This is for @Morningmist tell me if you want to change anything. I am happy to hope you like it.
Watching the herds captured by nightwing Aquafeather saw her mother. “Where is Tealflame?” she whispered to herself. When she went out to graze she almost got caught by one of the ice warriors. She was walking in the trap she found an abandoned wolf den she went inside and she found morningleafe and star. “Who Are you?” star asked. “I’m Aquafeather filly of Crimsondawn and Pebblesky. Sister of Tealflame”.
“Well we haven't seen him but are you hurt because I can heal you”. “No thanks.” She left. She saw deep into the captured herd and didn’t see Tealflame. As she drank she thought about how she would get her family back, hold a ceremony for her sire and find her brother. She will do whatever it takes. Holding back her tears she cantered as fast as she could and took off going high in the sky in the clouds. She flew above seeing every last pegasi in anok. Scanning for what looked like a malnourished herd. She felt so bad about everybody there.
She made a slite move and nightwing almost caught her and captured or killed her with his silver fire. He started to have suspicions and took flight looking. She shot down, rolled in mud to mask her scent and he didn’t find her. “That was close,” she said to herself. She needed to be careful, that was what her parents would scold her for that.
Aquafeather went to a nearby bush and tried to rest for the night but she started to think of her family and her father. A moon ago she watched her father, Pebblesky get assassinated by nightwing and his silver fire. As she started to cry she missed her family when an intruder.
Tealflame was grazing in a field and he heard slight sobs in a bush. He looked in the bush and saw his little sister. He was astonished he missed her so much! “Aquafeather!” ‘tealflame!”
She jumped up and nuzzled his mane and recognized his scent. “Where have you been?” nightflame asked. “ I’ve been hidden in a tree.” “I thought you were in the captured herd or nightwing killed you like our sire”. They both missed their sire and dam. Aquafeather noticed a big gash on his flank. “Are you ok?” while she pointed at the gash with her wing. “Yes i’m alright, now let's go. We need to find a place to settle for the night.”
A moon later they invaded an abandoned wolf den and made that their home. The next day they heard pegasi screaming and they snuck behind the bush and watched the whole battle. When they saw a group of mares going out into the field they recognized their dam. “NO!!” they both said then immediately shut up. Both watched the silver fire burn the whole group. “Fly straight and find your rest” they said together. Sad sobs were shared but they thought that when star saved the world that they would join the river herd with their dam. They stayed for the rest of the battle with amazement both saw nightwing die and the ice warriors leave. Once it was over they ran into the field and joined the river herd. They found some family members and stayed with them and had a happy life there.
Two years later Tealflame joined the river herds army then became a captain and lived with his new mate Rubyrock and had a foal named Shadowflame. Aquafeather joined the sky herders then also became the first mare as a captain. She lived with her mate Blacklion and had a filly named Oaksong.
Aquafeather-White mare with dark blue eyes, light blue mane and tail with a streak of purple, and light blue feathers tipped in purple
Tealflame-Silver stallion with green eyes, light blue mane and tail with a streak of light green, and light blue feathers tipped in light green
Crimsondawn-White mare with dark brown eyes, black mane and tail with a streak of rusty purple, and red feathers tipped in gold.
Pebblesky-Light gray stallion with blue eyes, light blue and tail with a streak of purple, and light blue feathers tipped in dark green.