Yup, part 16 already. Here's the last comment from part 15:
Silverflame:
When Breezebell returned to the team, Silverflame was still a little miffed at the way she was acting. He got not wanting to do things without his twin, but he thought Breezebell was acting a little ridiculous, after all it wasn't like she and Redmoon weren't going to be able to do be together anymore. This was only a skills evaluation, to see how you reacted and adapt to things you weren't used to. Redmoon was only being removed to prevent her from hurting herself worse, Breezebell was just turning a relatively simple thing into something overly complex.
Silverflame shook his head, Breezebell attitude was the least of his worries at the moment, he needed to be focusing on this race. "Okay," he said, "So if Breezebell's going second, who should go first?"
(Ah)
(I know, but I was in the middle of that comment when you made 17)
(Flamefrost, we're on part 17 now)
(I'm going to make part 17)
Snowfrost:
The gray stallion was relived to see that at least Silverflame sorta had an idea what he was doing, and appeared to be willing to help the other yearlings.
(Ohhhh. Editing.......)
(Goldenstream didn't need to go up to Snowfrost, Silverflame just did that for spacing)
Goldenstream: looked puzzled, but followed his orders. She cantered over to the bay and stopped once she was next to the stallion.
Silverflame:
He had watched a few military drills before, so he knew what he was supposed to do, more or less. "Come on." Silverflame said to Goldenstream.
The bay yearling dashed over to Snowfrost, and momentarily stood next to him. Then Silverflame took three steps forward, stopped, and turned so he was facing Snowfrost. "Stand next to me." he said to Goldenstream.
Goldenstream flicked her ears at the commanding Flight Sergant. She glanced at Silverflame confused. "Fall in? What does that mean?" she whispered to Silverflame, keeping her eyes forward and her head high.
(This is what's kinda going on [watch the first 4 minuets]: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drqUQhlr3u0 )
( gtg )
Breezebell trotted up to Forestbeam who smiled and nuzzled Breezebell. Breezebell nickered a greeting and Forestbeam pointed to the Echo group. "I'm sorry but you won't be in Foxtrot Breezebell," She said. Breezebell nodded and galloped over to Magicpetal and nickered a greeting to her.
Emberblaze eventually spotted his mother. She was instructing the spies on which group they were assinged into.
Starsummer stood tall and proudly while she pointed with her golden and purple wing to where each spy was supposed to be. Magicpetal stepped up to her mother and they nickered a greeting to each other one last time before Starsummer pointed at the Echo group. Magicpetal smiled broadly and cantered over to Horizongold, who was the leader of the squadrant.
Redmoon twisted her ears at Emberblaze and nickered a hello back. She then looked aorund and spotted her mother trying to organize the spys into their groups. She saw Breezebell with her and smiled warmly.
Redmoon had been asigned Bravo and looked around at the lot of pegasi. She pinned her ears at the agonized screaming and trotted to where she was supposed to be with Bravo. She looked at everyone who were all franticly trying to get to their destination. She saw yearlings, now under-stallions and battle mares, crashing into eachother. She raised a hoof and craned ehr ncek to get a better view of everyone.
(Umm... how about after the Flights get falled in)
(Do you just wanna skip the whole training seccion and time travel till tonight?)
Gemfrost:
Gemfrost waited anxiously for her turn, and when it was she stepped forward and reported in, "Sargent, cadet Gemfrost reporting as ordered."
The roan filly was then told witch flight she was in, Charlie Flight, and was then directed to the other yearlings who were all gathered in one big group.
(Emberblaze and Goldenstream have to be assigned to either Alpha, Bravo, Charlie, or Delta, but it doesn't matter witch one. Magicpetal has to be assigned to either Echo or Foxtrot, but it also doesn't matter witch one)
(Does it matter which squadrant the yearlings are assinged into? Delta or Alpha?)
That morning well before dawn, all three members of Horizongoldโs immediate family woke up and made their way to the army training ground. โWait, we need to bring Bronzewing,โ Oceangold reminded the other two. They made their way over to the new father of the now-asleep Dusksplash. Shadowfire nudged his overstallionโs shoulder with a yellow wing. Bronzewingโs eyes slowly blinked open and he looked up at them. โWassa matter?โ he asked sleepily. โArmy training,โ his nephew reminded him. โOh right,โ Bronzewing said. He rolled to his hooves and nodded to the three of them. โLead the way.โ
Silverflame:
Silverflame waited patiently for his turn as the yearlings continued to arrive, finally it was his turn, and Copperpool waved him forward, and told him to report in. The bay yearling walked up to the chestnut stallion, "Sargent, cadet Silverflame reporting as ordered!"
Copperpool nodded and told Silverflame that he had been assigned to Delta Flight, and then directed him the edge of the training grounds and instructed Silverflame to stay there until further notice.
Silverflame:
Silverflame moved into the line of yearling that were being assigned by Copperpool, wile Emberblaze and Goldenstream were shifted into other lines. "Good luck." said Silverflame to his friends.
Silverflame:
"I know what you mean." said Silverflame, "This is both super nerve racking, and super exciding!"
Emberblaze: "Hey!"
Goldenstream: -nickered a greeting-
Emberblaze: "You excited? I know I am." -he said, opening and closing his wings as the walked one step forward to were they would be placed.
Emberblaze awoke just before dawn. He opened his eyes and saw that Goldenstream was awake as well and she was stretching her wings and grazing. He stood up, shook the leaves out of his mane, grazing for a while, then trotted toward Silverflame for the placement, followed by Goldesntream.
Redmoon had said goodbye to everyone that night and awoke at dawn and yawned. She looked around for her mother and sister but they both left earlier to train. She stood and grazed a bit and then headed off to training. Breezebell had arrived beside Magicpetal and landed. She smiled at Magicpetal and nickered a greeting to her.
(Btw, Flights Alpha-Delta are for army training, and Flight Echo-Foxtrot are for spies)
Mistcloud:
The yearlings were starting to arrive. Mistcloud had Flight Sergeants directing where each of them would go. As the yearlings showed up, the sergeants would tell them witch flight they belonged to, and then they would line the yearlings up based on their gender.
(U know that a lot of people that play those characters arenโt very active, right?)
(I just wanted to run the duty positions past you guys:
Commander- Mistcloud
Deputy Commander- Shadowfire
Squadron 1 Commander- Brightwing
Squadron 2 Commander- Bronzewing
Spy Squadron Commander- Starsummer
Squadron 1 1st sgt.- Darkstone
Squdron 2 1st sgt.- Elmshade
Spy Squadron 1st sgt.- Honeyfall
Alpha Flight Commander- Sparrowfire
Bravo Flight Commander- Moonwing
Charlie Flight Commander- Clawberry
Delta Flight Commander- Dawnfire
Echo Flight Commander- Oceangold
Foxtrot Flight Commander- Ashfire
Alpha Flight sgt.- Thundermoon
Bravo Flight sgt.- Yellowsong
Charlie Flight sgt.- Copperpool
Delta Flight sgt.- Snowfrost
Echo Flight sgt.- Horizongold
Foxtrot Flight sgt.- Forestbeam)
(AWWW!!! Pearlsong is so cute!!! And bye Flamefrost...see ya later :'(
Silverflame:
Silverflame wanted to stay and watch the shipping drama unfold, but Shadowfire was right, all the yearlings needed to sleep. "See ya tomorrow." he said, then turned and started walking back to were the rest of the herd was, followed by Shadowstar.
(I'm still here)
Redmoon nodded slightly in agreement and then looked up at the tree which had apples on it. She grabbed one and ate it to calm her nerves.
Emberblaze sighed but the pointed back toward the gossiping yearlings. "I see. Could you please leave now, though? I think you have enough information to tell my sisters." he said, calming down
Junipersky shied away a pace from the angry young warrior. โSilverflame wanted to know what was happening, so since Iโm a spy I decided to practice on you guys. I figured you wouldnโt kill me, unlike Flame Herd.โ The joke was meant to distract Emberblaze, but he still seemed annoyed.
Junipersky thought quickly, then decided to be honest. She stepped forward out of the bush to the shocked faces of Redmoon and Emberblaze. โMe, not Breezebell,โ she said. โButBreezebell mightโve just left already, I heard some rustling a little bit ago.โ
Magicpetal slightly pranced. "Give me all the details, Breezebell. What did my bother say? What did he do? Did Redmoon nuzzle him?" she bombarded her with many more questions
Magicpetal nickered at Breezebell.
~~
Emberblaze surged toward the bush and looked behind it.- "Junipersky?! What are you doing here?!" he said, slightly angry
Silverflame:
Silverflame watched as intently as he could, "Uh, guys." he said, "Emberblaze just nuzzled Redmoon!"
( back )
(PLLLSSSS!!!!! COMMEEE BAACKKKKK!!! I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!!!!! WHAT WILL REDMOON DO!!!?!?!!! TELL ME PLSSSSS!!!!!)
(NIGHTMIST!!!??? COME BACK COME BACK!!!!!!! REDMOON!? SAY SOOMMEETHHHINNG!!!!!!)
(NIGHTMIST?!?!?!!!! COME BACCCKKK!!!!!!)
Emberblaze looked at Redmoon with wide eyes. "You-you love me?" he said, getting his thoughts straight. He blinked at her for a moment, then swallowed and smiled, his eyes dancing and his heart warm and bright. He dipped his head to Redmoon and lifted her chin with his wingtips so she would look him in he eyes. "Redmoon, I love you too." he said, nuzzling her.
(AAAGGGHHH!!!! REDBLAZE REDBLAZE REDBLAZE!!!!!!! I LITERALLY AM SCREAMING!!!!!)
( XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD )
( OMG SCREAMING ON THE INDSIDE )