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    Wispiflower
    Feb 04, 2018

    The Love Story Of Windwing and Wispiflower 16

    in FAN FICTON

    Junetree: And before I tell you, you need to tell me what’s up with you.

    Mapleglade: -snorts- I dont know. Things are bugging me. I’m tired and annoyed.

    Junetree: -sighs in relief- Is that all? -face palm- You were right, I should let you sleep in. -remembers- Oh, and the news is... uh, you know how I said we should wait to have another foal till Maytree is a yearling? Well it turns out we have no choice. I’m with foal.

    Mapleglade: -backs up- No no no no no no no

    Mapleglade: Not yet! We didnt even do anything!!!

    Junetree: I know! We didn’t for Maytree either! It just happens in our sleep!

    (Poor Mapleglade.)

    Mapleglade: -groans-

    (I know...)

    Junetree: I didn’t mean to! I’m sorry!

    Mapleglade: -gets dizzy suddenly but stays awake-

    Junetree: -wing palm- I knew I shouldn’t have said anything.

    Mapleglade: -closes eyes and prays she is just joking-

    Junetree: -reads his mind- Sorry, I wish I was but I’m not joking.

    Mapleglade: -lays down and half-sleeps-

    Windwing: Did I hear you were pregnant again Junetree?

    Junetree: -almost weeps- No

    Junetree: -snappy now- Mind your own business.

    Windwing: Whats wrong?

    Mapleglade: -opens eyes and starts to sweat- (He’s got a fever...)

    Junetree: Never mind What is wrong with me, somehow get Pineberry for Mapleglade, I think he has a fever!

    Mapleglade: -tries to stand- I dont know whats wrong!! -pants- I just don’t feel good

    Pineberry: -sneaks into the valley to check on Windwing and everyone and sees Mapleglade on the ground- -walks over calmly and quietly- Have you got a fever? Like I told you you might have had?

    Mapleglade: -groans- Yes.

    Pineberry: Mhm, I knew it! I told you to eat those pine tree roots once every two days. And did you listen? No!

    Mapleglade: -pins ears, knowing he lost- Fine.. where are they?

    Pineberry: Well It’s to late for that treatment, now you need something stronger. -digs by a maple tree and pulls out some thick roots- -drops them by his muzzle- Here, eat slowly.

    Mapleglade: -nods and slowly eats them-

    Pineberry: -nods approvingly- Thank you. -looks at Junetree’s shocked face- Looks like you didn’t tell Junetree like I told you to either.

    Mapleglade: -sighs-

    Pineberry: -taps hoof- You are a very bad patient.

    Mapleglade: I know..

    Pineberry: -smiles- I guess you got a little better today though for eating the roots.

    Mapleglade: -shrugs-

    Junetree: -really worried- Is he going to be okay?

    Pineberry: I think so. Do you have anything stressful in your life lately Mapleglade?

    Mapleglade: Yes.

    Pineberry: Like what?

    Pineberry: -taps hoof- What stresses you in your life?

    Mapleglade: -shrugs again, not in the mood for talking-

    Junetree: -jumps in to his aid- He’s tired, it IS almost dark.

    Pineberry: -nods thinkingly- True, but I’d still like to know so I can help him

    Junetree: -doesn’t want to say anything again- Well, Maybe you can wait till tomorrow?

    Pineberry: Well... no I think I should know now

    Mapleglade: I’m just tired and not very pleased

    Pineberry: -cocks head- About what?

    Mapleglade: -shakes head, not wanting to answer- -lays head down and falls asleep-

    Pineberry: -shrugs- I guess the best thing to do is let him sleep.

    Junetree: Hey, how did you get here?

    Pineberry: I got captured trying to sneak in.

    Junetree: Oh.

    Pineberry: No waking Mapleglade up early okay?

    Junetree: Okayyy..

    Crimsonwind: -trots up to the couple and Pineberry- Mother wanted her here in case something happened

    Crimsonwind: For example this

    Junetree: Oh.

    Junetree: -cocks head- How long have you been listening- Crimsonwind, right?

    Crimsonwind: Not long. I came to tell you that my father is planning another attack. I thought I’d come warn you

    Junetree: -narrows eyes- Is this some sort of trick? You’re supposed to be on your parents’ side

    Wispiflower: -wanders past Racewind and seeing him instantly starts to canter away-

    Racewind: -catches her wing and drags her behind a bush- If you agree to have my foal I will let you be free.

    Wispiflower: -gasps- NEVER.

    Racewind: And I will spare your filly’s life.

    Wispiflower: I- I’m not able to...

    Racewind: What do you mean ‘you aren’t able to’?!

    Wispiflower: Wellll...

    Racewind: TELL ME, or I will have to believe you are lying and do this by force

    Wispiflower: I....

    -clutches stomach- Would you believe that I am with foal?

    Racewind: No.

    Wispiflower: Check.

    Racewind: -sniffs all over her- Oh, wow. That was fast.

    Crimsonwind: -shrugs- If I tell you it’s not, you wouldn’t believe me. So I shall not say anything but that warning

    Windwing: -walks into the bush- Nice try Racewind. Now beat it

    Wispiflower: -sighs in relief as Racewind releases her wing and flees- -turns pale- How much of that did you hear?

    Windwing: All of it.

    Wispiflower: How much is all of it?

    Windwing: Ever since Racewind took you here.

    Wispiflower: Ohhhh, I see. What exactly did you hear?

    Windwing: When do you think you’ll have it?

    (Windwing knows everything I guess....)

    Wispiflower: -face pales even further- Um, excuse me.

    -trots toward Junetree and the sickly Mapleglade-

    Coperpool: Rainblaze, we need to rescue Windwing and everyone today, we cannot wait another week.

    Rainblaze: -looks at him like he’s crazy- -points to the two fillys- -says it like it’s obvious- I can’t leave.

    Windwing: -shrugs and turns around, expecting an angered Racewind to come charging-

    Hollylight: I wants to gosies on adventure!!

    (Don’t question her English.)

    Racewind: -goes to his mate- Mintbreeze?

    Rainblaze: -shakes head-

    Emeraldblaze: -moves head away from nursing- Why you wanna-na go?

    Mintbreeze: -prances in place thinking of a plan to be with Windwing- What?

    Wispiflower: -stops at Mapleglade’s right and drops head to graze-

    Racewind: Have you seen Crimsonwind?

    -realizes- You didn’t really name him after me, did you? -mumbles to self- I should have known.

    Mapleglade: -pants and kicks legs across the grass- -rolls over and accidentally hits Wispiflower- -says in a hoarse voice- Sorry

    Mintbreeze: -shrugs, and doesn’t answer his last question-

    Wispiflower: It’s fine. -still so pale she looks like she is glowing from so much white-

    Mapleglade: -looks up at her with gooey eyes- You dont look good -coughs horribly-

    Wispiflower: -snorts- You’re not looking to good yourself, Mapleglade.

    Windwing: -trots over to Mapleglade with soft leaves in hand and hands them to him- Use the leaves to clean your eyes and go to sleep

    Mapleglade: -takes the leaves and looks at Wispiflower- I know..

    Wispiflower: -turns head away from Windwing-

    Wispiflower: -peeps at Mapleglade- Know what?

    Mapleglade: -cleans eyes and coughs again- Pineberry? Is there any water?

    Mapleglade: -turns to Wispiflower- What?

    Windwing: -perks ears-

    Pineberry: Yes. -trots to a nearby spring and uses water tight wings to scoop some up-

    Wispiflower: -shakes head- Never mind.

    (She just can’t seem to make up her mind this mare)

    Mapleglade: -wants to know- What?

    Windwing: -looks around- I gotta go check on something

    -flies away-

    Wispiflower: -snaps- You don’t have to know everything Mapleglade. -canters away-

    Mapleglade: -looks at Junetree- Is she sick too?

    Junetree: Ooh, I think your bad mood spreaded.

    Mapleglade: -snorts-

    Junetree: -softens- I shouldn’t tease you when you’re sick. Sorry.

    Mapleglade: Thank you. -lays head down ready to sleep-

    Junetree: -can’t resist- Hope the foal looks like me this time! Okay sweet dreams

    Mapleglade: I hope its a colt -exhales and starts to sleep-

    Maytree: -overhears last comment as she comes over to sleep with her mother- Daddy! That’s not right.

    Mapleglade: -is already asleep-

    Maytree: -huffs- -whines- Mamaa!

    Junetree: -soothes her filly- I know, he can be annoying, but he’s your father, so you will have to live with it. Literally.

    Wispifrost: -whinnies for her parents-

    Coperpool: C’mon, let’s just try. Both of them want to go! -indicating their fillies- And they’re already two weeks old.

    Hollylight: -buzzes above Rainblaze’s head on her first flight ever- Pleeeeease Mommy? I want to see auntie Junetree and unlie Mapleglade And cousinie Maytree!

    Rainblaze: Coperpool! I can’t! Two weeks old is way to young.

    Emeraldblaze: I

    stay-ay-ing hewe with momma

    Hollylight: But!

    Hollylight: But I wants to goooo!

    Emeraldblaze: I don’t wanna go!!

    Rainblaze: -looks at Coperpool- I can’t leave.. Everyone will be fine. They’ll escape, Mintbreeze and Racewind don’t stand a chance

    Hollylight: But!

    -scowls- Mommy, -gives adorable puppy eyes that absolutely no soul is able to resist- please let us go

    Rainblaze: -avoids eye contact- No. You need to be older

    Hollylight: -goes in her eyes’ path- Pleeease Mommy

    Rainblaze: -narrows eyes- I said no. Coperpool, you can go. But I can’t leave with these two here

    Hollylight: -makes the hugest puppy eyes in the entire universe-

    Emeraldblaze: -whacks her sister’s face-

    Coperpool: -narrows eyes at Emeraldblaze- None of That now.

    Hollylight: -stifles a tear-

    Coperpool: -shakes head- I only go if you go.

    Rainblaze: Emeraldblaze. What did we say a while ago? You can’t hit your sister like that

    Emeraldblaze: But you told me that a while ago

    Rainblaze: Sassy.

    Coperpool: -nickers- Just like her mother.

    Rainblaze: -snorts-

    Wispifrost: Mommy?! Daddy?! Where are you?!

    Windwing: -perks ears- Over here

    Whitefrost: -follows Wispifrost- Where?

    Wispifrost: -follows the direction of her sire’s voice- -finds him- Phew. Hi Daddy! -looks around- Where is Mommy?

    Windwing: She....... is probably with Mapleglade and Junetree

    Whitefrost: You don’t sound very sure.

    Wispifrost: Daddy, WHERE IS MAMA?

    Wispiflower: -nearly trips over a fake-sleeping Racewind And stifles a gasp-

    Racewind: -smiles his evil smile and grabs her heel-

    Wispiflower: -screams-

    Racewind: -covers her mouth- Tsk tsk, none of that now. I’m keeping you locked up till you have that foal and then I will make you my mate.

    Wispiflower: -muffled voice- Never! -kicks him hard in the chest with unsharpened hooves and doesn’t hurt him more than a bad pain-

    Racewind: -chuckles- Nice try.

    Wispiflower: -bites his wing-

    Racewind: -takes away his wing from her mouth-

    Wispiflower: -screams as loud as possible- WINDWING HELP ME!!!

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 08, 2018

    I’m lazy

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 08, 2018

    Make that months

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 08, 2018

    Don’t lol it has BEEN done for days just forgot to post it

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    Nightmist(old)
    Feb 07, 2018

    MKLMSKLJBNJKFSNBJSNGDFNSGDNKFNKGNDJKFNGKJDNKJNJKDNBMFGNBNDSN AMAZING MUST HAVE SEVENTEEN NO PRESSURE THOUGH

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 05, 2018

    Thank you! It was a team effort though :)

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    Flamefrost
    Feb 04, 2018

    a-w-e-s-o-m-e!! THIS IS AMAZING

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 04, 2018

    http://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/the-love-story-of-windwing-and-wispiflower-links

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    Wispiflower
    Feb 04, 2018

    Thank you! I’ll comment the link to 1-15 on here for you.

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    Nightmist(old)
    Feb 04, 2018

    I need to read the others first . . . . . . . . . . . . BUT I'M SURE THIS ONE WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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