I don't have a title yet, here is chapter 1:
First off, I sadly do not own The Guardian Herd. (I cry everytime)
Second off, so people won't get confused, unlike in the ending of Windborn, Star still has his powers, and Bumblewind survived, well, he lived out a normal life, until he died like everyone else.
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Chapter 1: Shattered Memories
Star smiled as he looked behind him, and whickered gleefully as he saw his friends, Morningleaf, Bumblewind, Echofrost, Brackentail, and Shadepebble trying to catch up to me. "Catch me if you can," he neighed in delight. "Okay!" Bumblewind cried, huffing as he came to a halt, and snorted, "you win." As he whickered, and began exchanging breaths with them, their faces began to fade. NO! He thought, as he jolted awake. Tears flowed down his cheeks, creating a small patch of white flowers as he remembered that his friends had been dead for hundreds of years. He wept as he lay there, reminiscing about all the good times they had had, and wishing he wasn't forced into this punishment of immortality.
Nice! Idk, maybe "Alone" or "Immortality... Alone" would be a good title?
Nice job! :)
Yeah... It's on my Wattpad account, bluestar2533!
I love this already!!!!!!!!! Although its really sad that Star is alone....
+CassTucker1 yep :))))
YESS!!! BUMBLEWIND!!!!!!!
Part two is out!