Ok....in the last part, lots of stuff happened: Lightmoon, Moonflight, Emberfall, Hawkstrike, Darkstone, and Mistsun were playing Hide and Seek, then Mistsun was caught trespassing, Darkstone tried to save her and he got caught too, so they were sent to Flame Herd, now Mistsun's leg is broken, Darkstone got hurt on his back, there in a cave and Sandsong comes in.
Last comments:
Darkstone: He let out a little gasp.
And:
Moonflight (Star Herd): She pawed the ground, "I'm scared..." She nickered softly.
Swiftfeather (Flame Herd): "Orders, Ma'am?" She asked Foxcloud, her Sky Herder training kicking in.
Ok....and in Star Herd's and Frost Herd's borders, Twistflight and Cinderfrost are there, and they see Cinderfrost's dad.
And in Cloud Herd Lightbloom and Greyheart are racing.
(I think I did this right, but if I didn't, please tell me and I will make sure to do it right in the next one)
Lakestar:
"Ok then I'll do what Foxcloud wants, wether that means me being her foal or not."
Sandsong,
"Of course you can!"
Lakestar:
"Could I visit you too?"
Sandsong,
"Of course I would come visit you!"
Lakestar:
"Would you visit me?" He asked
Sandsong,
"Of course I would, but it's your choice," she nickered.
Lakestar:
"Would you miss me if I stayed with Foxcloud and Flame herd. If she even wants a foal like me."
Sandsong,
She flicked her wings waiting for a response from Foxcloud.
Darkstone:
He ran faster the border getting closer
Mistsun:
She pumped her wings, her mane waving behind her.
(You still here @Morningmist ?)
Lakestar:
"W what if I stayed here too?" He asked softly not wanting to be away from his best friend. "O or I can be y your foal Foxcloud."
Sandsong,
She smiled at Lakestar, then thought some more, "I could stay here, then visit you!"
Lakestar:
"I'll back you up what ever you chose." He said gently
Sandsong,
She looked between the two, "I don't know," she nickered.
Shivermoon:
She sighed. "You can chose Sandsong. Do you want to stay with us or her?"
Sandsong,
"I understand," sje nickered softly, "and I forgive you," she said nuzzling Foxcloud.
Shivermoon:
"And I thank you for saving her. But she belongs with us."
Darkstone:
He ran as fast has he could
Foxcloud:
”You probably know this by now,” she nickered. “But I am not your true mother.” Her heart beats faster as she finally escapes the bond of her promise.
”You were captured in a raid on Star Herd when you were barely a moon old. Flarewing, the old Overstallion, was going to have you excecuted. To save your life, I made a promise, one that I would regret.”
She looks at Sandsong, tears filling her eyes. “I promised that I would never let you return to Star Herd, or ever let you know of who you truly are. I have broken that promise now.”
”In return for making that promise, Flarewing let me raise you as my own. I couldn’t have foals of my own anyway, I was barren.”
”Please understand, Sandsong! I didn’t try to create this mess! I just wanted you to survive.”
Foxcloud:
”I have a lot I need to explain, to both of you.” She nickers.