Yup, part 16 already. Here's the last comment from part 15:
Silverflame:
When Breezebell returned to the team, Silverflame was still a little miffed at the way she was acting. He got not wanting to do things without his twin, but he thought Breezebell was acting a little ridiculous, after all it wasn't like she and Redmoon weren't going to be able to do be together anymore. This was only a skills evaluation, to see how you reacted and adapt to things you weren't used to. Redmoon was only being removed to prevent her from hurting herself worse, Breezebell was just turning a relatively simple thing into something overly complex.
Silverflame shook his head, Breezebell attitude was the least of his worries at the moment, he needed to be focusing on this race. "Okay," he said, "So if Breezebell's going second, who should go first?"
(Ah)
(I know, but I was in the middle of that comment when you made 17)
(Flamefrost, we're on part 17 now)
Horizongold was new to the position of command, having only joined the army a few months prior. Nevertheless, he knew what he needed to do and he knew he couldn’t play favorites, as he might be inclined to do. Horizongold added his voice to the general noise, instructing the members of his flight to fall in.
(I'm going to make part 17)
Snowfrost:
The gray stallion was relived to see that at least Silverflame sorta had an idea what he was doing, and appeared to be willing to help the other yearlings.
(There!)
(Ohhhh. Editing.......)
(Goldenstream didn't need to go up to Snowfrost, Silverflame just did that for spacing)
Goldenstream: looked puzzled, but followed his orders. She cantered over to the bay and stopped once she was next to the stallion.
Silverflame:
He had watched a few military drills before, so he knew what he was supposed to do, more or less. "Come on." Silverflame said to Goldenstream.
The bay yearling dashed over to Snowfrost, and momentarily stood next to him. Then Silverflame took three steps forward, stopped, and turned so he was facing Snowfrost. "Stand next to me." he said to Goldenstream.
Goldenstream flicked her ears at the commanding Flight Sergant. She glanced at Silverflame confused. "Fall in? What does that mean?" she whispered to Silverflame, keeping her eyes forward and her head high.
(This is what's kinda going on [watch the first 4 minuets]: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drqUQhlr3u0 )
Snowfrost:
As soon as word was given, he started yelling. "Delta Flight, FALL IN!" he ordered, wile Dawnfire, Delta Flight's commander yelled "DELTA FLIGHT! MOVE WITH A PURPOSE! YUR FLIGHT SERGEANT JUST ORDER YOU TO FALL IN! WHY ARENT YOU IN FORMATION YET?"
Magicpetal: -nikered a greeting back- "Hey, Breezebell!! AH! I'm super excited...and nervous...but mainly excited!" she squealed, starting to prance
( gtg )
Breezebell trotted up to Forestbeam who smiled and nuzzled Breezebell. Breezebell nickered a greeting and Forestbeam pointed to the Echo group. "I'm sorry but you won't be in Foxtrot Breezebell," She said. Breezebell nodded and galloped over to Magicpetal and nickered a greeting to her.
Emberblaze eventually spotted his mother. She was instructing the spies on which group they were assinged into.
Starsummer stood tall and proudly while she pointed with her golden and purple wing to where each spy was supposed to be. Magicpetal stepped up to her mother and they nickered a greeting to each other one last time before Starsummer pointed at the Echo group. Magicpetal smiled broadly and cantered over to Horizongold, who was the leader of the squadrant.
Redmoon twisted her ears at Emberblaze and nickered a hello back. She then looked aorund and spotted her mother trying to organize the spys into their groups. She saw Breezebell with her and smiled warmly.
Emberblaze trotted forward more toward his instructor, Moonwing. He was also assinged into the Bravo squadrant. He spotted Redmoon and nickered a greeting to his friend. He looked around and tried to find his sisters and his mother, but the swarming battle mare's and under-stallions hid them from his view.
Redmoon had been asigned Bravo and looked around at the lot of pegasi. She pinned her ears at the agonized screaming and trotted to where she was supposed to be with Bravo. She looked at everyone who were all franticly trying to get to their destination. She saw yearlings, now under-stallions and battle mares, crashing into eachother. She raised a hoof and craned ehr ncek to get a better view of everyone.
(gtg)
Mistcloud:
As soon as the last of the yearlings entered the training grounds, and were herded to the edge, Mistcloud when to give them an interdiction, "Can I have everyone's attention?" said Mistcloud, loud enough to be heard through out the clearing, and all eyes turned to her. "Thank you. As all of you are well aware, you are now members of Glacier Herd's Army." she paused a moment, "And not that you are entering the training program, I would like to go over a few things we expect of you. First off we expect you all to consistently display a high level of self-discipline, military bearing, and military customs and courtesies. To be open to new experiences and actively participate in all classes, activities, academic assignments, and sports. In a few minuets you will entre the training program, to day your are no longer yearlings, today your are under-stallions a battle mares in training. Thank you for your attention, we will start soon."
As soon as Mistcloud finished speaking, the yearlings were lined up along the tree line, there backs to the clearing. All the Flight Staff got into position. There was a few agonizing seconds, then the field erupted with yelling, all the flight staff pegasi were yelling at their flights to fall in, and hurry up, as the yearlings ran every where, franticly trying to get where they were supposed to be.
( here )
(Umm... how about after the Flights get falled in)
(Do you just wanna skip the whole training seccion and time travel till tonight?)
Honeyfall:
Honeyfall waited with the other cadre, everyone was almost a anxious as the yearlings.
Gemfrost:
Gemfrost waited anxiously for her turn, and when it was she stepped forward and reported in, "Sargent, cadet Gemfrost reporting as ordered."
The roan filly was then told witch flight she was in, Charlie Flight, and was then directed to the other yearlings who were all gathered in one big group.
Silverflame:
"Hay." he said,
Emberblaze started to prance. "Are you excited as I am, Goldenstream?"
Goldenstream: -she nickered slightly- "I don't think-" but, she was interupted by Emberblaze. "Great! I'm super excited. Oh! Look. It's our turn." and he walked forward as the stallion asked Emberblaze to report him. "Sargent, cadet Emberblaze, here as instructed!" the stallion nodded and told him he was asigned in the Bravo squadrant. He pointed toward a large pine tree toward the middle of the valley. "Stay there until instructed." the stallion said in a deep, raspy voice. Emberblaze nodded thanks and trotted toward the other yearlings standing anxiously by the pine.
Goldenstream stepped up. She heard how Emberblaze and Silverflame introduced themselves, so she did in the same way. "Sargent, cadet Goldenstream, reporting for duty." she said, anxiously awating her placement. "Delta Squadrant." he said, nodding toward Silverflame's group. Goldenstream cantered forward and halted next to the yearling. "Hello, again." she said, getting more anxious by the minete
(Emberblaze and Goldenstream have to be assigned to either Alpha, Bravo, Charlie, or Delta, but it doesn't matter witch one. Magicpetal has to be assigned to either Echo or Foxtrot, but it also doesn't matter witch one)
(Does it matter which squadrant the yearlings are assinged into? Delta or Alpha?)
That morning well before dawn, all three members of Horizongold’s immediate family woke up and made their way to the army training ground. “Wait, we need to bring Bronzewing,” Oceangold reminded the other two. They made their way over to the new father of the now-asleep Dusksplash. Shadowfire nudged his overstallion’s shoulder with a yellow wing. Bronzewing’s eyes slowly blinked open and he looked up at them. “Wassa matter?” he asked sleepily. “Army training,” his nephew reminded him. “Oh right,” Bronzewing said. He rolled to his hooves and nodded to the three of them. “Lead the way.”
Silverflame:
Silverflame waited patiently for his turn as the yearlings continued to arrive, finally it was his turn, and Copperpool waved him forward, and told him to report in. The bay yearling walked up to the chestnut stallion, "Sargent, cadet Silverflame reporting as ordered!"
Copperpool nodded and told Silverflame that he had been assigned to Delta Flight, and then directed him the edge of the training grounds and instructed Silverflame to stay there until further notice.
Gemfrost:
Gemfrost had woken up even before Mistcloud had, to practice a few battle move, but when she saw the other yearling were starting to head to the army training ground, she headed over there as well.
Silverflame:
Silverflame moved into the line of yearling that were being assigned by Copperpool, wile Emberblaze and Goldenstream were shifted into other lines. "Good luck." said Silverflame to his friends.
Emberblaze: "Thanks, Snowforst." he called to his old training instructor before trotting toward the other flight school sergants.
Goldenstream: -nodded thanks and trotted forward, flicking her side side to side and opening her wings, also feeling nervus.
Snowfrost:
The gray stallion waved forward the next few yearlings, and recognized Emberblaze, Silverflame, and Goldenstream. He smiled and directed them towards the other flight sergeants who would tell them witch flight they would be in.
Silverflame:
"I know what you mean." said Silverflame, "This is both super nerve racking, and super exciding!"
Emberblaze: "Hey!"
Goldenstream: -nickered a greeting-
Emberblaze: "You excited? I know I am." -he said, opening and closing his wings as the walked one step forward to were they would be placed.
Silverflame:
When Silverflame spotted Emberblaze and Goldenstream coming towards him, he used his wings to wave at them. "Hi guys." he called out
Emberblaze awoke just before dawn. He opened his eyes and saw that Goldenstream was awake as well and she was stretching her wings and grazing. He stood up, shook the leaves out of his mane, grazing for a while, then trotted toward Silverflame for the placement, followed by Goldesntream.
Silverflame:
The yearling colt woke at about the same time as Redmoon had, he gave his pelt a good shake and flew off the clearing. When he arrived he was put in the 'in processing' line, and waited to be assigned.
Redmoon had said goodbye to everyone that night and awoke at dawn and yawned. She looked around for her mother and sister but they both left earlier to train. She stood and grazed a bit and then headed off to training. Breezebell had arrived beside Magicpetal and landed. She smiled at Magicpetal and nickered a greeting to her.
(Btw, Flights Alpha-Delta are for army training, and Flight Echo-Foxtrot are for spies)
Mistcloud:
The yearlings were starting to arrive. Mistcloud had Flight Sergeants directing where each of them would go. As the yearlings showed up, the sergeants would tell them witch flight they belonged to, and then they would line the yearlings up based on their gender.
(I know, I just wanted to have OCs filling every position instead us just referring to everyone by what their job is)
(Yea. Not a lot of the Flight ppl are active.)
Magicpetal woke up a few hours before dawn and crept away from her brother and sister. She saw that her mother was absent from the family and she figured that Starsummer had been assigned to spy commander, so she had to get up earlier. She grazed for a couple minutes to get her strength up, then swiftly lifted off and flew toward some of the spy steeds that were gathering around her mother. She reconized a few of them, and landed among the other gathering spies.
Starsummer noticed her daughters approach and nickered a warm greeting to not just her, but to all the other yearlings who were gathering around.
(U know that a lot of people that play those characters aren’t very active, right?)
(I just wanted to run the duty positions past you guys:
Commander- Mistcloud
Deputy Commander- Shadowfire
Squadron 1 Commander- Brightwing
Squadron 2 Commander- Bronzewing
Spy Squadron Commander- Starsummer
Squadron 1 1st sgt.- Darkstone
Squdron 2 1st sgt.- Elmshade
Spy Squadron 1st sgt.- Honeyfall
Alpha Flight Commander- Sparrowfire
Bravo Flight Commander- Moonwing
Charlie Flight Commander- Clawberry
Delta Flight Commander- Dawnfire
Echo Flight Commander- Oceangold
Foxtrot Flight Commander- Ashfire
Alpha Flight sgt.- Thundermoon
Bravo Flight sgt.- Yellowsong
Charlie Flight sgt.- Copperpool
Delta Flight sgt.- Snowfrost
Echo Flight sgt.- Horizongold
Foxtrot Flight sgt.- Forestbeam)
Mistcloud:
Mistcloud woke before dawn, and flew to the army training grounds, there were a few steeds that were already there preparing for the yearling's first day of training. As soon as she landed, the steeds serving as cadre migrated over.
(AWWW!!! Pearlsong is so cute!!! And bye Flamefrost...see ya later :'(
(Bye)
Pearlsong:
Moonwing had been trying to keep Pearlsong occupied most of the day, but the little filly had tired the middle-aged stallion out quickly. When Pearlsong spotted her brothers coming back from their assessment, she raced over to them. "What happened? Are you guys going the army?" squealed the filly.
Silverflame nodded, "I'm joining the army, but Shadowstar here is going to be a spy."
Pearlsong started jumping up and down, "I'm so excided for you!"
"I bet you are." said Silverflame, smiling, "But we need to get some sleep right now. We start our training in the morning."
"Aww man." said Pearlsong, she was disappointed, but she didn't try to prevent them from going to sleep. Instead Pearlsong joined them.
(gtg to bed)
Goldenstream and Magicpetal waved goodbye to their friends. Goldenstream watched Silverflame walk back to his family and she didn't realise she was staring until Magicpetal nudged her. "You got your eye on anyone?" she asked, winking at Goldenstream.
Goldenstream lowered her eyes from Silverflame and layed down. She pretented to fall asleep, not answering Magicpetal's question.
Silverflame:
Silverflame wanted to stay and watch the shipping drama unfold, but Shadowfire was right, all the yearlings needed to sleep. "See ya tomorrow." he said, then turned and started walking back to were the rest of the herd was, followed by Shadowstar.
Magicpetal sighed in relief. "Saved by the captain." she said and without another word trotted over to her family, followed by Goldenstream.
(now I should go, but I have 5-10 min)
Junipersky started to respond to Shadowfire’s command, then turned back to Emberblaze. ”Seems like you will be soon enough,” the brown Appaloosa tossed back at him. ”You’ve both admitted your love. Now, when this stupid war clears up, you’ll have more time for the mushy-gushy stuff. But first, let’s get this war over with.”
They had no further time to dicuss this as Shadowfire flew over the apple field. ”Get back to your families!” he called down to the milling yearlings. It was late afternoon by now, and although there was at least 45 minutes of daylight left, Shadowfire knew the importance of rest. ”Get a lot of sleep and report to the army training field by dawn! Spies, you need to be ready before dawn to practice in the dark. Anyway, all of you need to MOVE!”
(me to)
Goldenstream: "Now that Redblaze is handled, it's Horizonpetal's turn!" -smirks at her sister-
Magicpetal: "What?! No way! Not now! We are just about to start training!"
Goldenstream: "So? You two can talk afterward."
Magicpetal: "Uh...I....No!!! Not while Glacier herd and Flame herd are on the brink of war!"
Goldenstream: "What's that got to do with anything? Emberblaze admitted his love for Redmoon! So, why can't you!?" -sisters argue-
(I'm still here)
Emberblaze: -huffs and calls through the apple in his mouth- "Junipersky!!!! We are not mates!!!! STop Shipping us!!!!!!!!" -he said-
(Awwwwww!!!!!!! MAN!!!!! oki.....bye...:'{
( gtg )
( Yeah me too XD )
Redmoon stopped munching and twisted her ears. "What?" She said.
(g2g soon)
Junipersky nodded and turned to go. But she tossed over her shoulder as she left, ”Emberblaze and Redmoon, flyin’ ’round the trees...” With that, she trotted quickly away.
Redmoon nodded slightly in agreement and then looked up at the tree which had apples on it. She grabbed one and ate it to calm her nerves.
Emberblaze sighed but the pointed back toward the gossiping yearlings. "I see. Could you please leave now, though? I think you have enough information to tell my sisters." he said, calming down
Junipersky shied away a pace from the angry young warrior. ”Silverflame wanted to know what was happening, so since I’m a spy I decided to practice on you guys. I figured you wouldn’t kill me, unlike Flame Herd.” The joke was meant to distract Emberblaze, but he still seemed annoyed.
Redmoon rolled her eyes and stood up. "Fine... Don't do that again," She said prancing of embarrassment.
Junipersky thought quickly, then decided to be honest. She stepped forward out of the bush to the shocked faces of Redmoon and Emberblaze. ”Me, not Breezebell,” she said. ”ButBreezebell might’ve just left already, I heard some rustling a little bit ago.”
Breezebell laughed. "Oh. My sister can tell you that," She said.
Magicpetal slightly pranced. "Give me all the details, Breezebell. What did my bother say? What did he do? Did Redmoon nuzzle him?" she bombarded her with many more questions
Magicpetal nickered at Breezebell.
~~
Emberblaze surged toward the bush and looked behind it.- "Junipersky?! What are you doing here?!" he said, slightly angry
Redmoon then twisted her ears further at the bush and twisted her eyes. "Someone's watching us.... BREEZEBELL! IS DAT YOU?!!?!?!?!" She shouted to the bush. Breezebell heard the shout and held back a laugh and whispered, "Not anymore..."
Emberblaze smiled and wrapped his neck over hers and took in her scent.
Redmoon smiled and sniffed his mane. "Good to know..... Again," She nickered. She heard something from the bushes and twisted her ears. Breezebell almost screamed but luckily ran back to the others in time to hear Silverflame say something and she squealed. 'Ikr?!?!?!?! AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed and squealed.
Silverflame:
Silverflame watched as intently as he could, "Uh, guys." he said, "Emberblaze just nuzzled Redmoon!"
( back )
(AAGGHH!!! NOOOOO!!!I GTG WALK MY DOG!!!!! I"LL BE BACK!!!!)
(PLLLSSSS!!!!! COMMEEE BAACKKKKK!!! I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!!!!! WHAT WILL REDMOON DO!!!?!?!!! TELL ME PLSSSSS!!!!!)
Junipersky’s eyes widened. Not in surprise that he had replied, but at the speed with which he did so. She let out a little nicker but immediately cut off the sound, remembering she was spying.
(NIGHTMIST!!!??? COME BACK COME BACK!!!!!!! REDMOON!? SAY SOOMMEETHHHINNG!!!!!!)
(I KNOW RIGHT!!!!! THE SHIP IS SAILING!!!!!!)
(Oh. My. GOD!!)
(NIGHTMIST?!?!?!!!! COME BACCCKKK!!!!!!)
Emberblaze looked at Redmoon with wide eyes. "You-you love me?" he said, getting his thoughts straight. He blinked at her for a moment, then swallowed and smiled, his eyes dancing and his heart warm and bright. He dipped his head to Redmoon and lifted her chin with his wingtips so she would look him in he eyes. "Redmoon, I love you too." he said, nuzzling her.
( brb )
( LOL I'M SCREAMING ON THE INDSIDE!!!!!!! EMBERBLAZE, SAY SOMMMMEEEETTTHHHIIIINNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! )
(AAAGGGHHH!!!! REDBLAZE REDBLAZE REDBLAZE!!!!!!! I LITERALLY AM SCREAMING!!!!!)
Breezebell had snuck with Junipersky because she was also a spy and watched with her eyes wide and she never blinked.
( RIVER )
Junipersky let out a small gasp, although in hindsight she wasn’t surprised. She had watched this group for a long time and understood how the friendship worked. But now that didn’t matter. She continued to watch, waiting for Emberblaze’s reply.
( XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD )
(OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE)
( OMG SCREAMING ON THE INDSIDE )