ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Dragon
    Jun 26, 2018

    Alternative Ending RP: Part 16🎉

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    Yup, part 16 already. Here's the last comment from part 15:


    Silverflame:

    When Breezebell returned to the team, Silverflame was still a little miffed at the way she was acting. He got not wanting to do things without his twin, but he thought Breezebell was acting a little ridiculous, after all it wasn't like she and Redmoon weren't going to be able to do be together anymore. This was only a skills evaluation, to see how you reacted and adapt to things you weren't used to. Redmoon was only being removed to prevent her from hurting herself worse, Breezebell was just turning a relatively simple thing into something overly complex.

    Silverflame shook his head, Breezebell attitude was the least of his worries at the moment, he needed to be focusing on this race. "Okay," he said, "So if Breezebell's going second, who should go first?"

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    Dragon
    Jul 05, 2018

    (Ah)

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    Flamefrost
    Jul 04, 2018

    (I know, but I was in the middle of that comment when you made 17)

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    (Flamefrost, we're on part 17 now)

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    Flamefrost
    Jul 04, 2018

    Horizongold was new to the position of command, having only joined the army a few months prior. Nevertheless, he knew what he needed to do and he knew he couldn’t play favorites, as he might be inclined to do. Horizongold added his voice to the general noise, instructing the members of his flight to fall in.

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    (I'm going to make part 17)

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    Snowfrost:

    The gray stallion was relived to see that at least Silverflame sorta had an idea what he was doing, and appeared to be willing to help the other yearlings.

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    (There!)

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    (Ohhhh. Editing.......)

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    (Goldenstream didn't need to go up to Snowfrost, Silverflame just did that for spacing)

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    Goldenstream: looked puzzled, but followed his orders. She cantered over to the bay and stopped once she was next to the stallion.

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    Silverflame:

    He had watched a few military drills before, so he knew what he was supposed to do, more or less. "Come on." Silverflame said to Goldenstream.

    The bay yearling dashed over to Snowfrost, and momentarily stood next to him. Then Silverflame took three steps forward, stopped, and turned so he was facing Snowfrost. "Stand next to me." he said to Goldenstream.

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    Goldenstream flicked her ears at the commanding Flight Sergant. She glanced at Silverflame confused. "Fall in? What does that mean?" she whispered to Silverflame, keeping her eyes forward and her head high.

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    (This is what's kinda going on [watch the first 4 minuets]: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drqUQhlr3u0 )

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    Dragon
    Jul 04, 2018

    Snowfrost:

    As soon as word was given, he started yelling. "Delta Flight, FALL IN!" he ordered, wile Dawnfire, Delta Flight's commander yelled "DELTA FLIGHT! MOVE WITH A PURPOSE! YUR FLIGHT SERGEANT JUST ORDER YOU TO FALL IN! WHY ARENT YOU IN FORMATION YET?"

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    Magicpetal: -nikered a greeting back- "Hey, Breezebell!! AH! I'm super excited...and nervous...but mainly excited!" she squealed, starting to prance

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    Nightmist(old)
    Jul 04, 2018

    ( gtg )

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    Nightmist(old)
    Jul 04, 2018

    Breezebell trotted up to Forestbeam who smiled and nuzzled Breezebell. Breezebell nickered a greeting and Forestbeam pointed to the Echo group. "I'm sorry but you won't be in Foxtrot Breezebell," She said. Breezebell nodded and galloped over to Magicpetal and nickered a greeting to her.

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    Emberblaze eventually spotted his mother. She was instructing the spies on which group they were assinged into.

    Starsummer stood tall and proudly while she pointed with her golden and purple wing to where each spy was supposed to be. Magicpetal stepped up to her mother and they nickered a greeting to each other one last time before Starsummer pointed at the Echo group. Magicpetal smiled broadly and cantered over to Horizongold, who was the leader of the squadrant.

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    Nightmist(old)
    Jul 04, 2018

    Redmoon twisted her ears at Emberblaze and nickered a hello back. She then looked aorund and spotted her mother trying to organize the spys into their groups. She saw Breezebell with her and smiled warmly.

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    Riverbreeze
    Jul 04, 2018

    Emberblaze trotted forward more toward his instructor, Moonwing. He was also assinged into the Bravo squadrant. He spotted Redmoon and nickered a greeting to his friend. He looked around and tried to find his sisters and his mother, but the swarming battle mare's and under-stallions hid them from his view.

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