ROTR #3, BENEATH THE WEEPING CLOUDS-READ SAMPLE!

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    Dragon
    Nov 23, 2017

    My TGH Poem

    in CHARACTERS AS FRIENDS

    This is the poem I wrote for Flamefrost's poem challenge:


    Lightfeather's Death

    By Annika Z.



    In the dark of the night

    A white mare woke in a fright

    The pain in her belly

    Would not let her sleep tight


    She called out for help

    And a young pinto came running

    "Hold still" said the pinto, whinnying

    "Don't try to stand up"


    Through the dark of the night

    The pain only increased

    Till by the light of the dawn

    The pain finally ceased


    A cry of shock cam from all around

    It made the white mare turn quickly round

    To her surprise a black colt was what she found

    Lying asleep on a pile of moss


    How could something so small come at great loss?

    But as the sun rose

    The white mare sighed

    Then she quietly died


    Moans of sadness filled the air

    "Lightfeather, Lightfeather"

    They all cried, but it was to late

    A meadow of gold is now what she calls home

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    Starwater
    Mar 19, 2019

    This is AMAZING!! You may have forgotten the part were Lightfeather bit Star's ear to wake him up but it's still truly AMAZING!!!

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    Love Those Cats
    Jan 21, 2019

    Beautiful. I actually got chills when I read this. Fly straight and find your rest, Lightfeather.

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    Dragon
    Nov 24, 2017

    Yes, thank you, that would be awesome!

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    Jennifer Lynn Alvarez
    Nov 23, 2017

    I’d love to share this poem in the next newsletter!! May I?

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    Dragon
    Nov 23, 2017

    Thanks

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    CassTucker1
    Nov 23, 2017

    AMAZING!!! So sad.... but amazing!!!

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    Flamefrost
    Nov 23, 2017

    I said this in the comments on the other post, but this is incredible

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