ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Rainfeather
    Sep 18, 2017
      ·  Edited: Sep 21, 2017

    Rainfeather's Story 14

    in FAN FICTON

    2 Moons Later

    Psst. Psst! PSSSSSST!

    Rainfeather watched her friend open his eyes. "What?" He groaned blinking the sleep out of his bright blue eyes. Rainfeather pranced on her hooves nervous and excited. "I can't believe you're sleeping in on such an important day!" She exclaimed. Lightray stood lazily. "What day is it?" He asked rubbing his eyes with his wings. Rainfeather rolled her eyes and shoved him sideways with her muzzle. "Today's my first day of Sky herder training silly!" She amused. Lightray jumped finally fully awake. "AH I'M LATE!" He flew out of the area as fast as his wings could take him. "Wait! Training starts- this evening." But Lightray was already gone. Rainfeather rolled her eyes again and flew after him enjoying the feeling of flight. By the time she arrived training was already in session. Guess I was wrong. She thought. She trotted to the group and squeezed through them being the smallest pegasus there. It was easy to spot Elmwing, giving the team orders. Rainfeather shot him a glance. Elmwing ignored her. "Oceanheart Riverfrost, Lightray Hazelblaze, Rainfeather.. and Mossfog. A chunky stallion named Mossfog stood away from the group with large teeth and very small hooves for his build. Rainfeather frowned and trotted over to him. Lightray came to wish her luck. "Good luck. Today you'll be learning the sky herder language but just you wait! Soon we'll be training the real stuff!" A pretty bay mare with a large star, dark green eyes, and rose red feathers tipped in emerald green trotted over to them, clearly a mountain herd mare. "This is Hazelblaze." Lightray introduced. Hazelblaze nuzzled him, showing off they're relationship. Lightray slid away from her. "We met in Sky herder class." Hazelblaze gave her a stare colder than the snow beneath her hooves. "Hazelblaze?" She said, trying not to sound rude.

    31 comments
    CassTucker1
    Sep 18, 2017

    WHAT?! RAINRAY!!!!!! (Would say Lightfeather but....) I WANTED RAINRAY!


    (This is still really good though!!)

    Wispiflower
    Sep 18, 2017

    But.. Rainfeather and Lightray!!!! Anyway, I LOVE THIS!!!!!

    Wispiflower
    Sep 18, 2017

    Btw Cassie Rainray is the best Ship name ever

    Echomoon
    Sep 19, 2017

    uh oh dont ya just hate it when someeone swoops in and steal ya bae RANFEATHER I HAVENT FORGIVEN U ABOUT DIS but of course every story needs the bully anyways OMLORSH DIS IS AWESOME

    Echomoon
    Sep 19, 2017

    RAINRAY IS MEANT TO BE LIGHTBLAZE/HAZELRAY SUCKS

    CassTucker1
    Sep 19, 2017

    What she said!

    Rainfeather
    Sep 19, 2017

    Lol don't worry she AIN'T GONNA WATCH HER MAIN MAN GO WITHOUT A FIGHT and she won't be STAR :3

    Wispiflower
    Sep 19, 2017

    Good for her! Star should interview her to get some tips on what to do with Morningleaf.

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    Wispiflower
    Sep 19, 2017

    Star: Fine, I can do it if you really want me to..

    Me: I DO.

    Star: Okeyyy. -sits down with Rainfeather- Soooo, what are you going to do about your new rival?

    Rainfeather
    Sep 19, 2017

    Rainfeather: x grabs random chainsaw from landwalkers x U KNOW WHAT DIS IS STAR? :3

    Wispiflower
    Sep 21, 2017

    Me: 😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣

    Star: You just said what it was. -realizes her point- Oh.... -slowly takes chainsaw and very very slowly makes his way over to Brackentail- -gets there- If you don't give me Morningleaf I'll take off your head!!!!

    Me: Nice. Very good Star.

    Wispiflower
    Sep 21, 2017

    Brackentail: Uhhhh.... -cares more about himself- FINE!!

    Morningleaf: -stands there realizing what a jerk Brackentail is and that she's really in love with Star-

    Star: -whispers- Uhhh, what now?

    Morningleaf: -comes over to Star acting shy witch absolutely never happens- Thanks.

    Star: For what?

    Morningleaf: Making me realize that he's still a jerk.

    -pauses- And...

    Me: SAY IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Morningleaf: I'll say it when I feel like it thank you very much!!! -sighs- And that I'm in love with.. -takes incredibly deep breath- You.

    Star: -all shock-

    Junetree: You should have seen it coming!!

    Star: -snorts- How would I have?!

    Junetree: Because it was so incredibly obvious.

    Morningleaf: Well, I wouldn't say that...

    Junetree: Well that's your fault isn't it?!

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    Rainfeather
    Sep 21, 2017

    x claps x BROVO

    Wispiflower
    Sep 30, 2017

    Thank you! -takes a few bows-

    Junetree: Can I slap Brackentail now?

    Morningleaf: Be my guest!

    Junetree: -slaps him and whinnies delightedly- That felt great!

    Brackentail: -frowns- Not to me it didn't!

    Junetree: Well I don't care how you feel about it!

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    Rainfeather
    Oct 01, 2017

    Rainfeather: SLAPPING PARTEEE! x puts brackentail on a piniata x

    Echomoon
    Oct 01, 2017  ·  Edited: Oct 01, 2017

    YAAASSSS RAIN!!!! -takes random baseball bat (100 cm wide with aporx 100.991 slapping power) from Landwalkers and beats the living cranberries out of Brackentail- DONT U DARE TRY TO STEAL STAR'S GUURRLL -.-

    Wispiflower
    Oct 01, 2017

    Junetree: YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -takes same model of baseball bat Echomoon took- GET HIMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Rainfeather
    Oct 01, 2017

    x all of Anok starts batting him with ze random baseball of life, soon they hit ze jackpot x Anok: CANDY!!!!!

    Me: Isnt that blood? .-. >:D

    Wispiflower
    Oct 01, 2017

    Me: -walks over- Uhhhhh..... What the heck?

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    Echomoon
    Oct 02, 2017

    Meh: -goes over to inspect- uhh... dat could be a problem 0.0-

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