So for frostfurs backstory/ my first part can stonewing make frostfur go out and get eggs but he accidently goes into the vein and leaves the territory?
(then i'll stop there so thunder can write her part like summerleafe gets banidhed and she leaves into the vein and they run into eachother then she tells him about the foals and he helps with a plan then they find aspens character _______ (iforgot her name)
Ok, so I was thinking. When the foals start to rebel, maybe they name themselves the Shadow Foals. And that could be the title of the book, too! The Shadow Foals.
Also, @Phoenixglow , do you still want to join? Cuz I'm fine if you do!
@Embermoon Umm... How about... Gosh I have no idea. Maybe he thinks that his life is so boring and wants something interesting to happen? Like, he feels nothing ever happens in his herd or whatever, and when he meets Summerleaf and hears her story, he becomes so interested he wants to help.
Ok so we need to know how long to write for the chapters. (like for the first person they start from the beginning then stop at idk... summerleafe finds frostfur)
@Embermoon I think that will make the story go too fast. So I think I should end the first chapter with her talking with a Jungle Herd friend about her concerns. The next chapter can be in Frostfur's pov and can end with Stonewing sending him on the mission out of Mountain Herds territory.
Ok let me summarize this sorta: Lavawing is the over stallion and is making foals train with the adults and that wrong. And so Summerleaf fledjungle herd and met Frostfur. But summerleaf also has a sister who there going to meet in the vain and plan a attack on the over stallion with the foals and adults who agree with them. correct?
Almost. Summerleaf was banished because she confronted Lavawing about it, and Brightnight is the daughter of Lavawing, and they are not sisters.other than that, you're correct.
(Btw i was trying to add detail sorry! i added a little!)
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Also The shadow foals got #40 in PEGASUS! on wattpad!
I Guess i'm writing the next part @Thunderblaze so i'll get started tomorrow i 'm so exited i need to start writing more
So for frostfurs backstory/ my first part can stonewing make frostfur go out and get eggs but he accidently goes into the vein and leaves the territory?
(then i'll stop there so thunder can write her part like summerleafe gets banidhed and she leaves into the vein and they run into eachother then she tells him about the foals and he helps with a plan then they find aspens character _______ (iforgot her name)
Ok, I thought of some ideas for the title. You guys add your ideas too.
1, The Shadow Foals (cuz their rebelling and hiding from Lavawing in the shadows...)
2, Shadows of the Jungle (I don't know, I like this one)
3, Danger in the Jungle (whatever. Probably not this one)
Anyway, what are your ideas?
(Also, Aspen, what color are Brightnight's feathers?)
Ok, so I was thinking. When the foals start to rebel, maybe they name themselves the Shadow Foals. And that could be the title of the book, too! The Shadow Foals.
Also, @Phoenixglow , do you still want to join? Cuz I'm fine if you do!
What do we want to name this book? Also, I started writing chapter one. Is that fine with you guys?
Wait! WE NEVER MADE frostfurs backstory
Ok so we need to know how long to write for the chapters. (like for the first person they start from the beginning then stop at idk... summerleafe finds frostfur)
I guess I'm not in this :(
I thought I was in this??
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Ok let me summarize this sorta: Lavawing is the over stallion and is making foals train with the adults and that wrong. And so Summerleaf fledjungle herd and met Frostfur. But summerleaf also has a sister who there going to meet in the vain and plan a attack on the over stallion with the foals and adults who agree with them. correct?
GTG Can we pause this for a little? (don't want to miss anything)
jungle;
LAVAWING- dark bay stallion with a mix of dark red and gold feathers, black mane and tail, snip on nose, one hind stocking.
SUMMERLEAF- dun mare with bright-yellow-green feathers, brown mane and tail,one white hind sock, dorsal stripe
brightnight- dark chestnut with to back anklets that are black
Mountain:
stonewing: liver chestnut with a snip on his head, white mane and tail with gray
Frostfur: cream palomino with emerald wings tipped with yellow
@Aspenray what will your OC be? And how do you want to add to the story?
Here's my OC.
SUMMERLEAF- dun mare with bright-yellow-green feathers, brown mane and tail,one white hind sock, dorsal stripe.
Uhh can I join maybe..?
Lets figure out what your character was speaking to lavawing that made him made