to walk over there.
Rainflight looked at the mare trying to decide if she was good or bad from afar.
(Step I just cant spell people!)
(What is 'ste'?? XD sorry just confused about that!!)
Darkstar:
"Will you ste over here and speak with me?" He asked pointing to a place 10 wing lengths away
(Hey I was wondering if Starleaf is ever gonna make that back story post for characters.... or has the idea been scraped?? XD)
(Can I be a spy too Misty? I mean one or Brokenfire's spies)
Brokenfire:
Brokenfire squinted his eyes, panic sezing and tightening his throat. He then lost balance and plummeted towards the ground, reeling around to catch himself before he fell.
Rolling, he spread his wings again and regained his altitude, glancing behind him at the confused and untrustworthy spies. Only Brokenfire knew what had just happened, and he didn’t feel like telling any of them.
Caita, "Nothing at the moment, I am fine." she nickered to him with a smile.
Jadelake, "Alright." she said calmly noticing the spies, but she didn't say anything she knew what it was about so she understood.
Spottedwind,
She nodded, "Yeah it was!" she nickered
Estrel:
"I've never seen the sky do that before. It was kinda pretty." he said.
Windborn:
"What can I get you Caita?" He asked
Spottedwind,
"It's alright, you just worried me," she nickered
Darkstar:
"No no its fine I just need to find my half sister." He said
Estrel:
"Me to. Im sorry." He said gently, looking at her
Spottedwind,
"I'm glad you're alright," she nickered looking at Estrel,
Jadelake smiled, "Thanks! I promise that I'll get you something in return at the end of all this!" she said to him still smiling.
Darkstar:
"Yes that sounds like a good idea if Moonfire agrees." He said looking at the large white captain.
Moonfire:
He nodded his head but called over some of his best spies. "Watch her." He whispered to them and they nodded their heads.
Darkstar:
"Welcome to Ocean herd!" he said