Last comment form Part 18:
Embermoon finished off the attacker that had hurt Jaggedwing and cantered over. "Are you sure Mintcreek? I think he could make it back to Glacier Herd where we could take cover if there's another attack. But I trust you and I will get the pine tree root," She said before lifting off and cantering into the forest.
(I think I'm going to make part 20 right now)
Darkstone: He tensed at first, but immediately relaxed and nuzzled her. "I've missed you, too." he whispered
(Yea, I guess)
(I want to check on this: Jaggedwing’s injuries are a broken rear leg, five broken ribs, possible concussion, and a bunch of cuts?)
Whiteshadow:
Whiteshadow stared at him, she had not been expecting this, "Darkstone, I-I... I don't know what to say. I missed you so much, and I thought you were mad at me fore some reason." she leaned into nuzzle the stallion
Darkstone:
"Look, I know you must be a little mad at me and I need to get one thing off my chest. I would never avoid you. I never meant to. I just got so stressed out when I learned that Flame herd was planning an uprise. I can't take it back, but I can say I'm sorry."
Twigstrike:
He looked up from grazing just in time to see the pretty little chestnut filly leaving the medicine mare den. Up close she was even more pretty then she was form a distance, her dark chestnut coat looked like it was fire and her purple feathers complimented her fiery coat perfectly.
Mintcreek:
"Well, when I found him he was badly injured. He had cuts all over his body, not to mention several broken bones, plus he's unconcious. But, I fixed him up the best I could and we brought him back here for more professional treatment. So, he should be fine. He's strong, He'll make it."
Coalblaze blinked. "Do you think Cave Herd will be allowed to stay here now?" He asked.
Redmoon: She trotted over to the triplets and greeted them softly. "Hey guys!" She said and grazed the tips of the grass.
( back )
Goldenstream:
She huffed. "Finally." and she flew toward the stream. She took a long sip, then headed into the valley to rest and graze.
Magicpetal was already there, grazing beside Emberblaze, talking quietly.
Goldenstream cantered over to her siblings and they greeted each other and talked.
Mintcreek:
"Embermoon!!!" she said, staring at her, astonished she would ask such a question. "That is his own personal buisness! Don't ask him such a thing." she glared
(I know that it was minsummer. I meant like once in their life-time Embermoon flung a snowball at her. And YAASSS DARKSHADOW)
(**questioning
Also, I thought it was Mid or late summer, like August)
Bronzewing stamped a hoof. “Quesrioning in front of the council,” he said.
Twigstrike:
Twigstrike grazed a little ways away from Jaggedwing, ready to jump to his grandsire's defense at the slightest hint of trouble. Jaggedwing was still unconscious from his fall, but Whiteshadow had assured him that the old over-stallion would recover quickly.
Mistcloud:
The council mare looked up at Bronzewing, and saw the two Flame Herd pegasi. Mistcloud nuzzled Pearlsong, "Go see if you can find your sire," she instructed her filly and she scampered off. Then she turned her attention Bronzewing, "I see." she said, "What do you propose?"
(Okay, two things:
1. I was pretty sure that it was spring/early summer, and I can personally vouch for the fact that Snow Herd territory would not have snow at that time of year
2. I think it's time to bring back Darkshadow [Darkstone and Whiteshadow])
( XD )
Mintcreek:
She nodded. "Ah. I see." she thought for another questions. "I'm running out of questions to ask." she said aloud, hoping Embermoon would have one.
Coalblaze: "It always chills me and the morning smells are baffling," He added.
Coalblaze thought for a moment. "It was not extremely cold, and not warm. It was tolerable, like a fall morning," He replied.
Coalblaze looked at Mintcreek longingly, wishing he had friends like that.
Embermoon snickered quietly. Coalblaze chuckled with realization. "Like I said, unpleasant," He chuckled.
Mintcreek:
Her eyes twinkled as she imagined that. "Wow! Sounds really awesome. In Glacier herd, when you wake up, you wake up to snow. Lots and lots of snow." she chuckled
( Yeah... )
Embermoon laughed. "Just because of the way he looks........ You really should get to know him first!" She snickered. "Now, come with me," She said, dragging Mintcreek with her to the Cave Herd steeds.
(I don't think Dragon's here)
Meanwhile, Bronzewing was with the Flame Herd couple. He was searching for Mistcloud. After a search, he found her nursing Pearlsong next to the path leading to Crimsonstorm’s grave. He approached her, the two Flame Herd steeds in tow. “Excuse me,” he said. “I would explain why I want to talk, but the reason seems obvious.”
Mintcreek:
She punched her friend in the shoulder. "I don't know! He just......I don't know."
Mintcreek:
She glanced behind her and gasped. "How did you know!? Is it obvious?!" she cried
Embermoon's spirit fell. "Why? I just want to know who it is to give him a piece of my mind!" She teased. She looked at the Cave Herd steeds and saw a stallions glaring at them. He was a grey Cave Herd steed, black mane and tail, and light pink wings. "OH Is that him?!" She asked tilting her head towards the steed glaring at the sideways.
Mintcreek:
She stubornly shook her head. "Nu-uh." she said
Embermoon laughed quietly and kept up with her friend with ease. "just point him out to me. is he a Cave Herd steed?" She pushed.
Embermoon trotted up to Mintcreek and felt like something was wrong. "What is it Mintcreek? You seem stressed..... Or something," She said concerned.
Mintcreek lashed her tail at a fly and put her back to the steeds, angry at herself. She dipped her head to graze and stuffed the idea about the stallion out of her head and into a place where it couldn't bother her anymore.
Mintcreek:
She looked at one stallion in particular. For some reason, she felt her ears get hot. "What?" she whispered to herself and looked away.
Mintcreek:
After she washed her wings, she went back to the valley to rest. She stood a the tree line border and looked out. She looked at the Cave herd steeds, so curiously looking at everything around them and she nickered, amused.
Coalblaze: He was with the group of Cave Herd steeds grazing. He looked around at everything and saw that this envirement was much different than his homeland but he didn't it expect to be very similar.
Mintcreek:
The bay mare smiled and nodded. "Of course!" she said, sweetly and left the cave to wash her bloody wings.
Twigstrike:
The roan stallion, who was standing beside the still unconscious Jaggedwing, dipped his head, "Thank you for healing by grandsire." he said to the medicine mares, and Mintcreek.
(I'll go up-date it then)
(Oh, right, Starsun)
( Okay then they are Red Herd steeds )
(Desert Herd already has a lead mare)
( K, COMING and, THANK YOU )
( Okay )
(Flame Herd isn't capturing, they're forming alliances)
( Oh..... Will that changes quite a few things.... Nobody told me which herds had been captured............................ )
(Yea, and I think beach herd already has an over-stallion and lead-mare.)
(Beach herd has already joined up with Flame Herd)